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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congo shongo for 4th thread of truely magic dis ff rocks n u also rock keep it up waiting for ur updates as usual
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-truly magical-
part 44

geet was restless all day, the more she thought about it the more she got confused
lekin unhe itni mehengi gift nahi deni chahiya thi. nahi deni chahiya thi nahi deni
chahiya ti kya bol rahi hain, itni problem hain to return kar de. kud hi ek bar bhi
aapne haat se usse nahi inkala, aur itna footage kha rahi hain. aisa nahi hain
I tried removing, inkla nahi, Geet Handa stop it!! u like his ring & like him..
nahi nahi..how can I, woh bikul mera type ke nahi hain. I can't fall for him
uski tu koi girl friend bhi nahi rahi kabhi, kitna seda seda types hain, he won't
be able to handle me & my pranks, agar hum saat rahen to I will be the person
taking ride on him, aise thodi hota hain, relation main to equal rahna hota hain na
bechar mujhe samjta hi rah jaeyga, nahi nahi its all not happening. main unhe seda seda
bol donghi ke aisa kuch nahi hain. waise bhi unhe to salwar suit wali pasand hogina
jo ghar main rah kar unka wait karen, chi chi...Geet Handa & waiting no ways
she imagines herself cooking wearing a sari & waiting for him.
geet blinking delightfully looking at him - aap aagye
maan - umm
geet - khana laga doon
maan - umm
TIME PLEASE....no ways I am going to do all that. tere demag main bhi kya kya
khana pak tha hain...oops, khayal pak tha hain
she calls him, he picked the call & did'nt say anything..he was angry at hate u part, least he knew what was she planning...
geet - mujhe woh
no response
geet - mujhe khana nahi banana, she bit her lips
maan - WHAT
geet mumered kya bol rahi hain
maan - don't waste my time
geet - exactly don't waste ur time on me
he wondered what happened to her, but was already quite pissed off with what she
said in the morning & this was just adding to him temper
geet - I am breaking up with u
maan yeh pagal hain kya but in MSK ka anger uff - GREAT
geet - great!!!!
maan was fuming & she did'nt know his temper yet.
geet felt bad great, great kya matlab hota hain, aise thodi hota hain
geet weak voice - bye
maan cut the call in anger.
geet call cut kar diya, woh tho kabhi call cut nahi karte.
she calls back. maan keeps cutting her call.
maan was really angry at her this time.
geet mumered teehk hain thoda bhut bura laga hoga, I guess he will understand it is
for his good. atleast future main koi missunderstanding to nahi hogi

she reached home & tried playing with raji & chinto. tried to spend
some time with family. watched TV. but still her mind was just lingering about
their last conversation. she kept turning the ring in her finger & kept
wondering. next day got up at 5.30am & thought of calling him. then thought may
be she should give him some space. it was 8.30am when rano shouted tumhe college
nahi jaana
, she opened her sleepy eyes & looked at the clock
rano - tumhara friend ke saat fight huwa hain kya
geet - kyun
rano - he did'nt wake u up today
geet - nahi woh busy honge
rano - aacha jaldi ready ho ja
geet felt bad that he did'nt call. she started missing him already, terribly
she went to college & was realy quite & not intrested in any thing

rano meets savitri devi/daadi in a social ladies party.
rano's friends introduced her to savitri devi as the chief guest
of the occasion. rano was simple & elgantly dressed. not very flashy like most
of the ladies around. no airs of being the Mrs Handa. daadi smiled at all the ladies
rano's friend wispered - tum ne inke poton ke baren main to suna hi hoga
rano wondered whom they where talking about
friend - she has three grand sons, all of them are the eligible bachelors
rano aacha
another friend - I want her to meet my daughter, pata nahi kuch baat ban jayen
rano least intrested - umm
friend - inka sab se bada pota Maan Singh Khurana, naam to suna hoga
rano - woh kuch award mila tha na
friend - haan wohi he is the MD of Khurana Construction
rano tried to recollect she heard this Khurana Construction some where
daadi walks towards rano with a warm smile - geet kaisi hain
all the ladies around were jealous to the core.
rano was little shocked but her daughter could know the whole world - aap use mili hain
daadi wondered both mother & daughter where so ignorant about the Maan Singh Khurana
and smiled inwardly - haan mili hoon, bahut pyari bachi hain
ranos friends where totally shocked & taken a back
rano felt nice to hear good things about her otherwise jhali daughter
daadi & rano moved on to sit in the sofa with their coffees
daadi - aap mere pote se to mili honghi
rano looked confused
daadi mumered maan bhi kya kya karta hain
daadi - Maan Singh Khurana, MD of Khurana Construction
rano remembered - bachan, sata savitra types..closed her mouth
daadi's eyes poped out,
rano - I mean, meri unse baat huwai hain, he is really sweet, aaj kal thoda busy hain
shayad.
daadi wondered when did maan become sweet & when was he not busy.
rano - ji?
daadi cleared her throat - nahi hum kah rahen the, kal humare ghar main pooja hain
agar aap aur geet beti aati tho aacha hota
rano - ji
rano was kind of getting the hint about daadi's idea on Maan & geet, she did'nt mind
but it all seemed too good to be true knowing her daughter.

in college geet was very upset & disturbed. tried calling him but he did'nt answere the call
she gave up & went to his office. she was not in the office too.
she came home & cried, sab teri wajah se, hum kitne aache dost the, kitni pyari pyari
baaten karte the..break up!!! how stupid u could be. woh to teri baat ko serious maan
gaya na. she did'nt have her dinner & slept off. tried calling him at 5.30am he kept
cutting it. she kept messaging. sorry sorry. he did'nt even bother reading.
geet was in her room & the whole day sulcking.
rano wondered what happened to her.
rano - kya baat hain
geet - kuch nahi, leave me alone
latter in the afternoon, rano tried waking up geet
geet - leave me aloneeeeeeeeeeeee
rano - we have to go for a pooja in the evening
geet - mujhe kanhi nahi jana
rano - bachan ghar bhi nahi
geet jumped up in a sec - kya
rano - uski daadi ne hume pooja ke liya bulaya hain
geet smiled
rano challo ready ho javoo
geet - mama main kya pehnoo
rano was suprised at geet asking that, she would otherwise
just slip into her jeans even for a puja, she could sense something cooking
she was happy for her daughter but worried for maan

precap
geet manaofying maan

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Geet's mom worried for Maan i love this one... AWESOME DI
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
superb update
missing maan and geet together in this update nut over all its
superb
per cap looks very interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome part dear, just love it😍

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