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Posted: 14 years ago
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Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow. The important thing is not to stop questioning. A. Einstein
Avdesh was unable to catch up with his quarry, Lal Singh. His face, wrought with fury and frustration he stares after the car...after going to such length, disguising himself and his men....LS goes away so easily....

....At the haveli, Bhootni is decorating the house colourfully and fesitively, she didn't go to that much trouble for her devar's wedding!....She is all excited and aflutter, at last her vengenace will be completed, LS head will decorate a platter....Arpita is watching all with perplexness and slight shock at the other woman's bloodthirsty attitude....

Suddenly, a servant comes running...Avdesh is here. Bhootni goes running and starts her spiel about how proud she is that he has completed her vengenace, that he got LS's head and etc....Avdesh stood like a rock, his face hard and black with anger...At last he admit's his defeat - a slight smile tilt's Arpita's lips at hearing her husband has not committed murder - but Bhootni is devasted...she runs off and cries while holding the picture of her dead husband...Avdesh comes and has his emotional screws tightened even more as Bhootni continues on with her fake tears and words...🤢😡

Avdesh completely falls for her words and the guilt she lays on him....He is outside, washing the dirt and failure off him as he recalls his quarry's escape and bhootni's words....He suddenly see's Arpita praying and rage overtakes him as he rememberd her leaving words to him earlier in the day - whether to pray for his success or defeat.....He comes rushing to her and launches his attack, too blinded by guilt and emotional overload...He yells at her that she is the first wife to ever pray for her husband's failure.....Arpita looks on stunned, he cuts her off and storms off.....

Life without love is like a tree without blossoms or fruit. Kahlil Gibran

Arpita since hearing about LS being in the vicinty and seeing the change in her husband, has prayed for his safety and safe return. In a burst of honesty, she candidly told her husband she wasn't sure whether to pray for his success or failure but she would always pray for his safe return......This has come back to haunt her as Avdesh took out his frustration and fury on her, too blinded by his percieved failure and guilt to assimilate why Arpita said what she did, nor did he ask what she was praying for, instead jumping to conclusion. Yet he craves her love and the stability she represents, his yearning for her is palpable....he is secure enough in her love to lash out at her....for she is convenient....Arpita, like a strong tree, is buffetted by his temper but she will withstand all to stand straight once more....
My thoughts:
Well the episode was mostly about vengeance....and Avdesh's planned failure.....the guess at the moment is why Bhootni did that?...was it because she has links with LS or to keep Avdesh on a leash?....She knows him well and she played him very, very well...piling on the guilt....how much more can he cope with?...It is not about emotional maturity...all human's have a trigger point, some more explosives than others...for Avdesh, his trigger is his father and brother's death, his guilt at being the survivor and being grateful to have the guidance of bhootni....all this is used against him repeatedly to make him do bhootni's bidding, to blind him to the real reality....
Then we have Arpita, who married the man she loves...now she is living with the reality, which she often finds frightening and difficult to accept ...her love wants to make sure her husband is kept safe and is on the right path. She is young and inexperienced so says whatever is in her heart...and for most part Avdesh understands, loves her for her innocence, the one thing he lost at the age of 12/14ys when his world exploded......yet at his failure to catch LS, he is buckling under a tremendous load - a mixture of guilt, grief, fury, self recrimination and second guessing - he is looking to understand what happened, he see's Arpita and lashes at the convenient scapegoat. .......Most importantly, he is furious that he has failed her - as a husband. He knows he married her but that is all he had done. He has not made her his wife and cannot do that until his oath is fulfilled.....so that is one more load to bear....it is an explosive mixture.....Arpita needs to be stronger, not subservient all the time...she needs to speak up more, demand her husband's attention to her words and to her....
Avdesh for his part is blinded by what happened....we have seen him buckling under the load, caught in a trap that is slowly squeezing his reason for being....he see's his future in Arpita and his past in Bhootni and he is stuck in the crossroad, unable to go forward as the tangible fingers of the past holds on tight......His temper frays easily, and so far Arpita is the target...you only hurt the one you love the most...but when his temper cools and the rage lifts he knows she is not to blame....like the post drunk scene, we shall soon see another moment when he understands and acknowledges that Arpita is his and means him well....yet I feel worried, he needs to start questionning and not lay it all on Arpita....he really needs to see things for what it is and lay the blame where it squarely belongs. At Bhootni's feet. Yet that will be the very last veil lifted from his eyes, as even his mind will shield away from that...for his very foundation will be rocked and he will be lost. Arpita, will be his lifeline then, towing him back.
Well, friends, let's hear your thoughts on this matter.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi dreamy
where r u?
i miss u r nice text. u know dreamy,i cant write english well coz my first lang is persian & the second is french. but i love u r analysis.
exactly, i agree with u . arpita full of passion , life,vitality.hope to future ... & she wants only a simple life with love her husband. for this reason she couldnt understand avis terms. by the other hand, bahuji is full of vengeanc,grief, mental complex . avi stummers between 2 women , he have to handle this hard terms.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superbly written...You know it's so noticable that Avdesh takes out all his frustrations on Arpita,which means he feels he can take the liberty with her where as he seems to draw a line with everyone else including his mom & bahuji.... Thatz good but it should not be anger all the time!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chista

hi dreamy
where r u?
i miss u r nice text. u know dreamy,i cant write english well coz my first lang is persian & the second is french. but i love u r analysis.
exactly, i agree with u . arpita full of passion , life,vitality.hope to future ... & she wants only a simple life with love her husband. for this reason she couldnt understand avis terms. by the other hand, bahuji is full of vengeanc,grief, mental complex . avi stummers between 2 women , he have to handle this hard terms.

Hi Chista,
I was so busy this weekend and this morning running errends, only after that could I sit down and write this...😊
I love to learn languages but seem hopeless at it...I know bit of bengali, hindi, french, spanish, italian...English is the only language I know proficiently...😉
Thanks for liking and yes, Avi stuck between the two...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Dreamy🤗!! I know Chista already asked you this but I still want to say "Where the hell where you?"..
Anyway your writting is as usual 👏👏...... Poor Avi is totally stuck😔. And that bhootni is such a dramebaaz😡😡. I was feeling so bad when Avi was just standing near the door and this bhootni was going on and on about how proud she is of him even when she knew that he didnt succeed😔. Poor guy was feeling so guilty. And he took out all his frustration on Arpi. You are right about the part that we hurt the ones we love the most. But I hope he doest keep hurting her all the time. And I liked this line of urs a lot:
"he see's his future in Arpita and his past in Bhootni and he is stuck in the crossroad, unable to go forward as the tangible fingers of the past holds on tight"
This line explains Avi's condition perfectly😳👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: laxmi73

Superbly written...You know it's so noticable that Avdesh takes out all his frustrations on Arpita,which means he feels he can take the liberty with her where as he seems to draw a line with everyone else including his mom & bahuji.... Thatz good but it should not be anger all the time!!!

Laxmi, it is so true that we hurt the one we love the most....that is what Avdesh is doing.....as you said he draws the line with everone but with Arpita, she is his own and therefore he draws no line with her....
He will soon value her and her love above all.....and soon enough we will also have another cute scene...😉😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiyaaa dreamy
hows u

i was reading ur post before when my comp shut down on me

then my son came and had work on computer so i cudnt come back

again brilliant stuff and ur analysis on the mark

agree to each point of urs

just adding a bit again

avdesh and arpita both r pure at heart and too straight forward and emotional

so they think with heart more than brains

since the brains r not used the sis is going to come and do some bheja fry there


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: emina

Hey Dreamy🤗!! I know Chista already asked you this but I still want to say "Where the hell where you?"..

Anyway your writting is as usual 👏👏...... Poor Avi is totally stuck😔. And that bhootni is such a dramebaaz😡😡. I was feeling so bad when Avi was just standing near the door and this bhootni was going on and on about how proud she is of him even when she knew that he didnt succeed😔. Poor guy was feeling so guilty. And he took out all his frustration on Arpi. You are right about the part that we hurt the ones we love the most. But I hope he doest keep hurting her all the time. And I liked this line of urs a lot:
"he see's his future in Arpita and his past in Bhootni and he is stuck in the crossroad, unable to go forward as the tangible fingers of the past holds on tight"
This line explains Avi's condition perfectly😳👏

Emina,🤗
Missed u guys so much...things have piled up including my own writing, and other things that needed urgent attention....christmas is coming and so many things needs to be done before everything shuts up here so I needed to do all those to have peace of mind......and so today I was able to sit down and do this...
Yeah, I cannot get over how amazing Bhootni was ....she is trule stone hearted, to say all those things to Avi when u can see from his face he was dying a thousand death...and knowing all long that she had made sure he failed........truly that woman is awful, she is evil.....I really want to know her gameplan....
But I hope tonight, we see Avi thinking and questionning....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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drattttttttttttt i just wrote few lines

and i clicked wrong button

ok brilliant again dreamy

u have analysed perfect

just a bit adding here

avdesh and arpi both r pure at heart and too straight forward
they r not shrewd ppl hence they suffer


they think with heart and dont use brains and r emotional

hence sis wud come and do bheja fry on them

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbox

hiyaaa dreamy
hows u

i was reading ur post before when my comp shut down on me

then my son came and had work on computer so i cudnt come back

again brilliant stuff and ur analysis on the mark

agree to each point of urs

just adding a bit again

avdesh and arpita both r pure at heart and too straight forward and emotional

so they think with heart more than brains

since the brains r not used the sis is going to come and do some bheja fry there


Hi Di,
oh dear hope pc shutting down is one of those thing.....my pc was a bit slow last week, always during update time!!...how annoying that was...😆
Yes, I hope the sis comes.....but Di, as a writer, I want the character of Avi and Arpi to realise their own mistakes, not have it solved by someone else....otherwise they will never learn (well it is rule in writing, anyway😆).....if the sis points out Avi's blindness to Arpita's pureness than that is fine...I want him to start thinking, move beyond the emotional deluge, though it is tough for him to break a lifetime of conditioning but he needs to start doing it....The gang may help in this, it would be nice for them to start talking so Avdesh hears their suspicion...
hmm do you think we will find out tonight what bhootni's game is?...she is so evil, she twisted Avi up knowing all along that she made him fail🤢🤢

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