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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Mina_T...................... i read all the three parts in one go........they were fabulous.....anxious to read ur next update............plz update soon.😛
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Good one. Micheal part was too good. I can imagine his expressions. I wish Kumud was there with him, that would be one scene. Please add one scene with Kumud while they are handcuffed and one with billu also.
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Originally posted by: myviewprem

Good one. Micheal part was too good. I can imagine his expressions. I wish Kumud was there with him, that would be one scene. Please add one scene with Kumud while they are handcuffed and one with billu also.


i hope arjun arohi try to hide their handcuffed situation from everyone n they get caught everytime n they do such nautankis over n over 🤣🤗😍 o n plz send kartar singh to watch this too.. 😛
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wow Mina...love love loved it 👏⭐️...you write beautifully.👏⭐️....it seemed so real.😍...and some parts made 🤣🤣..sooo much......i wish CV's read this and learn from you...lol
love dadi..is really is the best cuped ⭐️...wating for the single bed to come along...lol
PM me when you update 😊
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Wowwwwwwww new ff...... yeyeeeeeee..... sorry for late reply me so busy busy..... bt i just finish the parts.... OMG i just love them.....u r too good, HMMMMMM dadi's revenge" i'm really enjoying.....single bed, dadi kitni sweet hain na....jisa hum chahtay hain wasa he karti hain.... go dadi go we r with u, ab maza aye ga, pls continue soon.....

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Dadi's Revenge


Disclaimer: Alright I don't own the characters or the show Kitani Mohabbat Hai – 2, i'm a fan who is obsessed with Arjohi (Arjun and Aorhi paring). This fic though is mine. This is a place where i left my creative juices flow!


Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations


In this fic Dadi will punish Arjun and Aorhi for not behaving properly in front of her friend and ruining there photo shoot, with the help of her grandson Raj!



Chapter 4

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Raj hid behind a big potted plant in the garden and watched as his parents looked for him.

"This is so good I will let them look for me some more while I give the key for the handcuffs to dadi!"

He ran back inside while his parents continued to look for him outside.



"Raj! Where are you? I promise to give you chocolates if you come out."

Arjun gave Arohi a odd look. "The sun is almost setting, its dinner time, why are you going to give him chocolates? Your a bad mom."


"Hey, bribing is the only way to get this kid to listen to you, and its the only way," she held up her shackled wrist, "for me to get rid of you! If it means I have to be a bad mom , then by all means, I WILL BE A BAD MOM." She shouted at his face.


"Pagal lardki. Lets keep looking." There search was fruitless for many reasons.

One Arohi had a hard time keeping up with Arjun, who walked fast on purpose to anger her. Two Aorhi was was wearing high heels and walking in a garden. Third, Aorhi was getting hungry which equalled cranky.


"Lets look behind the bridge."

When Arjun started walking again he noticed Arohi was immobile. "What now Aorhi?"


"My feet hurt. We have been looking for this kid for the past 45 mins. We checked the entire garden twice. He's not here."


"I'm sure he's here somewhere, he's a small kid and its dark now. I'm sure he will give up soon."

"Fine but only for 10 more min's then I'm done." She took her sandals off making Arjun laugh softly.


"What's so funny?"

"You."


"Oh really, I forget you laugh randomly because your a crazy manic." When he continued to smirk. Aorhi grew frustrated. "What is so funny about me? I'm sure I look great, hot, beautiful, you are just blind and can't see it."


Arjun shook his head, "Your short, really short."

"Good things come in small packages." She smiled and started walking.


"Raj if you don't come out. No more video games!"


Arjun was getting sick and tired as well. "I agree with your mom beta, if you don't come out now, I won't let you play on my PSP. No cartoons for a week!"


"Yeah no cartoons—wait for a week? That's kinda too much don't you think?" Arohi asked as they made there way up the small garden bridge.


Arjun stopped at the middle of the bridge and scanned the garden. The garden lights suddenly came on. They had been had, the kid was not in the garden, most likely had forgotten all about them.


His temper rose. He had been wasting all his time, when he could have gotten work done. Instead he had to look around the garden playing hide-n-go-seek , handcuffed to Aorhi, of all people. Handcuffed to Arohi, again. At least his time he wouldn't have to sleep with her handcuffed on a single bed. That would be a nightmare come true. It made him shiver just thinking about it. That was one relief he could look forward to once they got inside.


"No, its too nice, wait till you see what I do to that kid when I get inside." Arjun started walking fast towards the house.


"Wait Arjun!" Arjun yanked Arohi along, making her slip and lose her footing, she went down, hard.


"Ahhh!"

"Arohi!" He quickly went down with her and they both tumbled down the the bridge.

Aorhi felt her world go upside down and a sharp pain enter her left foot, she dropped her sandals and grabbed onto the first thing she could, Arjun. Arohi readied her self to hit the ground, but it never came. Instead she hit solid flesh and cotton and had the wind knocked out of her.


Arjun, acted out of instinct and put his arms around Arohi and as they landed, he took the brunt of the blow while Arohi landed on top of him. He was sure, she was hurt regardless. He was thank full there was enough give in the handcuffs for him to protect her.


Arjun sat up brining Aorhi up with him.

"Arohi, look at me."

He gave her a quick look over, nothing looked broken, but her eyes were watering. "Are you hurt anywhere?" The light in the garden wasn't great but it was better then nothing.


"My feet, I think I got something stuck in my left foot."

"Alright, I'll check, it might be uncomfortable because of the cuffs." His voice was calm and controlled. Obviously Aorhi hadn't broken anything, no serious injury. It was a flesh wound, they were close to the house he could easily treat her. This wasn't anything new to him, Arohi was accident prone.


It was hard maneuvering but Arjun was suddenly thankful Aorhi was "short" it made reaching her foot easier, then if she was taller with his cuffed hand. He saw the splinter sticking out of her feet, it was about two inches long, half of it in her feet, and it was bleeding. He needed to get it out, but what to use to stop the blood from flowing? He didn't have a handkerchief on him. Just his t-shirt, he could rip it and, Aorhi's dupata!


"I'm going to tear a piece of your dupata off Arohi, can I do that?"

"Where is your hanky?" She asked wiping her tears away.

How come he's all nice and calm now? Asking for my permission?


"Alas princess I don't have it with me today, so its either I rip my shirt or your dupata, your choice."

Arohi's eyebrow's rose into her hair line. If he ripped his shirt...he would be exposing him self.

" Use my dupatta!"

"I thought so." With a small smile he ripped off a piece of her dupata then draped it back around her neck.

"Alright look somewhere else and don't bite your tongue. On the count of three."


Arohi looked straight ahead at the bright lights of the house and got her self ready.

"One." She turned her head towards Arjun ready to ask him if he was going to do it on three, or before, or after three, a girl had to get ready.


"Two."

"AHHH!!!"

Aorhi dug her nails into his biceps and stuck her head into his neck.

"You donkey, you lied!" her words were muffled as she spoke into his neck fresh tears coming to her eyes.


"It hurts less if you don't know when its going to happen." Aorhi didn't bother replying or looking she could feel him wrapping the make shift bandage around her foot.


Arjun wrapped the piece of dupata around her feet three times before he tied it into a knot. He surveyed his work and satisfied that he didn't see anymore blood coming out. He still had to get it cleaned and put proper bandages when they got inside. Now he had to take her inside the house. Last time he had to carry her to the jungle cabin. It was going to be harder with there hands cuffed.


"Aorhi, do you think you can walk?" She looked very comfortable cradled in his arms at the moment.


After a few moments she took a deep breath and and stuck her head out of its hiding spot, the crook of his neck.

"Maybe."

"Alright I'll get up first." He helped shift her out of his arms and stood up and a little bent at the knees.

"Okay lets do this, princess."

Arjun bent and helped her stand up, taking most of her weight on his left side.

"Nice and easy lets walk."

"What about my sandals?" She pointed to her shoes which were at the base of the bridge.

"The servants will come get them. Come on lets walk."


It didn't work. Arohi by mistake took a step on her injured feet and went down, but Arjun was prepared for this and he held her up, easily.

"Yeah I didn't think so."


"What?" Arohi was confused. Did he know already that she wouldn't be able to walk properly?

"Okay this maybe a little uncomfortable, again do to our bound hands, but there is about a seven inch give between these cuffs so it might be bearable."


"What are you talking abou-ahhh" Arjun had picked her up bridal style interrupting her. He was right it was uncomfortable, his left arm was around her back and it made her twist her right arm behind her back because of the handcuff.

However, her unbound arm quickly made up for it by grabbing him around his neck in a strong hold.


Hey it worked. It is a good thing Aorhi is short, or else I wouldn't be able to pick her up with this much give on the handcuffs.


Arjun started walking slowly towards the house. His hold on her was not very secure, and the last thing he wanted to do was drop her.


"Arjun."

"Hmm?"

"Next time, tell me when your going to pick me up."


"Next time."


Arjun took a few more careful steps.

"Don't drop me." Aorhi warned.


She knew his hold wasn't as secure as it could be, her right arm was wedged between them and the chain was digging into her arm. It was very uncomfortable but bearable.

"Hmm, I don't know it would be a good way to get revenge on you for all those little annoying things you do, to make my life miserable."


"I make your life miserable?" She sounded so happy it worried him.

"You don't have to sound so happy. Dossroo ki burai chaha achi baat nahi hai, it means your an evil person."


"Says the guy who sabotaged my marriage and married me to exact revenge on me. You know how big of a deal marriage is to a girl like me?"

"Hello, I'm carrying you here."

"Oh yes, now your my knight in shinning armour, always rescuing me, keeping me safe."

"Why so sarcastic Aorhi? Its true isn't it?"


Pause.


"What is?" She knew what he was talking about but, it suddenly struck a chord deep down where she thought all feeling was dead.


"That I'm your knight in shinning armour. I save you all the time. You could even say I saved you from marrying that kabotar." Arjun laughed at his own comment.


Arohi simply frowned.

"Hello mister, I was ready to marry him out of my own will."

"No you weren't." His answer was right on the heel of her reply and so confident that she became worried.


"What do you know, you-you shaddi highjaker!"


"I know that you want to please your family. You want to uphold there name and honor. You don't want to worry them, you put there happiness before yours. Oh and of course me. You wanted to piss me off, and all that would be accomplished if you married the kabotar. I'm not done don't interrupt me princess." Arjun said when he noticed her opening her mouth ready to refute him.


A miracle happened and Arohi didn't say anything. Arjun was impressed.

"You never wanted to marry him, I know that because someone told me. It was only after you found out about my family and my occupation that you changed your mind. Even after I apologized and told you the truth about my past about my fee- my feelings for you. It didn't matter your pride and god knows what else stopped you."


"You didn't and still don't believe me when I told you, your sister falling was an accident."

When he didn't reply Arohi waited, she waited all of five seconds before she said something else.


"You know when I first met you, I thought you were all rough and tough brooding type. But now, I know that you are also a kaminay, sardo, jahill, batamiz, badmash, janwar the world worst husband and a-"


"I'm still carrying you, you know I could easily trip and drop you."

"See! That's what I mean, your voice used be all deep and cool now your always annoyed."

"Yeah, because you annoy me."

"No, I make you talk, its helped cleared up your throat."

"Yes by making me scream at you. Don't ever pursue medicine princess."

"Why? I think I will make a fine doctor."

"Ha! Your patients will all run away from you."


Arjun suddenly noticed they were almost at the house and the lights were all on, not only that he could see the whole family gathered in the living room, but it looked like they were all dressed to go out somewhere.

Probably some big dinner party. I hope I don't have to join in.


As they approached the sliding glass door a servant quickly ran up and opened the door.

"Arjun, You think we can go upstairs without anyone noticing?"

"No."

"Why?"

"I need to put you down right now."

"Why?"

She sure likes that word tonight.

"I have lost almost all blood flow to my left hand and will be forced to drop you soon." He said it so casually like there are clouds in the sky today.


"Oh no! Put me down on that couch over there." They were still out of sight from the rest of the family who looked busy talking amongst themselves.


"Don't boss me around wify. I know what I'm doing." He then turned to the servant who had opened the door for them. "Can you get me a bowel of warm water, lots of bandage, rubbing alcohol and pair of scissors? Make it quick."


"Aww you care about me." Aorhi teased. Arjun gave her a dirty look.

"I am still holding you."

"Yes you have threatened to drop me various times yet you still haven't, so I'm calling your bluff dear husband."

"Oh yeah?"

"Yeah."

This started a starring competition between them.



"Mama! Dad! Look dadi there alive! They weren't kidnapped!" Raj ran up to his parents and grabbed onto Arjun's pants.

Arjun and Arohi quickly broke there stare to see the whole family approach them.





TBC...

Thank you so much for your support, you guys have soo many good ides.

I am trying to incorporate them, I will try and put karter in so he sees his grandchild handcuffed to each other muwha haha.

Sknra as for the promo if this fic is long I will definitely try! 😉

So who else is happy that the weekend is almost over? I AM!!! New episode of KMH2!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it 😍....can't wait for the next part do update when you have time Mina 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update Mina....👏👏👏i always like when arjun says " pagal larki'.......

now eagerly waiting for next part..............

Edited by sknra - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yay mina..thnx so much for taking in our ideas.. 🤗
its beautiful.. n aww..look how caring our arjun is.. luved it when she came down on 'flesh n cotton' 😍 i came down on my mattress, all happy n blooming .. next stop: arjuhi dreamland 😆

n raj is too funny, 'they are alive' 🤣 ab toh usko bhi pata chal gaya ki mummy-daddy ko ek saath bohot der tak chodne ke kya risks hai!!!

can't wait for ur next installment and definitely cant wait for tomorrow's episode..
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plz update soon....waiting for the next part😛

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