~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 3~

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SoniRita

@SoniRita

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+ 60

Posted: 14 years ago

#921

wowww awesomeeeeeeeeeee update muskaan i lovee how geet was thinking abt maan n she all blusing n all hehehe n den lovee da brig-geet convo so sweet n aww maan khudh went to geet's family aww awesomeee do continue soon waiting for marriage

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Anupama

@beforesunrise

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#922

now i'm so scared geet is dreaming too much i just hope her dreams dznt get broken ..............

maan called her family convinced them😊 .........awesum he did everything jst din propose her 😔

i knw confessing love wud be so soon .....maan thnks he only likes her so much he just cant understand his feelings for her ..............i wud love to see them get married nd maan slowly realizing his love ...............

this so wonderful how u expressed geet's feeling in words is just too awesum ...........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Humera Anwar

@-Humera-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#923

Bajiiii... loved the update!!!

Geet admitting she loves Maan, can't wait till he admits it as well!!

Hope that Maaneet marriage does happen..!!

Loved how Maan convinced her whole family 😳, and the Geet- Brij convo was really sweet too..!!

Geet got shy thinking about their wedding, that was really sweet, and she still couldn't believe they were actually getting married!!

An awesome update baji, can't wait for their most awaited wedding!!

Update soon baji.. xx Thanks for the pm

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#924

its toooo cute n i loved brij n geet scenes they r soooo lovley n cute

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#925

awesome update

loved it

loved how maan convinced her family

yes cant wait till the wedding

Geet got shy thinking about their wedding, that was really sweet, and she still couldn't believe they were actually getting married

briji and geet convo was the best

cant wait for da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

HAPPY DIWALI

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maaneetfan123

@maaneetfan123

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#926

⭐️😊Outstanding terrific update continue soon 👏😊

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ixray

@ixray

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#927

totally loving your updates !!! please let them get married ??!!! confused how come Brij is still so gunhoo about Maan being the father of the child or does he not know about it. i mean if i was at Brij's place i would feel a lil bit of betrayal. afteral Brij had thought that Maan was a good human being ( which Maan is, not that i am disputing that)..... but still i think there would have been a lil bit of lingering anger. how would a conversation between Maan and Geet's Family regarding the baby truth be like.

no make it a conversation between Maan, Geet and GEet's family.

really would love to see Geets parents, Darji and Brij's reactions.

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Priya

@-Priyaa-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#928

di i read all the updates i wudnt have commented really busy but i cudnt help but say this-
THERE BETTER NOT BE A PROB IN THE WEDDING AND IT BETTER HAPPEN. lolz di sorry cudnt help it. update soon.
luv ya,
priya

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#929

~madhoshi~
part 53

thai ji knocked the door - bhai - bahen ki baatein hogai to challen late ho raha hain
brij noded
rano & raji along geets side & escorted her to the car
it was maans car the long black car decorated with flowers
the driver opened the door for her, raji helped her with pallo & her lehenga
geet was getting nervous but now it was more of anxiety of being with him
their new life togather... there was no turning back. she knew she loved him
and believed he loves her some where deep inside. no matter what she will do
every thing to make their relation work. she cherrished him, more than anything
in this world.
aankhon mein pyar dil mein aarman
dil mein chupaye jazbaat lekar chali ho mano
ki kash aise guzre ye zindagi, iski nafs unki tehveel main ho
ki iski har dua unhe qabool ho, iski dar dua main unka hasool ho
ki unki har ghum iski manzil ho, aur iski manzil unkal hasool ho
ki iski har qadam unki rah mein ho, aur iski har qadam unki chah mein ho

the car stopped infornt of the temple steps. darti, sharmati she got off the car
she looked at the steps and was reminded of the day when they came hear first time
and he lifted her up the steps...she shied & looked down
as she walked up the steps her anxiety was building, she was getting really queasy
the madap was beautfuly decorated with red roses she could'nt dare to look up
she could feel his presence & his eyes looking at her

maan was mesmerized to see her in the deepest shade of red. the red colour was
complimenting her already red cheeks. he did'nt takes his eyes off her even for a min..

aaj aapni dulhan ko laal jode mein sajaya dehk mano ko hi gaya
uski pyar ki laali main ranghi thi mano
uski ke gore haathon par usi ne sajayee mehendi thi
bahut gehra chada tha unke madhoshi rang mano
lagh rahiti parion se bhi sundhar,
mano aaj dehk kar suraj ki chamak bhi sharmaya hoga
majboor si kyun na lagi woh???
sochta raha...najane kis tarah usne khud ko samjhaya hoga?

daadi ma came in front & welcomed rano & thai ji
they introduced them self. daadi introduced meera & dev
rano eyes was filled with tears & greatfullness
daadi understood her their unsaid words and hugged her - aap ko chinta karne ke zaroorat nahi
daadi admired geet & kissed her forehead - kisi ki nazar na lage
as they walked further close to the madap nervousness creeped in her
she just wanted to leave every thing & run away but she moved towards him
she kept her head down. as she walked closer she could wagely see him sitting there
baby~papa papa
geet was relieved he was there. this made her feel weak & scared so many thoughts rushed into her head. as she was really close to him she could meet his gaze. his eyes was blank.
she could'nt make out what he was feeling or thinking. but all mattered to her now
was him, his happiness, their baby. she looked closely and saw what he was wearing

she could not believe. the same shervani which she made him try. she wondered
how come he remembered. she realized she did'nt seem to know him at all.
samjh nahi pati unhe, mano aaj tak woh koi aur hi tha
dar sa dil main uttar ne laga, kya woh unhe kabi samjh payegi,
woh kya chate honge isse, issi khayal main dar kar thaam se gayee
she frooze..he held his hand out to her, that said it all
she softly slipped her hand into his & shied. he helped her to sit next to him
the heart & scent of their body swept around them , circling them in a safe envolpe.
She fluttered a quick glance at him, admiring him sinking into his desire.
pandit ji started the mantras and brij was called upon for kanya daan
he handed over her hand into maans.. she softly touched his hand noticing his wound
looking at him questioningly. he looked away. she felt scared & worried
maan was feeling dead scared too, wheather he will be able to live upto her expectations
every little happiness of hers meant the world to him now
there duppattas were tried togather never to be separated
pandit ji suggested them to rise to take the pheres
maan helped her to rise. they took first 6 pheres with maan in infront
geet lost looking at him conciously. maan was very carefull & meaningfully taking every
step. baby~dancing in joy
pandit ji asked her to come forward thai ji helped her to move in front
she walked in & they completed the 7 pheres. maan filled her mang
they were reminded of the day when he almost filled it, they both smiled & looked down
his smile ...she was so delighted to see him smile..mano koi nayab khazana
he tied the mangalsutar & his hands went pass slowly around her neck she bend down & shied
again, they took every ones blessings
daadi kissed them & hugged them
rano could'nt control her tears
raji was jumping in joy
brij hugged maan & thanxed him
while they were walking down the steps, maan could take his eyes off her

baby~was still jumping making her restless
geet - deehko na kud raha hain
maan looked at her innocent face & caresed her stomach
baby~lied back enjoying is touch😳
geet - this is not fair
maan - kya huwa
geet - woh aap ki har baat manta hain phir meri baat kaun manaegha
maan - main hoon na
she shied & looked down

precap
grah pravesh

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Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
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Love muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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