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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi di... are u gonna update now??? Please update na... Please ...
(If possible)....
Love u lots Muskan di...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Awesome part Muskan
just loved it....plz plz plz post the next part sooooooooooooon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...Loved the Update👍🏼
Maan is soo angry lol but whenever he sees geet his anger vanishes lol😆
Loved how geet wrote sorry with the rangoli but maan kicked it..:(
Aww...and naughty maan pulled her to the bathroom hehe
😉
Omg she really cut her hand..Poor geet aww she is doing for MSK..😔
Loved the update soo much..👏
Awesome one
Please update soon muskii
Thanks for the pm!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
woowww dat was amaizng i lovedd aww geet givin maan the towel dat whole scene was brill and then wen she tries to say sorry finally they have made up cnt wait 4 more continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 46

they reached back to the Mansion & she slipped sleeves down
maan - what are u doing, it will hurt u
geet - mama ne aise dehk liya to, gadbad ho jayeghi
maan - then why do u do such things
geet - mainne plan kar ki nahi kiya tha
maan - yeh dress to plan kar ke pehna tha na
geet looked away - hain
maan - bahut aachi lag rahi ho
geet - jaanti hoon
he rolls his eyes & she runs inside the mansion & bumps into dev who was carrying
a bowl full ho halwa
dev - hi
geet - oh sorry
dev lost looking at her - its ok then snaps out nai ITS NOT OK!!!
geet - why
dev - bro ka fav tha, unho ne taste bhi nahi kiya
geet - isse main kya hain, phir banwa lenghe
dev - nahi tum samjh nahi rahi ho
geet - dev tum samjavoo ge to samhjoon ghi na
dev - bro loves halwa, & he knows that aaj halwa bana tha
geet - umm, so
dev - now if he does'nt find it then, he may get mad, aur tumhe unka gussa patanahi hain
geet thinking deeply - aacha unhe halwa pasand hain
dev - bahut zayda
geet - teehk hain main bana dethi hoon
dev - tumhe aata hain na
geet cleares her throat no big deal
dev - challo, are u sure
geet googles down the halwa receipe in her blackberry
geet - kaun sa halwa, yanha to bahut sare hain
dev - aata ka
they go to the kitchen

maan looks for her in the hall, daadi introduces him to rano
daadi - yeh bachan ..sorry Maan, mera bada pota
maan looks confused
daadi to maan - beta she is Mrs. Handa..wispering in his ears tumhari saas
maan embarrassed😳 looks away & smiles at rano
rano - namaste beta
she scans at him top to bottom, checking if he was actually OK, to fall for
her daughter, deep in she knew her daughter was really precious & could do
wonders with her relations but at the outset she was still very kiddish.
she liked maan & his maturity. much needed to handle her little pari
they spoke little longer while geet was busy making halwa with dev

geet -I need aata, ghee & sugar, yaar yeh to simple hain
dev - agar teehk nahi bana to tumhi bro ko handle karna
geet - teehk kaise nahi banega, GEET HANDA jo bana rahi hain
dev helps her with the ingridents & she makes the halwa
while dev sits on the slab talking to her & cracking jokes
dev - tum bro se kaise mili
geet - strange na
dev - yah, bro to kisi ladki se baat bhi nahi karte
ladki chodho kisi se baat nahi karte, bahut serious type ke hain
she smiled, they kept nibbling into the dryfruits while stirring the halwa
dev - sach sach batvoo, bro romantic type bilkul nahi hain na
geet feeling concious - nahi yaar aise kuch nahi hain, woh bahut sweet hain
she tries to change the topic, dehko halwa bangaya...
dev smells it...umm smells yummy
geet - hain na & pulls her invisible collar up
she spreads the halwa on the bowl & arranges the rosted dryfruits.
dev - I am sure bro to pyar bhi gussa main karte honge
geet burst out laughing & dev also giggles
maan passes by & notices her laughing, he stands near the door admiring her
they take a bit in the bowl & start tasting it
dev - geet yaar it is really yummy
she tastes it - umm...not bad na aacha bangaya
they take more & start feeding each other, maan wondered maam is busy flirting
with his brother while he was seraching her in the house.
dev - tum kal kya kar rahi ho
geet - kyun
maan mumered oye teri bhabhi hain, stop flirting
dev - kal bike race hain, I wanted u to be my lady luck
maan mumered what the hell & curious about her reply
geet - hard luck, main humesha armaan ke saat hi race main jaati hoon
maan mumered thats why he wins, before dev could say anything further
he came in clearing his throat - yeh kya ho raha hain
dev jumped off the slab - kuch nahi woh halwa
geet - aap halwa kayee na trying to feed him extending the spoon
he takes the bowl from her hand & eats it himself giving a stirn look
dev wispered romance bhi gussa main & went out, geet smiled inward
maan - meri hi bhai ke saat flirt kar rahi ho
geet - jealous haan
maan - hain na tumhare type ka
geet gets annoyed - right bilkul meri type ka, just opposite to u
maans ego hurt big time - baat challoon
geet turns away in anger - mujhe aapni baat khud karni aati hain, I don't need u for that
maan still eating more halwa - phir meri pasand ki dress kyun pehni hain
geet - aap kyun mera bana halwa kha rahen ho, snatches the bowl from him
maan realizses she was actualy making halwa for him..& mumers Geet handa cooking woh bhi
mera liya..I am definitly dreaming...he snaps out. he sees she was angry & going out.
he came infront & stopped her closing the kitchen door. she tried going
from the other side. he kept the hand on the otherside. she made a baby angry face
maan - mera liya banya tha
she noded her head looking down
he very slowly says I..she looks at him LOVE..her heart almost stopped beating
fluttered her eyes & looked at him in anticipiation you ..r halwa, she made a face
maan - what did u expect
geet - nothing
maan moving closer - what did u expect...she showed some halwa in his mouth
bahut baten banate hoon aap
maan mumered Maan Singh Khurna bahut baaten ...!!

next day was sports meet in Delhi club,
she participates in most of the events. armaan & prem were more intrested in
racing so were busy with that but she usually participated in most of them.
she started with shooting she was never a winner but always manged 2 or 3rd position.
she saw the winner was bang on the dot. she became curious who it was... she checked
Maan Singh Khurana not bad umm...
she tried calling bachan he was to join them here...but his phone was
switched off...she moved on to the next event kick boxing. she offcourse was a
fighter in that & won in the laddies section. she noticed a big crowd gathering
for the finals of guys. she peeped in but could barely see the face of the
guy winning, she kept looking at his moves & the way he dojed & then sweeped
the opponents leg, she was floored. she shouted perfect short.
maan smiled hearing her voice facing her back. every one screamed
for him.. Maan !!! Maan!!!geet wondered yanha pe bhi Maan Singh Khurana not bad yaar
geet sees the score board checking out the winners so far. she sees Maan Singh Khurana
topping in all her fav sports
shooting
kick boxing
swimming
she just gets curious to see his previous records, it all seemed unmatched
she was impressed. she messaged him yaar yeh Maan Singh Khurana bahut
impressive hain

precap
maan jealous of himself😲

NEXT PART 47
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay First to comment hehe..
Wow...Loved the Update Muskii..
Amazing.....!!
Awww....Geet making Halwa for maan..soo sweet
hehe..Maan murmuring Oie teri bhabhi hai stop flirting..Imao..loved his possessiveness
OMG Maan Saying I ...Love ..was soooo cute..But he said the halwa instead..
Hmm geet is getting impressed of MSK.nice lol
Wow..lol Msk jealous of himself..hehe will be interesting to read lol
Seriously loved this update a lot..Thanks Muskii
Continue soon!:)

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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haha maan jealous of him self lol
xx
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahahahahah the precap has me on the floor in histerics hahahahaha how can u be jealous of urself hahahah
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor Bacchan!!! Geet is after Maan now : o(
lol ... Loved your updare Muskan. Liked Devar-Bhabi chit chat. When will you introduce Vicky?
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update yaar truely magical no doubt
luv yr update simply magical n hallirious

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