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awesome parts. loved them
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Part 5

NT: Oh Geet come here ' how's my dress? Good naa ' he likes pink very much he says I look 100000 more beautiful in Pink '.you know last time he bought me that pink dress ' wanted me to wear it ' but it was very ..mm' ummm' I told him I will definitely wear it after shaadi' he sadid OK on honeymoon (she blushes her color the same as her dress)

She gets the dress'. Geet's jaw dropped open '😲 the dress was very, very revealing {remember girls its early 90's} ' Di it barely covers the B*&*** and look its sleeve less OMG OMG' he wanted you to wear this that too before being tied up officially

NT: (blushes) ☺️ya I know that's why I said after shaadi ' Geet don't tell anyone ..OK

Geet: but Di when did you meet him like you were in Ahmedabad he was in'.(Parminder comes running with other cousins of some what same age ones from Bombay)

Parminder: so this is the girl my Di she is the heroine ' is she not beautiful' my jiju is flat on her'

NT hides the dress Geet on seeing this chase the kids out. She sadly turns and smiles at her Di and says; Di ise rakh do koi dekh legamain guests ko dekh kar aati hoan.

On her way she meets VikramJeet (he is now 21 has completed his B.com and is pursuing Law from Delhi University)

Vikramjeet: hi Geet how are you? How were your exams?

Geet: fine, my exams were good will definitely get a good college.😭

Vikramjeet (notices her sad face): Geet you still for Bro' (she looks away)' come on don't fool me' why don't you tell your family or allow me I will tell mine'. Bro is acting stubborn ' does not even react when I ask' is senselessly smiling ' I don't know what he is hiding'.

Geet (interrupts): he is not hiding'(sighs)' he is happy'. He loves Di'

Vikramjeet: wait a sec' who told you this rubbish'

Geet: Di told me' she told me he has been giving her gifts on and off' Di also showed me the dress he gifted her' the pink dress' I tell you it is a sin for a girl to wear such dress before marriage' so they have decided to give it a try after shaadi'. (sobs bitterly'.. quickly controls herself)

Vikramjeet: hey there is some confusion' when did Bro meet NT and when did he give him gifts and all' Geet I am telling you there is some big confusion' I know Bro likes you ' maybe he is not in love but he will want to marry you

Geet: Stop it 🤢Vikramjeet,' enough' don't you remember he himself told me that II were way to young for him

Vikramjeet: that was 12 yrs back Geet now you are if marriageable age'. Things change Geet' opinions change

Geet: that's what I am saying' change is inevitable '. And your Bro never said he liked me' and your Beeji promised I can have Manjeet only after I complete my Degree. Lets not discuss it ' its over one sided charm brings only harm 💔its all right'lets move with time ' it was my stupidity I were only 5 then

Vikramjeet: at 5 you had more senses' forget it ' 'm telling you Geet there is some confusion (he leaves)

Sulekha calls Geet ab\nd asks her to call the guests for tea its already 4:00pm

Geet climbs up the steps and as she is not concentrating misses a step and is about to fall Maan is coming down the steps sees Geet fall moves fast and holds her hand' saving her from falling' Geet is terrified and closes her eyes' Maan encircles her slim waist 😳and as if knowing it is Maan she opens her eyes'. Maan looks passionately in her eyes after a while comes to his senses and says Ms Hoshiyarpur express konsa station choot raha tha'(smiles)😊

Geet comes back to reality and shrugs: Thank you, '.(waits for him to leave her)' will you please leave me' I am safe'

Maan: 'oo' ya.. why not .(reluctantly leaves her) ' so how are you? You always missing your steps

Geet: (sarcastically) 😡old habits die hard'

Maan confused looks at her quite uncertainly' Geet walks to the Guest rooms😔

Turns and says: tea is ready every one is waiting for you all' (composes herself and goes in the room) asks every one to come down.

Every one gathers for the tea' Geet helps in serving' Maan is a bit confused by Geet's attitude towards him '

he so much wanted to see her he missed her so much' and now he is so unhappy about this engagement'
he just wanted one hint from Geet's side and he will wait forever for her'
he so much wanted to talk to her' but Geet was not even looking at him '
OK Maan she has now grown up she is mature now '
maybe she has forgotten that shaadi proposal'. Maybe it was her childish dream' maybe '.
So its all one sided has always been one sided'.
OK I will not pursue her after all she is way to young for me I will be like a Bodhdha (old man) for her'"kya karo ram mujhe bodhdha mil gaya"
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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Part 6

Its dinner time

Every one gathers again' Savitri asks Rajji to call NT to join them for dinner

Geet brings NT'. NT touch everyone's feet and greets all the young ones' she sits with Prabha and Kripa (after a months Kripa, Prerna and Musakn are to be married to Angad, Anurag and Rahul at that time they will formally announce the engagement)😊

Geet is a bit confused 😒and slowly asks NT to go and sit with Savitri and the twins (Muskan and Prerna) but NT declines saying she is comfortable.

NT starts talking to Kripa and mean while look around the table as if searching for someone'. She is paying less attention to Kripa'

Kripa notices and asks: NT is everything all right ' you are looking for someone

NT: apke Bro nahin dikh rahe

Kripa: OH bho nahin aa paya. He has to collect some documents from his college.

NT: (jokingly) kal taka a jaenge ya phir bho bhi nahin

Kripa: ya he won't be able to manage ' you know he thinks we are here for some gettogather he knows nothing about engagement'

NT: (confused) he does not know ' why? 😒

Kripa: its just family the sagai is not officical ' so what if he's not here' he will be when we announce officially

NT: (releaved) OK🤔

Mean while Maan all the time notices Geet ' he even tried to talk to her but failed she was avoiding him

After dinner when Geet and Muskan are cleaning the tables he comes and pretends to help them' Geet deliberately avoids him '😕

Maan is fed up' he gives up all the hope'.

He goes to Vikramjeet : Vicky main kya kara ' kuch samjh nahin aa raha hain'. Bho mujhse baat bhi karne ko taiyar nahin hai ' bho sab main tere se shaadi karoongi lagta hai uska bachpana tha'.now she has grown out of me😕

Vikramjeet; (angry) 😡enough Bro aap bade ho iska matlab yeh nahin aap yeh sab karoge aur main chup rahonga'. Leave her alone' she already is mourning at her loss'. But no this is not her loss.. this is her gain' why Bro flirting with 2 girls at a time why' what u want to tell Geet' look Geet grow up now 'm going to marry your sis so forget me and leave me'

Maan: 😕Vicky shut up what is all this 2 girls and all what rubbish you are talking' here I am dying to talk to Geet and you saying all this bakwaas'. Vicky you always knew my feelings for her then what happened today..😲

Vikramjeet: Bro recently we have not been in touch and without my knowledge you did all this '. Enough Bro I don't want to discuss' please let me sleep😔

Maan totally confused 😕first Geet and now Vikramjeet'

He tries hard to sleep but is not able to ' so goes on the terrace for some fresh air

Meanwhile,

Geet and NT are talking ' only NT talking and Geet listening'

NT: isn't it strange kal sagai hai and Dev is not present' Dev ke bina sagai kaise hogi' purane zamaane ki tarah' (laughs)'😃😛

Geet: Di kya ap bhi Dev ho ya na ho kya pharak padta hai'

NT: LOL dulha na sahi dulhe ki talwaar sahi ha ha ha😛

Geet: Di what are you saying'😕 just go to sleep on your excitement you have lost your mind you need sleep' wait take off this saree and wear the night dress please

NT: ya for some more time (blushes)☺️' then I won't have to take of this saree on my own and why will I need a night dress then'(Geet embarrassed 😳by her Di's talk ) ' Geet tune kisi ko batana to nahin hai na ' sun pata hhai unhone mujhe K*** kiya hai☺️

(Geet alarmed) 😒not once but many times'. (NT is on 7th 😉cloud)' pehele sirf forhead par 'phir dheere dheere ' tu samjh rahi hain naa '. Kuch dino ke baad cheeks par'. Phir (blushes hard) ' that day he was very happy ' of course it was my birthday' he took me for a movie then dinner' then when he dropped me at the hostel ' our first L**lock❤️🤗

' OMG Geet you won't belive after 2&1/2 yrs of dating that was my first'. Everyone laughed at me and said you north Indians are so slow 'but then it happened quite often☺️

(Geet could not bear any more)😭

Geet: Di please don't you think I am a way too young to listen to all this' please Di sleep'good night😭

NT: good night' sweet dreams' I will definitely have many to night.😛

Geet tosses and turns '. Not able to sleep goes to the terrace for fresh air🤢

Precap: Maan and Geet on the terrace

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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maan also dosent know abt his enagagement ah ?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome updates....
plz clear ds misunderstandng soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
lovely, nice part. loved it.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ff........do add me to PM list 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

nice fanfic continuee sooon and add me to your pm listt

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