!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
🤗wah wah
dil khush kardiya apne..aaj
kya part hai itne pyare din par
🤗

i knw ki main itni khush kyun hoon is part ko padke may be create confusion kinda feeling in u na..
well baat ye hai ki jo sapna dekha kashish ne wooooooo toooooooo gud tha yaar i mn to sapno ki shuruwaat hogai hai to ab manzile to mil hi jayegi na
welll bahut hi jyada acha laga aaaj ka sujal the way he caress her hairs and take gud care of her jus mindblowing.
aur upar se k ka inncently puchna plsssssssssssssss main kal shoot par aajao for finishing of work is jus so cuchkoo types..
aur jo kashish ka start hua i mn wat a apunch line yaar "r we allow t talk with each other now"
aye-haye sujal ko to bas smile karna aaya ..yaar hw he resist himself i mn ek tight hug to banta tha yaar..
are are mai to bhool ai yaar agar sujal aise fruits katke dega to kashish kya main bhi sabke sab kha jati...aur the way he slept near her is so cute....kitna pyara lag raha hoga wo....sujal kitna kar raha hai uske liye kash kashish ki sixth sense jaag jaye aur wo ye jaan le ki sujal usse pyar karta hai na ki usse na pasand..hehehe
aur kya yaar is kashish ko bhi hospital acha nai lagta haye sai hai hospital to hota hi acha nai na but yaar socho sujal roz-roz aata use milne..haye😍
mindblowing part
ab aaj aisa laga jaise bahar cha gayi hai....u c hawai bhi aagai..aur desire bhi ab to bas jo hona baaki hai wo hai
"winds of desire""together forever"pls dont say na ki tujhe ye meri ajeeb si comment kuch samajh nai aayi..i mn i'm so happy na after reading this part ki bas pata nai kya likha hai ..jo bas man main aaya lik diya u knw..asusual..
well well
ek baat to bhool gai main
are bhai to hamare sujal ko kashish ki ma ka caring karna aur sujal se kashish ka haal pucha bahut acha laga.i mn he is a family man dear..aur wo rishto ko bhi samjhta hai ..wo abhi abhi hi clear hua i mn use koi problem nai hogi na apni mom-in-law ke saath.

but ab na pls tu jaldi se contiue karde..hahaha agar ye comment padke tera dimag na ghoom gaya ho to..again me joking..haan dont take it seriously in ne ways..are bhai hum sabko aage ki story chahie na so...
ab tu jab bhi cont karegi to hume tab tak ka w8 to karna hoga hi..
so take ur ownnn sweet sweet time
"BABY"

Bye Bye
:))
Edited by pinky901 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update neelu. hope kashish's dream comes true soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww....thats a nice one...Sujal was all along wid her....and she felt nice to knw dat. Her confused question was cute and that shed away the awkwardness btwn them...Gr8 that she is thinking of a life wid him...but wat abt Sujal? When will he shed away his inhibitions and accept the fact that he loves her!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
the up is really good
so kashish is n hospital and sujal is taking care of her
its really nice to see sujal so caring
and kashish in this state also she is determined to fulfill her committment
i really appreciate this quality of determination
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
😲 ......... i didn't commented 😆😆............ i thot i had done that 😆😆😆............... good to see u noticed missing comment 😆😆......... dat means ......... u surely read comments 😛😛😛............

coming to part it was lovely 👏👏............ good to see this sweet & caring sujal 😳😳.......... reminded of first few parts of this FF..... when he was so sweet initially 😍 ..........

hope kashish is fine now 😛😛😛........... sujal ne itna acha dhayan rakha hai 😆😆😆.....
wishing sujal ki dimaag ki batti jal jaye😉 😉... very soon 😆😆😆......... & u also continue soon 😛😛😛

😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 26

Its morning and she opens her eyes.

She witnesses sujal signing some documents.

k-sujal ! ab chutti naa ! ab ghar naa ! [she says happily]

he nods.

s-haan, waise tumhara 2 baje shoot hai I will drop you now and then I will pick you up from your place at around 1, ok?

k-why would you pick me up? I have a driver, I can manage.

s-don't argue. Get ready we are l her leaving.

+++++++++++++++++++++++

In the afternoon Sujal drops her to vanity van.

s- you do your shoot, I will leave.

k- why? Tum nahi rukoge.

s-no, I am an important meeting, but I'l come to pick you up

k-hmm. [she looks down]. Sujal, kuch kahun?

He nods.

s-hmm

k-main kuch kahungi to karoge?

s-kya karna hai?

k-wo aaj meri movie ka premiere hai, aur mera mann hai kit um mere saath chalo. Chaloge? Please.

Sujal has a straight face.

Kashish's face has become expressionless due to fear of rejection.

He looks at her. His pitch black eyes gazing her intently.

s-chalunga

she happily grins.

s-kitne baje hai?

k-9 PM

s-ok. I should leave now.

k-bye

s-bye. You take care of yourself.

k-i will.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Kashish's shoot had wrapped up and she was waiting for Sujal to come and pick her up.

A spot boy comes to her vanity van and informs her that,

'madam koi Mr Garewal milne aaye hain aapse, bheju kya?'

k-aur kya, nahi bhejoge kya. Bhejo.

She was expecting sujal to come but a man in his late fifties enters.

K is perplexed seeing the man.

Man- hello beta, how do u do?

k-emm...I am doing good..emm...[she is confuse]

man-arre chaunk kyun gai, main bhi Garewal hi hoon, Sujal to junior Garewal hai, main hi to senior Garewal hoon.

k-jii..aap..?

man-I am his Dad

k-ohh ! [she gets up and folds her hands] oh namaste uncle, aaiye naa, baithiye naa. Aap kuch lenge, chai yaa kuch thanda?

Sujal's dad sits.

Dad-nahi beta, takleef mat uthao, I a fine. Main to bass tumse milne aaya hoon, Kashish. Socha apni hone wali bahu se ek baar mil to luun.

Kashish looks down and blushes and her heart leaps with happiness with the word 'hone wali bahu' being used for her.

k-emm..wo...

dad-kehna padega, jitni tum khubsurat ho utni hi sanskaari aur sushil ho.

She looks down and smiles.

Dad-mujhe pura yakken hai, tum mere bte ko bohot khush rakhogi.

Her smile broadens hearing him.

Dad-waise baton baton mein, apni bahun ke lie mooh-dikhai ke shagun ke taur par ek chotta sa taufa laya tha wo to dena hi bhul gaya.

He hands over two pure gold and broad gold kangans to her.

Dad-ye lo beta, ye hamare khandaani kangan hai

Kashish is hesitant to accept them as they look super costly.

Dad- hichkichao mat, tumhare liye hi laaya hoon. Le lo, mera ashirwaad hai.

She accepts them happily, and looks down coyly.

She touches his feet.

Dad-arre inn sab ki zarurat nahi beta, bass khush raho.

Kashish grins happily.

Dad-aur ye bhi tumhare liye hai [he hands over a file to her]

k-ye ..kya..?

dad-tumhare naam se main ek property kharidi hai, ussi ke papers hain

k-par..inn sab ki..

dad-gift hai beta, rakhlo. Mana nahi karte, pyaar se laya hoon

she accepts humbly

k-ji

he checks his watch

dad-achcha beta, late ho raha hai. Main chalta hoon.

k-aare..aap ..abhi to...

dad-nahi beta, kisi din aur aunga. Tab hum dono khoob baatein karenge, thik?

[he moves his hand on his head in a fatherly manner]

K agrees with a nod and a sweet smile.

Dad-ab chalun, bachchi?

k-thik hai, par phir aaiyega.

Dad-pakka, aur tum bhi aaogi naa

k-pakka

dad smiles

d-bye beta

k-beta

k happily waves him good bye.

She is in seventh heaven after meeting sujal's dad.

She can't hold her happiness.

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
NICE UPDATE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
kashish is a dead meat now🤣.........waiting for sujal outburst😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
kashish ka kya hoga ab ........

Nice part waiting for more
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part 👏 👏.............. aww so sweet of sujal ........ 😳😳😳.... picking & dropping kashish 😳😳😳.......... & premiere ke liye bhi maan gaya 😳😳😳 ...........such a sweetheart 😳😳😳.........

Sujal's Dad was too good 👏........ main bhi Mr. garewal hoon 🤣............. waise like kashish mujhe bhi laga sujal aaya hai 😆......... his dad was a literal surprise 😆.......

now i am scared for next part ........ coz i think i can guess sujal's reaction😆...
..... & i know kashish ke pet mein baat rukegi nahi
woh sujal ko bataegi about all the gifts from her father-in-law 😛.......oops 😛😛 i mean hone wale father in law 😆.........& sujal kashish ka band baja dega ........ itni mushkil se sab theek hua tha 😆 😆. SK were back to normal 😛😛........ but now .........

hope u prove my expectations wrong ...... & sujal doesn't react too strongly 😳😳........... pweese no more fights b/w the couple 😛

continue soon 😛 😛
.......
Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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