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Posted: 14 years ago
wooow great update
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truely magical-
part 9

she stood their & looked at it for a while
it was a metalic silver colured with a small square some wat round, diamond at the left top corner
she itched to buy it & wondered wat it matched with
then it flashed the watch....oh!! yah bachan ki watch ko match kareghi
she picked the cufflings & paid for it got it gift wrapped!!
she picked her phone to call him...
geet - hi..maine
maan interrupts - will call u back, in mid of something
geet mumers abhi bhi naraz hain kya
geet calls prem
prem - I thought u won't call me
geet - wow mujhe is number ka location pata karke bata
prem - number bol
geet - XXX-111-1111
prem - yeh to Mr.bechan ka number hain na
geet - umm!!
prem - tujhe us se kya kaam?
geet - itna sawal kyun kar raha hain
prem - I was just asking
geet - umm!!!
prem - give me 5mins..waise I said sorry to mukti
geet - really so sweet
prem - address lik
geet - she feeds in the address into her GPRS

she places her GPRS in front of the car & follows it
offcourse GPRS in India bad idea...she stops her car in frustration
calls her body gaurd..mujhe is address pe jana hain
he drives her to the Khurana Constructions

GEET HANDA walking into Maan Khurana's office !!!
with her body guard following her in Maan khurana stlye and attitde
every one looked at her in astonished
at reception...pinky - how can I help u maam?
geet - yaar mujhe Mr. bachan se milna hain
pinky eating her sandwich - ji..bachan?
pinky thinks for a while - u mean humare DD..
geet mumered yaar yah to perfect hain..to bachan ka naam DD hain..chi chi...bachan hi teehk hain
pinky points at his cabin - lekin maam without appointment aap DD se nahi mil sakti
geet - Geet Handa ne aaj taak appointment nahi liya!! samjhi
pinky - lekin maam...
pinky to adi - yeh to sir ki tarah hi roop jadthi hain
sasha stops her streching her hand
geet turns her hand in one twist & holds it back
geet - Geet Handa ka rasta rokne se phele ek bar socha lena
adi & pinky giggles & bend their head down

geet barges into his cabin complaining with the cuffling pack in her hand
geet - itna koi gussa hota hain kya
maan looks at her shocked, speechless..& kept looking at her
sahsa rushes in - MK..i told her to stay out
maan snaps out of his trans.. - its ok sasha
geet gives a dirty look to sasha
maan - bheetoo
geet - umm makes a face ..crossing her hand on the table looking away
maan coud'nt stop smiling looking at her act
maan - pani pee loo
geet - no thanxs tapping her foot
maan - kya huwa ?
geet - woh main & looks at sasha standing there & looking at them
aap inhe salary aap ko goorne ki dethe hoo?
maan - GEET!!
geet shoots a glance to him
maan clears his throat & asks every on to leave them alone

geet - aap itna bura kyun man gaya... main ne to aise hi khaha tha na
maan - nahi mainne bura nahi mana
geet - phir mera phone kyun kata
maan - I was in a meeting with a client, aur kata nahi tha I told u i will call u back
geet - phir subha bye kyun nahi bola
maan - us time pe main todha bura laga..lekin
geet - lekin
maan - aab nahi
geet - uss time aap ka dil dhukhane ke liya - gift..slides the shiny gift wraped box
actually use time dena chahiya...lekin class tha na..isliya late hogaya...
maan - thanxs & keeps it aside
geet - how rude... dehk ke batvoo aacha hain ke nahi
maan opens the pack geet closely watches him
maan smiled... geet - aachi hain na
maan - umm!! thanxs
geet - dosti main NO thanxs No sorry
maan - lekin humne dosti kab ki
geet - challoo aab karlethe hain
stands up walking to his side of the table..extends her hand.friends..
maan moves his hand forward geet moves it away brushing her hair &
says caught u again Mr. bachan & gives a warm hug ...mazak tha..
maan was seeing stars...first she walking into his office his cabin,
giving him a gift, then a hug...he had no clue wat was going on!!!

she pulls him & drags him out his cabin challoo
the whole office staff looked at them as she dragged him to the lift....
tasha - sasha
sasha - umm
tasha - maam...yeh MK ki girl friend hain kya?
sasha - no ways...some aamir baap ki bighati beti hoghi
in the lift
maan - khanha challena hain
geet - date pe
maan gasped
geet - aise kyun deehk rahe ho?
maan noded his head saying nothing & stood in the corner looking at her

geet went to her car...maan pulled her back...she tunred to look at him
mahi moment...maan looking into her eyes..geet wondering ....her guards moved in...maan stared at them ....she said its ok to the gaurds
geet - kya huwa
maan - meri ghadhi main chalthe hain
geet - umm!!
she gives her keys to the guards

while driving out
geet - koi coffee shop chalthe hain... u like coffee right
maan - tumhe kaise pata
geet - mujhe sab pata hain
maan rolls his eyes
geet - uff bachan ..itna footage muth khaya kar
subha tumhare secrtary in coffee hi serve kiya tha na..so I guessed

they drive to taj palace hotels coffee house
geet starts laughing kya huwa...
we decided to go to a coffee shop
maan - so
geet - u know the coffee shop here is called the tea lounge!!
maan - u want to go some where else
geet - nahi yaar I was cracking a joke...
waise I like there Viennese Style coffee house it is really cool..idhar hi chalthe hain

precap
offcourse the date!!! or should I say just the coffee!!

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OOh Coffee date?! How hatke and romantic :-D
Perfect update...thank u tons!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reading before the PM.....😆😆😉

Great update! Seriously amazing! Geet thought he was angry and got Maan a gift and also went to his office......cool! Loved her attitude......kya jhada Sasha ko.....phatak! Lolz. Aww......she hugged him and took him out on a date.....lolz...too good! Coffee date hun....do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow thnxs a lot luv u truely really nyc update
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.loved it.
loved the way geet going to maan's office.
aww geet twist sasha's hand.
aww geet gave gift to maan.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved the cool bindaas Geet here😊
Amazing update!
Mazaa aa gaya padh kar😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome i love how she twist sasha hand pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
DATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeahhhhhhhhh
loved itttttttt
the way, geet busted to kc, wahhhhh ky aentry hai!! loved ittttttt
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahahahaha u knw wat i jus remembered sumthing
sum tym back - i completely fell in luv with coffee cos of.......erm my own personal reasons☺️
n ermmmm my friend starting askng me a million n 1 questions n then she mentioned bout goin on a candlelight date - with COFFEE!!!!!!!!
hahaha i so can imagine maaneet at such a romantic candlenight COFFEE date!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hahaha luv it

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