New Short FF-Baby Come Back last part pg 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys! so i know i haven't been an active member for quite sometime now and i still have 2 pending FFs (which I do plan on completing..soon) but I had sometime on my hand and decided to write a short FF based on Armaan and Riddhima. I hope you guys like it and if you do, please don't forget to comment!!
A little bit of information about the charachters: Riddhima and Armaan are university students who live in Toronto, Ontario and both go to Ryerson University in downtown Toronto. They each have a twin, Rahul and Muskaan respectively (had to have Rahul and Muskaan :P). The store I have mentioned in my FF is fictitious but the street is an actual street and so is the university.
Part 1

Riddhima sighed as she stared out the window. There were no customers in sight nor did she anticipate any coz of the big game. Everyone was probably at home, glued to their TV screens and here she was stuck working on a Saturday night. She usually didn't mind working coz there was always a steady stream of people walking in and out of the store and her regular customers spent quite some time chatting with her. But the day had dragged on with the fewest customers ever.

She plugged her headphones back in her ears and went back to reading her 10th magazine. All of them had the same stories and pictures but it beat looking at the clock every five minutes. She was officially off work in 30 minutes and she could hardly wait. Riddhima looked up from reading about the latest new on Robert Pattinson when she heard the door open. She saw a young girl, probably her age, wearing a black dress rush in, with tears streaming down her cheeks, trembling violently.

Girl: Please you've got to help me! Call the cops he's going to find me and take me away! Please please please help me! The girl shuddered and gripped Riddhima's arm to stay upright. Riddhima could sense the terror behind the girl's words and did not wait to question her. She picked up the phone and dialed 911.

Operator: 911 what's your emergency?

Riddhima: I've got a girl in my store who is being chased by someone. At that very moment, a guy burst into the store and seeing him, the girl let out a scream.

Guy: How dare you run away from me Muskaan? Come on lets go. He grabbed the Muskaan's arm but she struggled against him. Riddhima was still on the phone and the operator was listening in on the conversation.

Operator: What's your location?

Riddhima: Kennedy and 16th, Turquoise store.

Operator: Please stay on the line. Help is on its way. Riddhima put the phone done without cutting off and moved towards the guy who was holding Muskaan by her hair and dragging her out the door. Muskaan was struggling against him when he raised his hand and slapped her across the face, splitting her lip.

Riddhima: Let her go! I have called the cops and they will be here any minute now! She pulled Muskaan away from him and pushed her behind her back, shielding her from the guy. There was undisguised anger pouring out from him as he stepped towards Riddhima and punched her in the face. Riddhima gasped as the force of the punch knocked her backwards but she refused to move. In the distance, Riddhima could hear the wail of police cars and she sighed in relief. The guy took another threatening step forward but he heard the sirens and ran towards the exit.

Riddhima and Muskaan watched from inside the store as a police officer tackled the man to the floor, cuffing him. Another officer walked into the store and lead Riddhima and Muskaan outside to the paramedics to get them checked out. The officer asked them for their statements and since Muskaan was incoherent from crying so much, Riddhima related the entire incident to the officer.


part 1- pg 1

part 2- pg 1

part 3- pg 2

part 4- pg 3

part 5- pg 3

part 6- pg

part 7- pg

part 8- pg


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dhruvikaluvsKSG thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy dear
nice start
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey....nice ff......pm me wid ur further updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sounds like an interesting ff
Pls continue soon

Can u pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear i read ur concept and i really love it so plzz update soon
and pm me when u update
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Thank you for your lovely comment!!i'm so glad you like it! I've completed this FF and will be posting parts from time to time. Hope you like this next part and please don't forget to comment.

Part 2
Riddhima and Muskaan watched from inside the store as a police officer tackled the man to the floor, cuffing him. Another officer walked into the store and lead Riddhima and Muskaan outside to the paramedics to get them checked out. The officer asked them for their statements and since Muskaan was incoherent from crying so much, Riddhima related the entire incident to the officer.

Riddhima: Can I get you some water? She asked Muskaan who nodded and gave her a watery smile. Riddhima got her a glass of water and excused herself to go call her boss.

Riddhima: Hey Joe! Listen there's been an incident. She relayed the entire situation to him who was very concerned about her safety.

Joe: You alright Honey? Do you need me to come in and close the store?

Riddhima: Nah! Don't worry about it. I'll lock up as soon as we are done here. She moved back to Muskaan who was narrating her side of the story.

Muskaan: I met the guy at a friend's party and we danced maybe once and then the very next day he called me and asked me out. I refused and he persisted so I gave in. He took me to some bar where he got really drunk and then on the way back instead of dropping me home, he started driving to his place. I said no but he said that I was a bloody tease and that I was going to get what I deserved. I begged and pleaded with him to let me go but he wouldn't listen. He locked all the doors and wouldn't let me out! He stopped for gas across the street and I jumped out and ran here for help. She broke down and started crying as she re-lived the horror of what had happened and what might have happened.

Officer: don't worry you are safe now. The man is clearly deranged and I'm sure he already has a rap sheet. Is there anyone we can call for you?

Muskaan: My brother! I need to call him. She looked at the officer. My bag is in his car. I don't want to go anywhere near it.

Officer: Don't worry one of the officers will get it for you. You and your brother will have to come with us to file a report.

Riddhima: Here use my phone. She handed her phone to Muskaan and went about, preparing to close up. The officer came up to her.

Officer: You did a very brave and foolish thing. If the man had a weapon on him, he could have done some serious damage. It looks like he already started on that. He tipped her chin up gently and Riddhima stared into his eyes (the officer was quite hot!!). Your face is going to swell a bit and you will have a black eye but don't worry, it looks worse than it really is. He released her chin and smiled down at her.

Muskaan: My brother is on his way.

Officer: I will need you to come down to the station as well. We need your statement too he said, looking at Riddhima.

Riddhima: Sure. I just need to lock up the store and call home.

Officer: Calling your boyfriend? He asked.

Riddhima: No my parents. I need to let them I'm going to be late or they will worry. The officer thought"wonder if she's single!hmm maybe I should ask her out.." Riddhima ended the conversation with her mother and turned towards Muskaan and the officer when someone burst into the store.

Guy: Muskaan!

Muskaan: BHAI! She ran into his arms and burst into tears. The guy wrapped his arms around her and turned around so that Riddhima finally got a look at his face. She looked at him shocked, ARMAAN! It was Armaan Malik! The star of every single one of her fantasies, her dream guy comes to life and the hottest guy in her university.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyy dear
nice part
wonder wat is officer upto
checking riddhima :P
cont soon
n nice part
cant wait for AR to meet
cont soon
n thx
for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part

Ammy is Ridz's dream guy. I hope Muski introduces them.

Y was that officer checking out Ridz? He better stays in his limits.

Thanx for d pm Pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome
plz add me 2 ur pm's list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woah dat was awesome!!!!
plz add me 2 ur pm list.... sending u a buddy request....
cont soon......

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