~*~Egoistic Love?~*~-Maaneet- OS (2/11/10)

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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Posted: 15 years ago

awww.. fantastic! loved the story, hope in real life something like this happens between MG to get them back together!

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 15 years ago

loved it

it was beautiful

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Awesome os
loved it
was beautiful
thanks 4 da pm

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hheeyyaaa Kashish Di!!!

Friggginnn helll whatt aa shyytt aasss SPECTACULAR one shoottt!!

Dude it was like totally awesome!!
Loved how it was a happie ending!!
Lol!!
Love ya!!

Jinszyy <3

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shireen sukhan

@shinseen

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

Kashish dear,

OS is nice.......

tum ne undono ko mila tu diya , and yes EGO is the main problem

lekin shaadi...........us k liyen tu pori FF chahiye....................

What say? I am Waiting now.....................

when you start please PM me

thanks for pm

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hindu4lyf

@hindu4lyf

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

Well done-that was absolutely amazing!!

The only thing i'd add is that the Maan Singh Khurana that we all love and know would never really apologise to Geet unless he realises just how much he's been hurting her. You touched on the pain but maybe could've added a bit more detail. Other than that, it was fab! I could actually imagine each and every scene happening.