fan-fin (after break up-cont.)

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Hey guys, I wrote part 3 for u guys but just to make it easier for you guys I put Part 1 and 2 up too, so you can remember where I left off.

PART-1

Angad has just ditched Kripa, Naina has fixed Angad and mishty's wedding. Kripa HATES Angad.

This scene is three days after Angad-Kripa break up

In the morning Angad is walking to his car ready to go to the studio. (Angad and Kripa don't talk to each other. They still have recordings together, and even Naina can't stop it because the audience love Angad-Kripa's jodi. Kripa can't run away either cause she is bound by the contrack)

Out of his everyday habit (Kripa and Angad were together for some months so its hard to break habits.) he waits for Kripa to come, he forgets that he broke up with her, after five minutes he gets annoyed and goes to the outhouse. He knocks on the door and yells "Kripa yaar what the hell, just because I love you doesn't mean you can keep me waiting for so long." There's no answer. Suddenly it all comes back to him and he thinks Angad what the hell are you doing, Why are you waiting for her. Waiting for that stupid girl who thought that she was good enough for me. Anyways Lets go Angad. When he says this something hurts in his heart. While he is driving he keeps on looking at the empty seat and imagines Kripa sitting in it. He feels really annoyed at himself. Finally, he reaches the studio, he doesn't see Kripa. He asks everybody at the studio, they say that she hasn't arrived yet. He gets all worried about her and thinks where could she be. She wasn't even in her room.

After like 30 min. Kripa arrives with Prithvi. Angad gets all jealous seeing them together. Prithvi drops her off and leaves. She goes in the elevator and who else but her Angad is waiting for her inside. The door closes and she sees him she remembers how he betrayed her. She gets a hurt expression on her face. He asks her : "Why the hell are you so damn late" Kripa doesn't answer. So he repeats himself, she still doesn't answer. He gets mad and grabs her by the shoulders and says, "when I'm talking to you, you answer back alright. I don't take this crap from anybody. Now tell me why you were so damn late, and what you were doing with that Prithvi." She gets equally mad as Angad, and frees herself from his arms, and yells: "Why the hell do you care, I can be here anytime I want. I can be with who ever I want. I'm not your property and you have no right to ask me anything" Suddenly the lights go off and the elevator stops like it had done the other day.( yes yes I know I'm too filmi) Kripa looks at Angad angrily and says, "Just because I fell or that earlier doesn't mean you can fool me again. Meine ek baar galti ki thi tumhe samajhne mein, who galti dubhara nahi karoongi." Angad feels hurt listening to her last words. Angad says, "I don't have time to waste on you and I wouldn't be stupid enough to waste my precipous time on trying to scare you." Kripa gets really mad at this and says, " Oh yeah you surely had time to play with my emotions." Angad feels guilty and doesn't say anything. After a while he says, "look, I swear I didn't do anything to the elevator." Kripa laughs sarcastically and says, "You expect me to believea man who takes nothing serious in life, who is a cheater, a liar, and a fake." Angad yells: "SHUT UP" enough of this Ok." Kripa gets scared and doesn't say anything. Both of them are silent and Kripa starts pushing buttons. Angad gets irritated and says "Stop that its not helping." Kripa says " atleast I'm trying unlike you." Suddenly Kripa feels weird and faints. Angad at first thinks that Kripa is trying to get him back for the joke. But after a while he gets really worried he yells "Kripa Kripa are you ok whats wrong" He shakes her. She is lying in his lap. She wakes up after a while. He says, "R u Ok" she doesn't say anything and pushes him back. Angad lets out a sigh of relief.

PART-2

Angad is really happy to see that Kripa is Ok. He feels a bit weird that why he got so worried about Kripa. Kripa who still feels a little shaky falls back and faints on Angad. Angad gets really scared. He is holding her in his arms. And just on time the elevator starts to move again. They go up then come down again, kripa still in Angad's strong arms(awww). He picks her up takes her to his red car, then he drives off to the hospital. He takes her to the doctor (don't worry u guys it's not what u think). The doctor does her check up. She regains consciousness, she's all like "where am I" The doctor says you had fainted so your boyfriend brought you here. Kripa is like my boyfriend then she looks at Angad. Angad asks the doctor what's wrong with her. Dr. says its nothing serious right now but it can turn out to be if she doesn't take care of herself. She has become very weak, and doesn't seem like she's been eating much. She's really stressed and depressed. All the thinking and not eating is effecting her health. (sorry guys don't know how doctors be talking). The doctor then asks Kripa is there something that has been bothering you lately. Kripa and Angad look at each other, he feels guilty. She says nothing. Doctor says ok and tells Angad to take care of Kripa and make sure that she eats food tonight and takes her medicine. Angad says ok. Kripa gets up, Angad goes up to support her but she pushes him back. She tries to walk but she feels shaky and kinda falls on Angad. (hey guys I don't know the symptoms of depression and weakness so I'm just making it all up) He just holds her and says SHUT UP and walks her out without caring about what she says. Kripa feels his touch. They go to his car and he orders Sit, she remains stubborn and says I don't need you, I'll take a Taxi home. He again forces her in the car. He is careful not to hurt her when he grabs her and forces her to sit in the car. (awwww) In the car the punjabi song Kanu Mein Kahaundi Bewafa is playing by BALLY JAGPAL ( I love this song)

Hey How you doinIts oracle becomes the last nightAs though love inI know it's hurt was a damnbut i am your manbecuase you can seewe was meant to beIts like words of a feather babyYou did everything it mattersI know i make you crybut i am telling you why Tak lan mein tenu kite sohneyaVe mere ruk jande perchit karda ve meraghut bhar lawan teraAuokhi hogi katni ve sathon raatve koi pichle janam disadi tere naal hai ve tere naaltere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichle janam di Rab di sohn tenu mili aa jaroor vetan hi ruk jaan per hoke majboor vekidan tenu mein bulawan ghut seene naal lawankahton rab ne banayee vakh jaatve koi pichle janam disadi tere naal hai ve tere naaltere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichle janam di Dil diyan galan kite dil ch na rehan veseene naal laa la tenu nein sade kehan veEhna aakhiyan ch vas kujh sanu vi tu daskite ho naa jawan channa barbaadve koi pichle janam disadi tere naal hai ve tere naal tere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichle janam di Sohneya ton bina rabba rooh sadi kali veGhamma de Jhana de vich jind rul chali veMenu apni bana le seene ghut ghut laa lekiwen hanjuan di rokan barsaatve koi pichle janam disadi tere naal hai ve tere naaltere naal honi gal baat ve koi pichle janam di Angad keeps looking at Kripa and he slowly says Kripa I know u hate me but please look after yourself. Kripa doesn't answer. He then turnsaway feeling mad at himself and thinks Angad what the hell r u doing u hate this girl. As they r driving they reach the beach where they had spent their first date together. It brings back happy yet painful memories. Kripa gets tears in her eyes. When Angad sees this he cant control his emotions and it brings some tears in his eyes too. Kripa gets mad and says Angad why r u doing this to me. Why. First u leave me deserted at the point of my life when I needed you the most, and now you're acting like you really care for me. Why? What do you get out of it? Please just leave me alone and let me live my life in peace. Free me from this contract in which I have to see ur face everyday. Angad's heart fills with pain when she says this. He's still ignoring his real feelings for her. He starts driving really fast and says u actually think I care bout u now. I don't give a damn. Im just doing it for my show cause ur the other lead. Kripa gets pissed off by hearing this and says stop the damn car. He doesn't stop. He says Angad Khanna does what he wants to do. They reach the house and Kripa goes into the outhouse while Angad goes to his room.They both try to sleep but can't.Kripa(thinking, trying to be strong): Angad tum chahe jitna bhi mujhe todhne ki koshish karlo I'll not break down. You were my life but now I don't give a damn about you (she can't control her emotions and starts to cry) why did you do this to me Angad. I left my whole world for you. I did everything for you. Why Angad why?Angad (thinking): Kripa now I've taken my revenge. You were stupid to think that you were good enough for me. He tries to sleep but the time he spent with Kripa keeps coming back to him. He sees her happy face and then sees tears flowing out of her eyes. He gets up to wipe them away but realizes that she's not there, he was just imagining. He thinks: Kripa leave me alone. Damn why can't I get u out of my mind. GODDDDDDDDDDDD. Why can't I see tears in her eyes. And to think I gave her those tears (tries to b tough again) But good she deserved them, she had challenged Angad with that slap. He tries to sleep again but can't stop thinking about Kripa's crying face. Then suddenly he remembers "Oh shit I forgot to give Kripa her medicines they're still in my car." He gets up, runs to the car (cho chweet, oh by the way its really late in the night) After he gets the medicine, he thinks I wonder if Kripa ate anything for dinner, so he goes to his kitchen, grabs some food and goes to the outhouse. He knocks on her door for about a minute. She gets up thinking who could it be this late(she should be used to this by now) she opens the door and is shocked to see Angad there, she says what the hell r u doing here, he doesn't bother to answer and just goes inside and makes himself comfortable. She asks him again. He replies I'd forgotten earlier but the doctor told me to make sure that you eat your food and take your medicines tonight. So I'm just here to make sure. Kripa gets mad and says I need need your false sympathy, I can take care of my own self. Just as she says this she trips over and falls on Angad (lol) he catches her, he's like really. She feels a bit embarrassed and yells LET GO OF ME. He says today u're eating and infront of me right now. You should consider yourself lucky that Angad Khanna brought u food today. She says I already consider myself lucky that I found out Angad Khanna's true face before it was too late. Angad gets mad goes to her puts his finger on his lips and says very slowly basically breathing on her face I don't wanna hear one word out of your mouth. Kripa gets scared and does what he tells her to do. Angad takes her hand, walks her by the bed makes her sit on it. He sits on the floor and puts the food in her mouth (awww).

PART-3

Kripa just looks at him while he is feeding her, while tears keep rolling down

her eyes. Angad wipes them away. Then he gives her the medicines and makes

sure that she eats it. Then without saying anything he just leaves. Kripa is left

speechless. They both have trouble sleeping cause they are thinking bout

each other. In the morning Angad wakes up and goes downstairs, the house

is being decorated and there r lots of people walking around. Angad goes up

to his mom and asks "what's goin on mom" She replies "Don't tell me Angad

that you forgot. Don't you remember its ur and Mishty's engagement next

week, and I have to get started early after all it is angad Khanna's engagement

and the whole world will see" Angad is shocked, but then realizes it was him

who had said yes to his mom just to make Kripa jealous. He feels weird.

He goes back to his room and gets ready. While he's leaving his mommy

asks him "where r u going beta" He says to the studio. She says "don't u

wanna go shopping for your outfit that ur gonna wear at the ceremony."

Angad just ignores her and leaves. He goes to the studio and sees Kripa

practicing beforehand. Since they r both early nobody is in the recording

room. Angad looks at her while she is singing "Hamesha tum ko chaha"

from devdas. She opens her eyes and sees him standing there. She asks him

"what r u doing here so early" He looks at her and says "I couldn't sleep"

She gets worried and slowly asks him "whats wrong." Angad is surprised and

says "I thought u hated me why r u worried all of a sudden" Kripa replies

back "I don't care about u, I care about the show, cause ur the other lead"

(ohhh that's what u get) Angad feels hurt. He says " Kripa u know v have to

work together and since v r partners v need to get along with each other. I

know u hate me but v have to get along with each other . V have to go for

the tour tonight and v can't let the world know wat's goin on between us"

(he says this very sweetly) kripa says "Our relationship is only gonna be

professional" Then people start coming in and its time for their recording.

The sing the song " Tere naam" Afterwards Mannan comes up and asks them

if they r ready for the tour and tells them to go home and get their things

packed. He asks Angad " Can u and Kripa go in your red car like u did last

time" Angad says "yeah" Kripa just looks at him as the memories of their

earlier trip come back to her. Mannan also says "Dn't worry Angad u'll

be back on the day of the engagement" Angad looks at Kripa she looks away

with pain in her eyes. Angad thinks "Angad isn't this wat u always wanted,

to give her pain. Then when she is in soo much pain why do u feel her pain,

why can't u see her like this" He's really confused about his feelings. They go

home and pack. In the evening he waits for her by his red car. She comes

with her bag which is too heavy 4 her. He sees her struggling so he goes up to

her and lifts the bag out of her hands. He takes it and puts it in the car.

Then he opens the door for her (awwww). They leave. In the car hella

romantic songs are playing. They don't talk to each other. Then after like

5 hours its late in the night and they r still driving. Angad feels hungry.

He looks at Kripa who is sleeping. He can't control his hunger so he

stops at a Dhaba. He tries to wake her up but she doesn't. He lifts her hand

to wake her up but feels it burning. Then he feels her forehead, she has a

really bad fever. He gets hella worried. At the Dhaba he asks the owner if

there is a hospital nearby. The owner recognizes angad and says no but v

have a guesthouse and it would be an honour to have a celebrity like u at

our guesthouse. Angad says thanks. He goes back to his cars picks up Kripa

and tales her to the guesthouse. He puts her in the bed and looks at her innocent

and sweet face. He stares at her and gets tears in his eyes. He feels really guilty

and thinks Kripa the only reason u r in this condition is cause of me. I hate myself.

I'm so sorry baby. I love you soo much. I can't live without you. I had been

lying to myself 4 soo long. (he finally realizes that he loves her) He holds her

hand and sits next to her 4 da entire night. In the morning Kripa wakes up

and sees Angad next to her and gets scared. She then wakes Angad up

Angrily and says "Angad why r u playing this game with me again. Didn't u

have enough the last time." She starts crying, Angad can't take it anymore

seeing her like this he drops on his knees and holds Kripa's hand. Kripa is

shocked seeing Angad breaking down like this. She starts to say something

but Angad stops her and says Kripa before you start please let me say wat

I wanna say please Kripa I'm sorry I'm sooooo sorry Kripa I thought I had

hurt u but more than hurting u I hurt myself by staying away from u. I cant live

without u Kripa please forgive me. I've never said this to anybody in my whole

entire life but today I will say it 2 u I LOVE YOU kripa I love you soooo much

baby please 4give me" Kripa just throws herself on him and says I love u 2.

They share a long passionate hug. Feeling each others presence.

This is it for today. I know its not that good. But it's the best that I could do,

I have lots of things on my mind right now so sorry.

Coming up next: Kripa and Angads love 4 each other, Angads

engagement to Mishty (wats gonna happen)

Hey you guys I need ur feedback. What do u want to happen next.

Any ideas or suggestions? If anybody wants to continue go ahead.

Oh yeah and I'm just gonna post the next part under this post, so I wont have

to start a new post 4 each part just keep checking this post for the next part.

Have a nice day

God bless you all 😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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thank u so much for gr8 fan-fi.. i really liked it n plz be continue... u know, i was waiting for ur fan-fi for last 2 days.... now, i am glad u have posted it
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hey deepey gud wrk man keep it up u r absolutely rocking

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the story is very good i cant even think of a bad part in the story
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thanx lot..... the story was excellent... i really like it... plz continue... i can't wait for next part....

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanks u guys for the lovely comments. Awww Rupa I didn't know u had been waiting. I'll post the next part as soon as possible. U guys know I'm so stupid I spelled the title wrong, it is supposed to be Fan-fic not fan-fin.😆 Anyways enjoy. Love u all😊
Edited by deepey - 20 years ago
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hey deepey y dnt u join d creative head of ekta so dat she will get sme gud ideas frm ppl like u and this will help viewer like us wht say frnds m i rite or wrong😉

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Wow...this story is soooo good!! I luv it!! plzz continue!

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Wow it's really good deepey........ it was so romantic too👏👏👏

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excellent work!!!!!!!!👏Plss continue!!!!!!!! I really like your story😳
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