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nice part...thx for the pm

great update. please update ASAP

LOVED the update:) haha love this radhika even more now...she is so spirited and diff from the CB radhika...its a refreshing change... continue soon:)

Devika yaar... was that the family intro...😕 You confused me... I was thinking they are all joking!😆 Silly me.....

wooow! mind blowing!!! i love Radz personality!!! i'm thirsty for more............

Wow! loved readng update...whats nxt?

Carry on dear we r waiting for the battle to begin.😆😃

Part-8

Surender was enjoying the Chandenpur morning while sipping to his morning hot coffee..

"you missed all these na'.. suchi's voice brought him back to reality.. he looked at her with a small happy smile..

Suchi came near and touched his shoulder' " so what is the next step'"

Surender looked at her seriously.."anyway we came here for a week, let's spend one week and then will go back, what you think?'..

"I have one week vacation too.., Dev may miss his few classes, but I think he made arrangements for notes and all and he is in touch with his classmates.. so..".. suchi said in normal tone..

"hum".. surrender acknowledged..

"Lechu is fine as usual' she is the happiest one to be away from her classes"' suchi said with a smile..

"I know that, if we ask her she may say she will be more than happy to stay here, than in Delhi..'.. then with a pause.. "where is she?'' surrender asked..

Suchi: she is with Sushma.. scratching her head with silly questions'

Surender smiled imagining that scene'... his sister and his daughter.. both same category/...'

Dev walked in.. and joined his parents..

"Dev, do you want to join me, I am going to Mohan's farm " Surender asked ..

Surender: it's ok' be careful , ok.. ha, anyway we are going there for dinner tonight."

Suddenly Dev: Dinner.. is it necessary for me to come .. Can I be with daadaji'

Suchi tried to control her laugh, looking at Dev.. Surender looked at his wife in wonderment.. Dev also looked at her suspiciously..

"somebody is scared".. suchi tried to voice out..

Dev gave an astonish look .."scared.. who?'

Suchi: "you, who else.. you are scared of Radhika , right?"

Dev with broken words " no, I am not.. I just want to spend some time with daadaji, that's all.. why .. why .. you are bringing Radhika's name.. now' he was able to complete his words..

Dev again with a chuckled throat: Daadaji coming too.. Ok, then what is my problem.. I am coming too.. saying that he walked out trying to cover his embarrassment..

"Ok, come back soon , ok.. granny may ask about you.. also, DEV' BE CAREFUL., Don't get wet this time..' suchi's warning voice ' Dev speed up his steps to get away from there..

Surender: why you need to tease him like that?

"What you think of Radhika?".. surrender asked in a thoughtful way..

"hum..'

Suchi tightening her forhead ": why did you ask?"

Surender: simply' I mean, after listening to all these stories, I mean she was waiting for her prince, one or the other way it happened to be our own son, even though she acted differently, it was him..".

Suchi.: just keep that in your mind.. if Dev hear that, he will pack up today itself.. so better be careful.. saying that she went inside with a smile'

Surender with a smile on his lips looked into the nature'.

Dev was walking, enjoying the beauty of the nature' he was walking in his own world.. photography is his passion and he won't see anything else when the beauty of nature come in front of him in full force..'

"hello hello' sara dekhke chalna' .. hello'. Oye oye.. '.. finally that warning voice entered into his ear.. he looked at the voice side resentfully.. and found a girl wearing a helmet, on a scooty, is looking at him with her rounded eyes' he recognized them easily now.. "so you left the tree and now trying to fight with the motor".. with a smirky smile on his lips.

Dev in a normal tone " nothing miss ' do you have any plan, replacing somebody climbing on the tree '. Or ya, "..

"oye oye.. you better stop there' otherwise'' Radhika in her loudest fighting tone..

Dev in a relaxed tone 'otherwise what?'

Radhika lost all her nerve.. " what I did wrong , Oh my God.. why I need to see his face in the morning itself.."' looking up at the sky..

'You are blessed to see my face.. so you should be thankful''. Dev stressed his words..

"Deedi, please, I need to be on time at school".. the pleading voice of Rahul caught Dev's attention..

"but bhayya, we don't have a bike, we have only this scooty,.. and I am too small to ride a bike.." Rahul replied innocently..

"Ok, that's the limit..".. she took few deep breath.. "Rahul, do you want me to take you to school or not?'

Rahul realized he doesn't have any other choice : yes deedi, I want you to take me to the school..

Dev just stood there in as if still trying to understand what she just said.. a smile appered on his face.. "so Ms. Radhika acknowledged her defeat so easily.. I thought she is like lioness, this is just like a rat she escaped.. so really afraid to fight with me.." he stood there looking at the road where she flew away'

'Ye, prince charming' move away . otherwise you may get hurt".. the voice of a villager brought him back to reality and he turned and found a big group of buffaloes coming.. he moved to the side quickly in a safer place.. he took few stills.. and asked the villager.." where are you taking them"' he said 'to the meadow"..

He stood there watching their slow march past.. Radhika's words echoed in his ears' ..so she might be knowing.. he thought..

Later that day..

Surender and Mohan were talking about the new technologies used in agriculture.. Dev was just enjoying their talk, and watching the people doing their work.. and really got impressed seeing the neatness and cleanliness around there.. everything was planted in a nice row.. there was special path for water to flow.. he couldn't find any weed anywhere... he saw the healthy, happy vegetation all around him....

Mohan listened to her calmly' and then his eyes rolled in full circle in joy, he lifted his daughter in his arms and circled her around' 'I know you will make it beta.. You are my daughter.. and I am so proud of you..'

Finally he put her down and then looking at the workers.." ye, aaj sabko chutti hei.. go and enjoy.. Radhika's result came and she passed in flying colors..".. and he went and hugged Surender sharing his happiness..

'so that's the reason she controlled herself in the morning.. she was in tension'hum' now I got it..' Dev thought to self'

Surender also hugged her.. and congratulated her' and he looked at Dev.. he came near and congratulate her.. she just said thank you and then put her hands in her dad's pocket and took some notes'

"Ok beta, we are also going home.. don't get late'' Mohan reminded..

"no, I will be on time , thanks babuji'' she ran towards her scooty.. one of the worker already got that straight.. she went and turned the engine on..

"sabhalke jaana betiya'' Mohan's voice..

"jee, babuji..' as she drove away..

Time passed by..

Rohini was looking at the porch side: where is she? She suppose to be here by now.. talking to self and was getting impatient..

'don't worry behu, she will be here on time.. why you need to show all this now".. Santa Varma asked in her normal tone..

Santa; what's so special. Today is her day, let her enjoy' you should feel proud of her..

Santa: Rohini' why you need to think so hard on this.. let them come at their time and let Radh come on her time..

Santa: tell me frankly, are you all planning something..

Rohini: nothing Maaji.. they are from city, they may expect all these , right..

Santa: what they need to expect.. this is our place and we will behave according to our convenience..

Rahini: not that maaji..

Rohini: maaji, slow down.. finally she got somebody into her talks.. You only think, does anyone will think a girl climbing tree.. I can't even imagine her doing that..

Santa: ya, why can't a girl do that.. Even I was dreaming of a prince to come take my Radhika away' but this I don't think..

Santa turned her face away: no, I didn't.. but Radhika told me everything..

'mummmm'.. an unhappy voice came out from daadi's throat..

''''.

Rohini was serving water to everyone.. Sushma asked softly.. " where is Radhika?'

Rohini rolled her eyes and Sushma understood..

Soon came Lechu's voice : where is Radhika deedi..?

Mr. Mohan caught that question: Rohini, call Radhika..

Daadi: so you are Lechu.. come here' let me ask you something.. she called Lechu near and asked some questions generally' finally she asked " where is Dev?"

'Bro is coming with daadaji"' lechu replied innocently..

Finally dev and Yeshpal came in..

Santa Varma came near Dev and looked deep into his eyes' with unknown reason he also looked at her affectionately' He bend down and touched her feet and took the blessing.. she just hugged him saying' ' so the Prince is here now' she whispered into his ears..

'I am Dev" Dev replied.. she just smiled at that reply' and guided him in'

"Where is Radhika, I brought her a present"' yeshpal asked Rohini..

Mohan: Rohini, how long we are waiting for her.. call her'

Rohini again looked at daadi's face helplessly..

"I will bring her.. one minute" she went in..

Dev was feeling alone, so he stood from his seat and went to the porch' It was getting dark out.. suddenly his eyes caught a slow movement of something in the dark'.. he got conscious and looked at there keenly...

so as you know it will be Radhika.. will try for more fun.. just a try, don't know how you will feel.. actually I can visualize each scene with bacjgroud music.. I wish I could write that all.. but I hope you are able to imagine the farm.. imagine the road... imagine Dev's expressions, Radhika's imrati image... I hope.. I wish.. take care Devika

DEvika dont worry we will imagine all that and more u just keep writing and giving us hints. thats a quick update forgot to mention liked the family tree and the photographs of Dev and Rad to kiss scene😃

SUPERB PARTS JUST CARRY ON WITH YOUR EXTRA ORDINARY IMAGINATION .. I CAN'T TELL U IN WORDS HOW MUCH I ENJOY WHILE READING THESE MIND BLOWING PARTS . THANKS FOR YOUR ENDLESS EFFORTS FOR UPDATING SO FAST.