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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys

Thnku so much fro ur love n appreciation

I am glad..nt surprise whn u all are recognizing each repeated dialogue…n also loving my touch to it ..if u want to read sumthing regarding ths track …u can pm me…I'll love to make it more the way Mayurains want …

Have rplyd to u all…

Abt Ardhangini…I'll try if I can update on Saturday..but im nt sure..i m sorry for tht

Here is the next chapter…hope u all like it

Luv ya

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Chapter:3

Mayank: shakal mat dekha tu mjhy apni

Samrat: kyun dude'..mein ny kya kiya..late tu hoa'nupur naraz tjh se hoi'lari ter hoi

Mayank: han aur maanay bhi mein ny'us ny mjhy dahair sara pyar diya

Samrat: aur kiya kiya hua'bata na

Mayank: aur..aur kya hua'aa tjhy detail mein bata ta hoon

He came upto him n sit beside him'. excitedly

Samrat: kya baat hai dude'tu aur tere personal life..detail mein batnay ko khud hi razi'wao'batna na

Mayank: acha tu sun'.hum beach per gay'us ko mera surprise buhat acha laga'phr jasakay Tasfia ny kaha us ny mjhy ek surprise diya'.phir mein ny baray pyar se us se pocha'mjh se shadi kero gi

Samrat: phir

Mayank: phir'he turned towards him n shouts'.us ny mana kerdiya

Samrat: KYA..

Mayank: hann

Samrat: ek sec'Nupur..nupur bhushan'.ny shadi k lyan mana kerdiya'questioning

Mayank: han..nupur bhuhsan ny sharma bany se mana kerdiya'..wasay bhi sharm tu us ko ati hai nhi'tu us ny socha sharma ban ker kiya kerna hai'

Samrat: dkh..its too much'.nupur thik kahti hai..tera sense of humor 'is too bad'Nupur ny khushi khushi tjhy han kiya hoga..aur zoor se tjhy hug kiya hoga..aur bhi kuch mila hoga.,.wink

Mayank: han na ,mila na'...NAAA

Samrat: are u serious

Mayank looked at him with n angry look

Samrat: Oh My god..really per kyun '.aur is mein mein kaha se agaya..

Mayank: seriously'woh chahti hai k pehly gunjan ke shadi hoo'..

Samrat: kya

Mayank: ha'aur tu shadi keray ga nhi ..tu in short beech mein bhas gaya mein

Samrat: per..gunjan..kah ..matlab..kyun

Mayank: dkh samrat tkj pata hai gunjan Nupur k lyan kiya hai'aur woh thk bhi kah rahi hi'asay woh us ko akela tu nhi chor sakti na'raha mein tu rahao ga asay hi..Devdas ban ker

Samrat went in too a deep thinking 'n mayank patted himself in mind'.

Mayank: kya baat hai..nupur k sath rah ker acting tu aahi gai hai'.well done mayank..teer nishany per laga hai

Samrat: mein us se baat kerta hoo

Mayank: kis se gunjan se

Samrat: nhi ..woh

Mayank: ek baat bata samrat 'asa kab tak chaly ga/'1 saal ..3 saaal 5 saal, 10 saal'ya pori zindagi..kab tak..khabi tu tjhy tere responsibilities layan hogi'.u cant just ignore her feelings '.her desires..

Samrat: yaar mjhy se nhi hoga

Mayank: kyaa'smarat shergil is afraid of marriage

Samrat: jio nhi

Mayank: mard ban..be a man

Samrat: tu ban gaya

Mayank: shut up ..meri chor apni ker

Samrat: han par agar

Mayank: kya kaha ..hann..ullu tu tu us ko bolta kyun nhi hai

Samrat: woh mjhy laga us ko lgay k mein kisi aur wajha se us se shadi kerna chahta hoon'.

Mayank: nughtly'kis wajha se

Samrat: us ky sath rahy ny k lyan 'tujhy kya lagga'kaun se wajha se..han..bol na

Mayank: dkhoo'

Samrat: kya baat hai dulhy raja abhi se sharma rahy hai

Mayank; ap agar meri saali ko apni pori ghar wali bany tu mein ap ki adhi ko apni pori ghar wali banao

Samrat: yaar woh kuch aur tu nhi samhjy gi

Mayank hits his head with his hand

Mayank: samrat..tu samrat hai..jo larki ko dkhy aur woh shadi ke date soch lay'tujhy kab se itna socna para'soacha tu mein ny tha ek moth tak aur mila giay.NAA

Samrat: bekwas band ker'aur kuch sooch

Mayank: yaar sochna kiya hai..seedha seedha bolday bs

Samrat: Nupur bilku thk kahti hai'ur so unromantic'yeah moment life mein ek bar hi aata hai..so let me make it special

Maynk: tjhy jo kern hai ker'per ker

Samrat: ek baat bata dude..tjhy itni chladi kam se ho gai '..shadi ki..control ker

Mayank: Nupur cheez hi asi hai'kis ko bhi out of control kerday

Samrat: aur gujan che'.

Mayank: out of control ko bhi control kerlay

Samrat: so true dude

They shared n high five

Mayank: chal tu ja apnay rasty mein jao apny rasty ..bst of luck

He thought of going back home n giving her a call'but than

Mayank: nhi us k expression dekhny mein zayada maza aay ga..he looked up'plz bauji ghar per na hoo'warna meray expression dkhny mein zayada mazay aay ga

He went to her house praying tht he must nt be at home, as now he wants to be extra carefull about his image

Din dong

Nupur: kaun hai arahi hoon

Mayank: wah wah'bell bajaty he shooroo

Ding dong

Nupur: kya masal hai..sabar nhi hota kiya'.she opend the door to find him'. Kya hua'tm yaha he opens his mouth trying to speak'..anty narza hogi na'tmhari shadi kahin aur kerday gi' he again trys..mjy pata tha asay hi kuch hoga'ab chup kyun ho kuch bolo gay

Mayank: breaks..kitna bolti ho'.mornea express 'khabi kis station per rukhti hoo'darwazy per hi sab bata doo

Nupur: ufufu tum bhi na boltay zayada ho aur kertay kam..ajao'mana kiya hai kisi ny

She closed the door behind n went inside the living rooom between her talks

Mayank: mein zayada bolta hoon'khud tu itna bolti ho'jab se cahr soo pachiz (425) sawal poch chuki hoo'ab tu mein yeah bhi bhool gaya k mein kahny kiya aaya tha

Nupur: woh tu mera kamal hai..jo tum sab bholl gay' By god..

She was leaving when he pulled her to colloide to him..he rounded hs hands around hr waist n she around hs neck

Mayank: hmmm..yeah tu hai'ap ko dkh ker tu hum khud ko bhool jatay hai'n baatein kiya cheez hain'.

Nupur: kyun aay hoo

Maynk: hmmm..bhol gaya..tighting hs grip ..n leaning close to her'

Nupur: mayank choro..bauji walk per gay hai kisi bhi waqt ajay gay

Mayank: who cares dear'he bring her more close hiding hs face in her hairs'.

Nupur: mayank'..Bauji

He left immediately ..straighten himself..n lookin at door ..n hn looked with dead look towards nupur whom was laughing out loud'..

Mayank: nupur'.thik hai jao nhi bata ta jo bolny aaya tha'.

Nupur: acha baba sorry ..batao na plz..

Mayank: sadly'samrat k pass gaya tha mein

Nupur: worried'.kya kaha us ny

Mayank: kuch bhi nhi

Nupur: sadly'.woh nhi mana..pata nhi uski ki problem kya hai'islyan larko ko bacpan se hi Hindi films dekh nhi chaiy'..

He looks at her shooked'n laughed whn she by passed him..nt facing him

Nupur: han nhi tu'..sari "suraj" ki films dkhty tu yeah na hota..woh stupid live in wali english films dkhy ga tu asay hi hoga

She sit on sofa again..

Nupur: sadly..ab kya hoga..tmahra kya hoga'she lookd at him innocently

He cam near her n sit facing her'

Mayank: kuch nhi'shadi

Nupur: kasay

Mayank: kyun k samrat ny shadi k lyan haan kahdi

Nupur: KYA

Mayank: haan..woh tu actually kafi time se bolna cha rah tha..but gujan kuch aur na samhjy islyan nhi ka

Nupur: sach..she turns towards him

Mayank: muuch'Nupur Bhushan..almost sharma'he said leaning near her,..,misheoviously

She blushed a bit n than remember sumthing

Nupur: aur tum 'she took a cushion n hited him'aur tum mjhy se mazak ker rahy thy

Mayankl: ary baab sirf mazak tha..nupur'.saving himself'

Nupur: mazak ..yaha meri jan nikal rahi hai..itn guilt fel horaha hai aur tuhain mazak sooch raha hai'

Mayank: array kase Hindustani larki hoo..apnay honay waly pati ko marti hoo'.bs..

He grap her bth hands n put them behind her back ..colloiding her to his torso '

Nupur: chor..plz bauji ajay gay

Maynk: ignoring wht she said'he turn hs face towards her'he nib her ear lobe softly making her moan "mayank"'.he kissed her neck line proceeding to her cheeks ..caressing her with his lips'.

She clutch hs hand tight leaning her head back to rest on hs shoulder giving him more space'.

The door open..n came back on earth

Maynk/Nupur: bauji'

CHAPTER :4

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Fizaaaaaaaaa
it was a beautiful update
loved sayank convo
so myanks- mission samrat becme successful......

hahahaha again u hav remind me our old MJHT.....
loved mayur nok- jhok as usual
Gosh their last scene was so romantic
loved it a lot
awesome update sweet heart
amazing
keep it up



Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update fizu...mayank-mom convo reminds me so many memories...Specially the dialogue...'pehle to ghar se naah ke jaate the aaj kal clg mein bhi'...sigh...i miss those olden golden days...
Truly loved the convo bw them...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i must its perfect part, beautiful combination of comedy and romance..

and bauji's timing.😲
O God save my mayur...😕
Edited by -moona- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
reserved

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aww so sorry api.....mere tutions ka time hogaya tha na isiliye edit karne e late hogayi.....gussa na hona....sholly....dil se sholly duniya me jitni shollies sari sholly......😳😳

ok no more bakwaas .......now coming to the update
hayee it was so nice.....amazing.......
samrat man gaya🥳.....ab mere mayur ki bhi shadi ho gi........😳
aww.....itni khush to mai apni shdi me bhi na hoon🤣....
mayank came to nupur's house.....😲.uo bhi bina bataye.uski itni himmat kam se kam mujhe to batana chahiye tha🤣.....mai bauji ko rok leti😉......tumne mayank ko bata diya uo surprise wali baat😳......yaar last part was☺️..........but bauji ki timimng bhi na...atleast thodi der baad ana chahiye tha na.....kya timing hai yaar😡....
you know what mujhe uo episode yaad ageya jab mayank aur nupur play ki reharsale karrahen the nupur ke ghar pe.....haayye uahin to nupur ko pehli baar kuch kuch huya tha☺️😍......

next part will be total fun😆
continue soon

love
tasfia

Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update dear..wondering what will be bauji's reaction.................

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Brilliant update...dear...seriously loving it.....luved mayur hw wonderfully u wrote hw wished we if would hav gt sum scenes lik dis in mjht...😍.....great going...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls no bauji yaar. he'd done enough damage on real mjht. not in this one pls.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
people who have reserved n are gone for sleep....will u mind to cum back
oye tasfia aur faria....plzzish coment

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