Naina-the hair part 2

Once again hi guyz!!

Heres part 2 of my fan fiction.

Do u have a frenzied, out of control naina at home? Is she ur worst nightmare?Well then heres wat u need 2 know!!!

How 2 control a frenzied Naina

By Sandhra ur nainaspecialist

read on!! and as usual keep the comments coming!!😛

WARNING: the following is just preliminary naina control measures. may not alwayz work effectively.

Naina holding the gun to Kripa's head.

Kripa:Aunty what r u doing?

Naina:Shut up!!!Everyone listen 2 me or she dies….

Dilip:But Naina.

Naina:I asked u 2 b quiet!!!I do the talking around here!!!!!

Dilip:Ya, well u have been doin' tht 4 the past 34 yrs

Kripa: (looks at Angad with helpless eyes) Angad, kuch karo!!

Angad: I'm thinkin' sweetie, I'm thinkin'!!!! Give me a minute!

Damini: 34!!??So naina must b like ancient; she told me u had a late marriage

Dilip:of course, she's supposed 2 b museum property!!

Everyone looks at naina in historical wonder..

Naina: DILIP!!!!!!!!!

Dilip:Oh sorry!.but wat I'm trying 2 say is……

Naina: One more word and a shiny thing comes whizzzing past u!!

Dilip(expectantly)THE WEDDING RING???FINALLY!!!!!!!! 👏

Naina:no the bullet !

Dilip:(looking as sad as sad can be) Oh… 😕

Naina: Now angad get this str8, u cant marry this chotti shehar ki ladki.

Dilip: (whispering)Like ur shehar even shows on the map......

Angad: I love her!!!

Naina: Nonsense. Explain this love 2 me!

Angad: startz singing " Lafzon mein keh na sakoon…"looking at Kripa with love drowned eyes……

When he has finished, Kripa has tears in her eyes and mishti & Kar are love locked.

The others clap.

Naina:Stop this!!U will marry Mishti and I think I'll do ur engagement tomorrow. No not tomorrow-I have 2 go 2 the beauty parlour…day after…

Gayathri::wel y don't u do it in the evening?

Kripa: MOM!!whose side r u on anyway?

Gayathri: Oops!!😳 Sorry!! Jus curious!! Surely no one spends a whole day in the parlor!

Karthik: Sez u. Mom takes one whole day in thr and another full one in the hair saloon tht specializes in hair like hers.

Naina: KARTHIK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad is creeping slowly towards nainas back….

Karthik:Ever see Chachi 420?

Suryabhan: Ooh!ooh!!yes!!! saw it 7 times!!!! HILARIOUS!!
Gayathri: (eyebrows raised) U went 2 a movie without me?

Suryabhan: Wat??! No!! I..I mean I saw the poster

Gayathri: oh really…. 😡

Karthik: Wel Moms like tht, her makeup stayz for 5 hours only and then begins 2 crack!

Naina: Karthik, tht does it. The moment of truth has come. U were alwayz the black sheep of this family and thtz coz u r not my son!!!V found u on the road and adopted u.

Everyone is silent.

Naina: Well isnt anyone shocked??!!

Damini: No v figured tht out years ago. What d'ya take us 4 chimps?

Karthik: And y did u adopt me?

Naina: V were goin' to make u the star!! But kismat ka khel- u were 0.5% short of the rock star height requirements.

Angad is still creeping….

Mishti (panicking) I didn't know!!. He does get the money rite?

Naina: In ur dreamz !!

Kar:don't worry honey! She already signed a paper leaving half her money 2 me.

Naina: I DID NOT!!!

Karthik: Yes u did!I put it in between the show's paperz!!

Naina: NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!Traitor!!!!!!

Mish: Hey!! I like u!!u really r Mishty material!!

karthik: Thanx sweetheart!!!

Angad finally getz behind Naina's back

He silently picks up a porcelain vase when dadi calls him

Dadi: Psst!!!Angad!! Take the brass one. She will b out cold longer.

Angad:dadi! How did'ya know wat I was going 2 do?

Dadi: Agar tu shetan, to don't 4 get I'm ur Grandma!!!

Angad: (laughs) U r cool!!! V cud make a gr8 team!

Dadi (laughs too) I guess!

"Bunty aur Babli" song starts in the background.

Everyone has nice dance with Dadi & Angad in the lead.😃

Naina is too busy explaining 2 Karthik how he has betrayed her 2 mind about all the music.

Kripa:Angad, hurry!!

Angad throws the brass vase on Naina's head.

Naina: and u betrayed me Karthik!! And now I'll kill this girl and Angad will marry Mish…(clunk!!)

Dadi: Cool shot!!!!!! 👏

Gayathri: Bulls Eye!!! 👏

Suryabhan & Dilip: chak de phatte!!!!! 👏

Damini, Mish and Karthik: U rock Dadi!! 👏

Dadi:-smiles shyly!! 😳😳

Naina: (falls on ground)Angad…Wat r u doing.

Kripa runs 2 Angad & both of them have a passionate hug!!

Angad: Love u mummy, but love her more!!!

Kripa: Angad u r the best!!! I love u!!!!!!!!

Angad Love u more than that!!!

( gets down on his knees, takes a ring out of pocket, takes Kripas hand) WILL U MARRY ME??????

Kripa: in tears- YES!!!!!!!!

Karthik 2 Mish-And will u marry me?/

Maish-Totally!!!!!!!!

Gayathri, Damini, Dilip & Suryabhan all embrace each other-ab to hum samdhy ho gaye hain

Naina is still out cold.

Damini- V have 2 take her 2 the hospital!!!

2 b continued……….

harshita, i've done my best 2 make it atleast a bit romantic, sorry if i've failed dismally!!😭

i'm not tht experienced in the romance field!!!

Sorry will try reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeely hard next time!!!!!!!!!!!

Twas hilarious, esp the dadi angad part 😆 ... hey why don u try romantic comedy out for the next part. 😉 😆 .. romance n comedy b/w all the pairs with naina 😕 😕 interferin... that'll be a treat to read.... 😉 😆 😉

Keep up the good work...
😉 cheers
Mru
Still laughin bout the dadi n angad part 😆

that was cool sandy !! loved it..

👏👏👏................brilliant story Sandra

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that was absolutely brilliant & hilarious, gr8 job👏

Sandra, you are a genius👏

Where do you get these cool ideas from? I loved the Angad - Dadi part and the one b/w Misthi and Kartik!😆😆😆

Great job girl, please continue this! I am archiving your fan-fic stories on my Laptop........will use them whenever I need a really good laugh!

You rock!

Cheers,

Chilly