#Devil's Den#- Mishti Maan

AnjanaYYZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

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😆1. Rules & Index R in post #3. Please read and actualize or we will make Dirty Dev vaporize in ur PM inbox😆 😆

2. Read Post 2 - I have QUIZ PAPER FOR U! Phunniest and Bhest Posts will get special mystery prize😉🤣

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Reel n Real Review of de Weak!

Its been an EPIC week and I have not been around for it.🤔 But, am BAK n with BANG! Bang! bang! Yup! I borrowed Arrow's handgun🤣🤣 Now nobody will be spared my shot! So, get ready for my review of de Week!

Geet HSP Team:

What were u thinking? Tapkofying Anvil on viewers' ki sir bin invitation, explanation, ya wall pictures. Don't u know ur Star One babies r born whinners?😭😭 And they cannot accept anybody but, Geet touching their Maan.🤪 Especially not one that demonstrates Maan is only a cheapo when it comes to Gith. He gifts Anvil de world, but gifts Gith only himself! How is that fair u, Meanos! So, please at ur leisure figure out why she did not tapfoky on our screens sooner...we the whinners r slow on de uptake and can't grasp concept of random cast expansions!😡 And while u at it puhleez explain how Arrow teleports himself within secs from de boxing ring to his sister's house with unloaded handgun🤪🤣

Dear Audience:

U wanna quit Geet HSP? Go for it! 👍🏼 Wen u find de "perfect" show please point me to it. I need to get over my Geet HSP addiction - its making me HSP from my own life. So, I can't believe I still watch it! 😆😆 For what? Is not romantic at all.😲 De hero is a nero,* who coerces his fiance to go to work juss becoz he can't bear to be without her.😲 A heroine that's oblivious to the fact she is sitting on her hero's lap☺️ lecturing him on de importance of "communication".🤪 Wat unoriginal crap!! 😆 A hero that treats his sister from nowhere like a zero and becomes Romeo! Nope! Nothing sets him apart from the other soap saaps that place their family first...let's not forget Geet's his SIL,haan!😉 And the story? Wat story? NT ain't plotting revenge... she is home knitting booty's for baby Maaneet or Deveet🤣🤣 She has no issues with going to jail for crimes as she has told us multiple times.😛 And Dev ain't in love wit his devotee! He wants to become one! So, let's all move on to another story...where there are no new dhamal entries, where the heroine cries for months and does not get restraining orders, where the hero imbibes de sauce and is not not the sauce!

*nero - Roman dictator!

Dear Lameo aka G.C.:

Read ur blog for 1st time yesterday...as i suspected its not a well written log! Hire a more eloquent writer or ask us (we will do it for phree😛). Having read it, lemme comment about it. Am not ur "fan"...never was and never will be! I juss like Maan. But, I respect u for standing behind ur dog & submitting to ur debi!👏👏👏

It's de DB-GC blog - we as fellow human beings shud respect that but, some r unfortunately too slow or too low to grasp that the dame and the dawg r not fair game despite ur fame. As for DD, i know u did not compare her to a stray dog...u r not kameena enuff to even thenk that let alone articulately convey it in Engleeesh!🤣🤣🤣

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Mishti Maan!

Mishti Stalker Kanjoos (MSK) u r making me diabetic! Pretty please put a SOCK in it! That was my first reaction to the chaand-taare moment. Rewatched and realized I have become a total cynic

How can u not luv Mishti Maan? He tells white lies to be with his Mishti and then proceeds to tell her late night startales.☺️ Is this the same man we first met in HP? Love has made him saccharine but, its supercute! He has become a total CUTEY!🤣🤣 One that reads the universe's secrets in his love's eyes. She is truly his inspiration - she hooks him into the conversation with her gambit: 'the stars coming out every night with its companions for eons" and he carries the story forward. I can see them telling such sweet tales together to baby Geet someday! 😃 Did i mention this episode was SuperSweet?!

Anvil Interruption

Hindi serials remind me of English cartoons I watch on Saturday mornings!😆 Just when the hero-bd/ and heroine/bd are going to get close u know an Anvil will interrupt them like in the roadrunner series. U can bank on this! So, sister Anvil tapkofies on Maaneets starfest. 😆 Mishti Maan leaves with her, so he can become Miracle Maan by regifting Meera's car to Anvil! He even becomes her turtle driver as she ponders about Dev Bhai! Hai! Hai! Y no mention of Vicky bhai? Did the Geet HSP pitch him into an inexistent ditch. Chalo chhoodo! Geet HSP team suffering from Serial Amnesia! Dev babu ki hi baat kare? Wat?! No. Miracle Maan seems intent on sending him off for trip to Mars too!🤣 Guessing Abhinav has finally run of to a rival channel where there is actor shortage:D

Poison ARROW

Nefarious Naintara is BAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKKKKK! Not even MSK can keep her down...at least not for long. 😈 He won't let her touch Geet, so she will direct her Poison Arrow towards him maybe through Anvil! 😉 Q of the day? Is Arrow ready for the task at hand? Or will he lose his CONcentration unlike de epic bowman? Maybe get derailed by love?!😛

Chup Chupke Milna

Mishti Maan is bak indulging in his favorite pasttime - staring! He catches Geet dressing or selecting and boldly be de helpful consumer.😉 Mishti Maan' s dreams get dashed when he's caught by Dramabaaz Daadi & Poti. He then gets sentenced to 23 1/2 hours a day without Geet untill marriage.🤣 Aaaah how will Majnu Stalker Khanjoos abstain from consuming Mishti all day? Will he crack and buy her a cellphone? Will he start climbing windows? Will he pretend to be the milkman? Will he dress up a a girl for the Sangeet? How will he come dress his Gith? Tune in next week!

Negative Points:

1. BDs don't give up ur day jobs. DD, we miss u! GC - i miss ur ASSets! STrIp MaLE TyMe:P

2. Nissar & Co - please lets move beyond the conventional celestial bodies before we beat u blue!

3. Barry - stop making us diabetic! Maan toh pyaar mein poet bangiya!

4. Arrow & Anvil - expressions please! At least 1 or 2 per scene wud be great!

Episode rating 6/10 - bds r boring, the script was saccharine, and the acting of some absent. Not to mention de consistent aksent😉

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AnjanaYYZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

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RANDOM SURVEY! I DEVILDARE U TO ANSWER😈

1. Maan will see Geet how many times a day?

a) Once for 1/2 hour

b) Twice for 15 mins

c) Thrice for 10 mins

d) He will see her for more then 1/2

e) He won't see her but, finally buy her a phone so he can yap with her about celestial bodies🤣

2. What is the minor MU that Anvil and Daadi are planning?

a) make Geet think Maan ranaway with SaMaan?

b) make them think the wedding is cancelled, so they runaway

c) The possibilities are endless - ive me urs?

3. Obviously Maan is not comfortable telling Anvil about Dev's sach. Whom will she learn it from and how?

a) run into NT while shopping and get earful about Geet

b) Daadi will tell her - i doubt it.

c) from dastardly dev himself

d) The office staff will fill her ears about it especially Tasha

4. Will there be closure to the Sasha story or do you think they shud cont with a new actress

5. Will Dev leave to become a saint? I don't think his murder is currently in the cards and he does not seem the suicide types🤣

6. Will Arjun target Geet or Anvil and who will be the fuse his lightbulb?

PRIZE FOR BEST ENTRY WILL BE AWARDED NEXT Sat for this weekend. All entries (pm me the link to ur answer post) must be into me by Next Epi Air time

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AnjanaYYZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

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DISCLAIMER

The information here is Xclusive to de Den ONLY! Read n FORGET IT! Infringe our CopyRite and Anj will make u watch the "India Paints" Videos till u c the Light! Everyone Is Welcome, so Post Post! We are like Appy Fizz and Grappo Fizz....Cool to de Core!

- Devils of the Devil's Den-

THE DEVIL'S UPDATED RULES n NOTES

1. If U don't like the Devil's Den residents then just fly away! We don't like to be mean hosts!

2. U can only jappoo Geet HSP ki Geet at Den - So, stay in your maryaada and don't jam about other shows!

3. The Den is not just about CONfakes, but reel takes so discuss dey story constructively in all its glory😃

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9. There is Devilsden A/C. Its for emergencies & our awesome Kreations Corner

DEVIL'S PLEDGE
All the Devils raise hand and repeat after me

"I SOLEMNLY SWEAR THAT I AM UPTO NO GOOD"
"And hereby Pledge to diss All de Spoilers n Spoof de Pictures"

WATCH ON STAR PLAYER
Star Player is testing whether they could go live at the same time or within the half-an-hour of airtime, but are NOT fully live yet. So, watch from the site if u can. Its the least we can do as good viewers.
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Den Opening Schedule for this week:

Monday - Jaya

Tuesday - Jhan

Wednesday - Geeta

Thursday - Caco

Friday - Jyoti

Saturday - Anj

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INDEX

P.1 Anjana, Geeta, Zoya (new, but old😆), bDgT, Cute_Ash

P.2 Shreya_I, PremHeer, Suj01, Smita, Aiyana, Geets, Jaya, Reshmi

P.3 - Marsha, Taqdir (Nabz), IndigoBlues (Meg), Jhan, Vandu, Caco, Ann,Mi7chimes

P.51 - Shifa (Gooseberry)

P. 52 - Shonnuu

P.58 - Zarmyna

P.148 - Sinister

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geet.a

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hi everyone!

I am going to start by saying DD- I MISS YOU😭

there ain't no GHSP without Geet

at least not in Maneet scenes..😆

Okay- so I made this VM...Please check it out..!

😆

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2r2sL-wRYDM[/YOUTUBE]

Now I'll quit whining and say 1 more thing-

Anyway- ..the new story line that seems to be building up from NT's awesome truth-lying powers😆

So the way she's going with her "main bechaari" act- obviously, instigating Arjun to take revenge against msk..and warning us too about his anger..oh my..i'm scared..

Can the guy grow a bit more stubble pleasE? he's cutely chubby..hehe😆

People need maneet scenes

The team is stuck with BD's...

WHAT do they show? mature convo between maneet when the intensity and the chemistry would both be missing?

it is repetitive yes but it's for a reason as well...

the girl needs the wooing okay?
and maan needs to be expressive..it's just a few days till their marriage- let them talk about never ending love, and stars..let them talk under the moons and dreams..

let them cover themselves with a veil of love which for them is going to be 'eternal'

let that be expressed too..

why be always realistic..can't the girl have some flighty dreams? can't she be told that she's beautiful and the man she loves wants to drown in them?

Can't he make her feel like that?

But Barry- when DD comes back- then the dialogues need to become different.. okay?

And NO SIR now..please please please!

That said- I stll liked the whole "i get all my info from your eyes"
LOL😆
But yes...Maneet scenes getting too cheezy..I'm glad there are his EYES..even in the second maneet scene- the eyes of MSK...just going for the kill..

and Geet's are full of liquid love and beauty😳
@ CV's- the MAneet scenes I'm sure are being worked upon. I am going to wait and watch 😊

So...Maan gives N-E a car huh?

Btw- Nikunj is getting better😳

and the bhai is out on a drive with his sis..
hmm
and finally she asks about Dev..

umm..does she already know what happened to Vicky?😳

Anyway..Maan lies to protect his dearest and that's done

notice N-E's dialogue

Maybe annie simply meant Vicky is a much more sensible brother..that's why...maybe she ain't close to him so much..

they can't give linear dialogues u know..toh show bund nahi ho jaayega?

ya line mein saara khurana parivaar ka roll call kar dein?🤣

let them spring the actors up and show us the characters..let them run around and show justifications accordingly..

let them be flexible with their plots..

i don't understand what the panga is?🤣

I

Maneet scene 2
I liked Geet remembering her mom😭
it was sad though..

Mr Main Stalking Karta is there...back from driving the sister around to become fashion advisor for his wifey...

Aww..DD looks beautiful!! I love that dress on her😳

MSk- tumhara muh golgappe ki tarha kyun bana hua hai?😆😆

too good!

"main aapse raaye poochh rahi hoon.koi kavita kehne ke liye nahi keh rahi hoon"

So msk..get to business don't become Romeo😆

MSK said something today

the kind of dulhan he wanted- Geet is like that-

"meri dulhan aisi ho"

okay- so..this makes something clear..

Maan didn't have a dulhan before that...right?😳

Dadi-N-E separating maneet..

hmm...so some excitement to be brought haan..maneet ko separate..don't they know..maan abhi toh bheegi billi ki tarha says yes..but will NEVER comply to those rules?? because he can't live without his Gith..for more than an hour😉

oo..I forgot..i also liked how Maan went back inside after moon-star talk when geet told him too..like a good hubby listening to his wife..

MAine kab se kaha hua tha that MAan will be someone very considerate of all Geet would say after their marriage..kaha tha na...
LOL😆

Anyway..that's it for today

In short-
wait and watch for I feel DD's absence for just a small hiccup..
exciting things are lying our way,
and a new track will unfold
which will be different from Dev ka crap..
The new guy has potential..giving him a chance doesn't seem bad
MAenet romance will be taken to a different level- but couldn't be done with Bd's too properly..
Let Dd come back and see how they play it out..uske baad..if there's things missing, I'll start my bashing too😛 :P

Barry- when Dd comes back..can we have some v beautiful dialogues and original ones?😳

KArishma- Rocing performance!

Gc- Well done :) ur eyes are still awesome!

Dd- miss you ..come back soon

@NEw clothes- Maanisha- AWESOME!! they changed the clothes..good job! finally..😆

Hugs to all!
and have a nice weekend!!

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Do not Tell

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I am the potter who molds the clay into beautiful figurines
I am the painter who sketches the subjects into angelic beings
I am the unique being that rests in eternal solitude, alone even when in a crowd
I am the "I" in all Living
I am the "V" in Vision
I am the "R" in Creation
I am just the saw dust
A particle of light
A sunbeam
An atypical being that is a non-being
😆 😉

DISCLAIMER: The below post comes with a fairness warning that the author is NOT an expert and just a layman who loves to free think - as she believes that the only thing that is free is thinking as these days even Oxygen is packaged and in some days even thinking will be rationed. As is freedom of speech a costly item these days.

Body Doubles Math

If I can know that is a body double then aren't we losing the whole purpose? Stand-in getting extended to body double? If so are we not overusing? That means that you are bad on RESOURCE MANAGEMENT of your actors and bad at TIME MANAGEMENT? Right!!

And if you get to use body doubles, why are you doing the hand double, back double and motion double in such visible way? I am confused if we can't find some new ways and means to manage the story without the overuse of body doubles. If you shoot almost 75% of 8 days with body doubles that means you need to innovate and use techniques that even Brian De Palma did not use, right???

I found a problem with the lighting setup with soft low key lighting used for some shots with the original protagonist No: 1 and then when it comes to the shots of the other actor it seemed like there was a different lighting setup in some of the scenes as to coherence. Did I read it correctly?

Also, the split-screen effect of yesterday's in the office room sequence seemed like two different levels. I somehow felt that DD and GC did not look like they were sitting at the same height on that couch, or am I wrong?

How about these suggestions as I heard some of my cinematography mates discuss:

1. Interplay of light and shadows with the BD almost always in shadow with just a subtle gray/sepia/ dull tones of light seeping in to the corners

2. Camera angles should not focus on face closeups but should focus on objects that are conveniently placed with the actors themselves becoming props and the props becoming main artifacts

3. Distinct and subtle technique of using mirror images, or images in water or on glass panes

[will add more later]

-----Why i love CGI but this ain't got no SFX 😒
---- Split focus/over the shoulder 😕
-----Pan pan pan 🥱

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Cute_Ash

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Posted: 14 years ago

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res ---------------

New VM

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5hgeLI3wRY[/YOUTUBE]

Maaneet-Chaand Sitaare ka Bandhan Yeh toh Purana hai

Taaza Taaza BD mili hai

Hum toh DD ke deewane hai

Geet Student-How do you have answers to all my questions?

Maan Prof- Coz I am Experiencedd Gal..I have done some Chaand Sitaare Sessions wid my Past ka Blast too

MSK has to do balance between both Joru and Behna😆

-ahh as expected NT says the REEL truth to her Bhaiyaan..I heard "Hum Maan Veerji ko Apni Izzat Dete Rahe" and i was likee WHAT? 😲Did I Miss something?😕🤣

And Arjun will take revenge only bcoz of the FALSE truth so he really is not negative but don;t caree me wanna see a face off of hsi with Maan..I love Rathore's ka Face off wid maan Whether it is Rasika or Naintaaree..

-Now I am really eager to see what Arjun will do when he realises his pyaari Behna ka actual Truth...😛Can we have a 3rd Zorr ka Jhatka For her😆

-Chitting Mat Karnaa ab😆Nahinn subah subah why why do you hav to show her..

EK aur Gift MSK Terii TOHH You have crossed all Limits of Kanjoosii..Ever since she has entered she has got a gift everydayy...😡

A BIG Carrrhave you given GITH a SMALL phone?

have you relaised you have not given ANYTHING to Geet You haven;t even taken her for one Drivee

-Kachuaa Pacee ermm No way he is a PHASHTT mundaa...

-WAAH WAAH Miracle Miracleee Anddii remembered Dev after 3 dayss of arrival🤣🤣

-Maan proves his Thikana of Baba Adam ka Zamaana 200-300 Years se wait😆

-Gol Gappa Hawww *Checks behind the curtainn* Me was having Gol Gappa at the time of watching episode coz I was hungru so mum made Gol gappa nd both of us were hogging it and she chokedd coz he said it😆

-Maan iz experiencedd Geet is all nervous with all this shaadi thing but maan is chilled jus shows he has already been there done tht...

there was purple and yellow sari where did tht Come from?🤔

-Annie's Shararat Plan A of Arjun already being executed by his to be jeevan saathi🤓

-Maan's Dulhan ki Tamanna ..I knw he has used the same dialogue before marrying Sam Aunty and she got flattereddd...Hassi toh Phassii😆

Ankhon mein Doob jaane do Let's play the Stare Game😳

-Daadi is such a DQ🤣🤣

-Gith ke bina Office mein Lochaa Ho jayegaa Office-Romance Adda, Files-Maahi Hand touch, Mitingg-Eye Lockss..

-Maan has a heart attack now what is he gonna do in Office without his Githh...Oh Oh Can we have him doing time pass with Manishhaa bcoz Gith is not theree..😃

-Light Moments did make me Smile😃but then maaneet scenes lack chemistry and the touch tht we love bcoz of BD and also da Boring Recycled scenes and dialogues

GC awsomee...and DD too wondering how did u manage it without Gc in front of you😆

-karishma Amazinggg⭐️

I still feel like I am not watching the same GHSP anymore..Hopefully CVz realize this and bring the Charm bak which I doubt will try to keep Hopee...

PS: DD I mish you Brrrreez I cannot stand BD ka Body for longgIsh Torturee

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shadowstreet

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Today was saturday & u gifted us a romantic epi. Thanks. but charm was not there due to some reason. Frist of all the usage of body double, secondly, scense r repeative, Moon-star talk was romantic but Maan-geet need realistic romance not fantasy one, praising beauty by ur beloved is the most wonderful experience a grl can hav but charm was missing as there was body double. There is still no information about Andesha's existence till date, why her mood swings all time, she wants the marrige thingy but cant stand Maan-Geet together, why dont Dadi or maan to her properly? she also need to know about Dev's fact. NT-Arjun intraction was good. thts all for today's epi. nothing more to discuss. Now something important. We get to know that Lead actress took 8 days leave. It was her due leave as she wasnt taking a day off till she started shooting for the show. There is also a news that the lead actor was on leave for 5 days just before she took the leave. Now why cant u arrange the holidays together & made them shoot for these important & romantic scences. Many important things happend this week 1. Geet cookd for the frst time for Maan. 2. Maan privately shared his fav desrt with her. 3. Geet met her sisiter-in-law who has diffrence of opinion with her. 4.Geet faced Nt & showed her the door with some legal action. 5. Geet was afraid after the whole NT show down & Maan consoled her. 6. Maan-geet talked about the baby & for the frst time they declared baby is OUR. 7. Maan-Geet again talk romanitcaly under the open sky, this time both r relaxed as they know they will marry pretty soon. 8. Geet got confused about her dress selection & Maan helped her out for the frst time & admired her beuty so openly. 9. Dadi restricted to meet Maan-Geet before marrige which is a very common thing in eastern traditional marrige. these r very very imp scences. After traveling with their love story for last 8 months we the audience came to a relax mood. At last the couple r getting married without any misunderstanding & with full confidence over each other. In this crucial moment audiece offcourse demand for the real actors in same frame. I know actors r human & they need break & vacz. But when such important scenes were written why cant they took the break together. They can shoot these scenes & took their awaited leave. I know the lead actress deserve this break for a long time, its her due break. I am not complaining, also I dont think it will go against the rule of IF. But cant the lead actor took the leave after some days. Is this a very big sacrifice as an audience we r askingfrom him.I know everyone has their personal scheduled life which shud not b hampered by fans demand. But I wanted a little more from him. He took a long break just on October. Before he was sick too. but in october,2 weeks he was sick & took a vacation as well. that time The lead actress & others tried her level best to keep it up. I admire tht. But now when he took the leave he can take it co-ordinating with his co-star. If they can do it then these imp scene wont get spoilt. Anyway I know its their & GHSP team's personal life & decision. I am a fan & I hav a tiny little voice. So I get hurt when such good scenes get spoilt with these issues. May b for me it was easy for them to shceduled their vacation together but I know in reality may b its difficult. Just felt bad as an audience. So I point this thing. Hope I will see more beautiful scenes when both lead r available. Thanks GHSP team for giving me wonderful episodes & I love u always for this.😊

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Zoya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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From GC's blog to today's epi!!!

Lots of things in my mind!!!

But before someone throws me out of here!!!

Let me tell everyone that Zoya is also a devil from a long time!!!

I think I registered my name two months ago!!!

That's another story that I never commented here!!!

Epi Analysis would be coming soon!!!

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shreya_l

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Niharoon tumhe aur phir chaand ko,
Kya sochti ho dekh in taaron ko?
Nakshatra hain apne meet ke saath,
Jaane kis preet se bandhein inke haath....
Yeh rehtein hain wahin humare jaane ke bhi baad.
Maya humare bandhanon ki kheenchti unhe humari or,
Isliye voh rehte sthir aur dekhtein humari or.
Accha phir kyon toota taara falak chod aata hai jameen ki or?
Tootata nahin sitara balki jukhta hai,
sajade mein humari chahaton ka hai jor.
Saare sawaalon ka jawaab kaise hai tumhare paas?
Kahaan se laate ho yeh alfaaz?
Tum ho khuli kitaab saare jawaab hain tumhare aankhon ke paas.

Fursat is chidchidi ke liye nikaalein kaise?
Maan bhaiya ko bhaaye bhabhi Geet ki batiyati ankhiyaan aise....
Geet kitani pyaari aur sacchi,
Samay do Anvesha ko voh hai abhi baaton aur dil ki kacchi.

Nayantara apna dukhda gaaye,
Kya kuch sach bhi bataye?
Bhar rahi hai apne jhoot ka ghada,
Bhai ko bhi is daldal ke nahi choda....

Anvesha ki bak bak mujhse sahi na jaaye,
Ooper se ise gaadi ki raftaar bhi na bhaye...
Chalo aakhir poocha doosare bhai ka haal,
Teeje pe aate aate karegi sabka bura haal....
Maan ne taali baat, pata nahin Dev shayad na ho saath.

Geet kapadon ke rang mein ulajhi,
Mehandi aur haldi lagegi ab jald hi.
Karti hai apni ma ko voh yaad,
Itne mein hui Maan se mulaqat.
Maan kar rahe ched chaad....
Geet kahe kavita suna karo na behaal.
Khiltein hain saare rang tum par,
Sajana hai ab mere liye hi har pal,
Main hi chun deta hoon kya khilega tum par.
Dadi aur poti kya hain bun rahi?
Shararat ki nayi baat hai chal rahi....

Maan hain Geet ka roop dekh kar mugdh,
Kehtein hain kho lene do apni sudh budh.
Shabdoon mein na kar sukoon is pal ko bayaan,
Chanda ke baad tum hi ho roop ki khaan.
Khwaab ki mere hui tum mein taabeer,
Bas kho jaaon in aankhon mein yehi hai tadbeer.

Dekho yeh dadi-poti chupke se out house mein pahunchi,
Geet aur Maan ko ab yeh hain nachati,
Reeti riwaaj ke naam par lagaya dadi ne curfew,
30 minute milenge ab milne ko din mein,
Hosh hue Maan ke udan chooo....
Kaam ka bahana nahin chalega ab,
Maan kahein main kaam kaise karoonga ab.
Anvesha ko ab office mein bhi padega jhelana....
Pehle kya ghar mein kam tha
Dekh ke oob gayi hoon main iska ud ud kar chipakana.

Edited by shreya_l - 14 years ago

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