New One shot **BLIND FAITH**....Part 1 Pg 1.

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** Love has no other diesire but to fulfill itself….to melt and be like a running brook….that sings its melody to the night….to wake up at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving**………….😳

Hi everyone………read these line somewhere yesterday……….thought of sharing them with u…..sooo true and nice naa……..😛

Coming to the one shot……….before I start……….after Saturday special of ltl last week……….I am really impressed by aashka's portrayl of kalavati!............She deserves a standing ovation for pulling off the whole episode sooooooooooo well………….APNEY PYARE DUTTA BHAU KE LIYE USSKI KALAA TAAYI KE DIL MEIN JO ANGER AUR HATRED HAI………….it was all soooooo real….believable and convincing!...........Brilliant job by the writers and the director…………..outstanding episode hugh on drama quotient and actually leaving one and all at the adge of their seats!.............

Abb it would be real fun to watch dutta come back to PN to save his love……….(I loved it when kala said about putting naku as a bait for bringing dutta back…………she called naku machlii…..I WAS LIKE KALA U HAVE NO IDEA ……..WHAT MISTAKE U WILL MAKE IF U DO THAT……………DUTTA WILL PROVE A REAL SHARK!................lol………abb shonaa sher se shark banegaa………..lol………I am all eyes to see it happen……….and kala being finished………..uss din party on me for sure………….)…………..

Ok coming to part 1 of this one shot……….Hope u all like and send in ur valuable comments…………u know I am a little busy with my finals coming up soooo I may not be able to reply back to all still do leave ur views back…………….

It begins from the scene on Friday's episode where dutta is shown leaving seema's kotha and u see the three enter the other house which chacha had got rented to hide dutta from chaaskar……………

Dutta walks and finds a place for him to sit………..he then hears the phone ring and was more than glad for it as he could now know where the phone was ……and there was no need to ask seema about it……………

It was the landlord whom seema thanks for giving in a place to stay on such short notice……………….

After this seema and chacha leave from there telling dutta they would be back soon as it was time for chaaskar to come to the kothaa……….and seeing no seema there he would think something Is going on…………..

After the two leave……….Dutta sits silently………recalling chaaskar saying how he killed dutta and was new bhau of patil wadii…………

Dutta clenches his teeth in anger……………and feels mad at the fact that he trusted someone like chaaskar and not his friend baaji!..............

He then recalls naku tying the thread around his wrist and raising his hand he embraces the other one where naku had tied the thread and calms down a little……………..

Tears well up in his eyes as he thinks to himself----Har baar……….HAR BAAR MAIN TERE KO GALAT SAMJHA NAKU…………..HAR KADAM PE TERE KO SIRF DUKH HII DIYAA…………..MERE SAATH TERE KO SIRF DARD HII MILAA…………….aisaa hii………aisaa hii honaa chahiye mujh jaisey insaan ke saath!..................(Dutta thinks on sadly…………)………..HAr pal har lamhaa jab tu meree saath……..ere saamney thii toh main tere ko thukraata rahaa…………Tere pyaar kaa jawaab sirf nafrat se detaa rahaa…………….AUR AJJ//////////////AAJ JAB TU MERI AAKHON KE SAAMNEY NAHIIN HAi………..TOH YEH NAZREIN SIRF TERI EK JHALAK PAANEY KO TArAS RAHII HAIN……………….

An unhappy dutta gets up and walks upto the place where he had heard the phone ring…………..

After finding the phone he picks up the receiver………..and begins to dial PN number…………..(kaash yeh number mere paas bhii hotaa………..Dutta boltaa phor pe AYE SHEEBA…..KUCH BOLTII KYUN NAHIIN HAI!.........……..OMG main toh wahiin faint ho jaati………..ok out of dreamland……..sorry for distraction………….coming to the update……….)………..

There IN PN …………U see a restless kala walking from one end of the hall to the other with the phone in her hand and says to herself----PHONE KAR DUTTA……….PHONE KAR!..............MAIN JAANTII HOON TU PHONE ZAROOR KAREGAA…………MAGAR TU YEH NAHIIN JAANTAA………..KII ISS BAAR TU BAAT APNI MAUT SE KAREGAA!............

Just then the phone rings……….Kala found it har to curtail her elation………..and she looks at the phone with a devilish smile on her face…………….

She tells one of the guards to bring naku from the room into the hall quickly…………..

And as the guard brings naku down into the hall forcefully…………Kala picks the phone saying----Hello…………

Dutta was more than relieved that his call was been attended……………

But he didn't know……….How much he would soon wish he never called up………………..He didn't know just moments later his heart was going to shatter to pieces as HE WOULD WITNESS THE ULTIMATE DECEPTION!................

PRECAP---- A stunned dutta listens on as Kala says hatefully in the phone----KYUNKI MAIN TUJHSEY BAHOT NAFRAT KARTI HOON!............BEHADH NAFRAT KARTI HOON MAIN TUJHSEY…… DUTTA!.............NAFRAT KARTI HOON MAIN TERE NAAM SE……………TERE ASTITVA SE………..TERE HONNEY SE NAFRAT HAI MUJHEY!............😭

A shattered Dutta feels like someone stabbed him in his heart as tears low down his face……………

Kaisaa lagaa?............I know thodaa short hai……still building on the track……….Hope u like what I come up with……….Love u all …………….and missing u all too…………….🤗

Jaldii bataao………….😊

Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice start ..... please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg so kala ne apna kale irade khud dutta ko bataya!! awhh rely wish naku cud b wit hm nw...hes totaly shatterd...nws da tym wen he rely did wish naku cud b der.ne needs her now....

plz continue soon..can u plz add me 2 ur pm list bbe.x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice start do continue............. looking frwrd...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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**Love has no other diesire but to fulfill itself….to melt and be like a running brook….that sings its melody to the night….to wake up at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving**👏👏👏 so true.....

very nice start dear😳 loved it...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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V nice. Continue it. Pls add me too to ur PM list.

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