Ajab Kahani- Shanak Halloween P1&2, pg6,7 updated

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

HOLA!!

Guys am BACK!!! Since I did not receive any BRICKBATS yesterday,

I thought why not TAKE THE RISK AGAIN?!!😆😆😆So I've gathered some more dirt and have made up something totally INANE

This time I have made a RULE for MYSELF....THE 3 WORD RULE😃sounds famiiar??)

It makes it a little tough but I've tried and as usual FAILED MISERABLY😆😆😆

SO IF YOU NOTICE EVERY OTHER LINE FOLLOWS THE 3 WORD RULE..except where its obvious😆JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT A LOT CAN BE SAID IN 3 WORDS!!!😉

Sirf Teen Shabd ---- Then all is well

Shaan is

Tagdu Nau Jawaan

Push ups Pehlwaan⭐️

Khanak is

Shaan ki Rani

Kitchen queen sayaani😳

Sunil ji hain

Sweetu sasur ji🤗

Mads is

JAI MATA DI!!!😡😆

Dadiji hain

FAIRY GOD MOTHER😃

Akki is

Shaan ka Birather ( Khanak ISHTYLE!!)😆

Khushboo ne kiya

Naak mein dum

Aur characters?

Kya itne hain kum? ( doesn't follow the 3 word rule!)😕

Shaan to Khanak

I love You😳

Khanak to Shaan

I love Dhulwadi😕

Akki to Shaan

I hate her ( Khushboo)😡

Khushboo to Mads

I hate him ( akki)😡

Sunil to Shaan

Shaadi galti hai😕

Dadi to Sunil

Ladki acchi hai😆

Shaan ki Hindi

Bahut hi mazedaar😆

Khanak ka Hinglish

Shaan hua bekaraar😳

Shaan demanded

Shakkar bina Doodh

Khanak complained

You're very rude! ( Not bad, jaldi seekh jayegi!)👏

Shaan to self

Naya game khel

Khanak to GOD

D..rama hua phail ( FAIL)😆

Is soap opera ne

Hamara dil jeeta👏

Lage raho Shanak!!

Phir Chalo America!! (don't ask me why....just rhymes well!!)😆😆😆

So GUYS if you don't throw some ROTTEN TOMATOES TODAY then I'll really be surprised!!!

HAPPY WEEKEND!!😃

Edited by simiv - 15 years ago

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shanakforever

@shanakforever

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Posted: 15 years ago

👏👏👏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
simi i loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
i was actually singing it
its just superb i loved each n every line........ man toooo good n extremely funny
pls pls pls do write more

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Ashiana

@maneet.n.shanak

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Posted: 15 years ago

HAHAHHAAH just loved it!!! Now I will be looking forward to your ajab kahani! I love the way you write! Awesome sweets!!! About the last line... haila! I would so go insane if they came here to america!!! Jaan tu ne mere dil ki baat boldi! OMG!!! I wish wish wish!!!

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manjiri

@m4manju

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+ 9

Posted: 15 years ago

awesome post simi....rocking like your previous one...😃.......pls continue writing these "ajab kahanies".....i loved both of them...

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey simi dear superb yaar . this is really very good. to me it resembled a rap song....

thanx alot dear!! happy weekend to u too.

do think more on these lines with our dearest ShaNak couple so that we an enjoy ur compositions.OMG i read it three times already!

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

Love it Simi!!

Great job hun!!

😊

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

Thanx a million for this wonderful outpouring of praise for my ISHTUPID poem! 🤗 You guys are just toooo sweeeet!!!!!!!!!❤️

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maneet.n.shanak
HAHAHHAAH just loved it!!! Now I will be looking forward to your ajab kahani! I love the way you write! Awesome sweets!!! About the last line... haila! I would so go insane if they came here to america!!! Jaan tu ne mere dil ki baat boldi! OMG!!! I wish wish wish!!!

Wouldn't that be Wonderful??!!! We cud have our own little RBO bash😍

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84
hey simi dear superb yaar . this is really very good. to me it resembled a rap song....

thanx alot dear!! happy weekend to u too.

do think more on these lines with our dearest ShaNak couple so that we an enjoy ur compositions.OMG i read it three times already!

Thats a nice thought😃 Then I wouldn't have to rhyme much at all😆 Niiiiiceee🤗