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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW! this story memorized me
You are a amazing writer, i loved it andi like your rewrite for the honeymoon as well.
Keep it up <3 : )
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Posted: 14 years ago
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too good.. staring session huh.. did raj have to speak in between?:( o well he's in trouble if dadi doesnt save him..

continue soon
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mina darling words fail me to say how gooooooooddddddd u write..thank you for updating and plssssssssssssssssss do continue.....muahhhhhhhh 👏u r superbbbbbbbbbbbb!!!!!!!!!!
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Great update👏
really like the princess and bluff husband part
Waiting for the next update
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amazing update....ohh i so wish atleast something similar this track starts in kmh dying to see them together....another amazing update on ur part....loved it...anjoyed it lyk hell....it was lyk i was watching kmh only....the way you used princess for arohi was too cute....and the way he cared for her adorable....keep it coming....waiting for ur next update....hathkadi,arjuhi aur single bed....wah wah m in arjuhi dreamland already....
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good one. I can imagine it really happening
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Dadi's Revenge


Disclaimer: Alright I don't own the characters or the show Kitani Mohabbat Hai ' 2, i'm a fan who is obsessed with Arjohi (Arjun and Aorhi paring). This fic though is mine. This is a place where i left my creative juices flow!

You can read my fics here

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2733044/


Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations


In this fic Dadi will punish Arjun and Aorhi for not behaving properly in front of her friend and ruining there photo shoot, with the help of her grandson Raj!


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"Mama! Dad! Look dadi there alive! They weren't kidnapped!" Raj ran up to his parents and grabbed onto Arjun's pants.

Arjun and Arohi quickly broke there stare to see the whole family approach them.


Chapter 5


"This is going to be embarrassing."

He had to agree with her on this one.


"Aorhi! Arjun where have you two been? I was looking all over for you!" Dadi scolded.


"Arjun what is going on?" His dad motioned to Arohi who he was still carrying in his arms. "Don't you remember the dinner party we are attending to celebrate the latest business deal?"


Just then the maid came back with the medical supplies and placed them on the coffee table.

"Dad I can explain everything. I-"

"Rudra, Arjun will not be going to the party tonight."


Rudra got mad, "Why Biji?" His mom rolled her eyes.

"You blind child of mine! Can't you see his wife is hurt! You think he's carrying her around for fun?"

Rudra stopped and his eye widened. He noticed the bloodied white piece of cloth on Arohi's feet.

"Oh I see. Carry on then. We wouldn't want Kartar's granddaughter to feel like we don't care about her well being now do we?" Everyone was tense because they knew it was a lie.

"Arjun, son why don't you put her down and the servants can see to her feet." Arjun looked at his mom.

He was stuck, if he put Aohi down, they would see the handcuffs, if he didn't they would think he had gone mad.

"Yes, Arjun putar put her down you must have been carrying her a while your forehead is sweating." Dadi motioned to the couch.


And my arm is turning blue, but hey who cares? As long as no one sees the damn cuffs.

Everyone watched the drama unfold. Mikahle and Jignesh had the world biggest smirks. Romit looked worried. He really felt bad for his Arjun bahi.


Arohi looked up and Arjun's face, she had been staring at his collar bone the whole time.

Oh no is having difficulty holding me up. Its not cause I'm heavy, no its because of the cuffs and he has been holding me up for such a long time.


"Arjun. Put me down." His eyes flew to hers, he searched her eyes asking if she was sure. Everyone would see the cuffs.

Arohi knew he was worried about the handcuffs. She smiled and nodded her head.


Arjun turned and carefully placed her on the couch and knelt next to her the handcuffs clanking making there presence known.


"What is this?" Kumod exclaimed. "What kind of torture are you making my son go through?"

Dadi tried her best to act shocked and not laugh.


Mikahle laughing outright.

Jignesh couldn't help but comment, "Looks like a bedroom trick gone wrong."

Arohi blushed, her face turned as red a tomato.


Rudra coughed trying to cover his smirk.

Romit was too shocked to say anything. But he did think one thing and that was ,Kinky.


Arjun ignored them all and started cutting Arohi's blooded bandage.


"Oh no mama, you are still playing police and robbers? I gave up finding you two long time ago! I looked all over the house! Where were you hiding?" He came and looked over Aorhi's feet.

"Raj, we were looking for you outside."

"But I said inside mama. And look you got hurt. I'm sorry." The kid looked really sad that Arohi smiled and pulled him into a hug.


"No need to worry, your dad here has plenty of experience patching me up."

"Really mama?"

"Yep, I'll be better in no time."


Kumod couldn't handle the mushy gushy Aorhi and her son. Watching Arjun tend to his wife was the last straw.

"I think I'm going to be sick, Rudra, let go to the party before I change my mind. I can't believe it was all because of a child's game."

"Alright Kumod it seems everything is under control here. Arjun I will talk to you tomorrow."


Arjun didn't look up from his task. "Yes Dad."

Rudra hid his laugh , he knew Arjun was beyond embarrassed.

"See ya Arjun, have fun playing house."

"Mikahle! Get out before I get my danda!" Dadi scolded.



When everyone had cleared , Dadi took Raj with her leaving Arjun and Arohi alone downstairs. They didn't look like they were paying attention to anyting else around them other then each other. Things were looking up at long last!




"The alcohol is going to burn." Arjun informed as he put some alcohol on a cotton ball.

"I know."

"Ahh!"


This time with out counting he applied the wicked solution, that made Arohi feel like her feet was on fire!


Arjun let her grab hold of his shoulders for a moment longer then necessary. While he softly blew on her feet trying to cool it down a bit.

Then he moved to wrap her feet in fresh bandages. Arohi watched Arjun wrap her feet with utmost care. It was strange she was sure he would rush through it, but he was as if not more careful then the time in the jungle.

He is so strange sometimes. Nice one moment, a complete ass the next...


"Alright lets get the key from Raj." Arjun stood up and popped a few bones in his shoulders. It had taken him 20 minutes to dress her cut, it should have taken five.

Aorhi didn't mind that her arm got dragged up along with him, she remained seated.


"Yeah, oh we should have gotten it earlier when here was here. I hope he isn't a sleep!"

"Why would he sleep its only 8:30pm. Aorhi I bet that kid hasn't even had dinner." Arjun turned to look upstairs. "RAJ! Come down here and give me the key for the cuffs!"


A few moments later Raj appeared in his pj's with Dadi on his heel they both leaned over the balcony and looked down at Arjun and Arohi.


"Papa I lost the keys!" Raj shouted tiptoeing to be seen over the balcony.



Arjun almost lost it, almost. He would have shouted had Dadi not been there watching him like a hawk.

Arohi however, had no problem.


"You WHAT!? Go find it you little rat!!" In her anger she stood up, only to stumble and have Arjun catch her, it was second nature for him now.


"Aorhi putar, don't shout at the child. I will look for the key it is time for Raj to go to bed."

Oh shit! No I can't have an elder doing a chore like this.


"No Dadi its okay. Umm ahh Arjun and I will look for it." Arjun looked down at Arohi.

"Have you forgotten? You can barely stand." He whispered.


"How can you Arohi putar? Your hurt, on your feet of all places."


"Leave it Dadi I will ask the servants to do it."


"Oh Arjun putar, I let them all go home already. I figured since everyone was going to that dinner party, and Raj was already fed his dinner. There is no need for them to stay late tonight."


"What!" Arjun and Arohi exclaimed at the same time.


"I haven't even had dinner yet." Aorhi moaned.


"Oh you poor dear. I will come right down and get you something to eat."

Arjun stopped her. "Its okay Dadi, you and Raj go to bed we can mange."


"Are you sure putar?"

"Yes Dadi I'm sure."


"Teek hai, good night."

"Goodnight mom ... Dad." Both Arjun and Aorhi's faces darkened when Raj spoke , that kid was going to be the end of them.

Dadi quickly led Raj away, who knows what his parents would say.


As they entered there room Raj spoke up. "Dadi can I have chocolate now?"

"Not now putar you will get bugs in your teeth. I will give you all your chocolates in the morning. Now go to sleep."

"Promise?"

"Paka."

As Raj settled under the covers he had one more question before he could rest his busy brain.

"Dadi when will you stop punishing Mama and Papa and take there handcuffs off?"

"Tomorrow. But remember our plan."

"Of course Dadi! The key is going to be on the floor next to the red couch outside of mom and dad's room! That's where I *giggle* dropped it!"

"Good boy, you remembered correctly!


Downstairs with Ajrun and Aorhi after Dadi and Raj left.


"Arjun, I'm hungry."

"I know, so am I? Can you walk to the kitchen?" Aorhi didn't answer she only looked at the floor.

What Am I asking obviously she can't walk. With out further thought he picked her up.

"Ekk! Arjun! I told you to tell me when you pick me up."

"Why are you complaining? I'm carrying you every where."


He walked towards the kitchen. He was getting very used to carrying Aorhi and being in extremely close physical proximity with her.


They stopped infront of the fridge, and Arjun put Arohi down then opened the fridge.

They both looked around. Aorhi put most of her weight on Arjun without realizing it.


"Ohh Pizza!"I love Pizza!" Aorhi exclaimed. Ajrun grabbed the pizza box and open it to see half of a large veggie and chicken pizza.

"I guess this is our dinner. What do you want to drink Aorhi?"

"Water is fine." Arjun grabbed a bottle of water and a can coke for himself. "Arjun I don't eat cold pizza."


"Of course you don't Princess, but I like cold Pizza."

"You would say that. Cold hearted man that you are, you like cold things, even your food has to be cold." Arjun decided not to comment. She said the most impossible things sometimes, it left him speechless.


Instead he threw the pizza box like a frisbee onto the counter and gave the drinks to Arohi to hold, then picked her up and moved to the counter. Arjun took out a large square plater where he put a few slices of the pizza in then popped them into the microwave.


Of course coordination was hard with Aorhi leaning on him and he had to use one hand. He was just thankful the microwave was near the plates cupboard.


"Arjun I just thought of something. We won't be looking for the keys until morning right?"

"Yes."

"We will have to go everywhere together till then, right?" She sounded uneasy.


"Yes. That's kind of obvious isn't it." He shook there shackled hands to further make his point.

"We have to sleep together."

"Aorhi, we do that anyways."

"No stupid, without the curtain!"


"Oh." He hadn't thought about it before, but with the handcuffs the curtain would be useless. It was useless anyways. "Don't worry I'm not interested in you, like that."


What! How can he say that to someone as hot as me? Wait what AM I THINKING! I don't want to touch him.


"Well that's good because I don't want to touch a janwar like you. I'd rather cuddle Mr. Softy."

"Oh hell no, if that ball of fluff comes near me, I'll tear him apart with my bare hands."


"No! You can't do that."

"I won't if you don't bring him near me."

"But I always sleep with him!"

"Not tonight you won't."


"But...but your not soft and huggable."

"I may not be soft but who says I'm not huggable? Just the other day you hugged me to thank me, I couldn't even tear you out of my arms."


Well that's cause I did want you to see me snooping through your drawers. I can't say that now can I? Look at him feeling all proud of him self.


"That was the other day. It was my weakness, I was being nice, appreciative."

"Is that how you show your appreciation to all men?"


"Chee no! I'm not a badbash like you!"

"Why do you keep calling me badbash? Maine tum hare sath koi badmashi kiya?"


Before Aorhi could answer the microwave beeped and Arjun took the plate out. He placed the remaining cold pieces of pizza on the plate with the hot slices.

"Mmm smells good." Arohi smiled like she was on cloud nine. "Wait Arjun, how are going to take the plate and drinks to the table?" If he had to carry her all over the place, how was he going to carry the plate of pizza as well?


"We aren't eating at the table."

"Then where are we eating?"

"Right here. Come on princess get comfortable on the floor."

"Oh...makes sense. No big deal." She smiled a 100 watt smile that caught him off guard.


He paused for a minute starring at her before he helped Aorhi settle on the ground then sat next to her with the plate of hot and cold pizza slices and drinks leaning back against the counter.

With the plate balanced on Arjun's outstretched legs, they began there dinner.


"Your eating with your left hand Arjun?"

"Well my right hand is kinda useless for now. Unless you want to feed me."

"Eww, no!"

"I thought so. Eat up princess."


"You know we shouldn't drink too much liquids. IF one of has has to you know...use the washroom....well you get the idea. No washroom breaks until tomorrow morning."

Arjun chocked on his pizza, and Aorhi slapped his back a few times before he was alright.


"Pagal lardki, that's obvious you don't have to state it."

"What? I'm just informing you!"

"Thank you for you information. Now let me eat in peace."

"I'm not stopping you."

Arjun decided not to respond, If he did she would say something back and start talking again.


Arohi ate three slices of pizza, and drank half of the water, she wanted to drink it all but decided not to. She looked over at Arjun, he was chewing and looking straight ahead, lost in his own thoughts.


He has a big head, big teeth, big hands, big mouth, I finished three slices and he's on his sixth! Look at how big his bite is, he finishes the slices in like four bites. I bet I could beat him at eating pizza slices...I'm just not eating a lot now because well I don't want to go to the washroom! He doesn't even need to chew as much as I do. He has big lips...they look soft too and there all dark pink, it would be a nice lip gloss color. I think I have that shade...oh look he's on his seventh slice how can he eat so much? Although I kinda like watching him eat that is, I have been watching him eat since his second slice. Oh no! Now he's looking at me. Oh he stopped chewing. Now he's going to drink his coke. That stuff is bad for his teeth, oh well what do I care if his teeth rot and fall off? In fact I hope they do!


Arjun looked at Arohi while taking another gulp of his drink. What is she up to now? Is there sauce on my face? Wait if there was, she would have said something by now. Is she done eating? She stopped eating, she said she was hungry. Ha! She has sauce on her mouth on top of her upper lips and at the corner of her mouth. She eats like a kid!


"Hey why are you smiling like that?" Arohi asked suspicious.

"Like what?"

"Like you know something and I don't."

"Maybe I do."

"Tell me! What is it? Is it a secret? I am great at keeping secrets! I almost won a prize for it when I was in fifth grade."


Arjun raised an eyebrow. Where did she get this stuff from?

"Its nothing dramatic, you have tomato sauce on your face."

"Ahh! Where? Why didn't you tell me sooner? Of course you won't tell me you just want to laugh at me." She wiped madly at her face, completely missing the spots. Arjun only laughed at her. After a few seconds of watching her desperate attempts he decided to have mercy on her.

"Alright stop, your missing the spots." He took his free hand and wiped away first from the corner of her mouth.


Arohi froze, her eyes wide open looking at him, his touch was so foreign yet familiar. She closed her eyes and Ajrun wiped away the stains from her upper lip. His fingers stayed two moments longer then necessary, and when Arohi opened her eyes to look at him, he knew she knew it too.


Awkward.



There situation was awkward. It was growing more awkward because Arjun's face was inches away from hers and she wasn't moving or saying anything. Arjun's eyes zeroed in on her lips. She had beautiful lips, and eyes, her eyes were the perfect shape. He'd never seen eyes shaped so perfect he took a snapshot in his minds camera and stored it for later.


"Wear less make up. You don't need it."

To say Arohi was shocked was an understatement.

Where the hell did that come from? What is up with the atmosphere?


"Arjun, tum teek tho honna?" She even raised a hand and put it on his forehead taking in his temperature. She was genuinely concerned.

His temperature seems fine. What is wrong with him, he is so...nice suddenly.


Arjun pulled back he coughed and rubbed the back of his neck with his hand. His voice was gruff trying to hide his embarrassment.

"Are you done eating? If so lets go upstairs."


"I'm done."

Arjun took the plate and drinks and left them on the counter, covering the remaining pizza slices. He turned to look down at Arohi,


"I wonder if I should take an apple or something with me. Carrying you up the stairs is going to zap me of my strength. Did you gain weight?" He was back to his old self, teasing her.


"For your information I have NOT gained weight, you are just weak. I don't see you going to the gym anymore."


"Well," Arjun bent down and picked up Aorhi, "its because now I have this wife who keeps me busy as soon as I come home. She demands all my time and attention."


He walked out of the kitchen and into the living room.

"My wife is always up to some sort of trouble so I have to keep an eye on her and a child." Arjun started climbing the stares.


"Excuses excuses Arjun Singhgania. You are just getting soft and mushy." She poked at one one his bicep and felt the muscle push back. Okay so he wasn't soft and mushy, but hey she wasn't fat.

"Probably because you put five stuffed animals on our bed, they are influencing me. I should just threw them out."

Arohi gasped.

"No! You can't do that. What will you replace them with, bricks? You think that will harden you up?"

"Better then Mr. Softy and company."


"Mr. Softy and company are much better bed mates then you."

"Well tonight I'm going to be your only bed mate."

"Why?"


"Arohi, I am NOT going to touch Mr. Softy, or Miss Pinky or Mr. Cuddles or Mrs. Chocolate."

"You forgot Mr. Snow and Mr. Coffee"

"Them too."


"Aww Arjun, how about just one of them?"

"No, no one from team Softy is going to sleep on the bed today. Its going to be difficult as it is dealing with you chained to me. I don't want to wake up in the morning with Mr. Cuddles paw in my mouth."


"That was an accident!"

Arjun rolled his eyes. The torture she put him through sometimes. "Open the door Arohi." Which she did since they were in front of there bedroom, and both of Arjun's hands were full.

When they entered the room Arjun almost dropped Arohi.




TBC.................



Thank you everyone for your support. I'm glad you are all enjoying this fic as much as I am writing it. I never know what I am going to write until I sit down to type.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it...Mina your're a brilliant writer no doubt about that.⭐️👏..and your imagination is just too good...i can clearly picture everything in my head😍

jignesh: bedroom trick gone wrong and romit thinks it's kinky ...omg i can't stop..🤣🤣🤣🤣
arjun carrying arohi around everywhere 😍...wish we had such scenes in the actual show!!!
love dadi and raj....cupids ❤️
let me guess arjun almost dropped arohi coz he saw the single bed na? 😉
can't wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dadi dadi dadi!! u gotta love her.. now what did they do with arjohi's room?? raj is too innocent! just love him..

great part!!
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hey Mina thanks buddy what a great part yaar , i really enjoyed it......guess what i'm going to read it again, hehe...........
waiting eagerly for next part......

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