Naina-the hair that scared the dead

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey guyz!

i am not really good at this but heres a short kahaani on the engagement. My hindi isnt tht good as i'm a south indian and if u want 2 kill me after reading this, please dont hesitate. Jus b honest at whether i'm hopeless at this

Prithvi is abt to put ring on Kripas finger when he notices her face and decides he cant go on with this.

Prith: Kripa tum is engagement se khush nahi. I can read that from ur face. Its alrite, u don't need 2 do this.

Kripa: No, Prithvi, I want to, really….

Prith: Krips, sweetie, u don't love me and I cant make u. So chill out.

Kripa:(sighs) Prithvi…..

Prith: BTW, whose this person who rote me the letter?

Kripa: (grins) HARSHINI!!

Prith: HARSHINI!! Ok gr8!! Watz her number???

Oh! Everyone is standing shocked and unable 2 speak.

Naina: Hey Hey wait a min. U cant cancel this Saghaai!!

Dadi: they can decide 4 themselves, thank u very much!!!

Gayathri & Suryabhan: Guess its upto them after all

Prithvi takes phone and dialz-Harshu darlin' its me!!!

Kripa dreaming bout the sindoor scene.

Naina opens her hair.-No!!! I will not let this happen!!!!

Krips parents turn round: Naina, really, its alri…..AAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dilip: Don't worry guyz.Thatz Naina. She does this often.

Gayathri: Oh ok! Bhai sab take her 2 a doctor. Dr. Kumar of Nainital is a specialist…..

Prithvi still on fone. Mishti and damini clinging 2 each other scared 2 death at the sight of the red clad open haired Naina. Dadi approaches.

Dadi: all this excitement makes me hungry. Want a snack?

Mish and Dam: Sure!!

Dadi calls Teddy and soon the 3 r enjoying a wonderful meal.

Naina still fuming with rage.

Naina: WILL ANYONE LISTEN 2 ME??

Anita: Don't worry Maasi, I am with u

Naina: And u Karthik, cut tht fone and get the saghaai done.

Karthik: Go 2 hell, do it urself. I think I'll go have a drink.

Naina(ready 2 explode) Prithvi put tht fone DOWN!!!!!!!!

Prithvi: Jus a min Harshu sweetie..Hairy Aunty I am talking don't u see?

Naina: My phone. My bill. My money.

Prith: Oh!sorry good point! Harsh I'll call u from my mobile.

Prithvi leaves the house

Naina: Duffer come back rite now and GET ENGAGED!!!

Damini: Hey Hey Hey U call my son names, I cut ur hair. Its thr in the contract, read it sometime

Naina:Ok Damini darling. Theres no need to fite.Calm it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damini: Watever. Mishti don't eat so fast

Suryabhan: I mean is Dr. Kumar a genius or what?

Dilp:Definitely

Naina starts turning purple. Anita goes green with jealousy looking at K's dress.

Suddenly Angad comes in.

Angad: Mein yah saghaai khone nahi doonga.

Kripa: What saghaai? Tht was hours ago! Which world r u in?

Angad: Oh well nywayz here I am

Naina:Angad go away from here.

Angad; Lady whoever u r , mind ur own business.

Naina:Angad. I am ur mother.

Angad: What??!!!Oh!!!Sorry Mom!!

Kripa: everyone I cant marry Prithvi bcoz I love angad..

Angad: YAAAAY!!!!!!!!

Naina: NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anita:Nahi!!!!!!

Suryabhan: Cool!!! V have a rock star damad!!

Gayathri: Yeah! So Cool !!!

Dilip Oh well….Does this Kumar guy take in hairy freaks??

Dadi: At last u sed ur dil ki baat!!!

Damini: Can I have another piece of the the chocolate cake?

Mishti-chokes on her food- I…I thought…u …love…me…

Angad:Who gave u tht idea? Nywayz sorry I love her

Mish: Well is Karthik taken as well?

Dilip: Not at all.U will find him in his room

Mish: thanx

Mishti goes upstairz.

Naina: ANGAD!! R U MAD!??? U CANT MARRY!

Angad: Wat d'ya expect me 2 b a singing sanyasi? I have 2 marry one day.

Nain: I mean u cant marry her!

Angad: Sorry mommy all fixed up

Mish and karthik come down hand in hand laughing

Naina: SOMEONE LISTEN 2 ME!!!!!!!!!

Anita: u r hopeless at being evil. I think I'll go find mannan.

Naina loses control and opens a drawer, takes a gun out of it. She pulls Kripa towards her and holds the gun 2 her head.

Everyone Shocked.

Naina(evil laugh) Now Listen 2 me……………

to b continued if u want me 2....

Edited by sandhra - 20 years ago

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Posted: 20 years ago
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please continue that was the best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was laughing so loud i think im still laughing hahaha that was goood
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Posted: 20 years ago
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pm it to me if u don't write it on the forum
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆😆😆reading that cheered me up today, that was hilarious!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 Sandy that was Howlarious! My God, you are a genius! Please continue this.............amazing, I am laughing like crazy😆😆

U guys are just incredible!

Cheers,

Chilly

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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanx a million guyz!!!!!!I think i'll continue soon-on the forum itself!

And chilly thanxxx awfully 4 tht PM!!!!!😳

See ya reel soon!!!!!!!!!!!😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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My tummy is cracking up.Rocking work Lady...Loved the way Angad treated his momma...she actually deserves that treatment!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆

Get another Harshini...who is prettier and sexier and i'll love to see Prithvi with her!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆 *the face speaks for itself*😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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go on,move ahead,please continue,I would love to hear more of the Kahani and please put some more romantic scenes between Kripa and Angad


Kripa and Angad forever
Edited by Harshitha - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Dear sandhra,

That aws really funny.You have done a great job.I could not stop laughing for hours.😃

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