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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is something I had written a long time ago. Very Tagoreish. 😊 I think it suits Dutta. So, I'm posting it here.
I think I'm in love. *sigh*😳
Do you have any idea what your laughter does to my senses? It makes the whole world swirl into a kaleidoscope of colors, and all I see is you! The blurred landscape is you; the rain-drenched petals are you; the silver grey clouds are you and the silent, starlit night is you.

It is you, in the song of the summer bird; you, in the sway of the trees…. you fill my senses and overwhelm me with your magnificence. Your smile, lights up my heart and your sighs make me mourn. I yearn for something momentous and live in hope. I live, for the moments you smile and complete my world. Your teardrops, I treasure like pearls.

I know not where the path leads me. Yet, I dare to wander. Your love makes me an explorer. Your frown, a despot. I am held captive by the hum of your silence and in your victory, I rejoice. You own my sorrow and my darkest dreams and make me want to throw away my cloak of sanity…. become a reckless voyager. And yet, I find peace in you!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it to the last full stop !!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb is just what i can say!👏
there are no other words that could explain dutta's inside.. lovely liz. everytime you write i fall in love with it..
i wish i could experess myself so beautifully!😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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you take my breath away....literally ... and i can make out you are a big fan of jane austen too!!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Liz,...its simply beautiful.!!! Every word that u wrote suits D to the T!!! Words cant seem to be enough to describe D but i think the words u wrote were meant for D!!

Loved it girl..!
Edited by Jyoe - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful
Simply beautiful.I just feel like knowing u more ,the way u write.I can relate to everything u say.🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's so beautiful...touches the heart instantly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoe

Liz,...its simply beautiful.!!! Every word that u wrote suits D to the T!!! Words cant seem to be enough to describe D but i think the words u wrote were meant for D!!

Loved it girl..!



hehe...what I've written is from Dutta's perspective. What he feels for naku. Sorry, i posted this in a hurry, hence forgot to mention it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is seriously BEAUTIFULLY written! Indeed expresses Dutta's feelings for Nakku....and brought out in such a poetic manner.....You are a very talented writer👏


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww, that is SO beautifully written!!!! 😍 Dude, you write really well!!!! I'm a fan! 😊

Your poetry reminds of me of the 'ambar pe milte hain' sequence! 😍

I love the whole piece but my fav. part is this:

I know not where the path leads me. Yet, I dare to wander. Your love makes me an explorer. Your frown, a despot. I am held captive by the hum of your silence and in your victory, I rejoice. You own my sorrow and my darkest dreams and make me want to throw away my cloak of sanity'. become a reckless voyager. And yet, I find peace in you!

Totally LOVE how you've written this so ironically! This is SO Dutta's feelings for Naku! 😍

Nice work! 👍🏼
Edited by cute2stay - 14 years ago

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