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Posted: 14 years ago
hai muskan i said i am ur fan right !!!but yaar wt u done why r u making me ur A.C YAAR !!! hw cute ur thoughs dear sooooo impressive actually i dont read much stories but nw a days i am waiting for ur updates......
continue sooooooon !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 45

geet takes a cab & reaches home
brij - what happened u look really pale
geet - I am just tired long day, party, loud music
brij - just sleep now ok
geet - ji
she cuddled up in the bed & closed her eyes
rah rah kar maan ka naraz hona yaad aata
bechain hojate uski khayal main,
dil tadap uttata unhe sach kehne ke liya
kya kah thi, kaise kah thi...
aab to shayad sach bhi bemane se lagte
kaise jaan lethi hain meri dil ke baaten...
phir kyun nahi manthe humare risthe ko
kya baat hain jo humare in ehsaas ko jhuklathe hain
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aG2AT6NbwVA&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

maan tore the reports & worked out furiously hurting himself
dev & daadi come to see maan


daadi - maan, why are u hurting urself for that girl
maan shot a stare at daadi & continued to work out
dev - bro actualy bhabhi ki koi galti nahi hain
daadi - what are u saying, don't even call her bhabi, she does'nt deserve
to be khurana's bahu
meera walks-in - if she does'nt then no one else deserve
she removes her ring & gives to dev
daadi & maan looked confused
dev - actually meera was raped by some people 4months back
she got pregnant so we decided to marry just to save her from all this badnami
maan closed his eyes.. . he knew..geet was lieing
dev - on the engagement night, we went to meet bro to tell him about all this
but meera could'nt take the stress & collapsed. geet was there
she helped us to take her to the hospital
meera - don't know why she gave her name while filling the form
dev - probably she was just playing safe
daadi ma sat down feeling guilty & ashamed of what she told geet
dev - I don't know woh report NT ke haat kanha se lag gaya
maan gets wild & breaks the plank... I will not spare that women & rushes out

maan drives to NT place ... picks a iron rod & brakes open the door
NT - yeh kya kar rahen hain
maan raises his hand & then get reminded of geet holding him back from
hitting her...he closes his eyes & breakes the TV... smashese the dinning table
NT gets scared & sits cuddled up in a corner
maan breaks every thing in the house
NT - stop it..
maan turns in anger raising his rod almost smashing her face
the rod stopping like a inches away from her eyes
NT - aap bilkul janwar ho, isiliya aaj bhi akela ho isiliya sameera bhi...
maan shots a glare she pauses
maan brings down rest of the things in the house
maan - If I wanted this could be your plight...mera bhai ki khushiyan se door raho
NT - every one thouht it was sameera's mistake but I am sure it is ur rudeness
ur inhumanly behaviour no one can be safe around you
maan walks out breaking the door
her words where piercing his heart... no one will be safe around u
he felt so misserable. all he could think of was geet.
yahi khayal pareshan karta ki usne geet ki zindhagi barbad kardi
na use woh khusiyan de pata jis ki woh cha rakti hain
na hi use aapne se door karpata
phir bhi na jane kyun woh Maan ko itna maan thi hain
sab kuch to luta diya usne maan ke liya
kya Maan jaanta tha, geet kya chahene lagi thi??? shayad nahi!!!
3 am maan game to him room & saw the torn report papers
kyun karti ho tum mera liya yeh sab...kaise rista niba rahi ho mera saat
kyun ashkoan ki barsaat degayee ho jaate jaate,
kyun aahon ki saughaat degayee ho jaate jaate.
dil ne chaha tha bhar lenge tumhe baahon me,
aarzuon ki bouchhar degayee ho jaate jaate.
kyun mujhe bebas kar deti ho jaate jaate...
kyun door jaate jaate itne pas aajati ho

daadi called geet early morning
geet - ji daadi
daadi - sorry beta
geet kept quite
daadi - hume dev aur meera ne sab sachaye bataye
aapne to humera khandan ki izaad aapne daman main sanjod liya
thanxs a lot, humne pooja rakwayee hain, aap please jaldi se aa jayee
geet - umm

geet gets ready & reaches Khurana mansion at around 8am
daadi looked worried and walked up & down
dev was trying to console her
geet - kya huwa daadi?
daadi hugged geet & cried - mano maan ki zindagi main bus pareshani hi hain
geet wipes her tears kya baat hain
dev - after knowing the truth bro got angry & went to NT's house
& broke up the entire house
geet cluctches her duppatta..baby tera papa ka gussa na naak pe rahta hain
baby~Nt deserves it, she almost decleared me dead yesterday👏
daadi - aab kya hoga, police athi hi hogi
geet looks confused
dev - NT ne complain kiya hain ke bro tried killing her
geet - lekin
baby~aab kya hoga papa ka?
geet~worried
geet - unhe pata hain
daadi - abhi nahi, really don't know how to tell him
geet mumers kisi ki sunte kanha hain... bus aapni man mani karte hain
baby~aap bhi to aapni man mani karti ho😒

precap
police to arrest maan

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Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update yaar ... geet is so innocent here .. she helped meera out of the mess but her name got spoiled ... maan knows abt geet so he dint believe but he was ready to break NT to pieces na .. wat ll happen to maan ??surely arrest .. i hope u r bring some twists in the coming episodes.. we wanna maan and geeet soon... awsome update yaar...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

superrbbb update.......

maan's aggression is terrifying...
waiting to kno about his past...........
i am speechless..........simply marvellous
plzz continue soon
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg! maan aressted. mushkan.. truly magical me geet ko aresst karwa dia or yiha maanko.. aj ka tumhari aresst day hain...really love.. do con..
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI MUSKI❤️

SO THEY CAME TO KNOW THE THRUTH OF MEERA ....................I HATE THAT DEVIL NT😡BUT WHAT NEXT WAITING 😍.... CAN U UPDATE TODAY AGAIN NEXT PART OF BOTH TRULY MAGICAL AND MADHOSHI ............... AS WE R VERY DISTURBED ................ BOTH OF THEM MAAN AND GEET ARE TAKEN BY POLICE IN THEIR RESPECTIVE FFS............... SO WHATS UP UPDATE SOON
Edited by seema05 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update! Bt m confused, as nw they knw meera had an abortion maan still dnt knw she is pregnant na?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
can't believe maans anger
happy dev and meera told daadi and maan the truth
cabt believe maan is getting arrested
can't wait for da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
just loed ur update......
it ws awesome...!!!
pls cont. soon/..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar... what happened today.. both the FF's ended on a sad /confuse note ..

but glad that dev cleared all misunderstandings..

pls update soon.. you really should make us happy 😆😆😆😆

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