LOVE A SACRIFICE--FANFIC TIA RANVEER

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Posted: 20 years ago
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THIS FDNFIC STARTS AFTER THAT MOMENT WHEN TIA CAME BACK FRM JAIL

RANVEER IN JAIL THINKING OF ALL MOMENTS HE SPEND WITH TIA HIS VALENTINE DAY ANDD ON ISLAND AND AFTER THAT THE SCENE WHEN TIA CAME WITH RS TO GIVE THE GOONS .........

R:-TIA AAP HAMPE AISA DOUBT KAREGI YE T OHAMNE NAHI SOCHA THA HAMNE NE TO AAPKO AANE SE BHI MANA KIYA THA AUR PHIR BHI AAP SOCHTI HE KI HAMNE APNI KIDN. KHUD KARVAYI

KYA KAMI REH GAYI HAMARE PYAR ME TIA.......

TIA AT HER ROOM............THINKING OF RANVEER WHEN HE BROUGHT HIS MOBILE QUITE EXPENSIVE AND ALSO WHEN HE MOVED AWAY TO TALK ON PHONE

BY THINKING THIS SHE WAS GETTING MAD AND THEN HER ANGELS COME AND TELLS HER THAT SHE SULD TRUST HIM AND ON HER LUV

SHY GOES TO JAIL AND SEES R . R WAS HAPPY ON SEEING HER

SHY THEN TRIES TO MAKE R 😭😭AGAINST R

S:-TIA KO AISA NAHI KARNA CHAIYE THA.VO JOOT BHI TO BOL SAKTI THI NA.USNE TUMSE 1 BAAR PUCHA HI NAHI AUR TUMHE BLAME KAR DIYA............

R:-SHY AGAR AAP HAMSE TIA KI BURAYI KARNE AAYI HE TO PLZ NA KARE HUM AAJ BHI TIA KE BARE ME KUCH BURA NAHI SUN SAKTE

S BECOMES JUST LIKE RED RED JEALOUS

OK GUYS THIS WAS MY FIRST FANFIC

PLZ SAY I SULD CONT OR NOT

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Posted: 20 years ago
#2
amazing..

plz contine Hiral

(there was one topic tht no tia ranveer fic are written these day.. thanx for startign 1 hiral)

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Posted: 20 years ago
#3
good attempt!!! cont soon 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#4
THANX PEOPLE OK SO HEREEEEE IT GOES

TIA THEN CALLS HER DAD AND ASKS HIM TO COME BACK AS SOON AS POSS.SHY WITH LATTY TRIES TO MAKE NEW PLANS

TIA DAD COMES TO MEET HER.SHE CRIES A LOT AND TELLS HER PAPA TO GET RID R OUT OF JAIL.

T:-PAPA TIA NE PATA NAHI KISEKE BAAT OMEIN AAKE R PE SAAKH KIYA R BI TIA SE NARAAZ HE.PAPA R KO KUCH HO GAYA TO TIA WILL NOT BE ABLE TO LIVE PAPA............

SUMIT AHUJA UNDERSTANDS ALL AND THINKS THAT THEY BOTH LUV EACHOTHER AND ALSO REMEM THAT DAY WHEN HE ASK ABOUT THE TRIP ATSIDS PLACE . HE BECOMES HAPPY AS BCOZ HE ALSO WISHED SO

S:- TIA JAB MEIN R PE SAAKH NAHI KA RAHA T OTUM KASIE KAR SAKTI HO HUM USE KUCH NAHI HONE DENGE

AT JAIL

S AND T REACHES THEIR AND SHY IS ALREADY WITH R. T FEELS JEALOUS . S TALKS WITH POLICE AND T SEES R ADN R SEES T .

RANVEER THEN GETS FREE FRM THE JAIL..........

hiral thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#5
SO ITS HERE

S:- CHALO R PHELE COLLEGE JATE HAIN,SIT IN THE CAR......
R:- SIR AGAR AAPKI IJAJAT HO T OHUM TIA SE KUCH BAAT KARNA CHATE HAIN....... TO HUM CHALTE CHALTE AA SAKTE HAIN......
T GETS SURPRISED.......
S:- OK ITS ALRIGHT I UNDERSTAND OK BYE T AND R
R:- THANKU SIR, CHALE T
T NODS HER HEAD

CHALTE CHALTE THEY COME NEAR THAT GARDEN WHERE THEY FIRST TIME PROPOSED EACH OTHER

R:-KYA AAP HAMARE SAATH IS GARDEN MEIN CHALEGI.......... YES WHY NOT RANVEER.............
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
nice but continue fast and make it little longer part pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fast it's awsummmmmmmmmmmmmm
kutie thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
hey hiral thanxxxxxxxx a lot that you started a tia-ranny fic.and i rlly luved your all the 3 parts.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.
hiral thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#9
THANX GUYS FOR SUCH COL EDBACK

R:- TIA KYA AAPKO YE PLACE YAAD HE YAHAN HUM AUR AAP..................LEKIN AB TO SAB CHANGE HO GAYA HE NA

T:- LEKIN AB AB KYA R TIA KO SAMJAH NAHI AAYA ..........ABHI KUCH CHANGE NAHI HUA R TUM AISA KYU KEH REH HO

R:- YE AAP KEH RAHI HO.........AAP NE HUMPE DOUBT KIYA...........AAAPSE TO ACHI SHY HE UNHONE TO HUME HOSLA DENA CHAHA...........

T FEELS JEALOUS.SHE STARTS CRYING ...............:- KYA HAMRA US ISLAND PE DIYA GAYA VADA ITNa JALDI TUT JAYEGA KYA HAMARA PYAR ITNA WEAK HAIN

😭 😭 😭
PLZ R TUM T KO EK BAAR MAAF KARDO PHULEEZ.......
T IS IN VERY BAD POSITION R FEELS VERY SORRY AND STARTS TO GO TOWARDS TIA BUT STOPS HIMSELFS..........
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
its awesome šŸ‘ but just one suggestion.
please dont write in capitals,its kinda difficult to read

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