Is Love enough-upd pt8 love is everything pg 42&44 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sam when are you going to complete the Last part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ANJANA

Sam when are you going to complete the Last part😊

likh raho i hoon anju jaldi kar doongi in 3 ghante i feel
agar bache time pe so gaye...😃 want to give u all major jhatke😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
sami some romance plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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thoda sabr karo jyoths niraash na karoon yeh koshish rahegi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

likh raho i hoon anju jaldi kar doongi in 3 ghante i feel

agar bache time pe so gaye...😃 want to give u all major jhatke😆😉




Wow Sam can't wait for your jhatka But just hope we will not curse you after reading that😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
love is everything....part 8(b) friends wil edit to add pictures,but guys padho if u feel it s enough romance...its 3 30 in morning so kal ko wil edit both parts and fix 😳😳
 
 
mummyji please keep the party on 15t
she heard anmol emphasizing on date too much, on casual inquiry she realized Anmol wanted Ana to attend the  party.; all her enthusiasm for the party vanished into thin air.....
she even tried picking fight with anmol over a very childish reason
but...

1 week before party

Ana sweetheart how can you do this to me.....?

Anmol was groaning over the phone, i changed part dates just for you sweetie

Anmol it's your special day,I know how much it means to you that vasu aunty has accepted you;Ragini wil not want me there Anmol .

What?

Who the hell is she to say so,you are my only relation, rest all are through her, though they r as dear to me as you are, but she knows this, she knows what you mean to me?

Does she really Anmol?

Chodo baba am trying na to change my flight....but you dont postpone the party

Aunty has worked so hard, I spoke with her today Ana said softly

A gentle smile on her face , she loves you Anmol truly, her acceptance was from bottom of her heart, complete

Yes came a snort..

Acha ab so jao I wil see what I can do.

Anmol sighed deeply and turned to se Ragini lying with her back towards him.

So gayi kya

Na

Wo Ragini ask mom to postpone date for  party please

I want ana there,i cant even think of celebrating my happiness without her

Kyun aa to rahi hai wo

No she has some work ragini please.

 

Wo ana

Ana Ana Ana

Aur kuch socha hai kabhi

3 maheene ho gaye

You have forgotten all of us, you forget we exist

Morning you call, evening she calls..

You are neglecting me children every one for her

Ragini was trembling with rage

 

What I have neglected you ....

Anmol snapped, I refuse to be part of this insulting conversation

I am going in my study

And please don't disturb me

He left.....

2 hrs later

Anmol...

 

He was sitting in chair with his head resting on table before him, Ragini's heart turned

Suddenly he was sitting up and looked at her

Yes bolo

Yahaan you can't rest

You need bed ,sleep in room

Hm ragini i slept on that uncomfortable sofa for 6 years, day bed in my study is much more comfortable

Aajao please

Just get lost

What

Now you wil l even yell at me

This ana has taken ypour brain hostage

Anmol got up and said what did you just say

Listen this is between me and you,don bring a innocent girl into this...

Innocent aur wo.

She accused Ranvir of asking such big keemat of your life

How can she say that

Ranvir was always right.....

Anmol closed his eyes

Ragini you go and sleep please

Leave me alone

But

I said leave me alone...

ragini ran from there tears falling from her face,anmol slammed his fist on table and held his head in his hands.

 

Ana was sitting in her apartment, it was on 10th floor, she could see Taj Mahal from there,

So beta kaisa hai

Inderjit was asking

Uncle stunning

But uncle please keep my news as complete surprise

Of course beta no one has clue

She set to work

Later at night, she picked her bua 's old picture and hugged

I promise bua he will be happy

That night anmol was trying Ana's number blindly

Why has she not called, her phone is disconnected

Varun uncle bhi away it seems

Uff h esaid

 

Ragini and he were not even looking at each other.

 

Vasu saw this and was very worried

Suddenly her phone rang

Yes.....her expressions thoughtful she started to finalize party arrangements

 

 


finally the day of Party arrived. In her gusa with Anmol she did not ask what time or day Ana was coming, but still she let heavy breath go...
shayad nahi aayegi she beamed to herself.
She was coming back from parlor after getting her nails done, suddenly her heart skipped a beat...
Ana was getting out of a taxi
she was wearing black sleeveless salvar kameez ,she saw Ragini getting out of car.....she smiled challengingly and said
happy anniversary Ragini
hope all your wishes come true
there was a challenge in her gaze
ragini thought of her fight with anmol smiled slightly
her gaze fell on Ana's single suitcase, so she is not here to stay she thought
Ana could read ragini like open book
she smiled knowingly, like a cat who got cream
why you brought so less stuff
anmol was saying you are moving back to India

Ana laughed wo actually itna saaman tha
I booked a container on ship
,Ragini's smile was barely visible.

Ana asked for guest bedroom again

She put her suitcase on bed and pulled a maroon churidar ,it shirt had punjabi style golden  embroidery, it had delicate hand worked golden beads, there was a golden churidaar with it

She pulled out the accessories out.

Suddenly there was knock on door

You must be tired said Ragini

Here some tea for you

Ok came a rude reply

Oh so you brought the dress I was suggesting Ragini stopped to look at dress on bed

 

Yes the sales lady told me one should try new colors …

Ragini's face fell, Ana was watching

Ragini thought this girl really hates me, she did not listen to me, but agreed to buy on sales lady's insistence

Her eyes fell on light kundan set with it, she remembered she had adored it in jewelry shop, and how Ana had rudely snubbed her by saying it was too old fashioned . She saw matching gold bangles with maroon, the whole outfit was classy;

Suddenly she was so worried about her sari for evening.

Pasand aaya

Kya she  was jolted from her thoughts

Yes it is lovely she said

Would you wear something daring Ana challenged

Why

What if I told you anmol loves anarkali suits

Do you love him ragini suddenly Ana moved forward and grabbed her arms

Ragini tell me you love him

Yes …..came a shaky reply

Then show it to me

Wear this

But it is yours…

Who cares it's not my anniversary it's yours…

Prove your love for anmol to me

Do whatever I tell you today

It's a challenge

Because I say you don"t love him

She released ragini , ragini stumbled backwards and sat on the bed

 

Dhyaan se ragini suit press kiya tah abhi came a laughing response

 

So you need my help..

No I will and I can do anything for my anmolji

Ok we will see

So get dressed here..

 I will be back

 

Stay here you want to keep it a surprise don't you…

Ana smiled to herself

Stunned ragini got changed ,she was too shocked to register that suit was perfect fit for her, even bangles were her size, so were shoes

But she never thought as she was stunned by Ana's behavior, neither did she see Ana taking a hording with something inside out.

Anmol tum yahana jo aaj ke din bhi

She hugged him from behind

Happy anniversary

Ana you made it

Haan

After 10 minutes or so

She looked at him and said Anmol

What are you wearing in party

Why I am wearing a shervani

Why are you making faces Ana

I think you look too old fashioned in it,you look cute alright but not stunning.

I know why you are wearing it

why for Ragini

She is into this na

All the time saris and shervanis

Nothing else uff

I don't care what ragini wants ,she  knows I am not fan of  shervanis

I prefer suits black suit,

Still she got me shervani last week imagine green matching with her hideous green sari he fumed

Us din se am not talking to her he said like a child

My my …

Isi liye your Ana is here na

Here wear this

Phew she thought and ran towards guni's room

Ragini was siting in room with chudidaar  in her hand

She remembered how she was talking to guni about how anmol would look so nice in black suit and maroon tie, his crisp cream shirt will bring hi s complexion out so wonderfully she thought, but she had ended up buying what mumyji had suggested, she had seen his face after she had showed him outfits a week ago,s he had meant to ask him to change but then they had fight about Ana .she had told guni how she longed to see her chachu in that color coordinated suit.

 

Thinking of Ana brought her to present and she decided to show Ana what anmol was to her

 

15th ……9pm sharp

All the guests had arrived, the outside lawn was lit like a dreamland, every shrub was lit with artificial light, Anmol was looking like prince charming in the outfit

Suddenly light s flashed on entrance to the lawn

 

Ragini came out with guni and angles, followed by Ana.

 

What is she wearing he thought

His heart skipped a beat and he felt rush of blood to his brain…

She looked like …he couldn't think

She looked like what…..

Yes he realized she looked like Ragini  his ragini Ragini of hi s dreams

 

Ana saw his face and looked upwards ….with a hint of smile and tears

 

Ragini suddenly anmol had come forward and gave his arm,

Stunned Ragini put her hand in his arm,

Both walked towards the cake, as if in dream they cut cake and dance started

But with children, possibility of a romantic dance was not there, instead anmol had to be content with a family dance, he took turns in picking tammy and khushi, despite full enjoyment his eyes kept gliding towards his lovely wife

She was wearing a dream outfit, he thought hs own Punjabi heritage ,somehow he connected this dress with his past, what he was deep down, he adored saris and how Ragini looked in them, yet looking at her he was reminded of dadi and bua ,she finally wore something which may be part of his past, he thought.

His gussa forgotten he longed to be alone with her.

Most of guests had gone, guni had taken kids to sleep, he saw she winked at Ana before leaving ,

What are these two up to he thought

Ana kya ho raha hai

What …

You are up to something

Nahi to

Ragini is looking so sweet na

Haan

She chose this dress especially for you anmol

Seriously, how do you know?

Guini was telling me

Oh ok..

You longed to dance with her na

Haan but it was fun with children

Yes she chuckled….ok come with me she said

Ragini had felt Anmol's eyes on her for whole evening

Her anger long forgotten she wanted to be in his arms.

She moved forward

Suddenly she saw Ana took him towards a secluded corner, ana turned back to look over her shoulder and smiled at ragini –her glance had a challenge to it

Ragini moved forward suddenly she was stopped by inderjit

Beta you look so good

Thanks papaji

Beti kis ki hai sharmaji said

We should leave

Anmol ji dikhayi nahi de rahe beta unko namskar keh dena

Ji

Anmol wait here you deserve your dance, I will send your princess ,

He looked around she showed him everything and turned off the power, let her come first…

Ragini finally got rid of everyone and turned to go look for Ana and Anmol, suddenly she came to standstill.

Ana was standing behind her

Oh

You were going to look for us

No why should I care said Ragini

You said you will

do anything for his love

Haan to

H e has gone to sleep, he had headache oh

But I want to talk to you

About what

About Anmol, what else

Come this way ..

Suddenly in pitch dark garden Ana went missing

Ragini was scared

She tried calling out for her name

Ana

 

Suddenly she heard someone breathing close to her,her hands started to sweat ,she turned to run when suddenly a arm grabbed her and she was pulled to some one's chest ,she tried ot scream as reflex action set in but her moth was covered ,suddenly there was subtle lighting every where, she saw she was close to her favorite fountain, shrubs were lit and water started to flow,

She failed to see Ana giving thumps up to Anmol…

Music started to pour out of hidden speakers….

She was suddenly shy ….she moved away from him, his hand held her arm, she stopped .

He moved forward suddenly his fingers played with her bangles as if he was playing piano keys.

 

Lamh a lamha doori yun pighalti hai

Jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

 

He pulled her close her fingers closing their grip on her waist

 

Khwahishon ki sham dhalti hai

Jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

 

Suddenly he lifted her chin with one finger….

Teri aankhein dikhati hain humein sapne sitaron ke

She opened her mouth to say something he covered her lips with his finger..

Tere honthon pe likha hai jot um bole ishaaron mein..

Khwaabon ke caravan mein raat chalti hai

Jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

 

He made her sway to tune of music..

Her natural rhythm soon began to take over and she started to flow with him….

 

Behakti shaam aayi hai

Tujhe lekar ke bahon mein

Tujhe choo loon ke rakhoon main chupa kar main bahon mein

Sharmati ithlati hai

 Machalti hai

Jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

 

He picked her up …

Jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

Lamha lamha doori yeh pighalti hai

Jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai

She held his neck more closely and snuggled close to him

Khwahishon ki sham dhalti hai

Jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai…

 

And he took her bak into the house…

Far away in sky moon was shining more brightly

And Ana was sitting in guest bedroom, looking out of window seeing same sky ,smiling with tear s running down her cheeks

Bua I did the right thing na….

A gust of wind came and brought fragrance of raat ki raani to her and she got her answer…..

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 13 years ago
k i dont hate ana now actually i want give her a hug. gr8 part sami cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow wow wow Sam everything was very fine Yaar except Anmol being Rude to her ,he can never be sooooooooooooooo rude to his Anel Yaar😉👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dee..It was very cool ! I liked the romantic part..Lovely 😊
It was so cute and hot..Lol 😳

But Ana ka yeh kya chakkar hain? 😕
I thought she was brought in to separate them and for Ragini to burn with jealousy. Yeh kya hogaya? 😆

Wonderfully written..
Is this the last part? 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dii well written as usual, par I cant beleive that anmol can ever be rude to anyone, so how can be rude to ragini? His talk with ana about her dress dii agar ragini ne suna to 😭 bechari meri ragini 😭😭.

Fantasticcccccc dii. Keep it up.👏👏👏👏👏