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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys: Just to make it easier for everyone to understand each character..I will put up character sketch soon on page one😆😆 thank you so much for your comments and I replied back to those that asked questions...I am sorry for not beingn able to reply back to everyone....
Enjoy!
Chapter 4
Geet went to Suraj cabin to tell him her decision....she was sure that Suraj would keep her happy forever but still feared about whether to tell hm the truth..she didn't know how he will react and was scared that he might leave her...
Suraj: Come in..

Mahi: woh god morning Suraj (he looks up from his file)

Suraj: Mahi...good morning...is everything alright? (Seeing her nervous while she stood at the door fiddiling with her dupatta) You can sit Mahi..you don't need my permission for that (smiles)

Mahi (smiles at him): I wanted to talk to you...

Suraj (gets up and stands in front of her): hmm bolo...

Mahi: the question you asked me before...(Suraj looks at her with anticipation) my answer is yes...(she looks down shyly..Suraj stood there shocked...million things were going in his mind..he was so happy that she finally said yes to his marriage proposal...Geet looked at him waiting for his reply...he comes out of his thoughts and looks at her..Geet looks down)

Suraj (hugs Geet): Mahi you have no idea how happy I am..you have made my day... (he looks at Geet once again..brings her chin up..she closes her eyes as soon as she feels his touch) Mahi please look at me...(she opens her eyes) I want to look at your beautiful eyes everyday or else my day doesn't go by....

Mahi: Thank you Suraj....

Suraj: Thank you? For what? (Confused)

Mahi: For giving me hope...the same hope that I thought I lost long time ago...(hugs him)

Suraj: One doesn't lose hope like that Mahi...Hope is always inside you..it is up to the person to find hope...without hope there is nothing

Mahi: I understand that now..thank you...

Suraj: Hopefully one day you can trust me enough to tell me your past but that is only when you are ready...

Mahi (breaks out of the hug): My past was my past..I no longer have any connection with my past...you are my present and I right now I want to live in my present....as for trust..I trust you and I know you will never break my trust...

Suraj (hugs her again): You have no idea how much that means to me...come on (he drags her outside of office) let's go somewhere for the whole day today..anywhere..where ever you want...

Mahi: If it is alright..I want to go to the beach...

Suraj: Sure..let's go madam....(He goes and opens her car door..Geet smiles and gets in the car...) Mahi always smile like this...you look pretty when you smile...(she looks at him after few minutes) ahem ready?

Mahi: Yeah...(she looked out the window as Suraj drove..smiling from her heart)
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Flashback:
(Guys just imagine that Ramu Kaka is talking in hindi..I am very bad in english-hindi lol)
Geet woke up the next day...ramu kaka came in her room carrying tea tray....
Ramu Kaka: Geet beta wake up...

Geet (opens her eyes): Good morning ramu Kaka..where is papa?

Ramu Kaka: ohh he had to go to work early....I placed your tea by your bed...

Geet: Alright thank you ramu kaka...ohh aaj breakfast mat banana...aaj meri chutti hai aur aapko toh pata hai ki

Ramu kaka (intrupted her): mujhe maloom hai..kahna tum banogi...tumara woh kya kehte hai exparilment...(Geet laughed)

Geet: exparilment nahi..experiment...

Ramu kaka: haan haan joh bhi..bali ka bakra toh main hi banta hoon na...

Geet: kisi ko toh try karna padega na..aab papa ghar main nahi hai toh isme meri kya galti hai?

Ramu kaka: kuch nahi..tumari toh kabhi bhi galti nahi hoti...aab jaldi se jaake taayar ho jaao

Geet: Alright kaka

She quickly went to take a shower and came down after 15 minutes wearing home casuals...she went to the kitchen to see ramu kaka..he wasn't there..she saw a note on the table stating that he will be right back after doing some grocery shopping...she places the note down and begins exprimenting with food...started putting any random stuff she could get her hands on...she heard a door bell... "that must be ramu kaka" she runs to the door with messy hands..she opens the door thinking that it is ramu kaka and quickly runs back to the kitchen without looking who it is...she shouts from the kitchen "Ramu kaka...sahi time pe aaye ho aap...mera kahana tayar hai..aap bahar dinning table pe baito..main abhi lekar aati hoon" She places the food on the plate and brings it out to the table...there she finds a strange man siting on the table instead of Ramu kaka..she places the food on the table...
Geet: Ji aap kaun?

Maan (smiles at her..he looks at her from top to bottom..he loved her messy hair and her shirt little dirty from cooking): My name is Maan..I came here to meet your father...

Geet (felt little uncomfortable with the way he was looking at her): umm he is at his office...

Maan: ohh really...I didn't know that....I left my home early thinking I might be able to meet him here instead of the office

Geet (smiled weakly): yeah he left early in the morning...you can meet him in the office if you want

Maan (smiled): Thanx...(he stands up to walk away): By the way what is your name?

Geet: My name is Geet

Maan (he comes and stands in front of her): Well than nice to meet you Miss. Geet..(he brings his hand forward waiting for her to shake his hand..she hesitantly brings her hand forward and shakes it)

Geet: Same here...

Maan (Looks down to the plate): ohh before I go..I remember you saying that you made this food....Do you mind if I taste the food? It smells good...(Geet looks at him..not able to say anything..she nodes her head..he takes a bite) mmm the food is good...

Geet (smiled): Thanx...(Just than Ramu Kaka entered the house with Rohit..Geet smiled looking at both..Maan looked at Geet and followed her eyes) Rohit? What are you doing here?

Ramu Kaka: is this a way to leave your house wide open?

Geet: Sorry Ramu Kaka...

Rohit: Geet since we have a day off from college I thought we can hang out today

Geet: Yeah that would be awesome....is Meera coming with us?

Rohit: No..it will be just us two...

Geet: Alright..oohh try this food that I made it

Rohit: You made it? Than no thanx..I don't have any plans to die yet

Geet (gasps): What do you mean..in fact you can ask Maan (Maan looked at her hearing his name) he tried my food and look nothing happened to him

Rohit: Wow that is a miracle...in that case I will try the food...why don't you get ready...

Geet: Ok I will be right back...

Maan (Felt jealous of hearing Geet talking to Rohit..he quickly put on a hard face): ahem Geet I will take your leave...thank you

Geet: Alright..bye...(Maan left but turned around before leaving to look at Geet...)

End Flashback
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Geet Pov:

Geet and Suraj spend their whole day together...I enjoyed watching the sunset after so many years...I am finally able to watch something with the person I like (not love..) Babaji please don't let anything happen to Suraj and give me strength that I am able to fulfill this new releationship fully...he was the one who helped me get a job without asking for my qualifications and gave me the house that I live in...I am here only because of him or else I don't know where I would've been....(tears escape from her eyes..She looks over at Suraj who was had his arm around her while looking straight at the sunset)... I promise Suraj that I will give you equal happiness that you deserve no matter what...(She leans over and rests her head on his shoulder..Suraj looks at her with a smile on..he notices her tears

Suraj: Mahi why are you crying...

Mahi: Ohh nothing...just happy thats all

Suraj (sigh): Don't scare me like that...

Mahi: Sorry...I won't cry anymore...

Suraj: So ready to go home?

Mahi: Yeah...

Suraj: Alright than madam are you ready?

Mahi: yeah (Suraj helps her get up and both walk toward their car)

Precap: Past-What makes you think I will get you married to Geet?
Note: Now don't kill me with Geet saying yes to Suraj 😆 Story will unfold as it goes....
If you guys are wondering how Suraj and Geet met and how he helped her with job and home than fikar-not that will be answered in Chapter 7 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
its gud... i liked the scenes from past they r little funny

n present is interesting
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update simi...
sorry yaar but i fast forwarded scenes between mahi and suraj😭😭😭
i love maneet however -ve maan is i still love maan.......😉😉😉
precap interesting:geet's father refusing maan's proposal to marry geet😆😆😆..may be he doesn't know who maan singh khurana is😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Simi dont be sorry love it cant how the story unfold its self there reason why Geet run way from her city & her family i'm happy for

if suraj makes her happy i think its look like yu gonner bring some twist fabulous update pls cont soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: puth

awesome update simi...
sorry yaar but i fast forwarded scenes between mahi and suraj😭😭😭
i love maneet however -ve maan is i still love maan.......😉😉😉
precap interesting:geet's father refusing maan's proposal to marry geet😆😆😆..may be he doesn't know who maan singh khurana is😆😆😆

haha it is totally understandable...we only want Maaneet moments hehehe
hahaha as for the percap..you are right it is MSK who can mess with him 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏 good goin.....keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
so i can't kill u for saying yes to suraj...i was so ready for it...LOL....but i am liking the flashback scenes alot...having trouble seeing geet with some1 else....anywayz...hope u update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

Simi dont be sorry love it cant how the story unfold its self there reason why Geet run way from her city & her family i'm happy for

if suraj makes her happy i think its look like yu gonner bring some twist fabulous update pls cont soonnnnnnn

Thanx so much Susan ( Sorry I am completly wwaayyy off from ur name 😆😆) ohh yeah there are some twists coming up 😆 (after I write some parts ahead of time😉)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

so i can't kill u for saying yes to suraj...i was so ready for it...LOL....but i am liking the flashback scenes alot...having trouble seeing geet with some1 else....anywayz...hope u update soon :)

hahah I told you I had new fan fic in mind (in walk to remember) and I knew you guys would hate seeing Geet with someone 😆😆😆 but umm lets see what happens..more flashback scenes will be coming up 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
No Way We want Maneet together.......... I hope Maan will come back & tell suraj to back off. Geet sirf meri hai...... Maan ki Geet😆 Awesome update...

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