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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

awesome update yaar👏

mildblwoing👏
sayank was toooooooooooooooooo gud😃
loved them🤗
remember me old MJHT days❤️............i really really misssing them😕

wasay bhi sharm tu us ko ati hai nhi'tu us ny socha sharma ban ker kiya kerna hai'


it was really funny🤣...............mayank was really funny.🤣

love mayur scene...........they r so close😍
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww😍
n babuji aa gaye!!!!!!!
OMG...........ab kya hoga!!!!!!!!😕
but i thot, it was either sam or gunjan😉
nice update.😊
update soon😊.
thanks for the pm.😊

thanku so much dear for liking ths update
u all r enjoying n rembering old days thts wht i want
😳 dekh kya kya kerwaty ho tum loog mjh se....mayur scene..
n bauji is no where to cauz any damage
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

amazing update

loved sayank convo...so mayank is successful in his mission
aweeeeee mayur......luved their silly nok-joks n den their romance in the living room....jaha dehko shuru ho jate hain
cont soon

thnku so much fro liking
abhi tu shuro hoay hai mayur...rukh do kiya....
every1 complain i skip romance in my ff 😆so here i want to prove..i can do tht also..but dont expect a loot😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Goshhh it ws so romantic...Mayur...Ahem ahem...😍😍
Fully loved this part becoz of the dialogues...Every dialogues wr outstanding...The line 'sharam to aati nahi' reminds me of the locket fight...I ws laughing my heart out to see the epi...Nupur ws fab there...
And the dialogue 'tum samne hoti ho to main khudko bhi bhool jata hoon to yeh amba, i mean baatein kya cheez hai'.😆😆..hayeeeee....Mayank made me mad here..😍😍...
But u did wrong with them ha...Exact time pe hi darwaza khol diya..😆😆..Bechare bauji ke mare...lol...
Cont soon...

thnku
glad u r enjoying it
lol...even i loved tht part yaar..the locket one..just cant forget his face whn he saw tht gift😆
thnks for liking dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
thnku

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

wao irs soo lovely and beautiful update

wao Mayur romance is soo sweet
Bur what es bauji kha se a gaye
Hope every thing will be fine
Thanks for Pm ans cont soon

thnku so much dear for liking it
bauji bs aagy yaar...
marna mat mjhy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

awesome update and FF fiza i just read it and loved it

thx alotf or the pm

thnku sooo much dear

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

superb update Fiza!

continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊

thnks dear

Originally posted by: hazraluvarjun

wow...

aussum update
loved it.
thnx for the pm...

thnks aloot
thnkuuuu
thnks a loot
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

Ch. 2

MN were cute as usual, they have this charm no matter what they are doing, fighting, arguing, being friendly they are just irristable!😳 And i loved the fact you have included shilpa aunty and mayank charm in this ff something i really missed in mjht! they both were the most rocking mother son duo everrrr
Fizza im in love with your ff, reminds me soo much of mjht, Nupur and Gunjan sisterly bond and than mayank and samratt. everything feels so similar
Outstanding.....& sorry for the late comment!😳
Sajjal

tht is so true thy have such charm tht whtever v write become more special whn its imagine on them...shilpa anty is one of my favt charct..i can skip sajan but cant her..thnks for liking it
n its ok plss dont say sorry
actually us din mein tasfia ko bool rahi thi

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

Ch. 3

Fizza again a mindblowing update with Samrat and Mayank mission...😆 And MN bitter sweet arguments only leading them to have a beautiful moment together in the end reminds me of the olds...gosh i miss mjht now!😳
And baujii?? did he have to enter!!😆
Superb update, do update soonnn...
Sajjal

heey....thnku so much for such wonderful comments
i miss thm to sooo much
bauji..kya kero majbori hai 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Hey guys

Thnks for ur lovely comment

Ths part is a simple one

Cant make evry part funny or romantic

I hope u like it

Rplyd to u all

Luv

fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Chapter :4

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She clutch hs hand tight leaning her head back to rest on hs shoulder giving him more space'.

The door open..n they came back on earth

Maynk/Nupur: bauji'

Uff 'yeah ho kya raha hai

Mayank Nupur: Gunjan'.thnk God

Gunjan: kya thank God'musbiat hai

Mayank: kya hua Sali sehaba

Gunjan: dekho na mayank..yeah 'sam'..kya kaha tum ny

Mayank: grining n folding his hands around his chest'Sali sheba..kay baat hai

Gunjan: KYA'she looked at both of them with surprise'came to nupur 'n kept looking at her..she raised her eybrows questioning wht.s.he blinkd it longer to assure yes' tm dodno sach mein shadi ker rahy hoo..wao di'she hugged her tight 'I just cant belived it 'kitna maza aay ga

Mayank: confused'tum ko ksay pata

Gujan: din y bataya

Mayank: kab

Gujan: uffu abhi

Mayank: tu mein kuch kyun nhi suna

Nupur: kyun k hum ny kuch bola hi nhi

Mayank: sum1 said rightly'dnt even try too understand women

Gujan: women hogi ap ki wali..im a girl

Mayank:chuckled..dram tu bhushan khandan k kuhhon mein hai'..

Gujan: tu kab..kitna maza aay gad ii..

Nupur: han baba'but abhi bauji se baat nhi ki hai

Gujan: uffu di..yeah mayank hai ..samrat nhi ..jis k lyan itni tension ly rahi hoo..mayank tu wasy hi bauji ko itna pasand hai..her waqt tu khaty hai'kuch seekh us se'.ab batna kya seekha us se'grining

Mayank: wasy gujun tumhin samrat k lyan bhi itna pareshan hony ki zaroorat nhi hai'.main hoo na'

Gujan: pareshan na hoon tu kya kero..janab phn kertay hai aur khaty hai sham ko mila'urgent hai..kasay milo bauji k kya kahoon gii

Mayank: no problem yaar..sham mein'.let me think..ek kam ker..bolo u need help frm me so ur cuming with me

Nupur: mayank sharma aur jhoot

Mayank: Nupur bhushan ..no jhoot..sham mein mein hi pick kero ga is ko'.aur phir Nupur bhi tu hogi na tumhary sath'

Gujan: ohhh..tu yeah sab meray lyan nhi di k sath bahar jany k lyan ho rah hai..kyun ab tu ek paal bhi door nhi rah jarah 'dkh rahin aj kal kaaaaaafi pasa pass nazar arhy hain dono

Nupur blushed hard n even he too got embarrassed but thn mayank sharma is hard to get caught

Mayank: obivoulsy'aj aj ke baat hai'ap k haal bhi kuch asa hi honay wala hai'wasy kaun se romantic jaga book ki hai ap ko romeo ny'haan

Gujna: she blushed'wooh ..ghar

Nupur:GHAR..deemagh karab hogay hai us ka'Casanova

Gujna: dii

Mayank: common Nupur..ok be ready I'll'k pick u up at 7..oki

He went outside 'n took out his ceel to call sami

Mayank: hmm..tu kyaa plan hai..al set

Samrat: kahy ka se'sab upset'plz yaha aja..mjhy kuch samhj nhi araha'.yeah red zayda acha hai ya pink'orkits lo ya rose'yaar mera pehla time hai plz aja

Mayank: acha mein ny tu PH.d ki hai hai na

Samrat: ach pls..ab aja

Mayank: dkh teray paap k business hai..meri job hai..mjhy kam hai'shadi se pehly tu naukri bhi chor waday

Samrat: tu aur bhi acha hai'.dodno mil ker meray baap k business ko dkhay gay

..mein dkho ga..aur tu kam keray ka'.teri entertainment k lyan hot se secretary rkhy gay

Mayank: han bulikl..us k baat mjhy meri biwi ghar per kafi hot milay gi..woh bhi gusay mein

He reached at his place n found it as complete mess

Mayank: yeah sab kiya hai'tu ker kya rah hai

Samrat: dkh chila mat'mein kya kero ..kasay sab kuch kero'.

Mayank: itny sary flowers'aur yeah candles..phir yea lights'.yeah kya faluda hai beta

Samrat: tu kya kero..pehly soch her taraf candles chalta hoon'..phr socha poray ghar k flowers se decorate kerta hoon'.phr soch sab lkuch meri life ke tarah roshan kerday ta hoon

Mayank: per is waqt tu mjhy lagraha hai..k tu ny gujan se milny se pehli wali life k portray kerdiya hai'.complete mess

Samrat: tu help keray ga

Mayank: dkh mjhy yeah sab nhi aata'

Samart: mjhy samhj nhi aata Nupur jasi filmi larki tujh se kasay pyar kerti hai'jis ke life mein phool, violins, aur romance hi romance hai'.

He kept quite thinking a bit..it was sum how true'but thn ignore it

Mayank: cha lab mein hi kuch kero

Bth of them decorate the hall beautiful'to wch mayank lookd with a smile

Smarat: tension mat lay ..teri weding night k lyan tera room bhi asay hi decorate kerdo ga

Mayank: tu'.na baba na'phir tu wedding anversary tak taiyar hoi jay ga..i'll do the honurs by myself

Samrat: wah bhi matlab ..yeah bhi soch rekh hai k kasy decorate kerna hai'aur kya kya plan hai'..

Mayank: shut up ..abhi tu concentrate ker

Gunjan: di mein ny kahbhi socha bhi nhi tha..k yeah sab itna jaldi hojay ga..i mean abhi sirf 1 year ho hai mayank ko pass out keray'n he made it to top

Nupur: ahn Gujan ..jab mayank ny mjhy kaha tu mjhy tu yaqeen nhi aaya..us sadu se tu aglay 5 saalo tak mjhy asi koi imeed nhi thi

Gujan: dii'very bad..meray jeju waha itny betaab horahy hai aur tum ho k..

Nupur: gujan'..bs bauji man jay

Gujan: di ..mayank ko kaun man keray ga..aur phir shilpa anty ..asi maa ko kaun apni beti nhi day ga

Nupur: par pata nhi gunjan..mein bauji se kasaay baat kero gi'.mjh se nhi hoga'

Gujan: di'bauji ko kuch samjhny ke zaroorat nhi pary gi..dkhna mayank khud sab handle kerlay ga'aur tum plz yeah tension wala part meray lyan chor do'

Nupur: ufu meri choti behan ki bari bari baatein..abhi tu tu taiyar hoja..chasmsih bany k lyan'...koi ap k intezar ker rah hai '.han

Gunjan: dii

Nupur: uffu ..ab sharman chor..bulkil mayank jasi herkaty hai teri

Gunjan: ach us k samany tu khud shrma rahin thi

Nupur: koi nhi

Gunjan: acha..jab mein ghar mein aai thi tu kya ho raha tha han'

Nupur: GUjan ..tu kuch zayada badmash hogai hai samrat k sath rah rah ker'.chal ab taiyar hoja..kyun k tjhy layn mayank araha hai'.india k standard time bhi un ke watch dkh ker tu milaya ja ta hai

Bth laughed

The decent down from the stirs like two angel'on carrying the glow for the happiness of strting a new life and other unaware of the surprise life is holding for her'

Bauji: kaha jar hi hai meri betiyan

Gunjan: woh baji mayank k

Bauji: mayank k ghar kyun?

Gunjan: mjhy physic mein kuch prblm thi

Buaji: oho..tu us ko bola liya hota ..tumhain jany ke kya zaroorat hai..kasay jao gi

Gunjan: woh aaya hai layny

Bauji: thik hai mein bi milta hoon

Nupur: she got scred'bauji ap kyun taklef kerty hai..

N the bell rung

Yeah mayank na intezar nhi hota is se'..ab milo bauji aur in k sawalo se

Mayank: namasty uncle..he bow down to touch his feet

bauji: khush raho'.in dono ny tum ko khamakha takleef di..tum yahin guide ker day ty in logo ko

Mayank: nhi uncle actually maa..k sir mein kafi dard tha islyan 'warna mein khabi nhi kahta in logo ko ghar per any k lyan'n maa ghar per hi han

Bauaji: woh baat nhi hai beta..i trust u'

Mayank: he felt so relif at hs words..thnku so much uncle

Nupur: chalein ya yahi kitabin (books) khol lo'

Mayank: is nautanki ko itny serious mood per bhi mazak soojta hai ..had hai

Bajui: han han..jao

He whislt when grils settle down in car ..to wch bth of them looked surprisingly to him

Mayank: sum1 is loking beautiful

Nupur: thnku

Mayank: tum ko kis ny boloa..mein tu gunjan k baat ker raha tha

Gujan: thnku jeeju

Nupur: han han..mein kyun achi lagny lagi'kuch dono mein biwi ban jao gi ..meri kya value

Mayank: obiviously''.kyun dkho us ko achi nhi lag rahi

Nupur: she looked at her in aww..n said'she is looking just like princess

Gujna: diii'jeeju

Mayank: oye yeah jeju 'sabk samny nhi'.warna hum bhas jay gay..is ko sab kuch official hojay tab

Nupur: haa..shoru hogaya sadu'aur us ki privacy

Mayank: it'ntt abt privacy ..its abt principle

Nupur: uffu ..abhi andar kiya hua tha ..maa k sir mein dard hai

Mayank: han tu hai'.

Gujan: ohh god aur ap ko meri wajha se yaha ana par gaya

Mayank: ufuf tum dono pori baat nhi suno gi'woh ab thik hai'medicine lay ker soo rahi n hai islyan aya hoo..zayad emotional honay ke zaroorat nhi '.

CHAPTER : 5

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
beautiful part fiza..
thnx alot for the pm
Edited by -moona- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
resesrved

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hey api 😃
i am really sorry for editing so late😭
actually i forget thats why😳

it was awesome
just loved the relation between gunjan and mayank
just super cool update

aww.....i am so much waiting for their romance after marriage
pls jaldi se shadi karwa do aur phir dher sara romance dalna😳

awesome ipdate
continue soon

love
tasfia

Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago

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