AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67 - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

glad u enjoyed it jyoths....wil sure continue faster this time..in fact started writing one scene already

WOW Sami😃 ,You have started writing 😃,just waiting to read the beautiful scene from you .😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
is baar am thinking of doing a faster job by sunday my night i will sure post it .......is umeed ke saath ke u will like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Sammy:

WOW!!👏👏👏👏 Loved every bit of this update Hun!🤗 "Forget Every Moment but Don't Forget Me"😭😳👏...so well written👍🏼..Loved the poem that Angini hummed in the garden😍...the Clothes line scene n Ragini playfully unwilling to let go off her grasp on Anmol was really Cute!😳😳 I can imagine Ragini daring to take that step n teasing Anmol😉...she'd look like some different person altogether!!😳😉 LOLZ😆...n when Angini hugged in the garden as Anmol caressed her face seeking another chance😳😭...so emotional n touching!👏👏👏 Their intensity can be felt thru' the writing!😳

Do update soon yaar...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
chandrika always look forward to ur comments they r always amazing thanks dear for hausla afzaai
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Posted: 14 years ago
jyoths aaj yaar laptop nahi mila warna aaj hi kar deti kal ko pucca i have story in mind...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Beautiful Sami👏.The night with Angini was so well written👏 and while reading I was truly visualizing the whole part👏 😳.Wish I can write like you😉.But anyway you are there and yours a treat to read.👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
a small preview..i had work related and weather related issues so couldn't do update which i hope will be done soon....i don't know why i fee so sad these days......

aaj yeh kis ko nazar ke saamne paati hoon main....

pyaar ki bhooli hui yaadon se takraati hoon main..

Ragini kept looking at his picture in study,she had not gone back into the room yet,sitting in dimly lit study she picked his photo...smiling reminder of days long gone by...
days of carefree indulgence...

nani and nati....sitting so close ,both together and finding the missing solace with each other.....he finding his mom in her and she trying to search for her daughter in him.
these thoughts kept bringing turmoil in her heart,how he must have felt when he heard that dreadful news of loosing everyone in single accident,and then shivani left him...for what she thought????
surely he was rich enough ,10 lakh Rs is nothing,she frowned
then she remembered anmol had told her something about tumbling share prices of his company with his father and elder brother's death...so much got snatched from this person,yet he is still smiling ,living for others..she mused
and finally i snatched his daughter from him
where did this thought come from ...😭
her hands trembled and she barely caught the picture....from falling down...she forced herself to feel bit calm....and heard footsteps across the hall .
so he has finally come in,footsteps continued down the hall and finally it was quiet again....and she stood up to leave suddenly yawning and feeling sleepy.

she came to stand still outside darkened mandir......

she heard some one talking ...talking to almighty in dark........

her face had stunned expressions,tears flew from her eyes and she forced back of her hand on her trembling lips to stop herself from making any sound.....
she slowly backtracked and went upstairs to her room and lay down on bed......

the sleep had again flew away and she started to think about her next course of action.
ladkio will be back sooon so no jute no chapals...forgive gals and think what should anmol be saying in mandir for ragini to behave like this.....😳 and do post guys.....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Sammy interesting
The dark and the mandir and the quite steps..
And Ragini realizing something and then feelings pain tears in her eyes

I think the future tracks will be some kinda feelings coming out and acknowledgment !!

Please continue soon !!

Track chahiye Ab preview ho gaya😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Diiiii What happened? Why sad🤗🤗🤗Dont worry angini will be back

You are simply the best, just imagine even a preview can create much hulchul just imagine what will happen when you write real FF. It is the best preview one can ever read. The thing I feel na dii, you always connect. I just hope ki RS deke and kuch kare.I just loved reading you FF preview.
Edited by SukuluvsParul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sami dii even I am feeling low now a days. I really miss apoorva and my angini. Let us hope to get a good news fast.
Dii to now to your preview, I could imagine each and every bit of it, it was as if the whole scene is enacted in front of my eyes. Ragini looking at the photograp and anmol praying, Oh God how I want to see apu's smile😳 and I feel anmol is praying for ragini and tammy that is why she was sobbing. Dii I know you are really a busy person, but plz update your FF super fast. I want to know what my anmol was praying. Thank you so much for such a wonderful small preview.

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