~*Fan Fic-Tu Muskura*~ *LAST PART, PART 16 PG 93* - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OH MA GODD!!! girlieee u updated muazz luv naintara and dev in this luvvv em!!
And omg waitin for their first meet!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey awesome part...waiting till maaneet meet:)...Thanks for the Pm!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!
Love that DevTara are good!
Nice part!
Waiting for MaanGeet to meet!
Update Soon :-)
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3


Khurana Mansion


Dev and NT stepped out the car and took a deep breath before heading in the house to let Maan know that they hired a new secretary for him.

Dev: babe this can go 1 of 2 ways....bro will be super excited that we found him some...which is unlikely because he doesn't like to show emotions....or he'll be irritated that we did this without asking him

NT: I thinK I'll go with option number two
NT said laughing as she opened the doors to their house.

Khurana mansion was the most beautiful house that you had ever seen....every time someone saw it for the first time it took their breath away. The floors where all marble and had Greek columns at the entrance...even though it was a massive house it still had a homely feeling to it that most mansions didn't have.

Dev and NT walked to the kitchen knowing they would find Dadi there. NT ran to tell her the great news

NT: DADI
NT shrieked as she saw her and ran to give her a huge hug

Dadi: beta you guys are back so fast....how was work


NT: work was fine BUT we have something amazing to tell you!!!


Dadi: REALLY
She asked intrigued


Dev: dadi woh.....you know adi and pinky right? Well pinky has a friend who she is pushing to get a job and we know that bro needs a secretary so we hired her....

Dadi: are you guys sure that is a good idea...you know how girls get around Maan they just stare at him and don't do their jobs and that really irritates him so he ends firing the poor girls
NT: dadi trust us this girl is different she seems like she won't take veerjis crap....and besides she called him a dusht dhanav today without meeting him!!


Dadi: REALLY!! I like this girl already!!
Dadi said laughing as she was mixing her tea


Dev: but dadi we need to go tell bro now do you know where he is?

Dadi: ummm well your bro had a bad day at the office....so I think you know where he is
She said as she lifted her eyebrow


Dev & NT: THE GYM!!!

Everyone knew that when Maan was in a bad mood he went to his gym in the house to release his anger


Dadi: good luck betas....I'm headed to bed Good night
She said as she gave them a smile and a hug before she left.

Dev and NT gripped each other's hand tighter as they headed for the gym. Once there they could hear the punching bag from outside.

Dev: sweetie maybe we should wait till bro is done...who knows maybe he'll be in a better mood by then

NT: dev stop being such a wimp you know Maan is NEVER in a good mood...besides it's not like we are doing anything wrong we just hired a nice girl for him baas
She said as she slowly opened the door.

Maan was standing in the middle of the room wearing nothing but his Thi Chi pants. He was in his own little world whenever he was doing his exercises.

His body was glistening with sweat as it was making its way down from his forehead kissing his cheeks and lips as it headed down his neck and into the crests of his chiselled abs.

He had the body of a Greek god. Every man died to be like him, and every woman just died wanting to be with him. But Maan just wanted to be left alone and not bothered.


There weren't many people he trusted in life...he only trusted those close to him...his dadi brother and sister in law and his he's friend adi.

Dev and NT saw that he was finally finished and decided this was the perfect time to go talk to him since he was relaxed

NT: Maan
NT spoke hesitantly as she tapped his shoulder

Maan: hmmm
He said as he turned around to see Dev standing next to her

Maan: why do you guys look like you want to say something to me
He asked raising his eyebrow as the patted his sweat dry

Dev: bro we needed to talk to you about something

Maan: toh bolo
He said as he walked to water

NT: we hired you a secretary
She blurted out and covered her mouth realizing what she had just done and looked at Dev with her eyes wide opened giving an I'm sorry look

Maan: WHAT (he said confused) I don't need a secretary they all suck and never last more than a day besides I have adi helping me

Dev: but till how long bro...adi is getting married within a month I'm sure a newlywed couple doesn't want to be at the office late at night with you

Maan shot them a stare knowing they were right

Maan: fine I'll give this girl a shot but if within the first day I don't like her than that's it she's fired and I don't want to hear anything more about it. GOT IT.

He said as he left the room

NT: dev we are going to have to go to the office tomorrow so Maan doesn't try to scare poor Geet away

She said giggling happy that Maan didn't yell at them too much.

The next morning Geet woke up at 7am nervous about her first day

Geet: haaye babaji what am I getting myself into everyone keeps saying what a mean person he is....but no rather than telling them no i don't want the job...I took the job like fool

She said as she made her way to take a shower and got ready for work. It was now 8 o'clock and both pinky and Geet were busy getting ready for work


Piny: argh yeh adi na...humesha late hai....after marriage I'm definitely buying him a watch
She said giggling.

Geet was still in her room doing a little prayer before work


Geet:babaji please let everything go smoothly today...


Piny: geet jaldi adi is here
Geet stood there frozen with tears swelling up in her eyes

Flashback


Geet: Ranbir jaldi karo your ride is here....you know how people hate waiting when they car pool


She said walking to their bedroom without watching where she was going
and slammed into Ranbir

Ranbir: sweetie I'm ready ( as he gave Geet a peck on the check) seems like someone is in a hurry to get me to leave...

Geet: if it where up to me I wouldn't ever let you leave
She said hugging him tightly

Present


Geet: why did you take him from me babaji...I never asked for anything in my life and when I did you couldn't even give me back my Ranbir

She said furiously wiping away her tears and headed to adi's car

As they made their way to Khurana Constructions Geet fears seemed to decrease...it felt like she already belonged her

They meet Dev in NT at the receptionist desk where they showed Geet around the office and introduced her to everyone.

All the employees where very friendly and nice and they all said the same thing when they found out she was going to be Maan's secretary "good luck with that" seemed to be the common line everyone used. Geet decided not to pay too much attention to it and would makeup her own mind when she met the Dusht Dhanav herself.

NT: Geet that's Maan's office you can go sit in their Veerji is going to be here soon....would you like anything to drink

Geet: no thanks I'm good


Dev: great well if you need us we'll in the office upstairs don't hesitate to come there....oh and good luck with bro

He said as NT gave Geet a hug and headed upstairs with her husband

As Geet entered Maan's office she noticed that is was so dull compared to the rest of the office....there were no pictures or colors just white walls and a huge black desk. Geet noticed the piles of paper on his desk and thought she would start cleaning it up. But before that she walked over to the window and opened it.

As Geet opened the window the wind blew in her hair and made her dupatta fly within the wind as well she took a big breath of fresh air and turned around horrified

Geet: OMG the papers

She said as she shut the window and grabbed all the files and papers the blew behind the desk. She bent down to grab them when she heard an irritated voice

Maan: WHAT THE HELL happened here
He roared looking around at the mess in his office


Maan: WHO THE HELL did this
He said louder and more irritated

Geet (whispering to herself) haaye babaji help

Maan: whose there why are you hiding
He asked as he heard a voice

Geet was too scared to get up so she just peaked over his desk

Maan scanned the room and his eyes land on a pair hazel eyes. He couldn't take his eyes off of them. How can a pair of eyes be so innocent and soft at the same time. He was so memorized by them.

Maan: Kaun ho tum


He asked with a less irritated voice still staring straight into those hazel eyes.

Edited by Maaneet-Fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THANK YOU ALL FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS

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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
great update
for once nt nd dev are good people
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update
loved it
can't wait for da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
wooow loved da update
do continue
cant wait to read wat happpen nxt
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks guys I'm glad you all liked it!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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r u still updatin or thts all for 2day

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