DOSTI, PYAAR, JALAAN, AUR PAGALPAN... AR SHORT

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OKAY SO ONCE AGAIN I WON'T PM UNTIL FINISHED...

THIS AR SHORT IS ABOUT THE THIN LINE BETWEEN DOSTI, PYAAR, JALAAN, AUR PAGALPAN (OBSESSION). IT'S ABOUT THE THI LINE DIFFERENTIATING THE FOUR. HOW DO YOU KNOW? HOW CAN YOU TELL?

index: just check page 1, page 2, page 4 multiple posts on some pages so scroll through....

last part on page 4

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April 2003 - Spring Break

"Angel! hurry up!! we're gonna be late for the party! this hot and happening club is 18 and under only tonight!"

angel - haan, just one minute Trish, i'm coming. i hate wearing masks!

trish - hey be grateful we get to go! so wht the club is makin us wear masks! hey you come quick i wonder if Cammy's ready yet.

cammy - i'm ready! wow we all look so hot! single and ready to mingle!

(Angel was wearing short shorts and a cropped tee (like priyanka in anjaana anjaani - song, she has a small tattoo of a hear with angel wings on her lower waist - left side, aand is wearing a black mask so half her face is hidden)

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At the club

angel: wow this is so hot! oh my gosh! look at that handsome guy over there! oh my wow!

Angel was staring at a hott guy wearing a black vest showing off his muscles/abs and tattoos. He was also wearing a black mask.

Cammy: oh my gosh mr hunk is totally checking you out!

Trish: oh my gosh dont look. he's coming here

HAWTT GUY: Hey beautiful, (to Angel) hmm if you don't mind me asking, you indian?

angel: haan, you?

Hawtt guy: haan, waise i like in mumbai, lekin i'm here on spring break with friends

angel: what a coincidence. me too.

Hawtt Guy: waise mera naam hai Armaan. Armaan Mallik

angel: and well you can call me Angel

Armaan: hmm Angel... I like it.. waise it matches your tattoo *he caresses her waist/Tattoo* btw how old are you? how'd you manage to get one?

Angel: 16 - my dad signed ffor it. well i tricked him sorta, but he knows...how about you?

Armaan: 17, aur my dad signed for mine too...I just had to do it! This famous tattoo artist was in mumbai for 2 days. he only does one of a kind stuff. I saw this design and had to have it! (the swirly thing on ksg's arm) I'm the only one in the world with it you know...

ang: impressive

armaan: waise dancce??

They danced with each other for what seemed like hours....then made their way to a booth to sit for a bit.

arm: waise tum saach main bohot khoobsurat ho..aur bohot ache naach the ho bhi

ang: thanks tum bhi kaafi handsome ho

armaan smiles and leans in towards her lips, he waits for a second lingering making sure its okay with her, after sensing her approval he closes the gap and captures her lips. sucking and nibbling at first before engaging in an extremely passionate kiss.

Angel runs her hand through his hair and he pulls her waist/back closer to him....

then suddenly

cam: Angel!

angel and armaan break apart from the kiss suddenly

cam: shit angel sorry, but we have to go NOW! we are so dead! your sis and jeej will KILL US. we are so late! it's 3 am and our flight leaves at 6am!

Trish: jaldi chalo!

Angel: oh gosh! haan, sorry armaan lekin mujhe jaana hoga!

armaan: lekin apna number ya kuch toh do...i really like you...how will i find you?

Angel: hmm if its meant to be we'll find a way! byeeee

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August 2010...

" Haye Bhagwan today i am joining a new college. Please let it go well. I want good grades and good friends. Please meri madat karna. Please let the day go well. Joining a new school in your final year is not easy bhagwaanji. please meri madat karna."

Anji: Ridzyyyyyyy jaldi kar! you'll be late on your first day! you know the way to college right? I have to run off to sanjeevni!

Ridz: haan, i know the way from home, and i think i can manage from the mandir (they were at the mandir).

anji: okay bye ridz! see ya tonight!

Ridz: bye di!

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At University of Mumbai...........

Riddhima parks her car and starts walking towards the main building. She was wearing a simple yellow churridar.

rid: great ab yeh princi ka office kaha milenge?

" oh i'll show you. i'm headed there too!"

riddhima turns around and notices a guy parking his bike and taking his helmet off.

He is wearing a jacket on top of jeans and has the most gorgeous blue grey eyes.

"Hi, i'm Armaan. Armaan Mallik"

Riddhima:h..hi...i'm a..riddhima. ridhima gupta.

arm: suree? you seem unsure haha..waise sorry for over hearing your talks, but hey at least i solved your problem. hey let me just take of me jacket and i'll show you the way.

riddhima: sure...

Riddhima thinks...kya yeh wohi hai? nahin nahin...mumbai main bohot saari armaan mallik honge...

then she notices something on his arm as he's taken his jacket off.

arm: hmm checking out my tattoo? waise it's one of a kind. This famous tattoo artist was in mumbai for 2 days a couple of years ago. he only does one of a kind stuff. I saw this design and had to have it! (the swirly thing on ksg's arm) I'm the only one in the world with it you know...

ridz: wo..wow...thats so cool!

arm: thanks, toh chale? waise if you dont mind me asking aur please mat samjhna ki koi line hai, par have we met before? there is something so familiar about you...about your eyes...

rid: *thinks - yes!!* nahin....at least i dont think...i mean kya pata? itna baara saher main...

arm: haan...anyways toh naaya ho?

rid: haan. waise i'm in my last year and please mat puchna ki final year main kyun switch kiya. long story hain...

arm: hmm no problem...waise here we are! hey i'll show you around, you go get your schedule and i need to talk to the secretary about the basketball team. wait for me okay?

ridz: sure

Armaan took riddhima around campus to show her the basic places ii.e. classes, library, gym, canteen, locker rooms, ect. He also introduced her to his friends, muskaan, rahul, nikki, and abhi.


Nikki and Abhi were a couple and Muskaan and Rahul. well nobody really knew what they were. They were constantly bickering and fighting, but once anybody said something about the other they were best of friends protecting each other!

It turned out that someone from the gang was in all of her classes. Riddhima quickly became a close friend of the gang, but she seemed to be closest with Armaan.

One day she was sitting alone on a bench outside when her phone rang.

rid: hello

"hellooooooooo"

rid: OMG CAM! i miss you soooo much!!!

cam: i know i miss you too angel! so what's it like at your new school?

ridz: it's nice lekin i miss you guys! aur guess maine kis ko mila!

cam: kaun? btw this i miss so much! nobbody else trusts my awesome hindi skills like you! but tell me kaun??

ridz: wwohi, woh 18 and under club wala

cam: woh mr. handsome? what was his name...haan armaan? omg what was his reaction?

ridz; i haven't told armaan ki it was me all those years back, main kya kehta ki hi armaan do you remember me, we met 7 years ago in a club and shared a really passionate kiss? i dreamt about you for years. oh and btw i'm madly in love with you. meeting you again, getting to know you again, i know ki i love you. i dream about you every night...seriously cam that sounds so lame. waise he probably doesnt even remember me...

"no way. i knew it! the way you look at him! i knew it!"

ridz: oh shit cammy i'll call you back! give my love to trish and nick!

cam: byee

ridz turns around to find a smirking rahul standing behind her

rahul: hm so when are you going to tell him?

ridz: rahul please meri kasam hai tujhe, tum kisse ko bata nahin sakta!

rah: theek hai, lekin kyun nahin? agar tum us se pyaar karte ho toh bata do na

ridz: its not that easy rahul. i want him to love me for me. aur if he doesnt i dont want to lose his friendship

rah: ridz your his best friend! aur you've managed to become his best friend in only 3 weeks. you wont lose him

ridz: nahin, i can't risk it. not yet anyways.

rah: toh at least give him some clues? some hints...

ridz: theek hai...lekin i wont do anything directly...

rahul: okay fine
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2

Next morning..

arm: hmm wow aloo ke paratha! my favorite! lekin yeh kisne rakha mere locker main?

abhi: koi note ya kuch hoga dekhlo

arm: nahin, sirf ek note hai aur likha "hope you like them. pyaar se banaya..." aur uski naam ki jagaa likha ek heart with angel wings...

arm: hey ridzy kahaan hai? yumm these are good!

abhi: umm i think library main hain

arm: okay i'll catch you later!

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Arm: hey ridzyy

ridz: hey armaan

arm: pataa hai aaj someone put aloo ke paratha in my locker!

ridz: really? kisne?

arm: pataa nahin... lekin wo sab choro kaal muskaan ka birthday hai. toh you have to help me arrange a party

ridz: sure kahaan karna hai?

arm : waise i was thinking ki a club lekin that's not really muskaan's thing..toh kise ke ghar main?

ridz: sure we can have it at my place, waise di aur jeeju are leaving out of town for a med conference, so i'll have it all to myself.

arm: aur what about tumhari mom dad? is it cool with them?

ridz: actually woh is duniya main nahin hain...toh not a problem

arm: oh i'm so sorry

ridz: dont worry about it! hmm so how about a suprise? i'll take care of food and drinks and i'll tell muski ki um just a party since nobody's seen my place yet..you take care of guests! ye lo, note my address......

arm: haan theek hai. perfect.. also we'll get everyone to pretend to have forgotten her birthday! phir party mein suprise!

ridz: theek hai acha i have to run! class!! cya later!

arm: okay

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partyy

Riddhima was wearing:


armaan was over at her house early helping with last minute set up and decorations.

He was wearing:



Arm: do you really think it was smart sending rahul for muskaan?

ridz; if you can;t see the love between them get glasses armaan

arm: kya? lekin they are always fighting!

ridz: they love each other armaan! they just have realized it yet!

arm: hmm aur how are you such an expert on love?

ridz: woh...*ring ring* ek minute

rid: hello?

"hey babe"

rid: omgg NICK

nick: hey angel, i'm missing you so much!

rid: i miss you to nick! cammy told me your out of town?

nick: yup, i'm in delhi this weekend. my parentss flew up so i came to see them! waise what are you up to?

ridz: u remember i told you about muskaan? she goes to my new college, it's her birthday. so we are throwing her a suprise party. so just prepping for that.

nick: i'm hurt, i'm not invited

ridz: you know i'd invite you na, but your not in town! neither is T or cammy! NOT FAIR!

nick: waise what are you wearing?

ridz: haha nick i love it when you speak hindi. it sounds so cute! i'm wearing a selwar kamiz.

nick: stop lying! i know ki tum kuuch bohot naughty pehenre ho. omg you are wearing that naughty outfit i brought you from italy!

ridz: i swear i'm not wearing anything naughty! and that specific naughty outfit will be worn only for you! i promise when i wear it you'll see me first! lol i really am wearing a selwar suit. the brown and blue one.

nick: angel baby that selwar looks so sweet on you, but i know your wearing something naughty and this is not fair

ridz: nick i am sending you a picture of me right now. one sec hold on


rid: armaan? can u take a picture of me on my phone real quick?

arm: um suree

armaan takes the picture and riddhima sends it to nick

rid: see! maine kaha tha

nick: oh yea..waise you look great btw are those the earrings i gave you?

ridz: haan they are the ones you gave me, waise when do you get back? i;m so jealous you guys are all on on chutti! aur i'm stuck in school here

nick: hey kisne kaha ki leave us and go to a diff school? but i'll be back in a month, maybe 2...

ridz: kya? that long?? and you know na ki majbooori thi. oh shit nick i gotta go! i'm so late! and armaan is staring at me like he is going to murder me any second now...

nick: armaan?he's there already?

ridz: haan he's here early helping set up and stuff

nick: hayye i feel so replaced!

ridz; nick shut up! you know thats not true! there is only room for one nick salvatore in my life and that is taken up by you. okay i really gotta go! love ya! byeee

nick: bye angel

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armaan: hmm finished? so whose nick? and you always wear selwar suits toh why didn't he believe you?

rid: hmm he is one of my closest friends in the whole world! he's rginally from italy. his dad was the italian ambassador here when he was like 5 and well they couldnt get nick to leave. nick knows me better then myself. and as for why he was shocked well....lets just saay nick was being nick

arm: how come your old friends know so much about us and your life at our school, but we know nothing of them ad your old school?

ridz: well you guys never asked aur well thats a story for another day.

arm: hey ridzyy

rid:haan?

arm: your my best friend na?

ridz: of course armaan! kyun?

arm: well you seem so close with your old friends...aur woh...

ridz: armaan i've known them my whole life! i can't help it! i am very close with them, but lets just say i've changed a lot since switching schools and well you know the new me better. stop being insecure. oh there's the door!

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Riddhima opens the door and in walks everyone except rahul and muskaan.

armaan: hmm everyone here? okay i'll call rahul and tell him to get here

FIVE MINUTES LATER

musk: rahul ke baache! kutte! dekh we're late for the party! tune uske ghar ke paas he the! see maine kaha tha na ki right lena hai! lekin tu! tune toh hamesha ulta karna hai na?

rahul: acha sorry kaha na baba! ab toh maaf kardo! waise subah se tumhare mood kkuch zyada karab hai kya?

musk: haan haan haan sab menu galti hain! kutte!

"SUPRISEEEEEEE!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY MUSKAAN!"

musk: kya?

rah: happy birthday muski! ab tenu pata hai na ki menu kyu kiya aisa?

musk: tumhe pata tha?

rah: muski kya maine kabhie tumhari koi janam din miss kiye? bachpan se jaanti hoon main tumhe!

musk: haan isliye toh booraa laga...sab bhool gaye theek hai, lekin tum bhi? *eyes watery*

arm: bas baba bas! koi nahin bula tumhari janam din!

rid: haan happy birthday muskaan!

musk: thanks ridzy! yeh sab bohot acha hai! thank you soo much!

ridz: haan ab zyada emotional mat ban! woh mayank aur nupur late hai btw! kissi dost ko lana tha or something

nupur: hum agaye! happy birthday muski!

rid: OMG SAMRAT? AHHH I MISSED YOU SOOO MUCH! *hugs sam and whispers in his ear - dont call me angel pleasee*

Sam: suprised? jab mayak ne kaha ke woh koi riddhima gupta ke ghar jaane wala hai toh i knew ki woh hamare a..matlab tum hi honge

ridz: haan i'm sooo happy ki tum aiyee waise t, cammy ur nick sab out of town hai...

sam: haan gunjan bhi! toh its just you and me darlingg

ridz: sammy shut up main gunjan ko bol dunge ki tum flirting kar rahe ho!

sam: kya karun? waise tum aur selwar? i mean you look fantastic lekin?

arm: yaar sab aisa kyun kehte hai? you always wear selwar suits...

sam: kya? riddhu sach? *he puts his hand on her cheek* woh saab kuch ke wajase na? riddhu please don't take all that to heart. apne ap ko badalna mat! tum bohot ache the, ho aur rahoga.

arm: badalna? matlab before you were different?

rid: woh nahi...

sam: please what nahi... come you wanna see a picture? *takes out his phone*

rid: sam please don't. armaan please dont mind lekin thats something i'm not ready to share...

sam: fine let me describe toh huh?

rid: fine lekin sirf kapre! nothing else!

sam: fineee....let me just say this much ki riddhu usually wore western clothes. woh bhi bohott revealing wale western clothes....as in i wasn't sure if she owned any long pants or shirts that covered her entire top...lekin don't get me wrong... she wasn't like a sl*tty dresser. she looked hot and sexy...but never sl*t like....always beautiful and classy

arm: no way

rah: i want to see

arm: you

rah: go

abhi: change

arm: into something

rah; super sexy

abhi: now please

sam: not a bad idea...riddhu? come one for old timez sake?

ridz: nahin! sammy how can you even? after woh sab? i can't! when i switched schools i decided to change myself. i'll only wear selwar suits now. i understand armaan rahul and abhi not understanding why but sam you know na? you and nick know better then anyone...how could you? *tears in her eyes*

sam: hey ridzy i'm sorry... i know i was being stupid. chalo we need to talk alone.

ridz: theek hai chalo mere kamre main chalte hain

arm: hey shona kya hua? tum theek toh ho na? *puts his hand on her cheek*

ridz; haan... there are just some things about my past that you dont know armaan. i'll be fine

arm: toh bata do na muhje? you can tell me anything shona.

ridz: maybe another time armaan...ab i really just need sammy....*tears fall*

arm: you sure na shona?

ridz: haan..

sam: chal, we'll call nick, cammy, and trish too

samrat hugs riddhima and leads her upstairs

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once in her room riddhima breaks down and starts crying and hugs samrat

samrat hugs her back and conference calls nick, trish, and cammy

nick: hey babes kya hua?

sam: um i opened my big mouth and mentioned her old clothiing style and well we brought back some unhappy memories

nick: lekin you're throwing a party tonight na?

sam: haan all the guests are downstairs

cammy: and you guys are let me guess in her room?

trish: hey angel, listen to me, jo juch bhi hua tha, that was not your fault! it wasn't because of how you dress. cammy and i dress like that too okay. some people are just sick.

ridz: lekin why me? trish he tried to rape me! phir sab kehte hai ki angel wants to sleep with the professor!

nick: hey babez, it wasn't your fault and everyone did realize though huh?

ridz: haan lekin i still have nightmares about him. the way he tried to touch me, if nick and sammy if you guys hadnt come and saved me in time toh i dont know what would have happened!

cammy: hey angel, i want you to calm down. look all those amazing friemds you told us about are waiting downstairs for you. they must be wondering ki kya hua. you don't want them worrying na?

ridz: theek hai...i'll go back down

trish: waise i want you to do something, you know that white dress? the sleeveless one? the long one? wear that. prove to me ke you can be strong. that dress isn't revealing really. please?

ridz: lekin trish?

nickk: no trish wish..either that or that naughty piece i brought from italy. your choice.

sam: ooh go with the naughtyy

ridz: theek hain i'll wear the dress...and stop drooling samrat. not the italian one...bye love you all!

nick/trish/cammy: love you too angel! byee

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sam: waise angel, why didnt you want me to call you angel in front of everone?

ridz: long story, but in short i had met one of them a longgg time ago and they knew me as angel. aur i dont want them to connect the dots just yet.

sam: ooh naughty naughty...sammy likesss

ridz; shut up, one sec let me go change

riddhima comes downstairs with samrat dressed in:



arm: wow!

abhi: hmm i thought ki no western clothes?

ridz: woh i changed my mind

sam *whispers* more like trish threatened you lol

ridz: shut up sammy warna i'll really call gunjan!

sam: yaar stop threatening me with that, and i'm missing her a lot toh you can call her...

ridz; awww how cutee

armaan; hey you okay na ab?

ridz: haan bilkul *plasters a fake smile on her face*

armaan thinks * riddhu tum baaki sab ko bewakoof baana sakti ho us fake smile se lekin mujhe nahin...*

ridz: ab chalo! i want to dance!

they gang all heads to the dance floor and they all dance with each other as a group then suddenly armaan grabs riddhima and pulls her closer to him and says "dance with me"

armaan and riddhima dance with each other all night....

after everyone leaves riddhima changes into a short red nightsuit - a dress but it ends on her thighs, and is spaghetti straps.

she suddenly hears a tapping on her balcony window.

ridz: no..no...sammy i need to call sammy ya nick oh god mera phone kaha hai?

just then her phone rings and she grabs it

ridz: helloo?

armaan: hey shona

ridz: armaan please vapaas aao, please bachaao please koi mere balcony mein hain pleasee *crying*

armaan: shh shona calm down, main hoon! ab open the balcony! its cold!

riddhima puts throws the phone down and runs to open the balcony door, it indeed was armaan. she ran and hugs armaan - still crying

armaan; hey your crying? i'm sorry shona, i didnt mean to scare you! shh

rid: please never scare me like that again please

arm: i'm sorry wo you werent answering your door ad i wanted to make sure you were okay...i know that smile at the party was fake

ridz: woh kuch aise baate hai jo main tumhe bata nahin sakta

arm: lekin hum best friends hai na?

ridz: haan, leki phirbhi...i'm sorry armaan i can't

arm: shh its okay dont worry, waise for a girl who says no more naughty clothes, your nightsuit sure is pretty naughtyy

rridz: oh shit! ek minute!

ridz runs and puts a robe on.

arm: hey why were you so scared?

ridz: woh bhi mere past ke saath juri hai...i promise i'll tell you one day when i'm ready...aur yeh mat socho ki i told trish, cammy, nick or samrat and not you. they were there when it all happened...

arm: theek hai, waise i'm not leaving until you give me a smile

ridz smiles

arm: yeh wala nahin, ek real wala smile pretty pleashhhhhhhhhhh *pouts*

riddhima cant help but smile at that.

soon armaan leaves and riddhima falls asleep.

The next day riddhima is at school in the canteen when suddenly

rah: wow they are so hott, kaun hai woh?

riddhima turns and is shocked!

she gets up and nearly runs towards them screaming

ridz: OMG TRISH! CAMMY! AHHH

cammy: hey babez!

trish: we missed you

ridz: thanks guys! i know ki you guys cancelled your trips for me

trish: hey what are friends for huh?

ridz: i love you guys!
cammy: we love you too! now i think your friends are drooling, you won't introduce us?

ridz: haan chalo okay guys yeh hai armaan, rahul, muskaan, abhi, nikki, amit, aur sapna. and guys yeh hai mere pagal dosts Trish -

and cammy -

trish: hey guys

cammy: so riddhu we finally meet your new friends....

trish: riddhu has told us soo much about all of you! we feel like we know you!

cammy: waise we all really should hang out sometime, but for now do you guys mind if we steal riddhu for a bit? we promise to have her back before her next class? we really need some alone time with her

arm: kya? lekin...

ridz: dont worry i'll be bck soon!


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hey
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Cammy: okay angel spill

trish: you haven't told him yet? why?

ridz: he doesn't love me, i dont want to jeopardize our friendship. and besides once he finds out ki mr. bakshi tried to rape me toh he'll leave me anyways...toh kya faida?

cammy: angel he doesnt seem that shallow and whatever happened it wasnt your fault

trish: and mr. bakshi TRIED to rape you, he wasn't successful haina? nick got there in time.

ridz: thank god for that

cammy: okay so we are going clubbing tonight and you are comming with. clubbing and dinner. and you missy are wearing one of your old outfits! no selwar suit!

ridz; kya? no cammy i can't

trish: its the only way to help you get over everything. i promise we wont leave you for a second. and we have a suprise for you ;) surprise guest will meet us there

ridz: kaun?

cammy: you just have to come and find out

ridz: fine...we'll go to dancing cats at 9 okay?

trish: perfect

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Abhi: okay armaan spill

arm: kya?

abhi: oh come on we are alone and dont kya me

arm: fine i love her. i'm going crazy about her. i can't live without her man

abhi: toh bata do use

arm: no way, agar ridzy doesnt feel the same way?

abhi: and if she does?

arm: haan i'll tell her....

abhi: waise i overheard that she is going to the dancing cats tonight with cammy and trish so you want to run into her there?

arm: hmm sounds perfect. i'll tell her there!

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Dancing cats:

trish:


cammy:


ridz:


ridz; toh surprise kya hai?

trish; some patience darling!

cammy: waise don't look now but our party has some crashers

trish: no way

ridz: kaun?

cammy: your new friends

ridz: oh shit! they can't see me like this!

trish: oh chill they will eventually, just dont look maybe they wont spot us

cammy: nuh they are making their way over to us now

trish: really...and angel you claim he doesnt like you...pleasee

abhi: heyy what a surpirse? you guys here?

cammy mumbles surprise my foot

luckily ridz was sitting behind the table so they couldn't see what she was wearing...yet...

ridz: hmm what a surprise indeed...

arm: woh ridzy...

cammy: omg ridz! there he is! surprise!

ridz; where? OMG NICKKKKK



riddhima jumps up and runs/nearly topples nick in a rush to hug him

armaan feels his heart breaking

rid: omg nick i thought you were in delhi meeting your parents

nick: yes but i was missing my angel and had a feeling she might need me

ridz: i love you nicky! you are the bestest!

nick i know hahahaha btw, you wont introduce me to your friends?

cammy: hey wait a minute

trish: we dont get hugs?

nick: oh sorry darlings, come here

nick hugs both trish and cammy

ridz; okay nick this is armaan, sapna, amit, rahul, muskaan, abhi, and nikki, guys this is nick one of my closest friends in the whole worldd btw what'd you bring me?

nicck: darling i went to delhi, why is it that you assume i brought you something back?

ridz: oh pleasee i know you must have ordered something from italy and had your parents bring it for me...now come on!

nick: you know me to well, and cammy and trish stop pouting. do you really thing i forgot you idiots?

cammy: we love you nickkk

nick: and i love you all too but i dont have it with me

trish: what?

nick: it's in the car

ridz: whattt? go get it naa

nick: i'll give it on the way outtt you really want to carry gift bags around in a club?

ridz: fine

abhi: yaar ridzy tumhari dost sab itne khoobsurat kyun hai? kya mast especially yeh gori wali...

ridz; uh abhi..

cammy and nick pinch ridz indicating not to say anything

rah: haan yeh toh wah wah main toh usko

musk: kya? usko kya?

nikki: haan kya? kutte!

cammy: haan nikki ne bilkul sahi kaha! KUTTE SAALE KAMINE! ULLO KE PAATE!

nick: tum bhul gaye usko marna bhi tha hai na?

cammy: oh haan right!

trish: cammy chilll ho jaata hai...hum khoobsurat hai toh uske gaalti kya?

cammy: um well unke girlfriends hai for one!

abhi/rahul/armaan/nikki/muski/sapna/amit just had their mouths open

nick: ahahahahahaaha angel just look at their faces! oh god

ridz: guys apna muh toh band kar
nick: you see being with angel so long we HAD to learn hindi lol

cammy: btw guys are jerks! minus you nick of course, so nikki, muski, sapna care to dance?

muski: sure

rah: acha muski sorry na

muski: nahin tum jao

they girls minus ridz go to the dance floor

nick: so angel shall we?

ridz: of course! hey tum log bhi aajana!

rah: yea i'm cominggg muskii

amit: sapnaa

they all go minus abhi and armaan

abhi: hey sorry yaar, lekin maybe they are just good friends

armaan was on the verge of tears

Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowww awesome part Ashu...:)
luved it...<3
awwww hope Armaan sees Ridz tattoo n recognizes her soon..:)
tc n update soon..:)
Preet <3

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