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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg nice update...plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful fantastic superb update
just thinking what will geet werar for pooja the same saree she wore on karva chauth or salwarsuit maan bechara toh usee dekhkar hi maan jayega.
Thnks for putting the hum tum poster in introduction
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was amazing
they both had a silly breakup😆
pooja sounds super interesting
plzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Loved the update!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmmm Maan is missing........
well good for him,
Rano's last thought was amazing,
worried for Maan.
Love
Laskhmi
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Posted: 14 years ago

🤣can't believe this geets mom worried for maan🤣

n the imagination of geet cooking n waiting for maan was hilarious..

hmm so can we expect some mirch masala in maans house.....between maan n geet😈

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Posted: 14 years ago
cant wait for the next part:)
loved the way Geet was missing Maan n cant wait 2 read how she manos him
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice update

precap sounds interesting

continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 45

she looked around pulled out all her dresses & still did'nt like any of them
she went to raji's room & checked few of her dresses. finally she settled on
the red salwar kameez. she wondered how to do her hair, she tried platting
she was so confused, raji came & straightened her hair & told her to leave it open
she looked at her self 1 million times, checking her hair & dress & make up
rano could not believe this was her jhali daughter getting so concious.
they were just stepping out when raji came running
raji - didi duppata to pehen lo
geet pulled the duppata on
raji - aise nahi didi, she set it across her neck pulling it back.
geet - aise mat kar I am getting chocked
raji - pyari lag rahi ho
geet - are u sure
they went to a mall first to pick up some flowers for them
geet picks up one white rose for him. they reach the khurana mansion
it was beautifully decorated for the pooja. daadi welcomed them
daadi - glad u came
rano smiled
geet hugged daadi & said hi
daadi patted her cheeks - pyari lag rahi ho
she shied & her eyes looked restless, daadi knew whom she was looking for
daadi smiled - uppar hain
she went to his room. he was in the shower.
she noticed his suit on the stand, she caressed the suit with back of her fingers
& mumered kitna gussa hote ho, pata hain ek din hogaya mujh se baat kar ke
maan - nakul towel pass karna
she looked for the towel & passed it in.
maan saw her hand & pulled her in - tum
the whole bathroom was filled with steam, light yellow lights refelecting from the
mirror, she could see his bare back, she hid her face in her palms holding her
the end of her duppata in one hand & the rose in another.
he moved closer to her, he slowly moved her hand down, she closed her eyes still
tighter, maan was mesmerised looking at her. red suit, straight hair, face red blushing
turning deeper if it could. she looked nothing less than his angel.
he raised his hands to her face & moved moved her silky hair strands behind
she gasped & cluctched her duppata & fluttered opened her eyes feeling his fingers
caresing her cheeks then back of her ears. she looked at his wet hair & the
the water droplets falling from his temple to his cheeks down to his firm jaw line
both of them were swept to a different world lost looking at each other.
geet reluctantly - main woh
maan not registering what she saying, moved still closer
geet looking at him - I am sorry
maan was still quite & kept looking at her
geet - itna gussa mat karo na, kalse aapne mujse baat nahi kiya
she slowly lifts her hand & holds her ears I am sorry, please
he snaps out & turns his back - tum bahar javoo
she moved closer - pehle kaho mujhe maaf kiya
maan moving away - mujhe tumhe maaf nahi karna
she comes in front of him - sorry kaha na baba please & gives the rose to him
break up cancel
maan snaps back holding her arms - tum kya break up kar rahi thi
geet - humara humara..woh
maan in stirn voice - woh kya geet
geet - woh woh
maan tauntingly - hum to sirf training wale BF/GF hain na !!
she made a baby face caught in her own trap
he leaves her hand, pushing her aside walks out.
geet mumered hain main bhi kitni stupid hoon, mainne break up kyun
kaha unse. humne to kabhi kuch commit nahi kiya. babaji yeh mujhse kya karwarahe ho
abhi main inhe kaise manavoon. when she went out he was not there in the room
she went down looking for him. he was standind with daadi for the arthi.
she went & stood next to him & wispered sorry. he moved away. she kept running
into him & kept saying sorry. he ignored her & went out to the garden...


she started to get restless & not able to bare his rudeness
she took the rangoli colours & wrote sorry on the floor. he just kicked it off with his leg
& turned his back to her. she got wild, she broke off her glass bangel & slit her
hand...& wrote sorry with her blood on the floor...kick this if u can
he turned to..& fell down to hold her hand, yeh kya kiya tumne
geet - main ne kya kiya, aap hi mujhse naraz ho.
maan - tum pagal ho kya
geet - aapne mujhe pagal kar diya hain, kal se mujhse baat nahi kiya, mera messages
ka bhi reply nahi kiya, mana ki meri galti hain, lekin koi aise karta
hain kya aapne GF ke saath,
crying maan closed her mouth chup bikul chup
lifted her & took her to the car & drove her to the clinc.
dr tied a bandage & gave some pain killer.
dr - actually she has cut this nerve thats why so much of blood
other wise she is ok. she is a brave girl
geet gave a weak smile.
when they came back to the car...maan - tum kuch karne se pehle sochathi kyun nahi
geet made a face & looked away.
maan - agar tumhe kuch ho jata to
geet - as if you care
maan - what if I do
geet - phir mujhe maaf kar do
maan shook his head & smiled, she hugged him really tight
please mujhese kabhi aise gussa mat hona main mar hi javoon ghi
maan - aur jo tum mujhe gussa dilathi rah thi ho, uska main kya karoon
geet - aap dant lena, lekin mujhse bina baat kiya mat rahna
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIAFTizR3R8[/YOUTUBE]

precap
geet going ga ga about MAAN SINGH KHURANA😲

VM CREDIT Gurleen867 & AVIS credit to meyis
NEXT PART 47
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update... i hope maan forgives her not that easily but after some attitude...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow Muskan AWESOME update!!

SO finally she gets 2 noe that her Bachchan is MSK or is just goin gaga abt him???
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ update soon

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