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SHILPA SHOUTED ONCE MORE TO GAIN THEIR ATTENTION...

SH(shouted) - HEY U ALL LETS DANCE NA WE CAME HERE TO ENJOY....BHUL GAYE???YEH RONA DHONA BAAD MEIN CONTINUE KARTE H....

ALL LOOKING AT HER WITH OPENED MOUTH
SHILPA FIRST TIME UNDERSTOOD THEIR QUERY

SH - GUYZ STOP STARING AT MY FACE WITH UR OPEN MOUTHS....BUT SID U CAN CONTINUE (SHILPA BLUSHED ) AUR MAIN TALLI NHI HU....APNE MUH BAND KAR LO VARNA TUMHARE MUH DARD KARNE LAGEGE



ALL LAUGHED ND CAME ON DANCE FLOOR
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ALL LAUGHED ND CAME ON DANCE FLOOR
...................

Nd danced on the song

rang de chak man,
rang de chak, rang de chak,
no matter let them say

rang de chak,rang de chak aye, rang de chak,
no mater lets spark
rang de chak,
rang de chak, rang de chak,
no matter let them say
rang de chak, rang de chak, rang de chak,
no mater lets spark
lets start some ronauk shounak,
lets have some party now
lets have some raala rappaa,
rang de chak no matter let them say
lets have some dhol dhamaaka,
lets call the dholi now
lets have some matti tappachalo chalo ji lak lak gaao lo,
chalo chalo ji mauj mana lo
chalo chalo ji nach lo gao lo,
pakad kisi ki wrist''''''.......
(ARMAAN STARTED SINGING D SONG DANCING IN MIDDLE OF FLOOR)


and we twist, we twist, we twist,
we twist
and we twist,
we twist, we twist, we twist'''''.
(ALL)


rang de chak man, rang de chak,rang de chak,
no matter let them say

rang de chak man, rang de chak aye, rang de chak,
no mater lets spark
rang de chak man, rang de chak, rang de chak,
no matter let them say

rang de chak man, rang de chak aye, rang de chak,
no mater lets spark
rikid sikids si duniya challe,
peer bhi challe
balle balle, ho gayi,
haan ho gayi
ho hasi kushi mein gum
ki tuddi
hawa mein huddi woh ka tale kho gayi,
haan kho gayi
chodo chodo sab rone dhone,
chodo chodo dukh aadhe kore
dekho dekho din sone mone,
yehi life ki gist'''.
(SID ND SHILPA DANCING TOGETHER)



and we twist, we twist, we twist,
we twist
and we twist, we twist,
we twist, we twist............
(ALL)



sone mone malla malli,
kar gaye talli
aankh wankh se lad gayi,
haan lad gayi
botal shotal kholi binadaru saru bin pete hi chad gayi,
haan chad gayi
o o o dekho dekho sab ghum raha hai,
dekho dekho jag jhoom raha hai
yahan wahan dil dhundh raha hai,
abb khusyion ki list'''
(RAHUL ND MUSKAN DANCING IN MIDDLE)



everybody in spot tonite
and we twist,
we twist, we twist, we twist
and we twist,
we twist, we twist, we twist.................
(ALL DANCING TOGETHER)




lets start some ronauk shounak,
lets have some party now
lets have some raala rappaa,
rang de chak no matter let them say
lets have some dhol dhamaka,
lets call the dholi now
lets have
some matti tappa
chalo chalo ji lak lak gaao lo,
chalo chalo ji mauj mana lo
chalo chalo ji nach lo gaao lo,
pakad kisi ki wrist''''........
(ATUL ND ANJALI SINGING ND MOVING WITH MUSIC BEATS)



and we twist, we twist, we twist,
we twist
and we twist, we twist,
we twist, we twist
(ALL SINGING TOGETHER ND JUMPING)


AFTER SOME MORE MASTI '''' SID LITERALLY DRAGED ALL OF THEM OUT OF DISC NOW ALL ARE STANDING IN MIDDLE OF THE ROAD ND LOOKING AT SID WITH ''..WE SHOULD KILL U RITE NOW-LOOK'.

AR (SCREMED) - EXPLANATION

SI (scaredly) - come on girls its time to go home'

AR (annoyingly) - kyu sid hum boyz kya yaha baith kar bhajan karege???

SH (shouted excited) - YES AMMI VERY GUD QUESTION'.(turned to sid) bolo sid

Sid mumbled "KAHA FASS GAYA YAAR"

AT (confused) - ammi hum yaha bhajan krege ??? par yaar mujhe toh bhajan aate hi nahi yaar

AR - ARRE YAAR 11 baj gye h'champ aaj teri landlady tujhe kachha chabba jaygi come on stop using ur mind'aise faltu kaamo ke liye main hu na 'aur my darling ms malhotra ufff shonna aaj ke liye itna celebration kafi h'kuch future ke liye bhi save kar lete h

RA - ya guyz lets go..i m hell tired

MU (angryly) - oye kabutar tu kab tired nahi hota ??? jab dekho jawani mei budhape ki acting karta rehta hai

RA - muskan shut up'..main budha

MU (shocked) - KYA KAHA KAANKHAJURE ????TUNE MUJHE'..MUJHE'..SHUT UP KAHA???TERI ITNI HIMMAT???MAIN

AR (SHOUTED) - SHUT GUYZ JUST CHILL'. TOM & JERRY KI PHOTOCOPY

WHILE THEY ARGUING LIKE THERE WILL BE NO TOMMOROW'..A GUY SITTING IN HIS CAR LITTLE BIT FAR FROM THEM CONTINUESLY OBSERVING THEM ND GIVING ALL DETAILS TO SOMEONE ON PHONE'

MAN ON PHONE ' YA I THNIK THIS IS D CORRECT TIME'.THEY ALL ARE IN FRONT OF ME '. - YA ALL ARE STANDING IN MIDDLE OF THE ROAD'-BUT WHY????.......PAUSE''''.OK FINE

*******RIDDHIMA'S ROOM*********

RIDDHIMA STANDING NEAR WINDOW


TALKING TO HERSELF - " SO READY MISS GUPTA FOR A NEW COLLEGE?? WATT IF I SAY NO???? OH DNT START ALL DAT CRAP AGAIN'BUT WAIT WATT D HELL IS DIS NOW A DAYZ I M TALKING TO MYSELF LIKE MILLION TIMES IN A DAY'.WATS WRONG WID ME???

(turned to moon) chill sweetheart I m fine'..........time to sleep see you tomorrow

Nd saying dis she went to her bed for sleep

ON THE OTHER HAND AFTER LOTS OF EFFORTS ARMAAN FINALLY SUCCESSIED IN ENDING UP MUSKAN AND RAHUL USEL TOM & JERRY FIGHT 'ND ALL WENT TO THEIR RESPECTIVE HOMES''.

****************** NEXT MORNING *****************

MALLIK HOUSE

AR - BI MAIN JA RAHA HU''''

BI - OK MERE LAAL MERE PILLE MERE HAARE MERE NEELE

AR - BI PLZ AAJ SE APKA YE HINDI MOVIES AUR WO TYPICAL SAAS BAHU SERIAL DEKHNA BAND''''YAHI HAAL RAHA NA TOH KUCH DIN BAAD AAP PURI FILMY MAA BAN JAYGI'

BI (excited) - sach??????hayye'''.tere muh mein ghee shakar

AR - aap bhi''I m getting late we will continue dis topic later bi''love you'bye

SAYING DIS HE LEFT FOR HIS COLLEGE

***************** HANS RAJ COLLEGE***************

11 'O' CLOCK ALL ARE SITTING IN COLLEGE CANTEEN LIKE LAZY CATS AFTER SUBMITTING THE FEES AT COLLEGE COUNTER (GUYZ U MST BE THINKING HAR WAQT YE CANTEEN MEIN HI PADE REHTE H'.PADHTE KAB H????RELAX ITNA TOH PADHTE HAI BECHARE 40% MARKS LANA KOI EASY MISSION NAHI HAI'.OK BACK TO TRACK'' )

AR (slowly) - oh god yaar aaj kitni mehnat ki hai humne'''.

SI (tiredly) - ya aisa lag raha hai jaise humne hazaro pathar (stones) tode hai

NAINA ENTER IN CANTEEN''''''

NA - hey guyz kya lazy cats ki tarah kyu baithe ho????????? COME ON LETS PLAY SUMTHING

"pia cats lazy nahi hoti'..cats are to fast just like my sid" said shilpa with a blush

Listening dat all burst out laughing

SI (with coacked eyes) - SHILPA ye tum compliment de rahi ho mujhe ya meri insult kar rahi ho?????

NA- OK CUT IT LETS PLAY TRUTH & DARE''''

ALL AGREED WHERE AS ARMAAN ND SID ARE THINKING NOW WATS GOING ON IN HER MIND
BUT BOTH KNOWS VERY WELL KI USKE DIMAG MEIN KYA CHAL RAHA HAI YEH PTA LGANA SE ACHA H HUM KUTUB MINAR SE JUMP MAAR LETE BCOZ WO ISSE KAFI EASY HAI'
BOTH SCREMED IN THEIR MIND''''NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO''.BAD IDEA

Naina asked the waiter to bring a bottle nd as soon as waiter came back'naina took d bottle from him while others sitted comfortably on their sits around a big round table in center of canteen'''''

On the other hand RIDDHIMA entered in her new college


AS SHE ENTERED IN HER COLLEGE BOTH ARMAAN ND RIDDHIMA FELT SHIVER IN THEIR BODIES

RIDDHIMA CLUCHED HER DUPATTA IN HER HAND AND ARMAAN CLUCHED D TABLE COVER IN HIS HAND SID NOTICED ARMAAN'S CHANGED FACE EXPRESSION

RIDDHIMA COMPOSED HERSELF AND SMILLED ND WENT TOWARDS FEE COUNTER


SID SHOOK ARMAAN'S HAND

SI (WHISPERED IN ARMAAN'S EAR) - WATT HAPPEN

AR (controlled his expression) - nothing I m fine

Sid nodded nd told anjali to roll d bottel

AN (excitedly) - atul ur turn ok let me choose for you''.dare ???? rite ???

AT (blushed) - waoooooo anji u know me so well'

(he never gonna choose a dare but his anjali choosed dare for him so how can he refuse her opinion dats y like a brave man controlling his fear he said yes )

AN - YA WHATEVER ok ur dare is'''''pause''''.go PURPOSE NAINA FOR A DATE

ALL (including atul ) - WATT???

AR - COME ON CHAMP

AT - ammi tub hi????mujhe laga tha Tu mujhe bachayga

AR - ABBE WO TUJHE NAINA KA MURDER KARNE KE LIYE NHI KEH RHI NOW RELAX AUR CHAL JALDI DARE PURA KAR

ATUL HELPLESSLY WENT TOWARDS NAINA ND KNELLED ON HIS KNEES ND SAID.--- NAINA MAIN I LOVE YOU NHI KEH SKTA KYUKI WO ANJALI KE LIYE HAI'......AUR TUMHARE SATH DATE PE BHI NHI JA SKTA KYUKI ANJALI KO BURA LGEGA OK DNT FEEL SAD' (turned to all who where laughing like manics)

AT (excitedly) - ' AMMI MAINE KAR DIA'..

AR - YA CHAMP WO HUMNE DEKHA '..TU NAINA KO PURPOSE KAR RHA THA YA ANJALI KE DAD KO APNE PYAR KA YAKEEN DILANE KI PRACTISE KAR RHA THA???


ALL LAUGHED , ANJALI GLARED AT ATUL AND ATUL BLUSHED

DIS TIME SID ROLLED D BOTTEL ND ANNOUNCED "WAOOOOOOOO SHILPA ITS UR TURN"

SH (shyly) - sid tum guess karo na kya choose karugi main ???? truth or dare ??

SI (heappily) - hey is bar tum dare choose karo'..wat say

SH (excited) - ok so wats my dare ?????

ARMAAN LOOKING AT SID WITH - DON'T U DARE - LOOK

SI - tumhe....pause........ek week.......pause...... Tak......mujhe aur........pause.....sirf mujhe...

NOW ALL ARE GETTING EXCITED EVERYBODY IS WAITING TO KNOW WAT HE UPTO'..BUT ARMAAN KNWS HIM VERY WELL DATS WHY GIVING HIM HIS ALL FAMOUS ANGRY ND I M GONNA KILL U ' LOOKS

SI - aur mujhe ....pause....I LOVE YOU'.......NHI KEHNA.....EK BAAR BHI NAHI

ALL SHOCKED ND YELLED '"WATTT"

SH (with a sad face) - but????........pause......ok as u say.....

Nd after saying dis she lowered her gaze

AR - SHONNA JUST CHILL EK WEEK KI TOH BAAT HAI..

ARMAAN TURNED TO SID

AR - I LOVE YOU

SI (confused) - WATT??

"ON BEHALF OF SHONNA.........TUNE USSE DARE DIA THA''.........WO NAHI KEH SAKTI'......USNE KAHA BHI NHI PAR'.......TUNE YEH NHI KAHA KI KOI AUR BHI USKI TARAF SE TUJHE I LOVE YOU NHI KAHEGA.........."ARMAAN said with a wink


SI (screamed) - NOOOOOO MAN I WILL SURELY KILL YOU DIS TIME

AR - me to

ON THE OTHER HAND RIDDHIMA SUBMITTED HER FEE AT COUNTER

AR - COME ON NOW PASS ME D BOTTEL ND
ARMAAN ROLLED D BOTTEL ND SHOUTED AT TOP OF HIS VOICE "SID I GOT U MAN" nd gave sid a look dat totally shows YOU R DEAD MAN ND COUNTDOWN BEGINS NOW''

AR (smiling) - HEY SID WATT??? TRUTH OR DARE??? I KNW DARE RITE????

SI (with pleading look) - ya rite........so watt I hve to do????

AR - OKKKKKKK.......PAUSE.......TUJHE........PURE......EK WEEK AFTER EVERY HALF HOUR'.....SHONNA KO....I LOVE YOU'KEHNA HAI

SI (with wide eyes) - noooooooooooooooooooo

AR - YES BABY ND ITS CALLED TIT FOR TAT..YOU STARTED IT NA

ALL LAUGHED AT SID'S FACE EXPESSIONS ND SHILPA BLUSHED


NAINA ROLLED D BOTTEL ND


NAINA ANNOUNCED - "HEY AMMI COME ON ITS UR TURN..WATT ???????? DARE LIKE A DARING MAN OR TRUTH BCOZ U SCARED FROM D DARE ??"

AR (realized wat she is trying to do) - RELAX WHY U R LOOKING SO WORRIED????DARE'.ND ALWAYS MY CHOICE WILL BE DARE ''.NOW TELL ME WATT I HVE TO DO??????????

NA - YOU HAVE TO KISS A

AR (cutting her in b/w) - r u mad ???? I m not going to do dat'.say anything but dnt involve any girl'.nd let me clear if u think I m going to kiss a guy then forget it mam'.not even in my wild dreams

NA - COME ON AMMI''DARR GAYE???

NOW SID IS WORRIED FOR ARMAAN AS HE KNWS HIM SHE HITTED HIS WRONG NERVE FOR SOME OF HER CREUL PLAN

AR - DARR ??? EXCUSE ME ARMAAN MALLIK KISI SE NHI DARTA U GOT DAT????

NA - YA ..OK'......THE DARE IS .....'..TUMHE APNI ANKHON PAR PATTI (BLIND FOLD) BANDH KAR CANTEEN KE GATE PAR JANA HAI AUR JO BHI FIRST PERSON ENTRY KAREGA USSE KISS KARNA HOGA'WHETHER IT'S A BOY OR .......A GIRL.......LIPS KISS

NOW EVERYBODY IS STANDING THEIR WITH OPEN MOUTHS'.......ND ALL ARE VERY EXCITED ABT D DARE AS ARMAAN HAD NEVER DONE ANYTHING LIKE DIS HE ALWAYS GET ADVENTOUROUS DARES ND HE SUCCESSFULLY DID THEM'' ''


**** RIDDHIMA ASKED A STUDENT WAY FOR LIBRARY

AND AS D STUDENT TOLD HER D DIRECTIONS SHE MOVED TOWARDS D LIBRARY ****


ND ON THE OTHER HAND ARMAAN IS STILL IN SHOCK ND THNIKING FOR A BRILLIANT IDEA TO SAVE HIMSELF'..HOW TO ESCAPE FROM DIS SITUATION'.

ALL STUDENTS IN CANTEEN STARTED SHOUTING IN EXCITEDNESS --- YOOOO COME ON AMMI

SI (in serious tone) - SHUT UP GUYZ u all knw ammi'..(turned to armaan ) wo aisa kuch nhi karega fine we are playing but think about the person jisse ye kiss krega'.dat person is nt playing wid us'.'nd its totally against our rules'.ritte ammi???

AR - YA SID IS RITE (thanking him in heart)

(bcoz both knows they all can never put each other in trouble'.nd dis naina is trying hard'.)


NA - OK'.FINE'..BUT DARE TOH YAHI HAI'..LIPS PE NA SAHI CHEEKS PAR HI SAHI BUT NO MORE CHANGES'..AMMI AGAR DARE KARNA HAI TOH YAHI KARNA HOGA OTHERWISE JUST SAY IT YOU ARE A LOOSER'TUM HAAR MAANTE H'.TUM MEIN HIMMAT NHI HAI'..

AR - OK

NOW ALL ARE CONFUSED ND THINKING ARMAAN MALLIK ITNI JALDI WO BHI EK LADKI SE HAAR MAAN RHA HAI?????

AR - I WILL DO IT'.but iss canteen se koi bahar nhi jayga jo bahar se andar ayga main usse kiss karuga and for d rite directions anjali will guide me'nd I m gonna kiss on cheeks not on lips bcoz it could be a guy also na'.i m so not interested in a lip lock with a boy'got it

NOW NAINA DNT HVE A CHOICE BCOZ IF SHE WILL TRY MORE ARMAAN COULD BE DANGEROUS FOR HER ND STUDENTS ALSO AGREE WITH ARMAAN'S CONDITIONS


"U think u r very smart'.....but u r not'.......Tumhe kya lga naina tum mere samne ajaogi aur main tumhe kiss karuga????bcoz I'll be blindfolded'......never'ur foolish plans'.......saare plans c grade directors jaise bnati ho'."..........ARMAAN TALKING TO HIMSELF IN MIND


NA (dispointment voice) - OKK

SID BIND D BLIND FOLD AT ARMAAN'S EYES'''''....ARMAAN GOING TOWARDS D MAIN DOORS OF CANTEEN'

AR (in heart) - yeh meri heart itni speed se kyu beat kar raha hai''aisa lag raha hai kuch seconds main mere hatho mei hoga mera dil'.may be coz its my first kiss'I hate d fact dat I wasted my first kiss on a dare'.

ON OTHER HAND RIDDHIMA WALKING TOWARDS LIBRARY ND TALKING TO HERSELF

RI - wats wrong with my stupid heart???? Aisa lag raha h kuch dangerous hone wala hai'..MAIN BI KUCH GALAT HONE WALA HAI'

ARMAAN AT DOOR ND HE FEEL DAT SOMEBODY IS COMING TOWARDS CANTEEN GATE'HIS HEART BEAT IS ALMOST OUT OF TRACK'


HE FEEL A HAND NEAR HIS HAND HE HOLDED D HAND WITH HIS LEFT HAND AND PLACED HIS RIGHT HAND ON D FACE IN FRONT OF HIM THROUGH HE CANT SEE D FACE BUT HE KNW DAT DIS IS A GIRL HER SOFT HANDS ND SOFT CHEEK PROVED HIM'..FEELING HER HEAVY BREATH ON HIS FACE HE GENTALLY KISSED HER ON HER LEFT CHEEK CLOSE TO HER LIPS

ND FELT LIKE COMPLETE''BUT CONFUSED BCOZ HE DIDN'T GET ANY RESPONSE FROM D GIRL

BUT AFTER ONE SECOND HE GOT HIS ANSWER'''.AS A TIGHT SLAP ON HIS LEFT CHEEK

ALL ARE SHOCKED TO SEE WATT HAD HAPPENED IN FRONT OF THEM ALL ARE CONFUSED'''.FIRST SHOCK ARMAAN MALLIK KISSED A GIRL'..ND THEY GOT ANOTHER SHOCK A GIRL SLAPPED ARMAAN MALLIK''........FOR THEM ITS LOOK LIKE THEY ARE WATHING A WILD DREAM'''.

"ANYONE SLAPPED AMMI????IS IT TRUE OR WE R IN WATCHING A NIGHTMARE "EVERYONE'S QUESTION

BUT SOON THEY ALL REALIZED IT'S A DAMN REALLITY'.......THEY CAME FORWARD

AS ARMAAN FELT SLAP ON HIS CHEEK HE REMOVED D BLINFOLD FROM HIS EYES WITH FULL ANGER ''

BUT LOST IN (according to him) WORLDS MOST BEAUTIFUL ND BREATHTAKING EYES WHICH WERE MOIST NOW'


ND SEEING TEARS IN THOSE PAIR OF EYES HIS HEART ACHED WITH PAIN ''''.HE DIDN'T KNOW WHY

AND WHEN HIS GAZE FALL ON HER FACE HE LOST HIS ALL ANGER''............




D GIRL FELT HIS INTENSE GAZE ON HER ND LOWERED HER EYES




NA (angerly) - HOW DARE YOU'..TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISE HUI AMMI KO THAPAD MARNE KI..

(YES FRNDS ITS RIDDHIMA WHOM ARMAAN KISSED........U ALL MITE BE THINKING DAT SHE WAS GOING TO LIBRARY THEN HOW SHE IS HERE''...OHHHH LETS SEE D FLASHBACK.)


**** FLASHBACK ****


RIDDHIMA GOING TOWARDS LIB. BUT SUDDENLY SHE HEARD NOISE FROM CANTEEN WHICH WAS LITTLE BIT FAR FROM LIB'......SHE THOUGHT SHE SHOULD SEE WATS HAPPENING THERE'.......WHY ALL STUDENTS IN CANTEEN MAKING SO MUCH NOISE'''''

SHE NEVER THOUGHT RESULT WOULD BE THIS'


**** FALSHBACK ENDS ****


NOW RIDDHIMA IS FULL OF ANGER FIRST D GUY STANDING IN FRONT OF HER KISSED HER WITHOUT HER PERSSION AND NOW DIS NOT SO GOOD GIRL SHOUTING ON HER'..WHERE AS ARMAANLOST HIS ALL SENSES''AND JUST STARING AT HER CONTINOUSLY

NA - BOLTI KYU NAHI?????ZUBAN NHI HAI KYA TUMHARE MUH MEIN'..AUR TUM JAISI GAVAR KO COLLEGE KE NADAR KISNE AANE DIA.?????

"DATS IT"..........RIDDHIMA SAID TO HERSELF

RI (screamed with full strength) - SHUT UPPPPPPPPPPPP




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NOW RIDDHIMA IS FULL OF ANGER FIRST D GUY STANDING IN FRONT OF HER KISSED HER WITHOUT HER PERMISSION AND NOW DIS NOT SO GOOD GIRL SHOUTING ON HER.....WHERE AS ARMAANLOST HIS ALL SENSES.......AND JUST STARING AT HER CONTINOUSLY

NA - BOLTI KYU NAHI?????ZUBAN NHI HAI KYA TUMHARE MUH MEIN......AUR TUM JAISI GAVAR KO COLLEGE KE NADAR KISNE AANE DIA.?????

"DATS IT" RIDDHIMA TOLD HERSELF

RI (screamed with full power) - SHUT UPPPPPPPPPPPP





RI (looked at naina nd give her a dirty glare) - tum apna muh chalana band karo I m not ur servent''(naina opened her mouth to say sumthing but RIDDHIMA cut her in b/w) DNT U DARE TO OPEN UR MOUTH AGAIN........i m not interested......tumhe thoda mauka kya dia maine........tum toh shuru hi hogai..........bak bak bak..........aur by d way thapad maine inhe (pointed at armaan ) maara hai...........aur lecture tum de rahi ho..........dnt tell me u r his lawyer?????POOR GUY........😆

(WHERE RIDDHIMA IS GIVING TO NAINA SUM PIECE OF MIND ON THE OTHER HAND SUM R HAPPY WID HER SUDDEND OUT BURST ND SUM R SHOCKED TO OUT OF THEIR WITS......ND ARMAAN IS LOOKING AT HER WITH DAZY EYES


but after hearing her last words he came back to earth )

AR (angry) - OH HOLD ON 😡

RI (annoyed) - OH TOH TUMHE BOLNA ATA H???? I THOUGHT KI TUMHE BOLNA NHI ATA AUR TUMHARI YE GOOD FOR NOTHING UGLY LAWYER TUMHARE SUPPORT MEI LECTURE DE RHI H........😆

(ARMAAN REMINDED HIMSELF ya I m happy by the way she shuting naina's mouth but i HATE D WAY SHE IS TALKING TO ME ND NOT TO FORGET SHE JUST SLAPPED ME MAN)

AR - TUMHE NHI LAGTA TUM LIMIT SE JYADA BOL RAHI HO????

RI - DATS MY POINT MISTER TUMHE NHI LGTA JO TUMNE KIA WO OUT OFF LIMIT THA.....ND I THINK U NEED 2 - 3 MORE SLAPS

(NOW BOTH ARE FACE TO FACE ND FIGHTING LIKE HELL)

AR- WATT?????R U MAD????LISTEN WE WERE JST PLAYING D GAME ND I GOT D DARE ND

RI (cutting him b/w) - now dnt tell me ye behuda dare tumhe tumhari isse so called lawyer ne dia tha???

"ISSE KAISE PTA CHALA"ARMAAN mumbled but coming back to senses

AR - SO WATT

RI (SHOUTED) - SO WATT????? HOW DARE U???? U KISSED ME???? WIDOUT MY PERMISSION

AR (angry) - LISTEN DNT MAKE IT A ISSUE

RI (angry) - EXCUSE ME FOR KISSING SUMONE MAY IS NOT A ISSUE FOR U....BUT IT'S A BIG ISSUE WHEN IT COMES TO ME'.MAY BE U HAVE KISSED THOUSAND OF GIRLS BUT U IDIOT IS D FIRST ONE WHO KISSED ME DAMN IT...😡

AR (furstated) - shut uppppppppppppppp I NEVER KISSED ANYONE BY MISTAKE U R D FIRST GIRL WHOM I KISSED GOT DAMN IT

AS SOON AS ARMAAN COMPLETED HIS SENTENCE BOTH REALIZE WAT THEY HAD JST SAID......... ND ARMAAN RIDDHIMA BOTH LOST IN EACH OTHERS EYES



While riddhima nd armaan were fighting others were looking at their weird fight wid BOTH-R-MAD look nd doing chit chat in their minds bcoz they r hell confused.........

firstly ARMAAN MALLIK KISSED A GIRL

2ND A GIRL SLAPPED ARMAAN MALLIK

3RD THEY R FIGHTING IN VERY ODD STYLE

4TH SUMTIMES DIS GIRL SHOWS PITY ON ARMAAN

5TH SUMTIMES SHE SHOWS HER ANGER ON ARMAAN

6TH SUMTIMES SHE SHUT NAINA'S MOUTH NOT TO FORGET WHICH IS A MIRACLE

7TH SUMTIMES ARMAAN SAW HER WID DREAMY EYES WHICH IS ALSO A MIRACLE


8TH SUMTIMES HE CAME BACK TO EARTH WITH AMGER IN HIS EYES BCOZ OF D SLAP HE GOT.....

9TH NOW THEY ARE SHARING THEIR FIRST KISS EVEN TELLING EACH OTHER DAT U R D ONE WHOM I KISSED

10TH SUMTIMES WHEN SHE NOTICE ARMAAN'S INTENSE GAZE ON HER SHE BLUSHED ND LOWERED HRE GAZE


ND EYERYBODY SCREMING IN THEIR MINDS "WATT D HELL IS GOING ON"

SUNDENLY SID CAME FORWARD FOR HIS DEAR FRND ARMAAN'S RESCUE

BUT ONLY GOD KNOWS HE WILL SAVE HIM OR MAKE D SITUATION WORSE

SI (calmly to riddhima) - listen we r very sorry we know watt jst happened was not rite plz forget abt dat'we r sorry

" THNK GOD YAHA KISI KE PASS TOH MIND HAI " riddhima mumbled but to loud dat all heard her




NA - OH SHUT UP U BI**

AR (but before she could complete her word armaan cutting her b/w shouted in anger) - SHUT UP NAINA.....WATT D HELL IS HAPPENING????WAT KIND OF LANGUAGE YOU R USING????

NOW ITS TIME FOR RIDDHIMA TO BE SHOCKED



RIDDHIMA THOUGHT " HE SUPPORTED ME RATHER THEN HIS ADVOCATE?????I SLAPPED HIM THEN ALSO YA HIS MISTAKE HE KISSED ME BUT WATT I FELT AT DAT TIME WAS?????

BUT A VOICE BROKE HER TRAILS OF THOUGHT

NA - COME ON AMMI U JST RELAX MAIN JANTI HU AISI LADKIO KO

Now again riddhima wants to kill dis so called naina

RI (cutting her b/w) - ha khud jo tum aisi ho toh jaanne mei kafi aasani hoti hogi na.....😡


Now after her heart attacking comment on naina all mouth dropped upto their knees

Nd all turned to a weird laughing voice all knws who it cud be accept riddhima

MU - HA HA HA H H H H HA HA

RA (who didn't liked her disturbance in dis situation said ) - stop muskan

Muskan pushed him to other side nd hugged riddhima tightly.....so tightly dat riddhima felt difficult to breath

Now atul,anjali,holded muskan from hr waist
rahul,ammi holded her wist
sid shipla holded muskan from her shoulders nd all dragged her towards themselves


RIDDHIMA TOOK A LONG BREATH

MU (SHOUTED) - LEAVE ME GUYZ I M NOT GONNA EAT HER. I JUST WNT TO HUG HER SHE DID A GREAT JOB

NOW ALL ARE HELL SHOCKED INCLUDING RIDDHIMA

AN (angry) - MUSKI U THINK SHE DID A GREAT JOB IN INSULTING AMMI???

AR (shocked) - WATTT

AT (calmly ) - MUSKI TUJHE AISA NHI KEHNA CHAHIYE THA

MU (shouted) - OYE CHUP KHOTTE ISSNE JAISE NAINA KI BOLTI BAND KI HAI.......MAIN TOH ISLIYE ITNI KHUSH HU.GADHA

RA (holded muskan's hand) - MUSKI CHAL U NEED A DOCTOR

MU (waning tone) - CHOD MUJHE OTHERWISE U WILL NEED A DOCTOR

Rahul quickly left muskan.......

SHILPA WHO IS HELL CONFUSED DIDN'T UTTER A WORD ND TRYING HER LEVEL BEST TO UNDERSTAND THE SCENE WITH "WATS HAPPENING" LOOK

AR (whispered in shilpa's ear) - dnt try shonna we will explain u later so for now relax

SI - STOP YAR MUSKI

AR - STOP U ALL IDIOTS ND U MUSKI PRAISING HER?????GREAT

MU - oh ammi relax yar nd u both (pointed to armaan nd ridhima) stop fighting like daily soaps husband wife ' I was jst saying dis girl is fantastic true fighter like me HA HA HA H H H H HA

SI (calmly) -plz we are sorry ammi is little mad so forgive him he

AR (irritated) - SHUT UP SID TU MERA DOST HAI YA ISKA???

SI (excited) - AMMI I M HELPING U DUDE

AR (sarcastically) - REALLY ???? CHAL TOH TUNE MERI ITNI HELP KI HAI AB MERI BAARI PAY BACK TIME DUDE

SI (scared) - NOOOOOOO

AR (mischeifly ) - YES 30 MINS ARE OVER DUDE TIME TO SAY THOSE 3 MIRACLE WORDS



SI - I M SORRY

AR - WRONG DUDE TURN UR FACE TO 45 DEGREE ANGLE U WILL GET U KNW WAT U HAVE TO SAY..

SI (turned as ammi said) - shilpa

AR - JOR SE BOL

AT - JAI MATA DI

ALL - WATT???

AT - AREE AMMI NE KAHA JOR SR BOL TOH MAINE BOLA JAI MATA DI......TUMNE KABHI SUNA NHI KYA???????

AR - ATULLLLLLL DNT STRESS UR MIND ND U SID U BETTER SAY D CORRECT WORDS OR I WONT MIND KILLIG AS U HELPED ME A LOT TODAY...

SI (slowly) - I love you

AR (glared at him) - ABBE KHUD KO BOL RAHA HAI KYA ???? winked at him

SI (facing shilpa) - I LOVE YOU

SHILPA BLUSHED 😳 ARMAAN WINKED AT SID ND SID GLARED AT HIM

RIDDHIMA THOUGHT "they all are mad riddhima run from here before they kill you by their stupid acts these all are crazy save me god"


RIDDHIMA TURNED TO LEAVE BUT SUDDENLY SHE REALIZED SOMEONED GRABBED HER ARM ND TURNED HER WITH FULL STRENGHT OFCOURSE HOW CAN SHE FORGET DIS NAINA ND SHE LOST HER BALANCE ND FALL ON ARMAAN WHO WAS JUST IN FRONT OF HER FEW INCHES AWAY ND SOON BOTH HIT D FLOOR RIDDHIMA WAS LYING ON HIM

RIDDHIMA LOST HERSELF IN HIS DEEP BLUE OCEAN EYES ND ARMAAN OHHHH HE EVEN DNT REMEMBER D PAIN HE GOT WHEN HIS BACK HITTED ROUGH FLOOR BCOZ HE WAS DEEPLY ENGROSSED IN PAIR OF ALMOND EYES.......


THEY CAME BACK FROM THEIR LALA LAND BY SID VOICE

SI - U KNOW WAT NAINA U R JUST DISGUSTING (turned to AR) u both are ok na?????

BOTH TOGETHER MUMBLED - YA

Riddhima and armaan stood up on their feets

But before anyone could say something riddhima grabbed her purse from floor nd ran out of canteen on the other hand armaan is just stared at her nd saw her running out of canteen nd felt bad but confused

AR (uncoinciously mumbled) - why I m feeling bad why it feels like she is going away from me ???

(but his bad luck to loud all heard him)

ALL - WATT

AR (realized soon she slapped him) - DUDE SHE JUST SLAPPED U GET A GRIP MAN YA I DID WAS ALSO WRONG BUT SLAP WO BHI ARMAAN MALLIK KO????

ALL (again shouted) - WATT

AR (angry) - WATT GUYZ ???? STOP GIVING ME THOSE SAME EXPRESSIONS ....... I M NOT IN MOOD SHE SLAPPED ME ND I WON'T FORGET DAT

SI (knws better to cool him down) - relax dude mistake toh hamari bhi thi na toh

AR (glared at sid) - nooooooooooo

Now sid give a dirty look to armaan

AR - FINE hamari mistake thi but she slapped me infront of everyone

SI - matlab akele mein marti toh chalta ????? rite 😆

AR - SHUT UP I WNT LEAVE HER SHE HAVE TO PAY FOR DIS SLAP 😡

MU - chill hero lets go yeh angry man looks dena band kar I liked her

AT - ha ammi she was so beautiful

AR - REALLY??????


A MAN COVERING HIS FACE WITH HIS LEFT HAND STANDING BEHIND CANTEEN GATE TALKING ON PHONE

MAN - YA ONE GIRL SLAPPED HIM ya ya dat girl ????? she ran from canteen towards corridor.........yes they are going out.........I think in audi........ok fine I will do it bye..........



RIDDHIMA STANDING IN CORRIDOR BREATHING HEAVLY


TALKING TO HERSELF- OMG WATT WAS DAT ???? WHY I FELT LIKE HE IS THE ONE FOR ME?????WHEN HE KISSSED ME EVEN FOR SOME SECONDS I FORGOT TO BREATH????THIS IS WRONG.......HE IS WRONG HE IS STUPID,IDIOT,GADHA......HE CAN NEVER BE UR SOULMATE GOT IT

She cursed him under her breath

and after a min - I THINK I SHOULD LEAVE FROM HERE BETTER TO GO IN HOSTEL........KUCH AUR ADVENTUROUS HO USSE PEHLE BHAGO RIDDHIMA ......WAISE BHI JITNA PICHLE 30 MIN. MEI TUM BOLI HO UTNA EK WEEK MEI NHI BOLI HOGI

RIDDHIMA LEFT FOR HER HOSTEL 😉

AND RAINBOW GANG WENT IN AUDI

WHERE ALL WERE THINKING ABT TOMMORROW THEIR FIRST DAY OF 2ND SEMESTER ARMAAN WAS THINKING ABT D GIRL HE MET HER EYES HER LIPS HER HAIR AND YA HER SLAP


ARMAAN TALKING TO HIMSELF - U R LOSING IT ARMAAN TU USS LADKI K BAARE ME SOCH RAHA HAI JISNE TUJHE THAPAD MARA?????I THINK I SHOULD GO HOME MY MIND NO NO........MY HEART NEED REST SHE IS NOT D ONE ARMAAN WITH WHOM U CAN FALL IN LOVE.....USKA ATTITUDE DEKHA THA?????NAKHRE.....UFFF.....YA SHE CAN NEVER BE UR SOULMATE GOT IT

"HEY GUYZ I GOING HOME I HV SOME WORK" ARMAAN ANNOUNCED TO OTHERS

ND SOON ALL WENT TO THEIR HOMES FIRST TIME WITHOUT ANY HUNGAMA



****************** **********************




PRECAP :- ARMAAN RIDDHIMA NEXT MEETING

WILL THEY FALL IN LOVE SO SOON???

OR ITS MORE TO COME IN THEIR WAY'.

WILL NAINA DO ANYTHING TO TAKE AWAY ARMAAN FROM RIDDHIMA??????????????




TO KNOW STAY TUNED.............

"RHYTHM OF LOVE IN TRUE SOULMATES"



Hiiiiiii FRNDS



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