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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

nimmo.........awesome update.........Kala the tantrika..........she just fits into the role.........Dutta ran away.....n he just came at the right time to save Naku.........update soon.........

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Nice updt!!!!!!!!!!!

Dutta-Nakku face to face............Manjri was a ghost............Dutta iis a hero now..........out off Kalas spell...............what nxt?????????

waitng eagerlyyyyyyyy. Thanx f PM

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Hey Nimmo thanx for the wonderful update and PM 🤗Manjiri was a ghost 😆...Wow finally dutta and naku meet😍..he saved naku at the right time....our handsome hero 😍...can"t wiat for the nxt part ...pls jaldi update karna... u take care and see ya around...👍🏼👏🤗

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Tahreem

@Tahreem05

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

What a hilarious update dear🤣.oh my my wht ve u done with the characters😆.Just imagine if ur ff become a real horror show with all the actors playing,u ll gonna give me a belly laugh...........🤣
Its too much i cant take it anymore.......🤣
Update soon........😳

Edited by Tahreem05 - 14 years ago

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

😲omg wa wz manjiri planin 2 do wv naku .. am so glad dutta cme jus in tym lol nw naku cn run awy wv im lol 😆 ukno lyk da jungl scne hehe...

kala shudv bin da dian lol 😆 soo dutta knowz truth bou kala ka kala sach 😆😆

gr8 update hun n thnxx 4 da pm..continue sooon..mwa.xx

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

another nice update ..loved it ...glad dutta is out kalas magic spell ...so finally tasha meet and happy to know that dutta has seen her real face ...so no fr in this ff i guess

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554064

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Very nice update dear......Kala's tantricgiri n her pooja😆😆😆too good,,,,,fanally D is out of K;s magic,,,,n he will Destoy Daien,,,hun its Kala or manjiri....

Tasha met in moonlight....very nice,,,nw its really interesting,,,,,thnks for Pm buddy

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Well done.. kala as the tantric is fab... actually she shld be the chudail... 🤣 .. rocking update... Glad to see Dutta there to save Nakku ❤️

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Nimrah

@dusk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

PART 5

naku wz shokd not see manjiri dear she wz bit scared....

kaun hotm r itni raat ko kya krae hoyha par???

wo me yha talaab par ae 😕the... apni dost k sathwo yhe the pta nae kha gae....

mhara dmag to thikanay par hay 😡 itni raat ko zarurat kya the yha anay ki 😡 tmhay pta nae hay is jaga k baray may kya kaha jata hay 😡

😭mjhay kya pta wo to manjiri lae the mjhay yha magr wo pta nae kha gae......................

kha jaskte ho wo yhasay chalo dhundtay hain tumhari dost ko 😡

nakusha wz quit scared nd upset nd did not want to follow dat stranger but for the sake of manjiri she went wd hm............

nakusha wz followng dutta jst dan dutta stoppd nd askd nakku....

tm apni ye payal utar kar phekdo 😡 ye chan chan chan mjhse bardasht nae hoti😡

nakusha: magar mene kha pehnihay payal...............

tm behas buht karti ho dikhao ...😡 (bt jst dan he realizd dat nakusha wznt wearing ny payal..😲)

agr tm ne payal nae pehni to ye awaz kha say arae hay...😕 kae tumhari dost nay to nae pehni 😕...

nakusha : han hoskta hay...

nd dan both ran after chan chan 😆 jst dan nakku felt like sum one is behind her wen she trnd no one ws dre nakku wz scared nd ran towards dutta nd *bumpd* 😆

nd fall nd dutta holded her by her waist 😍

focus is on nakushaz face... shez nervous scared u can see mix feeling on her face 😳

and dutta (em so in luv wid gadha dutta so i made hm gadha here too)😆 watchng nakku xpression less ....

jst dan dey heard sum noise........ falling of pots... flying of bats nd dan aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

nakusha nd dutta both shokd

jst dan naku says :ye to manjiri ki awaz hay........

dutta nd nakku went in nd found a body lying on floor blood is flowng nd head is separated from body 😭

nd it wz none odr dan manjiri

Edited by dusk - 14 years ago

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Khushi

@--khushi--

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

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So from now its started getting bit scary...........................

I was reading ur post.................... I was lost in reading it when mum just simply said Khushi & kept her hand on my shoulder.......................... I was sooooooooo scared....................

she said hua kya hai sirf awaaj hi to lagai hai.....................

pata hai dant padi mujhe..................

oye hoye Dutta n Nakku met.............................. manjiri ke sath purana killa tak aa sakti hai........................... aur Dutta usse stranger lagta hai..................... Stupid girl......................

So minjiri is not bhootni..................... Then who else??????

plz update soon..............................

Edited by khushi0318 - 14 years ago