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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar...i love this GEET.. perfect match for MSK.. ho dear.. MSK bhin na.. kaise flirt karta ho geet ke saath.. anyways I am loving this FF.. hope you won't bring any major twist soon.. I hate Mr Handa and Capt Brij.. her mom is sweeet...

waiting for the next update :) ...


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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update....
geet and maan on a date...
waiting for the update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
date date date.. wo v romantic wala.. update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved d part whr geet act twists sasha hand....
i wish she does d same in d show 1 day....
gr8 wrk....
eagerly waitin for update....
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Posted: 14 years ago
omggg wowww dat was awesum
geet was amazing loved hpw she twsit sasha and comes in maan room hayee and the hug was amazing cnt wait for this coffee date
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting 4 d coffee date;-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it how she was is MSK style...Love her attitude...So cool...can't imagine a girl with all the bodyguards
Loved the update di...and I'm shocked..she still doesn't know his name!
Hope she finds out soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskaan loving truly magical !!! now when dad Handa finds out in the paper that darling Geet had coffee with Maan, he will definetley blow his gaskets !!! as usual waitng for ur update.........going to read madhoshi now.
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truely magical-
part 10

geet sits in the couch crossing her legs pulling her curly hair back
light falls on her long earings that reflected the light to her cheeks
making her look prettier...
maan sits on the opposite sofa... he leaned back into the sofa cushions
laying his arms along the sofa's carved back & crossing his leg over the other
so it was Maan Singh Khurana on a date but not a date with his love
who is not his girl friend yet... wondering how she amused him
maan - so tell me
geet - tell u wat?
maan - all about ur self
geet - oyee Hellow, sach much ka date nahi hain!!!
maan - phir main kya samjhu
geet - seriously don't get it all wrong OK!!!
maan - wat are saying
geet - this is not that boy friend girl friend wala date
maan smiled
geet - this is just like
maan lifting his eyebrows - like
geet - like a casual coffee with Geet Handa
so date wale batein mat karo
maan - I don't have any experience on the date stuffs
so I am not sure, wat is this 'date wale batein'
geet relaxed & fell on the cushions
geet - aap bhi na
maan - main bhi kya geet
geet - sach main bhut seedha ho
they place their orders
geet - chocolate milk shake with double scoops of ice-cream
maan - cappuccino

maan - do u want to have any thing else
geet - not now...
maan to the waiter - that will be all
geet - wat are ur hobbies
maan - horse ridding, playing golf, reading
geet - reading!!! wat do u read
maan - more on economics
geet - just forget it!!!
maan smiles knowing her hatredness to economics
geet - aap ke family kaun kaun hain
maan - daadi
geet - aap ki girl friend right
maan sighed
geet - then
maan - my 2 younger brothers
geet - unke naam kya hain ?
maan - dev & viky
geet - so wat have u studied
maan - done my MBA
geet - aur graduation
maan - civil engg
geet - thats cool
waiter got their drinks

geet - kitni sugar
maan - 1 spoon
geet added sugar stirred it & gave it to him
maan - thanxs
geet sips her drink & looks at him aap humesha single words main hi baten karte ho?
maan - SORRY?
geet - I am trying to talk to u for last 1hr & ur just answereing my questions
mujhe lag raha hain main aap ka interview le rahein hoon
maan - ok so wat do u want me to say
geet - forget it this whole idea of coming with u was bad
jaldi aapa drink katam karte hain aur chalten hain
she indulges in her drink... after few mins of silence
geet - where do u do ur horse ridding?
maan - we have a farm house
geet - really, u mean horse wala farm house
maan - wat is this horse wala farm house
geet - farm house to humara bhi hain lekin horse nahi hain
maan - yah!! horse wala farm house
geet - mujhe kab le jarahe ho?
maan - kahan?
geet - horse ridding ke liye
maan - jab tum kaho
geet - we should plan that
maan -umm
geet - hum theeno kabhi bhi nikal jate hain
maan - theeno?
geet - main, prem aur armaan
maan - umm
geet - they are my best friends chaddy buddy types!!
maan cleared his throat
geet - mera matlab hain we know each other since class 5
schooling saath - saath...Prem ke saath to college bhi hogaya
maan narrows his eyes brows at prem
geet - use ne aap ka number track kiya..aur location bhi
maan - umm!!
geet - actually we are 4 of us, lekin raj yahan nahi hai
jab woh aata hain chuti pe... OMG we really have a blast
maan smiles
geet - aap ke friends
maan - meri to ek hi friend hain
geet - girl hain..she gets curious & moves in front ...
so sweet kuan hain, like a class mate or something
maan - nahi
geet - bol bhi do sharmoo mat
maan - tum
geet eyes poped
maan - tum hi ho meri friend
geet - bachan phir se flirt kar rahe ho
maan - nahi geet seriously
geet - so sweet, lekin aapke college friends yah school main
maan - there were few lekin nun were so close
geet - umm!!!
they sip their drinks in silence again
geet - aacha tum bore nahi hote, without any friends
maan - I don't have time to get bored
geet - I can't think of a minute without them
maan - waise I can't even think of a minute without my friend now
geet - Mr.bechan u don't give up...do u
maan thinks...Maan singh Khurana & giving up...smirks
maan - BTW why did u get that cufflings
geet - kaha na it was a gift... I felt bad that I hurt u, unintentional tha
maan - tum sach main pagal ho
geet - nahi not for this time...actually I was being thoughtful
maan - right!!! the way u were thoughful while flating tyers
geet - hud hogayee yaar !!!
maan - ok !!
geet turns her face
maan - main mazak kar raha tha...geet looked from corner of her eyes
maan - GEET!!! kaha na mazak kar raha tha in a stirn voice
geet - aap mana rahe ho yah koi ehsaan kar rahe ho?
maan - mujhe yeh sab nahi aata
geet smiles
maan - why did u say that u where being thoughtful?
geet - woh!! I picked it because it matched ur watch
maan - yah i noticed that it will go very well with my watch
geet - jab woh watch ke saat pehno ghe to aacha laghe gha
maan - thats when u give my watch back
geet - oye teri forgot about it totally oh!! no
maan - umm!!
geet - alarm...makes a baby face
aap ne to meri neind hi utta di hain
maan - aur tum ne meri neind
geet gets up to leave... maan pulls her back in a jerk turning her hand
geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho
maan - tum kuch bhi bol sakti ho, main wohi kahta hoon to kyun root thi ho?
geet - chodo na duhk raha hain
maan turns it harder...looking away... ok u win...aab to chodo...
please bhut duhk raha hain
geets face was turning red in stress.. maan turned & feeling the heat he left her at once
geet pushes him on the sofa & starts waking him resting her knee on his lap..pinning him
down geet - mera haat muda...yeh lo..yeh bhi lo
maan - stop it geet
geet continues waking on his arms..left then right & then left again


precap
dream!!!!

PART 11
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yippeeee hahah i thought she was goin straight for the kiss - hahaha
oh dear
cnt wait for more
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago

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