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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks Di for the wonderful parts👏
waiting fort the next one😃
cant comment on everything😭... too sleepy hehe😆
love😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
lolz geet is just mind bogling....😆
bechara maan....hehe
SR 😉....yeh update jaldi se chahiye hai😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 maan is recovering... geet will stay with him...do con..
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣such a wonderful update di!!!! i jst loved it.........u made me cry in 1st part...........when maan was immovable i was lyk😭
i was cursing brij 4 not telling geet anything........but i m happy datt media played its role here😃
n geet ke to kya kehne............ye kudi tan sach vich jhalli hai....i wonder she is taking advantage of maan's condition🤣..... ab toh wo gin gin kar maan ki berukhi ke badle legi usse.... in her own style😆😉..........n maan wud be like......KITNE BHI TU KARLE SITAM... HASS HASS K SAHENGE HUM!!!!!😆🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update

geet is so innocent


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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
but i can't understand geet 's .what is going in her mind.plzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

ek doubt hai muskaan
i know what is a vegetable but SR how ??????????
its time for the next update
please jaldi meri confusion doooor karo

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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 73

meera cleared her throat, geet slowly got, off from the bed winking at him
meera - thanks a lot for coming, mujhe laga ki tum nahi aaogi
geet - main kaise nahi aati
she went out & spoke to the doctor
dr - Mrs. Khurana, it is really nice you are here
geet gave a weak smile - I want to take him home
dr - I don't think that is safe.
geet - I know what is safe for my husband
dr - u would need some one to take care of him 24/7
geet - we can hire nurses for that
dr - are u sure u will be able to manage, little bit of negiligence could be dangerous
geet - ya, quite sure
she arranged for hiring required staff & equipments to take take care of him
at home. she arranged every thing in the home as well
she came back to see him latter in the day
maan~his heart could'nt stop rising every time she appeared near him
she looked cute he felt with that 8 month stomach & jhoota gussa
he preferred to believe ...jhoota gussa. na jaane kyun uska dil, yeh maanta hi
nahi ki woh usse naraz ho sakti thi
geet - chalo
maan~is she kidding
then notices few attendents move him into a wheel chair, he wondered what was she upto
geet - itna apne dimaag ko zor mat do, kuch nahi kar rahi, ghar le ja rahi hoon
maan~ghar!!!lekin kyun
geet - so I could have more access to you, yahan insab ke samne, u know,
your too safe from me
maan~I think I am safest in ur arms.
when they reached home, he felt really nice coming back home after 3weeks, he could'nt
have thought of coming home so soon, he wondered if she knew he was glad coming home.
will she be happy to know that I am so happy, or will that make her sad
geet - actually I don't care how you feel.
maan was not able to bear her rudeness, her indifference, it was not his geet
he was shocked to look at his house totally changed with all facility to attend him, he gave gave her a confused look still trying to understand her.
geet - how can I let any thing happen to you
maan~i knew she cared for me
geet - we have long way to go before we set our scores.
maan~yeh kar kya rahi hain, gussa mein bhi isske itna pyar kyun hain
she told the attendant to leave him in their room.
the attendant pushed the wheel chair & left him in the room on his bed. & leaves. he looked at the room. his king size bed was beautifully decorated with red rose petals and there was dim lights
there was white jasmine streams forming a curtain around the bed.
she came in & locked the door behind. she took the match stick & started litting
the candles one after the other. looking at him seducingly.
maan~what does she want
the room was glowing with the candels in the room giving a clearer picture of her alluring
eyes, he was not able understand the deepth in them, it all looked confusing
geet - why are you looking so confused.
maan~why is she doing all this, why the room is decorated like this
geet - all this
maan~she really seem to read my mind now
geet - kind off.
maan~smiled inwards
geet - well coming to first step of setting our scores
he was curious to know her innocent thoughts could think.
geet - our long due suhag raat.
maan~she definitly lost it
geet - actually I was thinking, our relation was just all about physical
his heart ached, bleeded to hear it from her mouth
geet - thinking about it, you were true,
she slowly began to undress... he was uncomfortable..she walked closer
almost getting off the last bit of cotton on her. he turned his face & looked away
how much he could'nt stay away from her temptation. he hated to see her now
geet - this is what it was all about then why are u shying away now.
she climbed again over him & sat on him. he turned his face & closed his eyes
with feel of her on his stomach. he hated his senses reacting he preffered being
senseless at this point
geet - sexy lag rahi hoon na, with this big stomach, I thought as much
she began to undress him. he desperately wanted to protest.
geet - I was wondering I am already pregnant. What is the worst that could happen now?
then why can't we be together. u know how much I wanted it on our wedding night
I was so excited when u lifted me from the car & taking me in. I could actually
feel wet when u were caring me on the steps.
he looked at her & felt the pain in them. he felt sad he could'nt.
geet - u disappointed me
maan~it was ur own good
geet - but don't worry I will not

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cc5ndMOkAfU[/YOUTUBE]
she moved slowly to nibble his ears. she worked all over him seducing him
pinning his hand down..which wanted to protest but could not, kissing him passionately
he wondered how can she be so passionate when he was just a vegetable
she looked into his eyes & took in his lips slipping her fingers in his
hair. he could feel few touches here & there. not completely. intially he thought
she will just stop it with all this. but she moved on. she was actually making
it out with him. and she looked enjoying every bit of it. she worked on a longer
foreplay to get him into it. with his medical condtion, he probably could'nt even
feel any thing, but she was so much into it, she actually drove him with her innocence,
her performance was juvenile at best, her technique laughable yet adorable
geet wispered meri galti nahi hain u never gave me chance to know better about all this
she took to the next level taking him in. he wondered how on earth his
body was reacting to her touches getting hard enough. how could he feel evoked, but he did
and they did move into a rhythm & they did rise to a climax & finally
she collapsed on him breathing hard matching his raised breathing.
he felt alive again after 3 weeks. she hugged him, his hands ached to hold
her in. it was after 8months they where actually getting this close..not bad na
she slowly moved off him & slept next to him, cuddled up. she pulled his arm
and rested her head on it & put her leg on him.
he lied looking up what did she want, did she start to believe
it was just physical. why did she look so contended then. he realized how much
she longed for his touch. why did he ever have to meet her at the first place
he thought, why could'nt he keep himself off her all the time

next day he got up feeling sencious again. he wondered how she could manage to
to drive his lifeless body erossed even in sleep, he openned his eyes
to see she was actually kissing his ...& then moving upwards to meet his gaze
good morning...they replayed the whole thing again .
she shied resting her head on his shoulder. I am really enjoying more
with you now, u were very correct mere hi dimaag main pyaar-vyaar ka bhoot tha...just physical is simple & best.
she kisses him on his nose & dresses him up.
geet - tumhari nurse aati hogi, don't worry, I have got all male
nurse...
she laughed possesively.
maan~if she hates me then why is she still possessive about me

precap
dragging him to gym😲

NEXT PART 74
special thanxs to Qurrat1993 she made it on request 😉 Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well. Please please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
!I was trying to guess da track!!!!!! well Geet is actually curing Maan every touch of hers!!!! n also taking her sweet revenge......Im sure Maan wld get well soon just to hug back Geet n say he loves her more than anything n anyone ......bt still why Maan said those words!!!!!!was it guilt!!!!!!

loved it!!!!! so next is Gym!!!!!!! let's see watz in store for Maan (n us too)!!!!!!!
Edited by shreyabhra - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i feel that she does all these things to get her maan back and make him understand wat he meants to her...

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