Poem about Piya's current state of mind

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys,

Had written a poem earlier, due to my own personal reasons,

But as I read it again after a while, it coincidentally matched Piya's situation!
Her state of mind, desperation as we saw in yesterday's episode...

Thought I'd share it with you all,

Please have a look,
Feel free to criticize,
and would be really glad to receive your feedback 😊

Cheers,

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Why?

Why do I want you so badly,
Hurting me real and cruel,

The slightest window of hope,
A gentle breeze whispering your name,
A shadowy figure making me believe your presence,

Disappearing all of a sudden in the mist,
Making the night even more colder and barren,

Every situation begins and ends with you...

Like a roller coaster I am,
Riding wildly up and down,
Through excitement,despair and undying longing,

Swerving left and right,
Through tingling sensations of happiness,
and drowning in the dark desperation,

Again and again and again...

This one-sided gamble too dangerous too handle,
Making me want peace from the heart twisting desire,

Praying to god for sanity,
Fighting wildly against my conscience,

But again being a fool to think about you in entirety,

Why do I love you so badly,

Why do I want you, so badly...




ā¤ļø
Mugdha


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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
AWESOME POEM. U have done a fantastic work.The best line is"Why do i love u so badly".What a nice line which describes Piya's mind totally. Carry on dear. U will rock.








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Posted: 14 years ago
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@sdoll: Thank u so much!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ahhh
Why do I love you so badly,

Why do I want you, so badly...



*sigh*
Beautiful poem dear....suits perfectly for our darling Piya....'every situation begins and ends with you' so true!....
keep it up:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It fits piyas situation perfectly
The turmoil and desperation is clear
Fantastic poem
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG mug, So perfect poem.. I just love it, Keep it up ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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perfect poem good workšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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šŸ‘
Your creative!! 😃
awesome poem! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woowwww... really really awesome poem.. šŸ‘ it really does fit Pia's situation.. and the best lines are, like other said, "Why do I love you so badly, Why do I want you, so badly..." keep up the gr8 work.. really awesome.. šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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šŸ‘ gr8 wrk....it relli suit pia

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