HUM TUM, MJHT FF, CH:9, 23/3 - Page 12

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Wao so beutiful update

Mayur scenes were so beautiful

Gunji k jiju to hmesha hi boht sweeet hota ha

Thanks for Pm and cont soon

thnku so much dear

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

it was so beautiful.........bas ye bauji koyi problem na de by god.....

thnkus so much dear

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

superb update Fiza!

i loved it

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

thnks aloot dear

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Nice part

thnks dear

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

Hi Fizza

Finally i read the part and wow....! its not boring at all...Mayank and Samrat just rock....Gunjan and Nupur scenes was quite hilarious..the ishares!😆😆😆...Bauji seems okay for now but hoping he won't create any problem for MN.

Mayank and Nupur scnes are always a bliss ...in diguise....too cute!!

Amazing Update sweety

Sorry for the late comment!

Sajjal

hi dear

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Who said u that this part is boring...
I found this part hilarious as usual...Specially the first part...Truly for boys understanding girls is not so easy specially when they r sisters...I hav sis and often found my bro confused at our 'aankhon mein baatein'...😆😆
Lovely part...cont...

hey...i m glad u didnt find it boring

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

beautiful part.

thnku sooo much

Originally posted by: -Arti4ever-

amazing part just loved it do continue sooonnnn

thnks aloot

HELLO ALL U BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE….

Array is FF ko tu mein bhol hi gait hi..sorry but I know its short update…

Thnku sooo much all for loving ths FF sooooooooooooooo much ..luv ya all

Oki one thing

Pls answer…

1. do u want a song sequence, suggest a song also…continuing ths moment ??
2. im skipping the preparation of weding n will b directly jumping on the sangeet/mehndi event after ths n another chapter….is ths ok with u all?or u guys want sumthing else too….

Luv ya

fiza

Chapter: 5

Mayank: here u goo..gunjun'.ap k manzil agai'.bst of luck

Gujnun: thnks..bye

Nupur: byee

Chalo na mayank andhar chaltay hai

Mayank: pagal hogai hoo..kyun khaba mein hadi ban rahi hoo..no way

Nupur: array wah 'mein us ki behan hoon'.

Mayank: tu villan kyu ban rahi hoo..un ki privacy hai'.no way

Nupur: pls na mayank'..mjhy pata hai woh bilkul filmi style mein us ko propose keray ga'.by god...kitna maza aay ga'mjhy dkh na hai

Mayank: nooo

Nupur: bs proposal tak phr paka wapas ajao gi sachi

Pls pls plsss

Mayank: but just till proposal'us k bad nhi

Nupur: han thik hai'ab chalo sadu

Mayank: abhi bhi mein sadu

Nupur: woh tu tum hamesha raho gay'

Gujan went inside to find whole house in dark

Sami has a huge mansion''the only faint light she can saw was of sum candles making a path for her to cum inside

Nupur: chalo jaldi

Pulled her

Mayank: yaha nhi'.uper..wah se view zayada acha hai

Nupur:tum ko kasay pata

Mayank: he is my frnd..i helpd him in all ths acha'so I know evrythng'

She enter in the mid way when a spot light ..lighten her presence at hall'she hides her eyes as reflex'n remove her hand slowly to see a man ..or rather a prince walking towards her'she was soo surprise to see all ths'why everything is made extra special she didn't get tht'..he came upto her ..n held her hand

Gujan: samrat

Sami: shh'chasmish aj mjhy bolnay dooo

Nupur: wsay kaun bolta hai hamesha..by god

Mayank: tum

Nupur: mayankkk..she hits him

Mayak: shh'woh sun lay gay'he hugged her from back

Nupur: yeah kya hai'

Mayank: pyar..

Nupur: uff fuu mein jo tumharay hath mein hai us ke baat ker rahi hoon

Mayank: yeah 'doori'

Nupur: acha mjhy laga'bad hai..yaha 20twenty k plan hai'.

Mayank: u always estimate me wrong

Nupur: she glared at him'tum kuch zayada meri tarah k nhi hogay hooo

Mayank: he chukled'array baba..is k kuch kerna hai'abhi tum us ke speech per conce kero'5 bar likhny k bad final ke hai us ny

Nupur: kya'she chukled

Mayank: han..aur mjhy lag raha hai abhi bhi bhool jay ga'

Nupur: tum ny kitny dair mein likhi thi speech'she looked at him mischievously

He looked at her lovingly

Maynk: filmi line maroo'she nodded'ap se kuch khany k lyan humain kisi speech likhny ke zaroorat nhi '.hum yaha jo hota hai kahtay hai'he puts her hand on his heart'.aur woh ya tak pohach jata hai'

She looked at him in n awwww'..

Mayank: zayada chessy hogi nhi'wasay moo band kerlo warna..i'll do the honors..

Nupur: '.she hugged him'hay mera Raj'.he hugged her back tightly'.n smiled

Gujan: smarat per yeah sab

They broke apart 'n get back to for they came her

Samrat: he went on his knees..n she get the shock'true she has dream millions of time him siting n saying tht much ..but in really anything like tht will occur she never evr though'.

Samrat: mjy pata hai'.i am nt perfect..i know u will never try to make me perfect..ur a person who loved me as imperfect..who decent in my life as god blessing..who made my life heaven'who gave meanings to my words..who felt love in my gesture'who found truth n trusted me'who loved me beyond anything

I m being selfish..want more from u'.just one last favour of loving and being mine for eternity..

Chasmish will u marry me..

Gunjan: she was lost, numb..couldnt differentiat'e is it a dream or reality'he was stills sitting looking at her in fear n dilemma'

Nupur: array hann bool..kya soch rahi hoo

Mayank: bolo gunjan'.warna humari shadi bhi rah jay gi common bolo'.

She went down on her knees too'n hugged him tight..he smiled , he got the answer'.but thn when she said by herself ..he felt bless

Gujnan: haan'.i love you

Nupur: yes'she hugged mayank

With nupurs sudden reaction mayank drop the door'.n flowers rained at bth of the'

Maynk: hey look'

They look up n found no one there'.seems god blessd them with His wishes too

Mayank: bs ab chalo yaha se'

Nupur: rukh

Mayank: Nupur'he took her off

The house was near by see'so he took Nupur on a walk'..they were walking silently on beech..nupur side hugging him'he was too quite..it was nt new but today it was sumhing different

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: hmm

Nupur: kya baat hai

Mayank; kuch nhi bs

Nupur: she stoped n looked at him'tum ko pata hai na tum jhot nhi bool saktay 'aur mjh se bolo gay jhot

Mayank: he chukled'..asay hi sadu k deemagh hai'chaha choudary se bhi zayad teez chalta hai khabi khabi..bs..

Nupur: maynk..tum bol rahy ho ya nhi'

Mayank: ek baat poch'sach sach batao gi

Nupur: haan'.tum se khabi chot bola hai'..he raised hs eyebrows'.han thk hai bolo hai but situational hai woh acha'.

Mayank: tumhain khabi regret nhi hota'k tum jis se pyar kerti hoo..woh tum se wasy pyar nhi kerta jasa tum chati hoo'mein Raj nhi hoon..u know tht'.na hi mein samrat ke tarah pora ghar saja diya..nhi kuch extra ordinary kiya'.yeah sab shayad mjhy se hota hi nhi hai'asa mein..

He couldn't say further as he was stoped by her'she placed her finger on his lips'

Nupur: shh'.tumharay deemagh na sach mein karab hai'mayank mein manti hoon mein ny asa hi saocha tha'.per tumhi tu khatay hoo pyar shrato per nhi hota'.tum Raj ho rahaul ho aur us se bhi baar k tum mayank hoo'.jo mjhy se sab se zayad pyar kerta hai'.sirf khata nhi hai'jo apni her baat ker k dekhta hai'islyan us ko bolny ke zaroorat hi nhi parti'jo mjhy yaha se pyar kerta hai (placing her hand on his heart ) aur jo yaha saaf dekhta hai ( tracing his eyes)''aur is se bara sach aur kuch nhi hai'

He smiled lovingly'..

He slided his hand on her face slowly feeling her skin..turning warm at his touched'.

He cuped her face n trace her lips with his fingers'.before capturing them with his in kiss'.he made it as passionate as he can'.to asure how blessd he felt to find her in his life'she responded it back reciprocating the same feeling '..broking aprt he kissed her forehead

Mayank: I love you Nupur'.i hope I can fill ur every dream

Nupur: ur my only dream mayank'