Unfaithful sequel 4 Kriya Climax - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Pratigya looks gorgeous in her traditional red saree and jasmine flowers on hair.
She goes to Nandini's dressing room.Nandini and Pratigya are excited to see each other.
N: Pratigya..atlast you came back.
P:How can i not attend my best friends' wedding.
Neev and Nandini get married.
Pratigya wishes Neev and Nandini:Wish you both a happy married life.
She turns back is surprised to see Krishna with a baby in his arms.
K:Hi Pratigya.How are you?
P:Fine.
K:I saw you earlier itself.I thought i will come to you after the ceremony.
He looks at Neev and Nandini:All the best.
Pratigya keeps looking at him and the baby.
Krish returns to her.
P:Your baby looks so cute.I'm sure it's name is also cute like her.
K:Yes,she has got a beautiful name.Her name is Tamanna.
P:Tamanna?The daughter has her own mother's name?By the way where is Tamanna?
M:Her mother is not in this world now.So i named her after her mother's name.Through the little Tamanna she will remain in our memories.
Pratigya is shocked:Tamanna...?
K:She left us soon after her delivery.
She feels sad for the baby.She takes her in her arms and pampers her.
K:Usually she does'nt go to anyone.But she did'nt make any fuss for coming to you.She is not crying.She is very comfortable and cheerful in your arms.
"Every baby is happy with the mother".These were Neev's words.
Krish & Pratigya stare at Neev.
N:What i said is true.Tamanna sees her mother in Pratigya . Pratigya was like her own mother to her now.
He looks at Pratigya: Pratigya..did you not feel that she is your own daughter when you took her in your arms?
Her eyes become wet.She nods her head.
N:God has decided that Krishna and Pratigya must be Tamanna's parents.That's why first she reached krishna's hands and then now Pratigya 's hands.
Krish's and Pratigya 's eyes are full of tear drops.
Nikhila takes Tamanna in her arms.
Nikhila:What neev said is true. Pratigya..why don't you join us back?krishna misses you a lot.Tamanna needs you.And i'm sure that you also long to be with krishna and Tamanna.
Pratigya looks at krishna.He can't face her.She turns back in confusion.
She thinks:krishna did'nt say anything.
Suddenly she hears his voice: Pratigya!
She turns back and looks at his eyes.
K:Will you marry me?
She can't express how happy she is.She becomes very emotional.
She nods her head.

Nandini dresses Pratigya as a bride.Neev dresses krishna.
Nan:Look at your mehendi.It's bright red.It shows how much krishna loves you.
She blushes.She looks at her mehendi with a smile.
Pratigya is brought to the mandap near krishna.He and Pratigya smile at each other.
They walk around the sacred fire.
krishna ties mangalsuthra around her neck and fills her forefead with vermillion.Finally they enter into the eternal bond of marriage.

The end

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
It was a lovely chp.The both of them got married,how sweet!😊Your ff was wonderful👏⭐️Looking forward to reading more of your ffs😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
excellent update.....n a sweet climax.............loved it dear.....😛
ok now not to forget............it was an awesome, brief n entertaining ff having a meaningful thought behind it.............jasmine ur a fabulous writer...........👏👏👏 hope to read another ff from ur side real soon..😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
oyeee i neeed the link to the 1st FF !! i really wannna knw wah happene d 😕 ! this is awesome !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Hi Jasmine... sorry for the late comment ....actually was away on holidays....but just finished reading the climax ..and i must say it 's mindblowing and fantabulous!!👏👏👏 loved the happy ending!.... though i am a little sad for Tammana.... she was a sweet girl but glad to know Prat and Krish would take good care of her baby! Awesome story Jasmine!.... thanks a lot!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👍🏼 Hope to hear from you soon!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
hi Jasmine.... Sorry for the late comments....
Awww.... finally the 2 souls met each other....
Thanks for yet another fan fic....

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