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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

Today's Episode was good in terms of story flow and ideas👍🏼 but lacked execution and impact👎🏼

With Body Doubles in Action,Maaneet scenes r turning out to b a big letdown and is missing that X-Factor..I hope DD comes back soon and we get the essense of Maaneet back from next week😳

Coming to the episode,I liked the way first scene was written👍🏼;This is what I always wanted to see;MSK caring for Geet 😳 and Geet confiding her fears in MSK😳;I loved the way MSK himself started the discussion saying "Our Baby"👏;He din't hv even slight hesitation while using that word "Humara"😳;Coming to Geet its natural that initially she said "My baby is fine";She is not used to so much love around her ;She has always been disowned by her own family members;So she has never stayed in that comfort zone where she can say its "Ours" and not just "Mine"...its a new feeling for her and so her instant reaction about "My baby" was fully justified;Sinse MSK is a man of few words,so I wasn't expecting him either to ask her for an explanation or question her about why she said "only her baby"..so for me his silent reaction was perfect👍🏼;But instead of anger I wanted to see more hurt on MSK's face there🤔;Mayb GC could hv done better with his silent expressions in that scene but again I dunno what were the director's instructions to him in that scene and sometimes when u work with BDs who r all expressionless standing in front of you,your acting too suffers a bit😊;But I loved the way how Geet instantly realises why MSK is angry and quickly rectifies her mistake by saying "Humara baby"😳👏;This silent connection and bonding between each other was so evident in this scene😳;One is able to make out easily why the other person is angry😳;The scene would hv been more impactful if both the actors were present there and after that humara bachha dialogue both would hv hugged each other or Geet would hv kept her forehead on MSK's shoulders😳;But with BDs in action they did hv more restrictions and so the scene lost a bit of its impact there;It could hv been a memorable scene but in the end turned out to b just a decent one😊;Still its an important scene from future story POV 👍🏼

Coming to the non-existent sister Anvesha🤣,well she was not bad today and her scenes with Dadi and MSK were not bad either😊;But the problem is viewers r finding it hard to accept her in the story because no proper base was laid for this character initially and still she has not asked any questions about Dev or NT which is very OTT😕;CVs if Anvesha is there in the long run then u people need to show why is she not bothered about her other brother Dev ??😳;If she is aware of this complete Dev-NT fiasco then why is she not asking any questions about it ??😕...

Coming to Arjun's entry..it was impressive👍🏼;A bit filmy with all that wrestling match😆 but the actor has good screen presense⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️;It seems CVs hv already planned a love track of Arjun-Anvesha🤔,but only problem here is Nikunj is a very poor actress and also her character is not at all convincing in the show yet,so I hv my reservations regarding this love story😊;Instead I would love to see a good clash of the titans between MSK and Arjun in business😎...

NT-Arjun scene was good and convincing😊;Even though Whole gun holding scene was a bit filmy and over the top but still I liked the strong impact it created towards the end making the viewers curious to know more about this guy😳;It also shows the extent to which he can go for his sister..so there is someone to challenge MSK's authority now😛...Also NT-Arjun has better brother-sister chemistry than MSK-Anvesha😃...

Coming to the precap...well I can understand with BDs they hv restrictions in romantic scenes as well ..so will hv to do with a repitative chaand-taare-moon scene again till DD comes back from vacation🤣

My Episode rating:8/10..I thought about it a lot and from what I saw..I liked the progress in the story..MSK for the first time saying "Our baby"..thats a progress👍🏼...and Arjun's entry created curiosity..another progress😃...I went a bit easy with execution and other technical department today becuase I know the constraints of working with BDs and shooting one scene twice...so if I ignore the technicalities then episode was not bad😃

Edited by jyoti06 - 14 years ago

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@jyoti06

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Silence

@SecretKhabri420

Achiever

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

What was this seriously? 😲 Was it an episode or was it jokes box? 😲

So much jokes thrown....

- Giving so much important scenes to body doubles 😡

- Geet making fun with Maan's English, thought I agree on this, but it could be better with the original actors doing it together.......

- Anvesha talking about her love as she is fighting with someone 🤪

- Arjun's filmi entry, yeh kya tha? seriously, I am not a bit impressed with this guy, he is ok as far for look, but no way near Maan, not even with acting, he is only opening his eyes so much when he talks, no expressions, hardly seen any expression 🤪

He can give some takker on being villian, but Maan is no less on stopping him 😳

Signals.......

- When weird Anvesha was talking about her love, they were showing Arjun in between, which clearly tell these two r to be paired, weird love story 🤢

- Arjun was acting like crazy on putting the gun on his head about his sister's khud khushi, this signal that he can go so far for his sister......

The episode is over all hardly even deserve 4/10, I give it 4/10 as rating, but I don't think this episode deserve more than this.........

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geet.a

@geet.a

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Okay..I don't feel like writing much today...

but..

1. I liked Arjun's entry.

Very dhamakedaar and i guess lafange parindey inspired..

His eyes like his sister dear..gol gol aankhein..

But I like how they address each other as aap..very classy..

Piyush acts pretty decent😳

he will definitely become better as he gets into the role..for the first epi..he was good!

looks like Arjun ahs psychotic tendencies..obsessive need to protect sister.

acc to article, if he's positive..would he genuinely fall for N-E?

or would he only be involved with sister?

Its a pretty interesting to think- will he STAY positive?

or..will his love for sister..blind him to become negative?

I liked the bg tune slow version of what comes sometimes behind NT and Geet scenes 😊

2. Thank God the sister is more into teasing now than annoyed mode..

and maan bahana karke apni Geet ke paas goes off

See sis-

he ain't interested in Rummy..

but in playing daddy-mummy

Talking stars and moon to Geet

and whispering in her ears, nothings sweet

😆😉

A suggestion-

Can we now have a sweet baby scene..where Geet is talking to their baby and Maan hears and talks to the baby too??

3. I liked how Maan said 'humara' when Geet said 'mera' and then when she again said it, he looked so shocked

"kyaaa?? bas bete, paraya kar diya haan? jo tumhara, woh mera, har din naya savera"

LOL- sorry I was reminded of an ad I had seen..😆

Anyway and then Maan gets angry cuz Geet doesn't even realize

I liked that more..how she replies to him after her realization..

so used to being alone,

I am not used to sharing with someone

so entirely sharing..the reason for my living

the one I fought for..the one boon that I was given

But I liked the "humara bachha"

It was AWWWW😳

I liked how N-E didn't take Tasha so seriously..

LOL😆

BD's again..

We understand completely..but MISS DD Soo much!!

I hope she comes back soon rejuvinated

4. N-E- Dadi sc- N-E also noticing how maan has become a romeo..Good..chalo she noticed the diff..

thanks CV's if u read this at all- for incorporating this..highlighting GEET's importance. him always thinking of her, and well wanting to be with HEr..and that being noticed by N-E too..

5.Also- Geet said na "yeh sab aapne mere liye kiya hai" She knows him well..kudiye- he does everything for you..good that that level of understanding is being shown- a mature relationship though the nok jhok flavor is still there..

haha..i like the teasing session of Maneet!

Err..I guess that's it..

I won't talk much about the precap except when it comes

Gc- I know you're doing ur best acting without your co-star..lol..trying to be maan without geet is difficult..:)

but thoda sa aur warmth and expression laana zaroori hai na..?

KArishma, piyush- Awesome guys!

KArishma- ur really brilliant in all your scenes!

piyush ko I'd say good luck recovering and hope to see more of you :)

that's all guys!

love to all

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shadowstreet

@shadowstreet

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

😭😭😭😭😭

my emos r same coz of the frst scene. OUR BABY. so touching. I know I was the one complained 2 days bak that why dint MSK buy any gift for Geet. My complain is still there. but when I put myself in the place of this 18 yrs old grl with an uncertain future, thousands fingres pointing about her & her baby's identity & existence then I realize no gift is as precious then this one. A hand of ur beloved, a hug from ur beloved, assurance from him again & again that OUR future is bright & everything is going to b alright from now on & OUR BABY will b our ultimate happiness. thts wht this grl need now. No diamond can bring this smile on her face which was there tonight when his man said our baby will b safe. Also when this man got hurt as he heard her baby from her. So thts the most expensive gift can this wounded grl can ever have. Thank u GHSP team. I told u earlier & told u again I love ur full team. So I bash u up everytime with full authority. My love towards u gave me this authority.😊

Coming back to today's epi.

Its too sad that these days u r continuing the scene continution but u hav to work with body doubles. I hope when both leads r available this continution will remain.

Frst scene was really touchy, lovely & cute.👏 Both of them r accepting that they r one & baby is part of their life.

Maan telling Andesha😡 hes in imp meeting is gud thing. He was showing too much pampering to this imaginary sister of his last few epis. bdw the imaginary sis din get her veichle finally👏 she bring all the bags in KC tht means she was using taxi. liked it. why waste money on imaginary character😆

Geet-Maan romance & teasing each other about thank u note was gud. I wish BD was not there.😭

Dadi_Andesha😡 talk was okay & dadi telling her what Geet called maan was gud too. Why this sissy never ask about her other bros & in law. well I dont mind as she is an imaginary char & MSK NEVER HAD A SISTER😆

Andesha😡 describing her dream man😡😲 I dint listen. But Arjun's entry was good. It wud b more realistic if it was not mud floor. coz blid fight is not miracle thing. It needs skills. Boxer hear the footsteps & breathing of the other one & thus they save himself & attack. But it was good.

NT-Arjun intarction was nice. Arjun has some potential so please use it Cvs.

Overall it was good one to watch. But final thing is MSK NEVER HAD A SISTER😆

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BheegiBasanti

@BheegiBasanti

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

This could have been such a powerful episode but it just fell flat for me for most part.

Dear Geet Writers,

Where do I begin? Without further ado, I am going to jump right in to the key sequences.

Geet - Maan

Now this starting scene should have been the crowning moment of this episode...irrespective of the usage of body doubles. But it just fell flat. It felt like the actors were going through the motions. Some of the dialogs given to Maan, especially when Geet is apologizing, felt unnecessarily over the top. The only part I liked was the screenplay not dragging out the misunderstanding but instead having Geet realize her slip-of-the-tongue mistake immediately. I also liked how the screenplay is showing Geet & Maan being more aware and perceptive of each others reactions as would be normal in a relationship at this stage.

Entry of Arjun

Does each entry, cameo or not, have to be dramatized so much. The whole editing style that juxtaposed the non-existent sister's monologue about her dream guy with Arjun's entry was cliched in a very boring done-to-death kind of way. What was the need to indicate right away that Arjun will be positioned as non-existent sister's love interest in the future...it serves no purpose at all.

I have to also add that I held my breath the whole time between Piyush's entry and his first dialog...I did not want him to pull a Deepak Malhotra. Remember Deepak's entry in Lamhe and his infamous "Pallo" that decimated any hotness quotient he had...for good? 🤣

Naintara - Arjun

Now this was the only watchable scene in today's episode...for me. That said...its impact completely crashed when Arjun pulled a gun out and held it to his head. If Naintara was that important, where was Arjun when she was in the hospital supposedly fighting for her life? Instead, he is shown going to boxing matches...😳

Overall: Average execution of what could have been a fantastic episode.

Edited by darlunia - 14 years ago

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DancinFireflies

@DancinFireflies

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

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Cvz this is 4 the first scene😃🤗

N this is for Annie...........🤢😡🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

No arjun Annie pairing plz....gunda comes hero se badla lene ke liye n targets the sis,its cliched.....😡😡😡😡😡 but as of the scenes indicate m sure u guys r headed in that direction.... replace Nikunj plzzzzzzzzz at least.....

I so wished the first scene would not have been done with bd'z they killed the essence of it.😭😭😭.......... A scene we have been waiting for like soooooooooooooooooo long.....n we get it with bd'z😭😭 though I can't complain as DD is on holiday.....😭

Anyway, the scene was a real treat⭐️....... when maan said hamere bache ko kuch nahi hoga i was all awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww😳👍🏼☺️😃... i like the mutual understanding and maturity in their relationship...GC n DD were excellent there👏....beautifully emoted👏......especially that single expression on GC's face when geet said mera bacha was i don't have words to express how lovely it was👏👏👏👏..... Simply outstanding.......👏 though something was lacking in the scene probably it was due to the bd'z😭

Annie scene, i'll skip🤢..........it was, msk doesn't have a sister 😆😡

Arjun............why was his intro required to be like that😕........it was OTT........ehsaas hua aapko scene was.....what was that.........why was that required...... to tell us that NT's bro loves her a lot........ We guessed that already.......it's obvious.......why a toy gun scene........ Btw KARISHMA u rocked there too...... lovely acting there....😃

There's nothing much write today...it was again a filler for me..........but the first scene⭐️

GC n DD..............👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

KARISHMA......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

piyush........🤔 i'll wait for saturday'z episode....

overall...liked it....

Edited by aiyana - 14 years ago

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AnjanaYYZ

@AnjanaYYZ

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

My Hat to G.C!

I am not a "fan" of any actor.. I don't put them on unrealistic pedestals nor make them my role model. I don't read their blogs as they r not exactly "interesting" logs - more like damp wood that cannot be lite! I have no real interest in their private lives not until or unless it impacts my current favourite show. Yesterday, I read GC's blog I think for the 1st time ever. Kudos to U, dude! 👏 👏👏 It takes balls o steel to say wat u did. Haila! Admitting u submit willingly to submit to ur gf and then standing up to fans who diss her! I may not like Debi ! But, after this I do consider her lucky to have a plucky fellow like u or ur ghost writer in her life😈

An Anvil from the Top🤣🤣🤣

The Geet HSP team hired a chit with no experience and had her hug the male lead! The only things more suicidal might be:

1) Replacing GC ya DD

2) Killing Maan and remarrying DeVeet

3) Miscarriage.

4.) Having Sameera with a wedding ring and baby carriage.

Edited by AnjanaToronto - 14 years ago

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Resmi Chimes

@mi7chimes

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

res~

-------------------- MSK has no SiSTER!!! 😡 ----------- period!! -----------

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shreya_l

@shreya_l

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

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Ab kuch behtar hoon main,
Apne bacche ko,
Khone ke dar se bahar hoon main.
Nayantara ne kahin thi baatein aisi,
Jeevan mein vish gholti ho jaisi.

Us din the hum tum saath,
Shaadi ke liye thama maine tumhara haath.
Phir kyun beete vaqt ko tum karti ho yaad...
Yeh nanhi jaan humari jimmedari,
Mat daro tum kuch soch baari baari....
Kyun tum lagati ho pareshaan mujhe,
Kya tabiyat hai tumhari theek,
Chaltein hain hum Doctor ke pass,
Tabhi ab hogi tassalli mujhe.

Yeh aayi kabaab mein haddi,
Kya bhai reception area mein,
Kheltein the kabaddi....
Yeh bin bulai mehmaan,
Kare apne bhaiya bhabhi ka jeena haraam.
Jaanati nahin kya?
Jeevan mein aur bhi hotein hain rishte,
Kahin bhi aise hi nahin aa tapakte.

Geet samajhati chinta ki nahin koi baat,
Bas thoda hai sir dard,
Jo dega chod thodi der mein saath.
Chinta chodo main aur mera baccha hai theek,
Maan ka chehra badala yeh sunke,
Kyunki chubhe unhe yeh baat sateek.
Maan hue khafa,
Geet ko kuch nahin hai pata...

Itne mein behna ne kiya phone,
Maan ne taala main hoon busy,
Kuch jaroori kaam nahin,
To rakho tum phone.

Sab kuch hai agar theek,
Jao tum yahan kyun ho baithi...
Geet ko tab hua ehsaas,
Baatein chubhi banke faans,
Li usne apni galati sudhaar,
Mera nahin Humara baccha mere pyaar....
Akele rehne ki aadat si thi,
Ab aap saath hain main bhool gayi thi.

Judein hain hum aise,
Ek dor ke do sirein ho jaise...
Tum ho taana aur main is jeevan ka baana...
Ab aage khayaal mein bhi,
Humein juda mat karna.

Tasha ne diya Anvesha ko jhataka,
Dekho tumhara bhai Geet ke pyaar mein hai bhataka.
Chalo Anvesha abhi bhaiya ko jao bhool,
Mat chubho banke aankhon mein shool.

Geet Maan ko chidhati,
Kya english aapko nahin hai aati?
Kya likha hai padh sakta hoon main,
Yeh shukriya kis liye is se anjaan hoon main.
Jawaab to hai mila, par dekho Maan ne Geet ko cheda ab.
Mousse tha kharaab, phir bhi
Diya tumhe maine bahon ka haar,
Uske liye dhanyavaad ho kehti,
Itna hai pyaar....

Bano nahin jaante ho is shukriya ka raaz,
Anvesha se meri dosti karayi,
Hai mujhe is ka ehsaas....

Bin kahe jaane ek duje ke dil ki baat,
GHSP team aapko dhanyavaad,
Dene ke liye yeh pyaari sugaat.

Anvesha kya jaane pyaar hai kya cheez,
Pehle chakh to le yeh nacheez.
Apne sapanon ka kar rahi bakhaan,
Mujhe impress karne mein,
Yah hai ab bhi nakaam.

Dekhtein hain aaya ek naya insaan,
Jo abhi Anvesha se hai anjaan,
Arjun Singh Rathod....
Dikhaye boxing ring mein apna jor,
Jeeta hai match voh,
Charon taraf hai taaliyon ka shor...

To ab hum dekhenge,
Double 'AA' batteries (Arjun-Anvesha) ka kamaal,
GHSP viewers ho jao taiyaar,
Hone waala hai dhamaal....

Nayantara phir kuch bune naya jaal,
Aage hoga kya Maan tumhara haal,
Intezaar ki ghadiyaan hui khatam,
Bhai hai aaya jiska naam hai Arjun.

Dadi batayein Maaneet ki kahani,
Anvesha kahe....
Pyaar nahin puraana,
Dadi chalo karein shaitaani,
Chalo khelein hum rammi bhai,
Chodo mujhe ek phone call hai aayi...

Geet nihare chaand sitaare,
Par chajje ke kyon khadi hai itne kinare?
Maan kahen raju pyaare,
Geet jaane yeh client nahin humare,
Asli baat jaane voh,
Dadi aur Anvesha ko diya akele chod.

Nayantara hai khush, bhai hai aayein,
Shikayat bhi voh unse lagaye.
Arjun hain khafa....
Nayantara ne di kyon khud ko sazaa.
To behna dekho tum kuch khaas,
Apno ke khone ka ehsaas.
Hathon mein hain Gun,
Nayantara ke hosh hain gum.
Pareshaani hai to suljhaon main,
Jindagi se khilwaad nahin karna tumhein.

Arjun aur Nayantara....
Khiske bhai behen hain lagate,
Maan aur Anvesha....
Tum reh jaaoge hakke bakke...

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