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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesomeeee Update
Loved it
Angry Maan singh khruana
Love his attitude..
Geet playing BB ..hayee
Offcourse Geet is gonna dress him hehe
Cant wait
Update soon
Loved this part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear realy realy luv d updt.
it ws mindblwing.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey girl just amazing just read all 3 updates and i must say its awesome dera great good story keep going and do PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
oooooooooo gr8 loved it
du post the nxt part sooon
thnx 4 the pm........:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowwwwwwww dear so awesomeeeeeeeeeeee update loveeee how geet and sayank replied back to maan n maan was shocked dat how can dey reply MSK back lol hehe aakhir geet and sayank se palla padha hai ehehhee n den oye hoye maan mesmerized wen geet was playing BB n he got hurt awww n offocurse geet will be dressing his hand n hayeee cant wait for sajan now aww sammy willl help gunji yayyy do continue soon now
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey avni...loved your FF...
loved the characters....
i was looking for a FF which had these characters...n here it is...
love the storyline....
waiting for next part...
geet dressing maan..no surprises here...😆..n as usual i think will be rambling n maybe even scolding him...😆...
mayur obviously fighting...uff...abhi to keval shuruat hai...😆
samrat helping gunjan...so sweet....
waiting for it...

P.S. thnx for the PM...plz add me to your list...

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow nice introduction, good story line...*frends and love*..koOL 👏 👏

A new FF with great creativity, pics are goin' well with lines...😉.. for youtube vdo, *THUMBS UPP*, cause you used it on a perfect timing....👍🏼
*i likey i likey* 😊

aaawww MAAN's hand injured....defo. GEET will do the dressing....😉

Please add me to your PM list..!!*~
continue soon....😊

eagerly waitin' for next part....!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
please continue

really liked the concept and add me to ur pm list................
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Posted: 13 years ago
coooooooooooooooooooool story dear!!!!!
w8ing for teh next update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 4 :-

 

Geet was still upset with Maan's fight she want to divert her mind frm that thought n goes to basketball court.

Maan left principal office n moved toward main door his cell rang he stops to pick up call. Suddenly he saw a girl who was playing baskeball he tries to catch a glimpse of her n when he saw her he was totally shocked to see Geet playing basketball slightly smile comes on his face. He forget that where he was n where he's going suddenly he come out from his thought when his hand got injured by glass of window.

 

He screams in pain "aaawww" Geet turned 2 see dat who's screaming ? Geet shocked 2 see Maan then she walked toward him bt she stopped she thought about morning accident which made her stop. She was about 2 walk toward basketball court bt she immediately turned back n looked down at floor n shocked 2 see blood. She run toward him n took his hand in her hand she was near about 2 cry bt she stops.

She dragged him 2 medical room n made him sit. She took 1st add-kit box and took cotton and clean the cut from dettol and apply medicine on it and asked him.

 

Geet :- it's hurting ?

[Maan was too much busy in staring Geet. He can see pain in her eyes bt didn't understand y so much pain in her eyes]

Geet (louder) :- is it hurting u ?

 

Maan come back 2 his sense and nodes. Maan thinks that he told too much 2 Geet in the morning. He shuldn't use that such a cheap word 2 her.

 

Geet :- r u going 2 tell me dat it's hurting u or not ? I m little bit worried

Maan wondered :- y r u worried about me ?

Geet :- m nt worried abt u, m worried abt my dressing.

Maan shocked :- kya ? kya kaha tumne ? tumhe meri nahi tumhari dressing ki fikar hai ? aur me jaan sakta hu kyun ?

Geet :- q ki mene isse pahle kabhi kisi ki dressing nahi ki na so I dun't kno kaise karte hai ?

Maan more shocked :- kya ? aur tumne pehla experiment muj pe kiya ? tum ye bat muje pehle nahi bata sakti thi ?

Geet :- 1 toh mene tumhari help ki aur tum thnx kehne k wajah muje tewar dikha rahe ho u r juz disgusting.

Muje tumhari help karni hi nahi chahiye thi.

Maan :- ha toh q ki ? mene toh nahi kaha tha tumhe help k liye.

Geet left the room in anger without saying a word. She was already disturbed about morning fight and his words and now he's behaving lyk this.

Geet murmurs : if he can't say thnx or sorry den can't he just shut his mouth.

 

After Geet left, maan murmurs : oh shit Maan wht u done u want to apologize to her bt u, u create more prob n now she is more angry n sad too coz of my behaviour.

 

On other side Samrat tries to find Geet. He checks every room he thought that may b she's in Music room. He went 2 music room he doesn't find Geet bt he sees Gunjan who was little bit scared and worried. He went toward her and asked

 

Samrat :- hey Gunjan kya hua ? sab theek toh hain na ?

Gunjan :- ha sab theek hai

Samrat :- toh fir tum itni pareshaan q dikh rahi ho ?

Gunjan :- nahi vo me bas aise hi

Samrat :- dekho tumhe darne ki jarur nahi hai tum muje bata sakti ho ? tumhe muj pe yakin hai na ?

Gunjan :- nahi vo aisi baat nahi hai

Samrat :- matlab tumhe muj pe yakin nahi hai ? tum muje apna dost nahi manti ?

Gunjan :- nahi Samrat mene aisa kab kaha tum mere dost ho.

Samrat smiles :- toh fir batao kya bat hai ?

Gunjan :- vo Samrat kal muje song gana hai aur me decide nahi kar paa rahi hoon to me bas

Samrat :- are itni si baat k liye itna dar rahi thi. Dun't worry i'll help u. muje tumhare songs k list do

 

Samrat reads all songs and then select 1 and asked Gunjan that if she's comfortable with that song or what ? She agreed bt she was scared coz she hvn't perform in college or anywhere. Samrat understood her restlessness n told her not to worry



In dance room Mayank n Nupur r doing their dance practice. Nupur forget some steps.

Mayank :- Nupur ye tum kya kar rahi ho ?

Nupur :- dance kar rahi hu tumhe dikhta nahi hai kya ?

Mayank :- dance kar rahi ho vo to muje b pata hai par ye kaun se step hai ?

Nupur :- jo tumne sikhaye hai vahi hai

Mayank :- mene tumhe aise koi step nahi sikhaye tum bhul gayi aur apni galti b nahi manti.

Nupur :- to me kya karu tumne aise hard step jo bataye hai.

Mayank :- ye kuch hard nahi hai, tumhare bahane hai dance na karne k.

Nupur :- tum apne aap ko kya Michael Jackson samjte ho kya ? agar me bhul gayi to dubara nahi sikha sakte ?

Mayank :- sikha sakta hu par tum aise bhulti rahogi na to hum next year ki party me apna dance jarur kar lenge samji.

Nupur murmurs : sadu kahi ka

Mayank :- kya ? kya kaha tumne ?

Nupur :- kuch nahi kaha

Mayank :- nahi tumne kuch to kaha vo b muje

Nupur :- tumhe aisa q lagta hai k mene kuch kaha vo b tumhe ? by god!! Mayank tum bhi na

Mayank :- dekho tumne kuch to kaha hai aur mene suna b

 

Gunjan n Samrat enters.

 

Samrat :- dude ye kya hai ? tum dono fir lad rahe ho ?

Mayank :- me nahi ye

Nupur :- juth q bol rahe ho ?

Mayank :- me nahi tum juth bol rahi ho.

Samrat shouts :- stop !!! bas bahut ho gaya ab tum bina lade practice karoge. Kal hame performance dena hai, tum dono ka fight drama nahi dikhana hai

Mayank :- ha vahi to par ye dance step hi bhul rahi hai

Samrat :- dekho tum dono 1 dusre ko co-operate karo, Mayank ise dubara sikha do aur Nupur tum is bar yad rakhna ok ?

Nupur :- ok Samrat

Mayank :- meri baat toh man hi nahi rahi thi

Nupur :- tumne kaha tum dubara nahi sikhaoge

Samrat :- tum dono practice kar rahe ho ya tum dono ka naam cancel kardu ?

Mayank n Nupur :- nahi. hum practice kar rahe hai.

 

On otherside Maan tries to find Geet bt he can't find her. He walked outside of college n called his driver to pick him bt driver says dat he is stuck in traffic and he'll reach may b after 2 hrs. Meanwhile a bike-rider comes there and stops bike near Maan. Maan jumps coz bike-rider near about to hit him. He was about to shout at bike-rider bt he stops when bike-rider removes helmet.

 

Precap :-

Bike-rider ?????

Sajan, Mayur n Geet's dinner



Prev :- PART 3


Next :-PART 5


Edited by avani_9 - 13 years ago