Apple in my eye FF part 4 in pg 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This FF is based on gayathri telling akshara to talk with naitik about a baby

And this is my first ff just giving it a try hoe u enjoy

PART 01

Akshi was thinking about what g3 told her while she was doing her work and at last she thought that she will talk about it with naitik

Naitik had loads of work at office so he called akshi & told that he will be late so after finishing all the duties she went to her room & was looking out the window & she was in a deep thought that she didn't notice naitik coming naitik. Went to akshi & kept his face on her shoulder n kissed her cheek she then notice that naitik had come

A-Naitik what time did u come I didn't even hear the sound of the car

(While putting his hands on akshi's shoulder)

N-him how can u hear u were in deep thoughts what is wrong akshara is there any problem

A-no naitik nothing like that u go n have a wash n come ill heat the food for u

N-ok n he takes his cloths n goes to change

In the dining table

Akshi is laying the table for naitik n he comes n wraps his hands around akshi's waste

A-naitik leave me if someone comes

N-so what u a my wife n it's so late all must be sleeping (n he takes akshi more closer towards him)

A-naitik have u'r food it will get cold n it's so late u must be hungry

N-sits in the chair n says I'm not going to eat unless u feed me n he looks at akshi

A-naitik what is this like a small child

A-she serves food n tries to feed him when he holds her hand n stops her

While akshi gets surprise n says naitik what happen

Why did naitik stop akshi? Answer will be in the next part

Hope u liked this hope to write the next part soon

If u liked it press the like button

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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear dis has been posted two tyms.. hence
topic to b close
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one😊..👏.pls cntnue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one but too small
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nuwan250a


This FF is based on gayathri telling akshara to talk with naitik about a baby

And this is my first ff just giving it a try hoe u enjoy

PART 01

Akshi was thinking about what g3 told her while she was doing her work and at last she thought that she will talk about it with naitik

Naitik had loads of work at office so he called akshi & told that he will be late so after finishing all the duties she went to her room & was looking out the window & she was in a deep thought that she didn't notice naitik coming naitik. Went to akshi & kept his face on her shoulder n kissed her cheek she then notice that naitik had come

A-Naitik what time did u come I didn't even hear the sound of the car

(While putting his hands on akshi's shoulder)

N-him how can u hear u were in deep thoughts what is wrong akshara is there any problem

A-no naitik nothing like that u go n have a wash n come ill heat the food for u

N-ok n he takes his cloths n goes to change

In the dining table

Akshi is laying the table for naitik n he comes n wraps his hands around akshi's waste

A-naitik leave me if someone comes

N-so what u a my wife n it's so late all must be sleeping (n he takes akshi more closer towards him)

A-naitik have u'r food it will get cold n it's so late u must be hungry

N-sits in the chair n says I'm not going to eat unless u feed me n he looks at akshi

A-naitik what is this like a small child

A-she serves food n tries to feed him when he holds her hand n stops her

While akshi gets surprise n says naitik what happen

Why did naitik stop akshi? Answer will be in the next part

Hope u liked this hope to write the next part soon

If u liked it press the like button

good start👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriya_naksh

dear dis has been posted two tyms.. hence

topic to b close


yes i apologize n i inform d creators to remove one
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u everyone for ur comments & ill update the other part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nuwan250a


yes i apologize n i inform d creators to remove one

ohkk😊 n dun apologise yarr kabi kabi ho jata he😆.. btw cont soon haa😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nuwan aiya write d other part soon good start

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice

cont soon
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