Maidens and Madmen Upd 20 Pg30, 13/07 - Page 16

I had been reading this thread since I accidentally came across it and from then on I am visiting this daily to see whether you updated or not....but you update it daily so I made it a habit of checking your thread first thing when I come here.....No need to send PMs....I can manage it if you are busy.....don't worry...

As for your posts,I really don't find words so as what to say to your beautiful n extraordinary way of expressing your thoughts in such limited words....I'm yet to come to terms with the fact that its possible.....I don't want to say anything c***che and insult your work....So I'll remain your silent reader as long as you continue your work......this is for you 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Hey sookie*

Firstly jail (II) was great and now tears,,it so shows the geet's feelings..both are fabulous!!

And ya i agree with you that it takes a lot of time to send PM's ..i regularly visit this thread(And all of your's for that matter) to see if that they are updated,,so no need for the trouble girl..😃 we (I) will manage..as u update it regularly..

Do continue..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Sookie Sookie..what an imagery...


warring with himself he looked up
between lies and half truths hooked up

a contradiction of helpless and defiance
he smirked at the look of arrogance

did she need help or was she helping him
to lead to a place that could be just a whim

the savior needed some saving after all
in his arms he held her but captured in her fall

her tears moved him, her fear instilled rage
he fought her battles only to lose himself in her gaze

fate, destiny or sheer coincidence
he was entwined with her needed no further evidence

nice one..............
i do need the pm dear so that i dont miss ur updates.................

I love this thread. I came to IF only to read update of 2 ffs, and it's one of them. It will be helpful if you PM as now I have exams and doesn't have time to check th thread regularly, but if you are really busy then I will try to manage by reading all updates after my exam

Liked both previous updates

Very fably written

Abt PM do wat you feel is rght

aloof and distant was his nature
her touch had change that stature

now personal space included her
whether to carry or to trap near

the only undoing was her tears
eyes that spoke of her fears

disbelief turned to compassion
lips under his palm filled him with passion

unknown sensations and unnamed emotion
but to have her near was like a potion

pulling her close and saving her a habit
ah eyes of tigress in body of rabbit