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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ayeshaaa.

OMG :O

amazing update amrita ;)
sorrryy! I m super busy ;( no time for IF. & no time to comment on everyone's FF ;( but I do read them & press the like button ;D
sorry ;( will def try to comment when I m freee.
loveyou.

hei Ayeshaa....I was thinking what might have happened to you, and I believed that you might be busy with studies or wok or something like that
Take your time, read and comment after that...and no more sorries at all, ok...but thank you so much for peeping in for a while to drop a comment....I'm so happy :)))
Love you too dear :)
Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wish you all a very happy EID 😊
Forever - Part 10
Maan sat on the couch and looked impatiently at the door step; he had been out to the road several times in search of Geet. Geet has no one in the whole city and there would not be any place she could go, Maan panicked as pensiveness rambled within his mind. He combed his hair with his fingers and got up from the couch and stormed out of the door again. He murmured to himself "Geet, where are you?" and closed his eyes to stop the tears gathering into the corner of his eyes and went out again, promising himself that he would come back with her.

It was early in the evening and the busy roads seemed quiet when compared with the week days, people might have been at their homes spending the weekend with their families. Maan halted for a while to decide which path to follow as he reached the split end of the main road. Which way could she go; he wondered even in the last minute and headed towards the right path. One need not to have eyes or ears to feel the presence of his lover especially when he is in such a state that even death cannot hold back him. Maan was in such a situation as he walked into the dark lane, he would not leave any stone unturned to find Geet, as she is the owner of his soul.

"I'm sorry" Maan said softly as he accidentally hit against a lady who passed him, "Maan sir" Geet murmured his name softly, but still he was able to hear it. "Geet" Maan muttered and held her wrist tightly and headed towards his apartment forgetting that he was almost dragging her. He released her hand as soon as they came into the apartment and Geet looked at the marks on her hand where Maan held. Maan looked at her and noticed the red color all over her head and forehead, which made him shudder thinking that something might have happened to her.

"Geet where have you been and what had happened to you?" Maan made Geet to sit on the couch as he asked her the questions to get a relief. Geet did not speak but stared at the floor as a drop of tear escaped from her eyes, driving Maan crazy and furious at the same time. Her tears affect him badly though he hates tears and emotions, and she awakens his sixth sense every time she was with him. Maan lifted her chin and looked straight into her eyes without thinking what might happen to him as her deep eyes drown him deep into them. "Geet, tell me where have you been?" Maan pleaded her as he drowned into her eyes, the eyes that speak of the unspoken words by her mouth. There was fear and nervousness in her eyes; he saw it clearly and suddenly dragged her into him assuring her that he would be there for her at all the times.

Maan let Geet to wash away his chest with her tears; he let his heart to melt with her tears as he wanted her to do anything with his heart, but not to break it into pieces. She wept for a long time as he stroked her hair back, making her to feel the protectiveness in his arms. Maan felt the longing within him increased as Geet buried her face deep into his chest touching her face against his bare skin. She held onto his shirt tightly forcing it to unbutton furthermore, forcing Maan to lean against the couch to support them to prevent them from falling.

It was not only Maan who flowed through the currents with Geet, but Geet also experienced more of the same, she felt that she was protected by this powerful man, Maan Singh Khurana. It was totally a different experience for both of them as they forgot that she was his employee, while their desire for each other increased with every other step they took. They were alerted with a client's call to him reminding him about a case that would soon begin its hearing in the court of law.

Geet rose from there and glanced at Maan secretly while blushing and hating herself for what she has done with him. She should have controlled herself and her emotions rather than him, she thought to herself as her eyes get caught of the stains on his shirt due to her tears. She straightened herself before telling him of her decision about moving away from there. "No way Geet, where would you go? There is no one to help you in this city" Maan roared at her knowing that she has decided it because of what had happened between them a while ago. "I know you have helped me a lot sir, but it isn't wise for both of us to stay together" she managed to utter the words though she was afraid of his behavior. Maan stared at her angrily for a while before storming into the apartment not wanting to bid her good-bye when she leaves.

"Babaji, please help me, give me strength" Geet grumbled as she came out of the room after packing her stuffs. She looked around and saw no sign of Maan, so she moved hurriedly beyond the curtains hoping to see Maan at anytime. "This shouldn't happen" she heard his growl near the window, so she peeped into check what it was and she stood there stunned with her eyes widened.

P.S. If you liked the update please feel free to hit the like button and please do comment😊 I have the next update ready with me but will be updating tomorrow😉
Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Whoa nice update....
but too many questions and why ??
why does she want to leave all of a sudden ?
what were those marks and all ?
what did she see ??
god only you can answer them....so pls do that soon 😊

btw Thanks a lot !
same to you too :)

-Fatima
Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

Whoa nice update....
but too many questions and why ??
why does she want to leave all of a sudden ?
what were those marks and all ?
what did she see ??
god only you can answer them....so pls do that soon 😊

btw Thanks a lot !
same to you too :)

-Fatima

Yeah, I know
I stopped at a cliff hanger, so that means next update will be soon....
As the story progresses the questions will be answered....
thanks alot, Fatima :)))
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar..awsome ...do update the next part soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey u left so many questions unanswered😡
what happened to geet??
what did she saw??
loved their moment...so emotional n soft😳
plzzz update soon
can't wait for the answers
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
but why suddenly she wants to leave?
EID MUBARAK TO YOU
CONTINUE SOON

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Posted: 14 years ago
mrk_1
thanks dear....next update will be up soon
Wajiha
thanks dear...I hope to give you answers in the next part for some of your Qs
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shining_moon

hey u left so many questions unanswered😡

what happened to geet??
what did she saw??
loved their moment...so emotional n soft😳
plzzz update soon
can't wait for the answers

Thanks for loving the ManEet moment :)))
I know I have to answer so many Qs, and you will be getting the answers quite soon....next update will be up hopefully tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic update!!!

Wat happened to Maan now????

Continue soon!

Love

Mina

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