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..Adeena.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

heyyy........

it was a brilliant but sadd update..........
please maan ko theek krdo and pleeeaassee re.unite them asap...!!!!
its too difficult for us too see them lyk dis..!!!!!
update soon.........
love,,
Adeena
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Posted: 14 years ago
oeye don't dare to kill him nor create EKTA SOAP key frsy dosra janam do.. plsss ya like coma and geet shout n touch n get his senses back..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskan when are you updating ... please jaldi karoh waiting 4 ur updates ....
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 72

next day of the accident
dr - he has regained consciousness but
dev - but what doctor
dr - he is almost like a vegetable. his bruises & broken bones will be fine
in couple of weeks time but I doubt he can ever be normal again
dev - kya matlab
dr - he will be bed ridden for rest of his life, he is not reacting to anything
dev & daadi went to meet him
daadi hugged him & cried. his eyes cried he could not feel any thing
just tears rolled down his eyes seeing her cry.
he tried moving his hand to wipe her tears he could not
he tried saying consoling words he could not, all this made him feel
miserable, but some were down the line he felt he deserved to be like this

it was 3 weeks since the accident his bruises were healing so was his broken
bones. but there was no improvement in his condition. it was all in media
that Maan Singh Khurana had an accident & his health condition was bad
this was bringing the KC's shares to all time low. dev tried his level best
to manage business & attend to maan in the hospital.
maan was asleep when dev sat next to him feeling sorry & blaming himself
for his condition. meera came & hugged him
meera - geet hoti toh, yah sab nahi hota
dev - pata nahi bro aur bhabhi ke beech kya misunderstanding hui hain
every time maan heard geet his pulse rate went really high
doctor & nurses rushed to check
dr - what happened?
dev - nothing he was sleeping
dr - this is the first time he is responding to anything
dev - but we did'nt do any thing
meera - GEET, she repeated GEET again & again
maans reaction to her name was amusing the doctors. why don't u call geet
meera - nahi woh
dev - try karne main kya jaata hain
meera - nahi she knows, i called her & informed her
maan knew she may never want to see his face again. he closed his eyes
remembering her, her smile, how she filled his life with happiness
how innocently she did what ever he wanted her to. she was too sweet for words
he could not believe he could still feel things around, when his heart beat suddenly
raised to an unexpected level & the wind around seemed to carry her fragrance
phir wohi ehsaas, phir fizaaon ki wohi shararat
phir uske aane ke aahat jo uske dil ko bechain karti
he opened his eyes at once & from corner of his eyes, could barely reach that
far ...he slightly turned his head ...to get a clearer view


she stood at the door.
dr shocked - he moved his head
dev & meera had tears in their eyes.
all of them left them alone & waited out
geet - aise kya dekh rahe ho
walked closer to him - pehchana nahi, yah I know I have put on some weight
kya karti mama ka khana u won't believe 5 weeks & I have put on 5kgs
zyaada ho gaya na
. she climbed over the bed struggling & sat on his stomach
putting her legs on either side.
maan wondered isse kya hogaya, yeh asie kyun baat kar rahi hain, jaise kuch
hua hi nahi
, may be she is worried about me. he could feel a faint touch in his stomach,
he wondered how, he could not feel anything untill now, no senses then how was it he could feel her, it was beyond medical logics. lekin before he could think further
she slowly lowered herself he could smell her scent he took it in. it seemed to
fill him with life. she bend further, her stomach was coming on the way he urged to help her
he felt horrible at his plight. she managed to reach his lips
he was shocked, he could feel her lips on his it felt wonderful
she bit is lower lips & then said yuck u taste horrible
yeh log kya medicine khilate hain aapko, chi chi mera mooh ka taste kharab kar diya but its ok...for all times sake..
.she passionately kissed him, he could feel
every bit of it, the way her tongue envaded into him, touched his tongue
setting life into it, his gums his teeth every corner suddenly felt alive
she just went on & on for quite long finally got up catching for her breath
he could barely breath shayad saanson ki zaroorat kise thi
geet - I am really enjoying this.
maan~enjoying what
geet - ab to aap chah kar bhi mujhe yahan se nahi nikaal sakte
maan~pehle bhi chah kar khud se door nahi kiya tha
geet - ok first thing first. u might be wondering why I am here
aap to poochne se rahe
she laughed at his plight
it was really hurting her laugh, did'nt know it would matter so much but it did
geet - actually I never wanted to see your face again. then you sent the divorce papers. I cursed you then thought of dragging you to the court, thought so many things, then heard this news in the TV, like a god sent gift, (maan wondered she said gift) after all what u have done to me I could not just spare you.
maan~she actually hates me..nahi thats not possible. but after what I said that
day probably she does. then what does she want from me now. what worse can happen
geet - I know i could never do any harm to The Maan Singh khurana
maan~u can do anything to me, least she knew, bas keh diya hota
geet - but now your not that The Maan Singh khurana...any more...just a vegetable
actually kisi ko bhi aap ki zaroorat nahi. so I thought this my chance to
set the scores in simple 3 steps....shall reveal each steps as & when umm
&
giggled I know u won't be able to say main hi bol dethi hoon The Maan Singh khurana style main umm!!!& laughed loud
tears rolled down his eyes - jo bhi karna hain kar lo, I am all yours, as always.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GjUc4xCU90k[/YOUTUBE]

precap
SR😲
NEXT
PART 73 VM CREDIT linisteaxoxo21. Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well. Please please do comment
love muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

1st one to comment!!!😃

i dont know what i feel after reading this update... i dont know if i should feel sad for maan or happy for geet..😆.... bechara maan.. cant move at all... Geet to us par atyachar karegi😆..... and the precap😲... lol... maan wont be able to force her to go away from him....i hope SR wont be in the hospital😆....waiting for next update... cont soon....
Edited by dhrashtee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update dii..

poor maan...feeling bad for his situation..
i hope he gets well soon..

geet agayi hai
sab thik hojaega..

cont soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeh geet bhi na!!! Bilkul bachi hai!!!😆Loved the union and the kiss!! superb!!👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh that was nice, hia geet is being strong, but is she really going to to be bad to msk, or she is just acting so that msk gets better. waitng for the next update already
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Posted: 14 years ago
so Geet is back in Maan's life😊 and he felt his senses only working for he👏r...and he felt her b4 she cud reach him...I feel sorry for Maan...atleast he is feelign sorry for what he said to Geet and Nw Geet is back teasing him r rather say sweet revenge😳...whose 😉SR im wondering better not in Hospital..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Muskaan,

Song Name: Dil Mein Ab Dard-e-Mohabbat Ke Siwa Kuch Bhi Nahin
Dil mein ab dard-e-mohabbat ke siwa kuch bhi nahin
zindagi meri ibaadat ke siva kuch bhi nahin
main teri baargah-e-naaz mein kya pesh karoon
meri jholi mein mohabbat ke siwa kuch bhi nahin
aye khuda mujh se na le mere gunaahon ka hisaab
mere paas ashq-e-nadamat ke siwa kuch bhi nahin

woh to mit kar mujhe mil hi gayee rahat warna

zindagi ranj-o-museebat ke siwa kuch bhi nahin

from album sajdaa


Just listening to the song n only thing dat came in mind first was your last update of madhosi........found it just apt!!!!!!

Edited by shreyabhra - 14 years ago

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