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Posted: 14 years ago
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Abhay has been in love with maithli for 300 years and their love story is epic so as a tribute to this fascinating lovestory I wrote a tiny poem 😳
Days go by,your memories stay
Flowers may wither,my love for you blossoms
Oh what can I do,letting you go is like separating a scent from the flower

Trees may sway,my devotion to you is rock solid
My smile may have faded,your laughter echoes in my ears
Oh what torture,forgetting you is like asking a fish to swim on land

Plz do comment 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww Its Really Sweetā­ļø... I love it... Great PoemšŸ‘ 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice poem. I really want to know what happened between them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awwww really cute and sweet :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwšŸ‘šŸ‘ā­ļø really so nice and cute
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@spaarkles thank you😊
@Mrs Jaysean I am eager too it is full of suspense😃
@Mehak thank you dear😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It is supercool. Kinda makes you feel bad for AMetz.

As they say :

Gates of memories never close,
How much i miss you, no one knows,
Days shall pass on to become years,
And I shall remember you in my silent tears.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ul-ain-jenni Thanxā¤ļø @kinkidear glad you liked itšŸ˜›
@Arshforever thank u 😊
@ All Hope you liked it and thank you for your beautiful commentsšŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful awesome poem dear šŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwwwwww
its beautiful nd magical.....
it makes one think how deep nd strong Ametz bond nd luv must have been.......ā¤ļø

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