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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part1

He was sleeping peacefully, suddenly hears some deafening voices, some woman was waking him, shouting at the top of her voice, he could hear clearly "wake up, wake up" she shouted n number of times, "wake up or else I will pour this icy cold water" now one more women joined her she also had a high pitch voice shriller then the first one, she was louder, his ears were paining he could take no more, just woke up with a jerk covering his ears with his hand, shouting "SHUT UP, whose here", opens his eyes and finds no one around, he was surprised, he clearly heard the voices someone was standing near his ears shouting, some women, but here in this house there were only two women his Dadi Maa and his step mom and both spoke very softly, hardly shouted whatever the matter maybe.

He looked at the time it was 5:00am, no time for anyone to wake up, the 2 ladies woke at around 6:00am.

The 13yr old Maan was quite upset, what a disgusting way to wake up, damn this dream it seemed real. He was not able to sleep however hard he tried, so decided to leave the bed, he went to his fathers gym which was not used since his death last year, he saw the machines and decided to do some workout as his school does not start till 8:30 am, meaning he has extra 2 hrs before he starts to get ready.

Meanwhile in a far off town of HSPur

Ranu and Tayji are trying hard to wake Geet

T: Geet wake up dear its already 5:00am

G: Tayji its only 5 why should I get up so early
R: sweet cherry now you are 6 yrs of age and Darjee said you should wake up early and come with us to fetch water from the well and then accompany us to the fields for early watering etc, then before leaving for school help us in the kitchen
G: but Maa Rajji is also sleeping why I should only wake up
T: dear you are elder remember, when Rajji will be 6 we will wake her also, now come on good girl
Geet wakes up reluctantly and follows the instructions given to her

ps: hope u like it I made it short so that you may read carefully and grasp what the situation is ...... if you find something disturbing do write and if you find it nice encourage me by commenting and of course by hitting that LIKE BUTTON

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Edited by smj1977 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
nice concept, so maan mother is still alive
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
loved it ..continue soon !!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
hey nice awesome update
he had a dream i thought it was real d waking up
n poor geet has 2 wake up at 5 even though she is just 6yrs
waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it............. plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsroopali

hey nice awesome update
he had a dream i thought it was real d waking up
n poor geet has 2 wake up at 5 even though she is just 6yrs
waiting for ur next update

dear u really have to read it slowly
Maan did not have a dream it was real, only because he saw no one around him, he thought it is a dream
the women were waking up Geet not him
Edited by smj1977 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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new concept.....quite intrested to know how this ff takes it turn...can u add me to ur pm list pl for future updates
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice n intriguing concept, impressd by d amount of study u did to write ths ff. I got wat d scenario u r tryin to put wit jst a tiny question tat wheithr geet is gonna b pregnant by dev? Plz say no...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chubzy

Very nice n intriguing concept, impressd by d amount of study u did to write ths ff. I got wat d scenario u r tryin to put wit jst a tiny question tat wheithr geet is gonna b pregnant by dev? Plz say no...

pls wait and read
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sweetheart......yaar awesome start....sab kuch clear hai, but ek confusion hai, is dev married to NT or not....i mean fine he is younger than maan, but how come he is married in this age???

& wow rano n taiji were making geet up aur maan uth gaya...TELEPATHY😆
Edited by Manpreetmann - 15 years ago

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