Written Update 21st January

Hey Everyone ... This is my first try @ written updates ...
Please bear with me if i missed any details .... I know there are lot of heated tempers rite now ...

So here it goes ...

Episode opens with Khanak desperate to meet Shantanu ... Its raining heaviliy with thunder and lightning everywhere . Khanak leaves in hurry to meeet Shaan .... TOTALLY SENSELESS for KHANAK to leave in bad weather ... }

Duck with his Iktara , Sam (not at all interested) & Shaan at the studio ... Duck lost in Khushboo's thoughts ... Sam is expressionless as always ... Shaan trying to make them realise that nobody is interested in practising ,... He motivates Sam by telling her to think as if she is singing her love for Rahul ..... Sam imagining and smiling (total OTT) and moves towards the keyboard ... Shaan starts strumming guitar ... Duck joins in too after a while ... All three are practising ... (New background music playing ... )
Sunny enters studio... Shaan is upset seeing him there ... Sam asks Sunny 'Tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho'... Sunny replies that Rahul wants to meet them .. Shaan giving his angry irritated looks towards Sunny ... He nods to Sam as to go with Sunny .... Sam & Sunny leave from studio ...


At the cafeteria ..
Rahul , Sam & Sunny at the coffee table ... Sam asks Rahul the reason for calling them there ..
Just then Khanak enters partially drenched .. Sam asks Khanak what is she doing in the studio ... Khanak spots Sunny sitting with them & gets restless....
Khanak says 'Main Shantanu se milne aayi thi...' Sam tells her that Shantanu is at the studio .. Khanak decides to go over to the Studio to meet Shaan by rickshaw.. Rahul intervenes saying 'Bahar tez baarish ho rahi hain ... Agar kuch hogaya toh.. ' He offers to drop Khanak at the studio ...

Our brilliant SAM says 'No thanks Rahul... Sunny hain na .. ' - Felt like slapping her @ saying this..No offense towards Priyanka .. just towards the character's dumb idea !!!!

Khanak tries to tell Sam about her restlessness .. Sam says she knows abt Sunny makin Khanak uncomfortable ... But insists on taking him along ....
Plus Khanak thinks tat better to go with Sunny since even Shaan dislikes Rahul .... (Dumbest Khanak ever !!!)

Sunny & Khanak leave ... Rahul follows them saying 'Main unhe neeche tak chodkar aata hoon'
Sunny gets Rahul's gifted car ... Khanak & Sunny sit in the car & drive away ...
Rahul in his wicked looks thinks 'Sab kuch plan ke hisaaaab se ho raha hain' - There comes the Villian !!!!!

Sunny & Khanak on the road ... raining heavily - Abhi kahan se itni baarish Mumbai main .. CVs which country do u stay ????
Sunny mutters about being made a sheer Driver ... Kahan actor banne aaya thaa aur kya bana diyaaa.... Khanak getting restless & asks Sunny to drive faster ... Sunny answers 'O main tumhara driver nahi hooon' ..
Pooor Khanak says 'Mujhe Shantanu ke paaas jana hain ' (Superb dialogue delivery here by YM)

Still travelling down the road ... Car breaks down .... Sunny all frustrated ... Khanak taunts about driving fast ... Sunny gets irritated and says 'Mujhe koi dilchaspi nahi hain tumhare saath yaahan rehne main' .... Sunny cribs about Mumbai roads & rains .... Says 'Cars ko maar toh sakte hain ... Unt (camels) ko maarnepar kuch logon ko boora lagta hain' .... Khanak thinks abt Suraj & Champak race !!!!! Thinks yeh sab ittefaq hain .... Suraj toh mar chuka hain ... Yeh suraj nahi Sunny hain ....

She is lost in thoughts.... Sunny knocks on the door ... Khanak startled & calls out SURAJ !!!
Sunny & Khanak get into fight ... Sunny keeps asking why does she never loook at his face ,,, Khanak all restless and looking here and there except at Sunny ... Sunny holds her by shoulders to make her face to him .... Khanak gets angry & pushes him away .... And walks away ...
Sunny says Jao chali jao ... kal badh main sirf tumhari body milegi (sorry couldnt remember the exact dialogue !!)

Back to studio .... SHAAN is strumming his guitar ... Wow wat a role LEAD ACTOR is playing when wife is in bad state ...
Shaan notices the thunder & realises tat its too late..... Thinks about Khanak being alone at home ... Finallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Searches for his mobile phone & spots 4 missed calls from Khanak .... Thinks she must be worried... Battery dead ...
Episode also dead ... with final frame consisting of Shaan , Khanak walking away from Sunny & Rahul the villian !!!!!

Clothes - Dont even bother to ask .. They are as horrible as ever !!!!!


Sorry guys .. I know i m a horrible Written updater ... But this was first time .... So spare me ...
Also watever i could remember i have written ...
CVs ka gussa mujhpar mat nikalo ... PLEASEEE ...

PS - if u guys dont like my written updates , feel free to telll .. I wont attempt again until i sharpen my updating skills !!!!!!

@Shalini.. you are good.. thanks for doing the update!

Originally posted by: -Veena-

@Shalini.. you are good.. thanks for doing the update!

Thanks Veena.... and you are kind-hearted for calling this update Good ... I seriously dont think its goood... I could have been better ,,,

Sorry once again if i messed up ... i will hone my skills before the next update ....

shalini

Originally posted by: IFsKhanak

shalini

thanks so much

for the update

and for doing the update 🤗

No worries Teech ... I can understand wat everyone s going thru with alll tats happening ....
Ab yeh toh batao ki kaise thaa ???

oye meri new found sis.......wonderful update..... u seem to be like a pro at it...... very nicely written......

a good epi but shanak should meet either 2moro or monday

really gud update shalini!!....

Thanks everyone .. Jasmeeta , Amu , Teech , Priya , Veena , BACK with a BANG Karishma & others...sorry dont remember names ...

you're brillaint shalini! LOL @ th e episode also dead and barish in mumbai! LOL