#6Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai(AR)Pa-206,7:149 - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago

THAT'S GREAT DI.

EAGARLY WAITING FOR UPDATE.
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey ankita...

where r u ???

r u goin to update 2nite???plzz tel soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Dear readers,

Actually ye chotti si warning hai, part thoda sa offensive ho sakta hai w.r.t kpabhsh, please mind mat kariyega, aur apne risk par padiyega….

Part-194

A: wait dr. ankit, itni jaldi kya hai??? Abhi pig waali proper feeling nahi aa rahi..

Ak: kya matlab???

A: matlab tum gutter se nikle keede jaise nahi lag rahe, wait… vivek, rishab.. (he called them and ankit was shocked to see them with a big bucket, but before he could react that bucket' s already emptied on his head, all were shocked and immediately closed their noses as foul smell touched their noses, ankit for a minute didn't understand anything, but then looked at his hands and was dumbfounded to see something black on his whole body,

he tried to close his nose as he too felt that foul smell but in next second he jerked his own hand down when realized that it's his hands only which're stinking badly, he looked himself once again, then looked at everyone who's looking him with closed noses and then at armaan who's smirking)

Ak: (in anger) ye kya hai??

A: tum doctor kaise bane yaar??? Chotte chotte bachon ko bhi pata hota hai ki pigs most of the time gutter mai rehte hai, aur tumhe suyar(pig) ki acting karni hai, jab tak gutter mai bhigoge nahi tab tak feel kaise aayega?? Aur acting mai jab tak feel na ho tab tak spectators ko maja nahi aata, tum khud to gutter mai dubne se rahe

to hum hi tumhare liye gutter yaha par le aaye… you should appreciate us, kitne ache hai hum…. (he again smirked and looked at riddhima who's still in a daze wondering somewhere in heart that "armaan ko aj kya ho gaya, itna badla badla sa kaise behave kar raha hai, kya ghus gaya hai usme….")

ab please time waste mat karo, abhi baaki sabki turns aani hai.. (ankit g ave him murderous look but when all started hooting he finally bends down on floor, when armaan again warned him) remember riddhima ko kuch bhi touch na ho jaaye, tumhara saya bhi nahi warna jindagi bhar issi roop mai ghumna padega….

Ankit started crawling on his knees and hands, everyone's enjoying, though niki, dr. keerti felt bad somewhere but rest all were enjoying this moment and kept on smiling, anjali, rahul started making a video with a sweet smile on their faces, though they're not fully satisfied with punishment but atleast something is happening…

An: kaash armaan usse pure shehar ka round lagane ko kehta issi roop mai, maja aa jaata…

At: don't be greedy anjali, thoda sabar rakho,meetha hoga sabar ka phal, abhi to bas shuruwat hai, tumhe kya lagta hai armaan iss suyar ko itni asaani se chod dega… dheere dheere punishments milengi, 2 mahino ka badla ek hi pal mai thodi lega…

An: I know par kya karun, aur intejar nahi ho raha, iss habshi ko maiburi tarah tadapte hue dekhna chahti hun…

At: (placed hands on her shoulder) aisa jarur hoga anjali, don't worry, bas thodi si patience rakho, jaise armaan ne ab tak rakhi hai… (anjali placed her hand on his hand and nodded with a sweet smile and rahul-muskaan shared sweet and winked smile seeing atul and anjali…)

On other side ankit with boiling blood crawled upto riddhima, armaan followed him and as he reached near her, armaan asked ankit to move a bit away as his shadows's touching riddhima's feet and asked him to join hands, when ankit did so, he looked at riddhima..

A: aankhein niche rakh, sirf uske charno mai, rakshasho ke paas itni aankhein nahi hoti ki wo deviyo ko dekh sake, charan dekhne ko mil rahein hai isse hi apna sobhagya samjho… ab bol apni lines….(ankit looked at armaan as if saying "mera dimag kharab ho gaya hai jo iss se maafi maangunga ) tum ab quit karna chahte ho to koi baat nahi ankit, dr. keerti wo file dena jisme rustication… (he stopped when heard)

Ak: mujhe maaf kardijiye, riddhima ji aaj tak mujhse jitni bhi galtiyan hui hai unn sabke liye mai pagal kutta aapse naak ragad kar maafi maangta hun, mai accept karta hun ki mai iss duniya ka sabse jayda jaalim insaan hun aur mujh jaise insaan ke liye dharti nahi gutter hi best place hai rehne ke liye".. (he with embarrassment tried to turn thinking "tumhe nahi chodunga armaan, ab tum nahi bach sakte" when)

A: ankit abhi punishment complete nahi hui hai, sirf bolna nahi tha, jammen par apni naak bhi ragadni thi.. (ankit looked at armaan again, armaan looked at dr.keerti and ankit got his message, he finally bends down and rubbed his nose on ground, an-at, ra-mu out of happiness clapped slightly, and interns smiled, when ankit's again on the verge of turning back) thuk kar chaatne tera baap aayega…

Ak: (in frustration and anger got up) mind your language mr. armaan malik..

A: (laughed) look who is saying to mind my language, tujhe pata hai ki mai bhi ek bahut bura aur ghatiya insaan hun, mujhpe achi baton se jayda jaldi buri baatein assar karti hai, jo bhi seekha hai tujhse hi seekha hai, to mujhpar chillane ki jagah tu khud par chilla, aur ye ungli apne baap ko jaakar dikhayio, ab ye rustication orders pakad aur yaha se dafa ho ja, jindagi bhar berojgaar ghumiyo, log pata nahi aisi bets lagate hi kyu hai jinhe khud kabhi pura na kar sakein…. (he gave him one file)

Ak: (ankit's temperature suddenly came down) par kyu?? Maine to apni bet puri ki hai….

A: nahi ankit, tu bet puri kiye bina hi uth gaya beech mai, means tu bet haar gaya and as per the rule, your rustication papers are here…(ankit was shocked and looked at dr. keerti) waise agar aisa nahi chahta to ek aur kaam ho sakta hai, abhi tak maine teri tarah nirdayeta (stone hearted) nahi seekhi.. (ankit looked at armaan) tu starting se ye punishment bina ruke kar sakta hai..

Ak: what??

A: dekh maine to tujhe the best solution de diya hai, ab jo karna hai wo teri marji hai..

everyone started giving suppressed smiles, thinking aur rakho aisi punishments, apne paer par khud kulhaadi(hammer) maari hai.. ankit finally started his punishment again and armaan's feeling little relieved and lil happiness in heart seeing this condition of ankit..

ankit again looked at armaan before splitting on ground with a hope that may be he'll stop him from doing so but he's so wrong, armaan pointed to time when he looked at him and finally he spitted on ground and with mixture of embarrassment, anger and insult feeling he sucked his saliva back from ground…

everyone closed their eyes, specially riddhima, and armaan kept on looking at riddhima while shaking his head and with a lil smile thinking "ye ladki kabhi nahi badal sakti", ankit moved back on his knees and finally got up and looked at armaan as if he'll chew him with in a second thinking "aaj ka hisaab to tumhe barabar karna hi hoga…",

armaan understood his gaze and mumbled sorry ankit singhaniya, ab se tera koi bhi plan successful nahi hoga, for sure hisaab to barabar hokar hi rahega, just shuruwat hai ye, ankit tried to go towards washroom as he wanted to change his clothes

but armaan stopped him saying "hum log itne free nahi hai ki tera intejar karienge, ya game khel ya phir ye file utha aur jindagi bhar aise hi kapde badalte rahiyo…", ankit again settled down on chair, armaan smiled inwardly, vivek again tossed bottle, it's sonal, rishab asked her to sing a song for him,

like this 3 turns passed, next turn again comes on riddhima, ankit now became active, thinking that he has to give punishment to riddhima, he passed wicked smile to riddhima thinking "armaan na sahi to uski biwi hi sahi, aisi haalat karunga iski ki dono pati patni shakal ni dikha payenge kissi ko…"

Ak: to riddhima tumhari punishment ye hai ki tumhe yaha sabke ek private moment deni padegi yaha par baithe kissi bhi male ke saath, waise tumhe koi dikkat nahi hogi, tumhara to kaam yahi hai, bas hamesha akele mai karti ho aur ab…. So dr. riddhima what are you waiting for??? Get started, choose anyone of your choice….

( and ankit felt a tap on his shoulder and before he could understand he received a tight punch on his face and before he could balance himself again he again received a punch on his eye tightly and finally he received a punch on his head… ankit finally got balanced and turned in anger and screamed) armaannnn…

A: chup kar nahi to yahi par sabke saamne aisi haalat karunga, samajh nahi aayega ki jinda hai ya marr gaya…

Ak: what the hell is this???

A: khud se puch saale…

Ak: ohh to tu punishment ki baat kar raha hai, par hum truth and dare game khel rahein hai, to punishment mai apni marji se kuch bhi de sakta hun aur waise bhi problem kya hai, riddhima ko to koi…. (armaan again punched him on eyes and holds his collar…)

A: (and again hit him) ye punch auraton ki itni buri tarah bejjti karne ke liye, apni maa, bahen ya biwi se bhi aisa hi kehta hoga na ki kissi bhi mard ke saath… (he stopped in between) pata nahi na kaha se itni giri hui baatein tune seekhi hogi, hajaron tarah ke logo se mila hun mai,

par tujh jaisa kamina insaan aaj tak nahi dekha, tune aaj riddhima ko nahi har aurat ko gaali di hai, har had tune paar ki, kamal hai teri itni ghatiya baton ke baad bhi mai teri maa,bahen aur biwi ke khillaaf koi ganda word nahi use kar paa raha aur tune ek blameless ladki ke liye itne gande words use kiye,

tune kabhi socha hai ki tu itne paap karne ke baad kaha jaayega??? Konsi jindagi jeeyega aage, aaj teri maa jaha bhi hogi pachta rahi hogi ki wo beaulaad hoti to acha hota, waise tune confirm kiya hai na, tujhe pata hai na kit era baap kon hai, apni maa se pucha thana…

Ak: armaan.. (in anger)

A: kyu ab kyu chilla raha hai saale, abhi tak sharam nahi aa rahi thi jab tu itni ghatiya baatein bol raha tha, maine to just ye confirm karna tha ki tere ghatiya dimaag mai aisi ghatiya baatein aati kaha se hai, obviously apne maa-baap ko aisi harkatein kartein dekha hoga, tabhi tere dimag mai aisi baatein aayi,

kyunki jaise khud hotein hai waise hi hum auron ke baarein mai sochte hai, waisa hi hum auron ke bare mai feel karte hai, to jarur tune bhi ye sab khud ki personal life mai experience kiya hoga, tabhi tu aisi baatein kar sakta hai, taras aa raha hai tujhpar aur teri soch par, soch raah hun ki tera future kya hoga????

Ak: (removing his hands from his collar) teri bekaar ki baatein sun ne ka waqt nahi hai mere paas, riddhima ya to punishment accept kare ya phir file uthaye aur chalti bane.. (armaan again punched him twice on his head and nose, ankit in anger raised his hand too but armaan holds his hand…)

A: ye punch tere dimaag ke liye, taaki tujhe yaad aa jaaye ki game truth and dare hai, dare and dare nahi, you are supposed to ask the person what he/she wants rather than straightway giving her/him punishment and second punch teri aankho ke liye, mujhe laga that era dimaag hi kharaab hai par tune prove kar diya ki teri har cheez hi kharaab hai,

riddhima ke uppar bottle point jarura kar rahi hai, par uske saamne tu nahi mai baitha hun and as per the rule, punishment sirf mai hi de sakta hu usse… (ankit finally with blurred eyes looked at bottle as he didn't see that before, he got excited when heard interns shouting "ab aayega maja, riddhima bhabhi ki turn jo hai" )

and forgot to check bottles points, he straightway started thinking about the revengeful challenge that he could give to his enemies… ankit's face fell down and thought when did all the seats got changed, armaan smiled with anger and looked at riddhima who's looking normal may be she started getting used to these comments,

armaan again filled with anger thinking "wo kyu itna used to ho gayi inn gandi baton ke, wo kyu ab react nahi karti, kyu uski aankhein nam nahi hoti, kyu uski aankhon mai ab wo gussa nahi hota, kyu wo itna compromise karne lagi hai apni self-respect ke saath, kyuuu???

Iss ankit ko mai nahi chodunga, meri riddhima se to aaj tak compromise karwaane ki meri himmat nahi hui to who the hell he's??? riddhima tum compromise nahi kar sakti, tumhari aise hi koi bhi chalte phirte insult nahi kar sakta,

kissi ko itna hak nahi hai, mujhe ye hak nahi hai to kissi aur ki to dur ki baat hai, ankit will pay for everything, each n everything… riddhima ko aadat padi hai compromise ki par mujhe nahi, specially when its u, specially when its about my life…"

A: truth aur dare.. (he looked at riddhima with stern eyes and looked at all the interns, riddhima's on the verge of saying truth when everyone asked her to select dare as it would be a great fun as they wanna see what will her dear husband give punishment to her, finally she selected dare, and looked at armaan who turned his face to other side and then looked at ankit…)

A: (and visualized when ankit hitted her with hunter on karwa chauth, he clutched his hands tightly and then bends down and picked up hunter from footrest and threw it towards riddhima.. )dr. riddhima malik, aapka challenge ye hai ki aap bilkul mardo ki tarah 20 baar ankit ko hunter se maarogi ya phir dr. keerti se rustication letter logi… (everyone's again shocked)

R: par armaan ye mai kaise kar sakti hun…

A: choice is yours (with coldness) choice is entirely yours, you wanna me to remain at home through out my lifetime aur you'll accept this challenge, bahut himat hai na tum me, sabke saamne who(he stopped) ki tarah dance kar sakti ho, galat baato ko sun sakti ho, par ye nahi kar sakti, kitni jayda gandgi mai rehne ki aadat ho gayi hai na tumhe riddhima ki ab tumhe jara si bhi achayi ya acha kaam bardash nahi hota….

R: (with lil pain) armaan…

A: choice is yours riddhima, I didn't say anything.. (finally riddhima got up from her chair with hunter and looked at armaan then ankit, who's still shocked)

Ak: challeng riddhima ko mila hai, to mai kyu suffer karunga…usse keh ki khud ko hunter mare, mere paas aayi to haath tudwa kar waapis jaayegi…

A: oh really ankit??? Jo log kabhi khud apni baton par teeke nahi reh sakte unhe kabhi auro ko bhashan nahi dena chahiye, remember karwa chauth night, riddhima ko kabhi tumse problem nahi thi, problem tumhe thi, to tumne khud ko hunter maarne ki jagah riddhima ke uppar hunter uthaane ki himat kaise ki??? Tab nahi yaad aaya ki problem jiski hoti hai usse hi suffer karna chahiye???? (all looked at ankit with slight shock..)

Ak: ye tum kya bakwas kiye jaa rahe ho…

A: bahut bhulakad ho tum, khaer tumhe yaad nahi to ab yaad aa jayega, armaan looked at riddhima who's slightly lost and her cheeks started getting red out of anger when she reminded karwachauth night, her grip around hunter started getting tightening, armaan smiled inwardly and thought "ab to ankit tujhe koi nahi bacha payega, bhaag kar dekh le kaha bhaag sakta hai.."Riddhima moved towards ankit with red face

R: bahut shownk hai na hunter se auro ko pitne ka, khud bhi aaj maja lo, jara dekho to sahi kaisa feel hota hai…

Ak: aage mat aana riddhima, warna aisa haal karunga ki pehchaan nahi aogi khud ko..

R: abhi to tum apne haal ke bare mai socho,mera haal mere pati par chod do, wo khud dekh lenge mujhe.. (saying so riddhima hitted him for the first time, all the interns and old gang along with rohit started clapping with anger on ankit

and mumbled "riddhima aur jor se, iss kutte kii iss se bhi buri saja honi chahiye, jo insaan dusre insaano ki kadar karna nahi jaanta, jiss aurat ke womb se janam liya ussi ke bare mai itni gandi baatein karta hai usse jeene ka koi hak nahi hai..")

Though dr. keerti's also angry on ankit but she's not able to tolerate this, she tried to stop armaan but armaan begged him with eyes to remain silent, niki's in dilemma, at one side she's happy seeing this condition of ankit as she too hated him when he placed such a bad challenge in front of riddhima and

other side she's not able to see this condition of his friend who helped him in every thick and thin, who helped his husband to reopen his factory and ra-mu,at-an were clapping with anger on their hearts, anjali's screaming like maniacs "aur maar ridzie, iss jungle jaanwar ka jeena hi apne aap mai paap hai aur paap ko iss duniya mai rehne ka koi hak nahi hai…. Maar ridzie aur jor se…" she gritted her teeths..

Next time when riddhima tried to hit ankit, he holds her hunter, but from back armaan pushed him such that he fell on floor, ankit looked him with anger..

Ak: saale kayar kahi ke, hamesha buzdillon ki tarah piche se hi waar kariyo..

A: iss par mai comment naahi karun to acha rahega, tu aur mai bahut ache se jaante hai ki kaayar kaun hai, and by the way mai tujhe koi maar nahi raha tha, bas ye batana tha ki tu bas riddhima se bach kar bhaag sakta hai, par hunter ko ya ridhima ko haath nahi laga sakta, otherwise it'll be counted as a foul, tu to bhallai kar nahi sakta,

par humne abhi ye sab cheezein nahi choddi hai, tujhe foul se bachane ke liye hi tujhe dhakka diya tha… (all giggled when heard armaan's explanation and before they could talk more, riddhima again hitted him, armaan while clapping lightly sided from riddhima's way, ankit tried to get up but riddhima didn't let him,

she kept on hitting him and ankit's groaning in pain, but none of the heart felt his pain, all started counting in descending order, in between dr. keerti and niki left the place as their pagers started ringing, rest all hooted like hell, thank god dr. shashank's out of station, ankit pained badly, he tried to run but couldn't move even a bit,

riddhima when hitted him last time, falls in front of armaan, on his knees, she wants to cry badly as she's floating in lots of emotions but couldn't cry as she's tied in her own resolution, seeing her like this armaan silently cleared his tear from his eyes corner thinking "you'll pay for everything ankit, everything…",

he wants to caress her head but something stopped him, he looked at hunter and in anger hitted ankit for the last time with hunter that too very hard, than asked vivek and rishab to put him on chair, ankit's shocked again when instead of taking him inside the hospital, they again made him settled on chair…

A: itna shock hone ki jarurat nahi hai, game ka rule hai ki koi bhi game beech mai bina chodde nahi jaa sakta jab tak har kissi ki turn na aa jaaye.. agar jaana hai to ye file le aur permanently daffa hoja..

Ak: ye file kii dhamki kisse de raha hai baar baar, ye ek game hai, tujhe kya lagta hai ki iss stupid game ke basis par mujhe koi naukri nahi dega, tera dimaag kharaab hai par trustees ya doctors ka nahi, wo kaabiliyat dekhkar doctors appoint karte hai, inn bakwaas sharto par nahi, aur mujh jaise kaabil doctor ko koi bhi haste haste rakhega, mujhe yaha se koi nahi nikal sakta, koi bhi nahi…

A: oopssss… ohh to teri G.K bhi bahut kamjor hai, tujhe pata hona chahiye ki sanjeevani ki next head dr. keerti hai aur wo sanjeevani ke liye jo bhi decision legi ab uss decision par koi question nahi kar sakta (everyone's surprised coz no one knows about this) aur tujhe kya lagta hai ki sanjeevani se rustication order lekar tujhe kissi aur hospital mai entry mil jaayegi??

Sanjeevani ki branch all over the world hai and so its tie ups with other hospital, I hope I don't need to teach you about all this, to yaha se rustication ke baad, tujhe kissi bhi hospital mai shakal dikhane ka bhi mauka nahi milega…. Tere kehne par hi dr. keerti ne ye file taiyar karwayi hai (he grinned, ankit was shocked)

ab decide tu kar, game khelni hai ya ya ya….. (ankit finally settled quietly on chair, armaan again smiled, riddhima kept on looking at armaan with confused expressions, sonal tossed bottle again, after 2 turns its vivek and punishment's to given either by armaan or riddhima as its in between them..

Vi: so bhaiya bhabhi aap dono mai se kon mujhe punishment dega??

A,R: mai.. (both looked at each other)

R: armaan please mai dungi punishment vivek ko, vivek tum na mujhe aalu ke gol gol..

A: ohh pleaseee, aisa koi scene nahi hai, vivek ko punishment mai dunga..

R: armaan mai dungi…

Vi: haan bhabhi aap bhaiya ko kiss ghar jaakar aaram se de dijiyega… (he winked and riddhima flustered looked at armaan, armaan showed eyes to vivek, he zipped his tongue with a giggle and all smiled, riddhima kept on looking at ground, armaan understood the uncomfortability of riddhima,

last year seriously changed most of the things in their life except for their love, riddhima who used to blush on these kind of comments today was feeling uncomfortable, may be she feared that ankit won't pass comment on her again, its quiet tough na to take allegations again and again, armaan made a slight face, then to cheer her)

A: so finally mai punishment de dun na agar kissi ko gol gol aalu ke pranthe na banwaane ho to….

R: hmmm…

A: soch lo, gol pranthe wo bhi vivek ke haatho se, jisse ye bhi nahi pata ki pranthe banate kaise hai aur kiss se bante hai…

Vi: aap ho kiski side bhai?? Meri ya bhabhi ki??

A: gol- gol phere jiske saath liye hai, uski side…

Vi: dal badlu, jab kaam karwana hota hai to vivek yaad aa jaata hai, aaj waala kaam bhi unhi se karwa lete, hamare paas kyu aaye the… huhh… (riddhima looked at arman, than vivek..)

R: konsa kaam??? (with raised eyes)

Vi: are yaha par sab arrangeme…aaauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu… vedic kya kar raha hai saale, haye mera paer, kya haalat kar di.

R: par vedic yaha par nahi hai…

Vi: kyu nahi hai??? Wo to table ke….aaaauuuuuuuu, rishab an tujhe kya dushmani hai mere paer se??? (rishab pressed his shoulder tightly

Ri: (murmured) kuch logo ki aankhein aur dimaag ki battiyaan jalaane ke liye kabhi kabhi strange strange harkatein bhi kar deni chahiye…. (while placing arm around his shoulder and slightly pressing it, vivek looked at armaan who's looking him as if he'll eat him in next second, he scratched his head and looked here and there)

R: kya matlab?? (with suspicious eyes)

Ri: kuch nahi bhabhi, bechare ne subah se apni jaane jaan, dil-o-bahar ko nahi dekha na, I mean vedic ko nahi dekha na issliye har jagah usse visualize kar raha hai, bas yahi keh raha tha ki apni aankhein aur dimaag kholkar baitha kar, warna dil ki feelings bahar aa gayi to bahut gadbad ho jayegi…

R: ohh hoo, tum dono bhi na… chodo, vivek jaao jaakar aalu ke gol-gol pranthe banakar lao….(vivek made a face and got up, everyone took a relaxing breathe where as ankit kept on looking everyone with suspicious eyes as he knew something is fishy, but what he didn't get)

Rishab tossed bottle, after 3 rounds, its on siddharth, armaan looked at siddharth and asked something with eyes and after getting his answer, armaan threw knife towards siddharth when he said that he wants a daring challenge…

A: challenge ye hai ki aapko dr. singhaniya ke haatho par iss knife se unka naam likhna hai, actually unhe auron ke haatho pe chaaku chalakar naam mittane mai bahut maja aata hai, to hum unka opposite karte hai, wo naam mitate hai, aur tum unke haatho par unka naam likho, kahi aisa na ho aage chalkar apna naam bhul jaaye, uski nishani ke liye….

Si: nice challenge sir….. (some faces were again looking shocked, ankit stood up)

Ak: you are crossing your limits armaan, ye ek game hai, koi sarhadd paar ki ladayi nahi hai...

A: (cutting him) tujhe bhonkne ki bahut aadat pad gayi hai na, short term memory loss naam ki bimari suni hai, wo hui hai tujhe, jo har 5 minute baad phir khada hokar same baaton ko bhonkna shuru kar deta hai, limits to humne decide ki hi nahi thi, aur limits todna bhi tune hi sikhaya hai, game aur jung ki baat to naahi kar,

yaha par baitha har ek insaan proof hai ki kisne iss game ko jung ka maidan banaya, to better ab tu chup chap muh par taala lagakar baitha reh aur dekhta jaa ki ab kya kya hota hai…. Siddharth your time starts now…

(ankit tried to get up but soon fell down as his shoe laces were tied together, before he could get up, siddharth holds him, ankit tried to push him, but siddharth pushed him back on floor and settled on his upper torso, then holds his hand, ankit became almost lifeless, riddhima holds armaan's arm out of fear, armaan looked at riddhima who closed her eyes tightly..)

A: riddhima jab julm sehne ki himmat rakhti ho to dekhne ki bhi himmat rakho… (riddhima looked him and then at ankit who's crying a bit, trying to move his hand back, but siddharth's saying "mai apni job ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun to ye kya cheez hai, ankit called for help but no one dared to move, some heart started feeling pity but no one dared to speak,

armaan paid no heed towards his pleeds as his ears were busy in listening silent tears and silent calling of his name from riddhima on karwachauth, ankit's every plead was acting like a lil piece of ice that armaan wanted to place on riddhima's wounds… he kept on looking at ankit..)

to be continued..

next update: Sunday..

precap:

armaan looked at ankit who's lying on ground like a dead life and thought " abhi tak tune sirf armaan ka pyar dekha tha, ab tu ek deewane ka vehshipan, paagalpan dekhega, tu bhi jungli hai, aur mai bhi, par farak ye hai ki nafrat ke liye junglipan failata hai aur mera junglipana meri riddhima ke liye, uski self-respect ke liye hoga…

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Riddhima holds his hand and made him stop, while looking at him mumbled "tu hatha wich hath fadeya, ve adeya chaddi na……"

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A: (opened his arms, riddhima rushed to him with tears touching her eyes line and hides herself in him) I love you riddhima….

R: phir se kaho…

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Dr. keerti: sorry dr. ankit ab aap kabhi father nahi ban sakte… (ankit's shocked, armaan and riddhima's too shocked too, but..)

A: apne hi paapo ki saja bhugat raha hai, ye saja bhagwan ne uske liye rakhi hai..

R: armaan aaj pata nahi kyu tumse darr lag raha hai…. (armaan looked her)

Waoooo kitna lamba precap hai.. hee heee..

Pms will be send only to those who's commenting/ pressing like tab and is in my buddy list, commenting's not a compulsion but atleast u can press like tab na, wo to itna mushkil nahi haina, just ek click karna hai, it hardly takes a second or 2, mere liye bhi to jaan na jaruri hai na ki kon read kar raha hai, kiss ne kab skip kiya, agar aapne story read karna chod diya hai to bejhijhak mujhse kahiye ki ab aapko pms nahi chahiye…

Stay tunned..

Lods of luv

Ankita..

Edited by GoDsLoVe - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: GoDsLoVe

jiii aaj update finally ho jayega, still writing, around 12 or 1 i'll do update..


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: GoDsLoVe

jiii aaj update finally ho jayega, still writing, around 12 or 1 i'll do update..


reserved for part-194


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thnku hai jiiiii

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Posted: 14 years ago
the part was amazing yaar
Ankit ki band bajte dekh ke maza aa gaya
Edited by AR_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwwww
this part was just amazing
i really don't have any words to describe how much i liked this part
waiting 4 next part eagerly
cont soon
thanx 4 pm
Edited by DRarmaanfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

update is awesome ankita dear....😊

hearty 👏fr u...ankit deserve mre harsh punishments...hate him so much..🤢

da way armaan is fightng fr his loves pride n self respect is awesome...love him...liked ridz emotions ven she was beating ankit vid hunter...she should gve him mre den 20 hunterz...

al in al superb update....n precap made mre curious abt AR confession(again😆)

plzzz forgive me if i annoyed u vid my msgz fr asking updates...

by da way do update on sunday...😃

love

sania

Edited by saniashzadi_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
diii jaldiii shayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy updatee krdoo na..bohaaaaaaaaaaaaat nennnnddd arahi hai😆

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