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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely meeting of abhay n piya.hope story moves around 4m next chap as intros r over.xpecting ur update.dont take too long to update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear

Nice FF you got there

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love

Lekha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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2 POVs of the meeting.. liked it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heey Buddys
Iam so sorry for the delay.. but seriously i had totally finished chapter three. but when the batt of my laptopt went empty..i was like shit.. but i thought OFFICE 2007 has a kind of automatic save..so i was like saved// but i couldnt find the one i was looking.. so i made it all over.. Sorry.. its a little diffrent than the first one.. but i like this one more : )
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Only admire how gorgeous these eyes where.. so dark..so black.. only if you watch closely you could see that they where dark brown..but otherwise they were just black.. so black and so clear..he wanted to ask her if everything was ok.. but he could not talk only watch those eyes..

he wanted to watch how she looked further but he was afraid she would lose her concentration and say something weird to him..or slap him or something.. he wanted to stare in those eyes for ever '

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He did it anyway.. Looking at her now... moving his eyes from her eyes to her nose and lips' seeing her lips move and' but nothing came out 'he took the tray from her hand, moving his hand away from her hand.. Losing the warm electricity when he felt touching her... he saw her watching him intense... but still never saying anything... walking to place the tray at supposed place.. He walked back to her... still in daze he asked her '

Hello my name is Abhay Raichand... Are you ok? ' Abhay really wanted to say something to her...and that was the only thing he could think of saying to her...waiting for her voice again to hear...he saw her friend moving towards him ' Hello I am Misha, Pya's best friend, thanks for helping us.. We are new actually. Just had our flight today'.

Abhay smiled at her but still looked back at the other girl... Pya was her name'. I like the sound of that... he thought..... No worries Misha and Pya right..? .. She looked back at Pya...He saw her blushing a little... and that made Abhay more feeling a little dazed.. He was never like this...and he never actually saw a girl blushing... these days no one had shame...

He walked to Misha...forwarding his hand for a shake... Nice to meet you Misha'Misha smiled... Yes nice to meet you too Abhay... he walked towards Pya... Pya it was really nice to meet you, are you going to school tomorrow? Pya shake his hands and smiled... Thank you Abhay, for everything. Yes me and Misha are going to school tomorrow.

Abhay was getting more a weird feeling inside of him...all warm and fuzzy... he smiled to both of them and went to his room to get some rest for tomorrow... before this he had a totally hate to go school and now for the first time in a long time he was actually excited. He took his clothes off and put his sleep pants on and leaving his top bare. He walked to his bedroom...what was in a building next to the girl's hostel. He took his alarm and pressed the on button.

Just when the girls stepped into their room...Misha exploded of questions for Pya... "WHAT WAS THAT .. ''' Why were you standing there like someone who lost their tongue... you are so weird Pya. What was that...? OMG... I almost slapped you right there' beginning to laugh really hard... Pya hit her on the head.. I don't know.. I was like in a trance or something..I wanted to thank him or talk.. but there was no voice coming out of my mouth..seriously it was the weirdest thing ever' they both talked and took a shower and went into their bed..

Abhay was tossing and moving in his bed..there was something wrong..and he didn't know what.. he opened his eyes and started thinking of everything he did today.. it was a kind of way to fall in sleep.. he thought of the morning , the breakfast with his friend and at the gym with his friends, at the race and about her.. he wanted to think about her' what was wrong with him.. why did he wanted to think about her.. and why.. why couldn't he find the reason why he wanted to be with her right now.. why was she so special than other girls?

He wanted to forget Pya . it wasn't really healthy thinking about someone' he has a experience with this kind of feeling..and it ended very bad.. it had hurt him.. thinking about someone so long or so many times..can hurt..and he didn't wanted to get hurt anymore.. He totally doesn't want to think about that other girl.. the flashbacks are hurting. The way he loved her' he knew he could never love someone more than her.. the way he did everything to her' the way she used him..and then the very last part of their story.. when she found her kissing with some boy from the party.. he hated it..he hates the moment..how could someone remember such a thing after 2 years .. he hated it

Now he can't sleep.. he knows.. after thinking of her..he can't sleep..he walked of his bedroom and took his phone and started to walk outside his building.. it was really great weather outside.. the soft blow outside was cooling down the overheated temperature.. it was refreshing to him.. the blow was hitting against his chest and it felt good..he walked to a bench and sat dawn. And closed his eyes..

Sensing some movements behind him and a tree he opened his eyes.. ready to defend himself if it's something dangerous.. he turned his head and then he saw..

Pya's Point of view.

Pya was awake laying in her bed.. thinking why she could not sleep.. she decided to write something in her diary outside. Looking at her alarm it was almost 3 o'clock. She took her slippers and wore her jacket over her night gown .. . took her pen and diary and walked outside her room and building..she saw a bench a little far and wanted to walk there.. just when she saw a shadow .. she was thinking of going back.. because this figure could be dangerous..she walked slowly further when she saw who it was..

Abhay's Point of view

Abhay saw her.. the girl where he was thinking about.. is she real or is this some kind of imagination of him.. "Pya ".. he called out.. and then he saw her coming closes. "Abhay is that you? ".. Abhay heard her asking..

Abhay walked towards her..coming out of the shadow he walked towards her. .and when he finally was close to her they both stopped walking and stared into each other..

" you know Pya its not quit safe outside in this time of the night to walk.. why aren't you sleeping.. ".. Pya blushed.. and that made Abhay wanting to stare at her more.. He didn't know how she could became more gorgeous than normal by just blushing.. he loved it.. even more now he knew it was because of him she was blushing.. and why did she look down all the time.

"I couldn't sleep so I though making a walk would help..and having some fresh air was good I thought.. ".. Abhay smiled.. they had the same kind of thought by coming here..

She looked up to him.. and he saw her eyes again..and without controlling himself.. he said what he thought.. ' Your eyes so beautiful Pya.. they are so black.. but so clear... And just when he wanted to say something more he realized that he was not really helping her into feeling comfortable with him..

Thanks.. she answered him ..while looking down' He didn't know why but he felt so close with her now.. he felt so alive with her.. like it was only him and Pya in this world nothing else.. he didn't knew where this feeling came from .. just once'and so soon' he didn't like it.. but how could you not like this feeling..and ignore it.. he wants to feel it again'.. he placed his fingers under her chin and lifted her face up to him..

"look at me Pya.. don't be shy.. how about we met all over again..

" Hi , I am Abhay Raichand, son of the headmaster of UOL .. I am 19 years old, I live in the building next to the girls hostel and I study psychology , I love playing the piano' my favourite colour is green.. now your turn.."..

Pya smiled and took his hand for shaking,

"Hi, I am Pya Chaiswal , I am 18 years old and I would love to get my master degree for English, I love literature and writing. I love to sing and my favourite colour is brown, Nice to meet you Abhay, And wow I totally didn't know you where the son of ' "..

Abhay smiled.. " You are not the first one that gets shocked.. don't worry.. my mom is the nicest headmaster I have known. But if you get her angry.. then you should run for your life..

Pya laughed ..

Abhay felt that she was more open now, and more comfortable.. he was glad that she did trust him..

And like that they talked and talked about everything while sitting at the bench .. he sometimes saw her smile and it didn't take long to make him smile too.. they both sat dawn after a few minutes talking it went to quit, not a awkward quietness.. but more a comfortable one. He turned his head towards her again..

Pya, do you have the same feeling as if we know each other so long.. yet I feel like I missed you my whole life..

Pya smiled.. he loved her smile..he didn't know why' but he did'She nodded..

I do actually.. it's like missing a person without knowing till you find the person..then you know how empty his or her place was' he smiled at her..

Yes that's what I mean'. You must know..that I never had any girl as a friend'.Pya smiled at him.. Me neither.. I mean I never had a boy as a friend either.. but I like our friendship..it's really trustable to me in a kind of way.. something is telling me that I can tell you my deepest secrets and still trust that you won't tell them.. how I don't know.. but I do trust you Abhay and I am glad I met you .. now I finally met a friend , and the school isn't even starting.. she laughed at the last part..

For Abhay this was everything he wanted to hear.. he wanted to became her friends ..

He took her hand and gently placed his hand on her hand and smiled to her.

"I want to be your friend Pya, I don't think I could stay away from you anymore after this .. "

.. she blushed and he smiled bigger..

" It feels so good . this wind blow and this night and the moon shining and showing off his beauty.. ".. she said to him..while looking at the moon..

I totally don't agree.. he said.. Pya looked at him in a confused way.. he smiled while saying.. because how could such a moon so far be more pretty than the girl next to me sitting.. ".. and winked at her.. she laughed..

"you know that was quite cheesy .. "' He laughed.. and smiled at her..

"it must feel good to sleep her outside.. ".. he said thinking of how warm his room was..and how refreshing it was outside.

Both sitting at the bench.. she smiled .. "you can.. come lay your head ".. he looked at her totally confused and shocked.."' where? ' on my lap of course.. come on..I don't sleep anyway..I can't sleep anymore..if I sleep I won't wake up before 1 pm' she laughed..

He gently placed his head on her lap and shoved his legs on the other side of the bench.. placing the end at the ground.. he looked up at her.. feeling his heart beat harder than ever..seeing her and feeling her warmth was nothing he ever experienced.. and he never wanted to go away from this place anymore.. he was still staring at her from her lap.. seeing more details of her face..and getting amazed at how nature beauty she was.. her eyes where reflecting the light of the moon and showing her long lashes.., her lips..and god he wanted to feel if they were as soft as they looked..pink reddish'. And one thing he also loved was her fragrance.. the smell.. he didn't know if it was her shampoo or her perfume, but it smelled so good, like strawberries and vanilla in one but still different.. he wanted to stay here..

Slowly closing his eyes .. he felt her hands' those soft hands were placed at his shoulder..and the other one was laying near his hair..he could feel it..

"Pya.. "' he said her name

"hmm' "' he smiled.. how late is it? He asked her..

"ow let me take a look ' Oh I don't have my phone with me.. ".. before she could finish her sentence.. he took his phone from his pocket and gave it to her . still eyes closed.. he didn't want to end this moment..

Abhay felt her open the phone and gasp' " how late is it? Everything ok Pya? ".. he asked her..

"Oh yea' I was only surprised by the time.. it's so late.. almost 5 o'clock.. I am supposed to wake up over a hour and half. ".. Abhay opened his eyes and looked right in her eye.. and was again amazed by her beauty..

"You are so beautiful Pya.. ".. he couldn't hold it anymore.. and wanted to let her know what he felt..

Pya looked at him down at him..

"Those eyes Pya.. your eyes.. when I look in them ..it's like my mind goes empty.. I won't even remember my name.. and your sweet smile..and the sound of your laugh, ..god every time I hear the sound of your laugh' it makes me laugh..and that makes me happy' you make me happy Pya.. I know.. it's too soon to tell you this..but why waiting..there is no lifetime enough to care about someone so much' I can't even think about being away from you from now..

I just can't.. and then Abhay stared at her.. he saw slowly .. her eyes got wet and then he saw a drop of tear almost falling down.. Just when he wanted to say something.. he felt her finger against his lips..

"Abhay.. "'.

END of Chapter 3

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Edited by Div_Ridz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoozoo123

wow..wow...wow..............lovely dude.........

update soon....................vl wait................

Thank you for your comment :)
I hope you will like the new Chapter :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you for your comment :)
I hope you will like the new Chapter :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh god!!
wat is piya feeling right now?is she happy r feeling bad tat abhay is trying to confess something on d 1st day dey met?
i'm like sitting on d edge of a seat while watching a gr8 movie.
n u r too bad u gave interval at tat time.its really bad to wait 4 d next update.do update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: RB81

oh god!!
wat is piya feeling right now?is she happy r feeling bad tat abhay is trying to confess something on d 1st day dey met?
i'm like sitting on d edge of a seat while watching a gr8 movie.
n u r too bad u gave interval at tat time.its really bad to wait 4 d next update.do update soon.

haha..
I am glad it was good enough to make you feel like that..
haha i do want to upd.. i will :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey well written !!
wow loved it soooooo much yar !!!!😊😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aromal

hey well written !!

wow loved it soooooo much yar !!!!😊😉😆

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