Cocktail partyPart 3{Sujal Kashish}climax - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh my god...................swayam is soooooo cheap yar...................he deserves the slaps of sujal even more.....................n poor kashish didn't remember anything......................

con't soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sujal slapped him 👏👏👏wow good going he is so cheep and i wish sujal beat him very badly
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the PM
Swayam should never have used Kashish in such a way. sujal ne usse thapad mare kar aache kiya.
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so i was right......swayam is fit to go to hell...................uggghhhhhhhhh..............glad that sujal slapped him many times phir bhi wo kam hai....................cont soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cocktail party Part 3







Kashish:What happened that day Sujal?
Sujal is not able to utter a word.
She raises her voice:Tell me Sujal.
Sujal bursts into tears.
K:Sujal!Why are you crying?
She is tense.
S:You danced with Swayam.
K:May be.
S:You fell asleep.He placed you on the bed.Then...
K:Then?
She is tense.
S:He raped you.
She is shocked.She is numb.
S:Kashish!
He calls her as she has no reaction.
She screams:Nooooooooooooooo!
She cries a lot.
Sujal tries to console her:I know that even a modern girl like you can't face such situations easily.I know that however i comfort you,you can't be peaceful.But..
K:Swayam!That dirty devil soiled my life.He destroyed my dreams.How can i live happily with you after knowing this truth?I don't want to live.I'm going to die.
Sujal is shocked.
She takes a knife to cut her wrist.
He is shocked.He tries to snatch the knife from her.She pulls it back with full force.Somehow he manages to take it from her.He throws it away.
K:Why did you snatch the knife from me?I want to die.
He holds her tightly.
S:Kashish!
She shouts:Why did you not allow me to die?
He becomes angry and stares at her eyes.
S:What do you think of yourself?You can commit suicide when you feel like dying?Are you God to decide your when you have to die?
She feels upset.
S:Kashish..i can understand your mental stage.It is not your fault.So you should not die.You should live like any other girl.You have the right to live a normal life like others.And you did'nt think about me once before taking such a big step?I need you Kashish.
She weeps:Sujal!
S:I will be always with you.
K:You are right.Why should i kill myself as i have not done anything wrong?I should not punish myself.But the culprit has to be punished.Swayam can't be forgiven.
Her words prick his heart as he knows that Swayam is his dear brother.But he comes to his senses.
S:Yes,Swayam has to be punished.I will call the police.
He takes the mobile to dial the Police station's number.She takes the mobile slowly from him.
K:So Sujal.No need of calling the police.
S:Why?Did you forgive Swayam?
K:Never!I can never forgive him.But the punishment he gets will be very small..or he will get the punishment very late if we move things through law.
S:I don't understand what you say.
K:Words cannot express certain things Sujal.Only deeds can do something.
Sujal stares at her without understanding anything.
K:Ok bye Sujal.I have to go out.
S:Now?Where?
K:I will tell you later.


Sujal goes home.He reaches home very late because of the traffic block.
He enters the house.The room is dark.He switches on the light.He is shocked to see Swayam lying dead.
He screams:Swayam!
He sees Kashish standing close to the wall with her depressed face.She is sweating.She is holding a knife which is full of blood.
Sujal's lips shiver:Kashish!
She closes her eyes:Don't ask me anything sujal.I'm too weak to answer your questions.
S:Kashish..what did you do?
K:How can i leave Swayam who played with my dignity and self respect?I wanted to punish him by myself.I did'nt want anyone else to punish him.Now i'm happy that i could decide his fate.I could kill him.I punished him for spoiling me.I could put an end to his misdeeds.I'm happy that he died in my arms.
She smiles though tears flow from her eyes.Sujal does'nt know how to react for a moment.Slowly he goes near her.
S:Kashish!
She cries loudly:I'm killer.I killed my lover's brother.I have informed the police.They will come and arrest me now.
He embraces her with tears.
S:I will wait for you.I will be always there for you.
His words comfort her.But she continues crying as she is impatient to wait for a long time to come back to Sujal.

The end
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
hi
the up is really good and emotional too
sujal tells kashish the truth about swayam that he raped her
hearing this kashish became really mad
naturally for girl this is really a very big thing to accept
sujal tries to consol her but she dont
she decides that she will punish swayam herself so she killed swayam
but murder is a crime so she have to get her punishment
kashish goes to jail but sujal is there for her
nice ending
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Quite a justified ending to the story....I mean it was actually very confusing.....and but watever happened I think that was right....Sujal now will be w8ing for kashish.....thats the best part....and again Swayam did deserve his punishment.....I dont feel bad at all.....so nice going Jasmine.....very nice story indeed!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ending but kashish took everything in her own hands but the good thing is sujal will wait for her...............swayam doesnt deserve to live...................nice story...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Mind blowing ending i love it sujal is so nice and sweet thx for pm.

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