LOVE CAN REALLY HAPPEN AGAIN-RUDRA-GAURI LOVE

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  1. Guys, I've written a handful of Rudra-Gauri love poems, because their out of the world love story is truely poetic. This is the first one of the lot. 😳 Hope you all will like it.😳 Life was cruel and harsh, Sun was scorching above my head, Even my shadow left my side , Around me a sandy desert spread. I was totally fallen from grace, But, just then Gauri pulled me out of this mess. All gave me up for hopeless , I was myself in grasp of wine, But, you said ," No, I won't let you , And took the bottle from the hands of mine. Slowly, with your magic love , You turned all my losses into gain , smoothened the suffering lines from my face, and Erased all my pain. Sand became lush green ,as fate blessed my desert heart with your sweet rain, Yes, it is true indeed, now that I know for sure, love can really happen again. ....Sanjog se bani Sangini, kaun kaheta hai ki pyar doobada nahi hota ........... This is my first try, so please, please, let me know if you've liked it. Whatever you think, please comment. 😳 Thank you for reading.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow it was nice. I loved poem lady beth. (bear hug). ā­ļø
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Artemis678

wow it was nice. I loved poem lady beth. (bear hug). ā­ļø

Thank you, buddy.😳 There'll be a number of poems following.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwww its beautiful..keep it coming....loved it totally.....
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Originally posted by: LadyZaib

awwww its beautiful..keep it coming....loved it totally.....

Thank you so much, hun.šŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow that was really good 😳 And it goes with RaGa so well and perfectly summarizes their relationship as well 😃
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Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Wow that was really good 😳 And it goes with RaGa so well and perfectly summarizes their relationship as well 😃

Thank you, buddy.šŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome LMB!!!......I especially loved
-"turned all my losses into gain "
This has such a fate and destiny cling to it...Makes u feel that whatever happens is for good, no matter what....u might not see momentarily the benefits hidden but they are always there.....U might have thought it was a loss but it was always a gain.....The love and Jodis are destined and u wuld eventually reach your Mr/Ms Right!!!.....
- I liked how u seamlessly blended the Hindi liner to your poem...It came in so seamlessly that it just became the punchline of the poem too!!!
awesome!! šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...Thx for the PM!! šŸ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Dancingdoll, šŸ¤— Thank you so much , buddy. Awwwwwww, that's overwhelming . 😳 And, you're most welcome, you're my buddy na.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Mac - I am impressed yaar. That was quite good, I didnt know you write poems. This one was very apt for Raga. Write more and share with usšŸ‘šŸ¼

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