New FF:When Ahem realized he was in love. part 3.

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Hi everyone, here is a short valentine gift from me, so enjoy.

❤️WHEN AHEM REALIZED HE WAS IN LOVE❤️


It is February 14, 2011, Valentines day. Everyone out and about shopping and thinking of ways to surprise their sweethearts today. It's a special day for those who are in love.


One such person waking up with more excitement then others, he could hardly sleep all night, thinking about the evening ahead of him, so much to do and so little time.


How will his love react today, will she finally believe that he loves her and only her with all his heart. What will he do if she doesn't believe, so far nothing has melted her heart. She continues to avoid him, if she happens to look at him, when he goes to her house, pretending to visit his sister, its as though she doesn't see him.


If only he had stopped her when he had the chance, when she left her eyes were pleading with him to look at her just one time. God, how much courage it must have taken her to look straight at him. One thing is for sure she has more courage than him. He was such a coward unable to admit, even to himself, how much he loved her and how much he needed her in his life.


He remembered the breakfast he ate after she left, how the food was tasteless. The first bite clued him in on things to come. His family won't speak to him, let alone look at him. When he went to his room to get ready for office, he could see her everywhere, he could smell her sweet perfume in the air. He started having flash back of all the little things she used to do for his happiness. She even took her wedding vows back for him. And in that moment it hit him, he loves her, he was such an idiot for letting her go, he even had nerve to drop her off at her mama's house, how stupid could he be? What is he going to do?


He decided to ask Jigar for help when he got to the office, but Jigar flat out refused to help him. Jigar told him he is tired or bhai playing with his bhabhi's emotions, she is better off without him. May be now she will find someone who will love her for herself, the way she deserved to be loved. He tried to convince Jigar, but he stood firm and outright refused him.


Then later in the day he heard a big commotion out in his office, he went to take a look and saw that some guy claiming to be her brother was shouting he was going to kill Ahem Modi for playing with his sister emotions, and mistreating her and for kicking her out of his house.



End of part 1. Guess who the brother is?

Happy readings everyone: Shilpa



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Posted: 14 years ago
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fabulous continue plse👏
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Part 2


He was shocked, the guy looked over at him and said his name was Jake and he was Gopi's brother, you must be Ahem, whom I am going to kill. Security cane to get him, but Ahem stopped them and took Jake in his office. Ahem was finally able to calm Jake down and convinced him to listen to Ahem.

Ahem told Jake he really loved Gopi, he wants her back and he doesn't know how to get her back, he know that his family won't help him. Jake finally convinced by Ahem decided to help him. It is Valentine week, we will start from there.


So all week Ahem did as Jake asked him. He took two dozen red roses to Gopi on Rose day, but Gopi would not even come out of the kitchen when he went to get Kinjle, she told Kinjle, according to her promise she is not supposed to show her face to him. So Ahem gave the roses to Kinjle to give to her. On the next day when he went back to take Kinjle back he still did not see Gopi and the roses were not around either, he left a tape for Gopi, on the tape he had confessed his love and asked her to marry him again.


When he went back the third day with the Chocolates, Kinjle told him Gopi did not listen to the tape, at this point Kinjle was starting to feel sorry for Ahem, so decided she was going to help him by trying to convince Gopi to give Ahem a second chance. And so the whole week went by each day he took a different gift, on the fourth day it was a Teddy bear with a big heart on its chest with a band aid on it, on the fifth day it was a promise ring for things to come on the sixth day she finally came to the window when he was leaving and he blew her a Kiss, she quickly fled away from the window. He waited for her to come to the window on the seventh day so he pointed at him self then at her and put both of his arms around him and mouthing a big hug from me to you. She stood there for long time and then slowly walked away.


And now it is the 14 of February the big day. Tonight he was going to propose to his love in front of God and his whole family and marry her right after. It is supposed to be a wedding reception for Dhawal and Kinjle, but actually it is going to be the wedding of Mr. Ahem Modi and Mrs. Gopi Ahem Modi again (take 2).

Will be back soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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marvelous update update my dear pls cont soonnnnnnnnn love it both part

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shilpa, great new ff, valentine's day special.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fingers crossed from La la land!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shilpa, FFs me Ahem ka itna jyada pyaar dekhke mujhe ab SNS dekhne pe depression ho raha hai... am stopping SNS... so you guys please don't stop FFs
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shilpa that was fantastic but you had Jake convinced too quickly. Should have let him give a good thrashing first. Great story dear. Please continue. Without these we have no hope as the show is getting no where. 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I agree with Eeshaji.. You shld hav made Jake kick that moron.. ROFL.. Gud one, shilpa ben
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WHEN AHEM REALIZED HE WAS IN LOVE



Part 3


Ahem already at the Hotel where the reception/wedding is supposed to take place. He is very nervous, he organized all the details himself. He went shopping for both his and Gopi's clothes for the big event. His wearing a very dashing gold colored sherwani and for her he had bought a bottle green and maroon ghagra set with rubies and diamond necklace set.


His hoped that Kinjle was able to talk her into excepting and wearing the gift. They were supposed to go to the Beauty parlour for make up and hair. Just then this cell phone ring, it's Jake letting him know that everyone was on their way and he better go hide.


In the reception hall everyone is seated, Gopi, Kinjle and Dhawal also with Modi family at their table. Jake comes on the stage and introduce himself as their host.


Ladies and Gentlemen my name is Jake, I am here to announce the event of this evening. This is a special event for the Modi family not only are we going to have a reception for Kinjle and Dhawal, but there is also someone who would like to propose to their love tonight, being as it is a valentines day, we could not refuse him. So before we get started I would like to let him have his say.


The light dim and everyone hears someone on the microphone, but they can not yet see his face. The person says I would like to dedicate this song to my beloved, whom I hope will forgive me and give me a second chance to prove my love to her tonight. The music starts


(from the movie Dabangg)

Takte rehte tujhko sanjh savere

Nanion mein Haye

Nanion mein Haye


Takte rehte tujhko sanjh savere

Nanion mein basya jaise

Nanin yeh tere


Nanion mein basya jaise

Nanin yeh tere


Everyone surprised to see Ahem in the spotlight, he slowly walks towards where Gopi is sitting, looking straight in her eyes, the song continues to play as he is trying to convey his feelings to her thru his eyes. He comes to her and takes her hand and pulls her from the chair and they go in the middle of the dance floor, he doesn't give her a chance to move away from him, he immediately takes her in his arm, hold her in his arms and starts swaying to the music, dancing very slowly, just staring straight into her eyes.


Almost all the Modi clan with happy tears in their eyes, even Baa makes an appearance, now everything will be alright.


Gopi and Ahem still lost in each other as the song is playing, Ahem very intense with all the love he feels for her, Gopi with small smile on her face, tears running down her cheeks. As the song end, ahem gets on his knees and pulls out a beautiful 1 carat diamond ring and says to Gopi- You are the love of my life, will please marry me again, and this time for love and no other reason. I promise to devote not only this life but all my lives to you from here on.


Gopi slowly kneels with him and nods her head yes, everyone clapping, Ahem then puts the ring on her ring finger takes her face in both of his hands and gives her a soft kiss on her forehead. Everyone gathers around them.


Ahem then announces that they were to be married right then and there. Someone switches on the lights and you see in the background a wedding mandap and pandit standing by. Everyone moves near the mandap and the wedding starts. Ahem made request to pandit to include all the wedding vow that Gopi had taken back, so he could but this time instead of reversing them he was promising her everything that was unsaid that night. After the wedding they take blessings of their elders.


Ahem goes to his mom and says mom I have one more surprise for Gopi, we will not be coming home tonight, I will bring your daughter to you tomorrow. Kokila agrees. He then takes Gopi's hand and goes to the middle of the dance floor and thanks everyone for attending his rewedding and encourages them to enjoy themselves.


Gopi and Ahem walk out the reception hall hand in hand, he take Gopi to the elevators to go to the room he had reserved for them, when he gets to the he lifts Gopi in his arms and carries her over the threshold. He sets her down in front of the mirror and slowly remover her jewelry, he then stands her up and stars removing the dupputta of her ghagra, Gopi gets shy and hides her face in his chest, he hugs her and walks her towards the bed, he sits her down on the bed decorated with rose petals, he goes round the room and lights all the candles that were set in the room.


He comes back to her and kneels in front of her and starts kissing her, he did not want to give her a chance to get shy. They slowly lay on the bed with Ahem on top of Gopi, bracing his weight on his arms he kisses her everywhere, Gopi soon looses her inhibitions and starts kissing him and touching him, they undress each other and express their love physically.


In the reception hall Kokila walks towards Jake and thanks him for all his help. Jake with secret smile on his face says you are welcome Koki aunty.


Next day Ahem brings Gopi home, everyone happy except for Rashi and Mami. Even Kinjle started to change, she finally confessed to her part in all the misunderstanding, But all was forgiven because Gopi said so. Three months later it was announced that Gopi was pregnant, everyone in Modi Mansion very excited. Rashi also decided to accept her destiny and started loving Jigar, mami could not do anything.


THE END.

My dedication to Jakebhai.


Thank you Jakebhai for your special appearance who was hired by our very own Kokila to play the cupid.



This was a special treat for all GoHam fans, and those who believe in love. I hope enjoyed this story, please press like button if you liked it



Love,

Shilpa







The Picture says it all.




Edited by sbp1971 - 14 years ago

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